Thank you Sonnyc :3! fixed Easy and Normal diff, then i will remake Hard diff .w.
arigatou!!! nice diff!!Rare wrote:
できました Gekidan Hitotose - a e i u e o ao!! (alacat) [Rare's Hard].osu
no change but ill fix it somebody else say so~Nostalgic wrote:
o/ m4m
[Rare's Hard!!]
- 00:33:755 (4,5) - 00:35:824 (4,5) - they may cause confusion as players couldn't tell if they are 1/2 or 1/4 snapping
- 01:21:339 (2,1) - blanket
fixed only (7,8) spacing due to auto stacking.pinataman wrote:
[Rare's Hard]
00:10:585 (1,2) – This is what I see: http://puu.sh/vk7Tt/35b2cad98b.jpg . Try moving it so it doesn't overlap the HUD on smaller screen sizes
00:12:653 (3) – Consider not stacking and moving this to like the very top part of the screen (since the last click was on (2), there is a 2/1 pause between clicks, so doing so little for so long in the same spot felt odd to me).
00:25:273 (8) – This jump felt displeasing because (7) didn't have a jump. Since (7) is where the new strong beat starts and (7) isn't spaced, why should (8)? Try making (8) not spaced or try jumping into (7) like http://puu.sh/vk8dt/d96bdea732.jpg
00:30:031 (4,5,6) - ^
00:37:065 (7,8) – The spacing between these is 1.21x due to auto-stacking, which felt a bit small. Just want to make sure this is intentional.
Thank you so much, Monstrata!Monstrata wrote:
Extra!!
- 00:00:860 (2,3,4) - The triplet sounds overmapped imo... You could try a rhythm like this: would at least emphasize the vocals. There's a vocal on blue tick, but making player click on 00:00:860 - is kinda forced.
- 00:08:516 (7,8,1) - Maybe do a bigger jump onto 1 since you're switching to vocal emphasis.
- 00:09:343 (3,4) - And I think using doubles here would fit the vocals better. It would set up your rhythm for the next section.
- 00:22:584 (1,2,3,4) - Idk about this. If you're following vocals, it's a quad rhythm here, not two doubles. There's a vocal on 00:22:791 - . Maybe just do a 5 note stream instead?
- 00:49:271 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is a really big jump into a triplet xP. I think it's too big for the section and makes it feel forced, especially since the triplets are kinda hard to catch due to the angle you use too.
- 01:10:995 (4) - 01:11:823 (7) - NC'ing here for the vocals is kinda cool. I think you can do that instead of doing gaps with followpoints here. It will set up 01:12:236 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - a lot better imo. really cool <3
fixed all!
Insane!!
- Try using stack leniency 6 instead, so patterns like 01:04:581 (3,1) - 01:06:236 (3,2) - don't stack. It looks a bit unnecessary to stack them. ok!
- 00:00:654 (1,2) - Same as Extra? replace with 1/2 slider. fixed
- 00:22:584 (1,2,3,4) - Same as Insane about this rhythm being a quad instead of two doubles. 00:22:791 - Should be a circle. added a note to here on Extra diff, so i prefer to keep my rhythm for diff spread!
Normal!!
- Good. Only complaint would probably be 01:03:961 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - being really clustered together. I worry new players might have trouble reading due to all the repeats and stacks. But I can't think of a good way to fix without simplifying rhythm. It's probably fine though xD.
Yes, so removed both (4) circles!
Easy!!
- 00:21:756 (3,4) - Just an idea, but i think flipping slider 3 would look nicer and have better visual flow:
- 00:32:514 (1,2) - Blanket is pretty off ;w; (or i'm very nazi)
- 01:25:063 - Circle here and spinner 1/4 a beat after? You did this for Normal too.
fixed all!
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Clean set~ Call me back!
all fixed~Monstrata wrote:
Rare's Hard!!
- 00:03:136 (4,5,6) - I would put the jump from 5>6 instead for the vocal.
- 00:03:964 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stacking makes the spacing here seem inconsistent. Move some objects around slightly to account for the stack?
- 00:14:722 (1,2) - This jump felt kinda random... Like, why jump here and not in a lot of other places?
- 00:37:065 (7,8,9,10) - Stacking messes up your spacing pattern here so move the triplet down and right a bit more to offset the stack.
- 01:25:063 (1) - How about putting a circle on 01:25:063 - and putting the spinner onto the blue tick?
08:58 alacat: Thank you <3
09:19 Gero: You're welcome, sorry I've been busy with University ;u;
09:19 Gero: orz
09:19 Gero: call me back =v=b
09:22 alacat: it's ok <3
09:22 alacat: and all fixed :3!
09:23 alacat: then, Just a quick question on Hard 01:23:408 (3) - should be 1/3 or 1/4 ? xd
09:25 Gero: I think 1/3 should be good enough dude that the previous and next rhythms are like that... but looking into your diffs; wouldn't be weird that you mapped it with just a circle in 01:23:408 - while Rare made it into a slider?
09:25 Gero: D:
09:25 Gero: personally it's okay
09:25 alacat: ok :D
09:27 alacat: btw remake this part to sliders ! 01:13:064 (3,4,5) -
09:27 Gero: looks great <3
09:27 Gero: okay I'll Qualify it now
09:28 alacat: Thanks you! current pattern is really bad lol
09:29 alacat: this map will be my 55th ranked map xD
09:30 Gero: I bet you're excited
09:30 Gero: \o/
09:33 alacat: yeah \:D/