Hello ~
General:
- Try these colors ? Fit more
Combo1 : 242,119,153
Combo2 : 250,219,114
Combo3 : 118,216,226
Combo4 : 244,104,104
Easy:
- 00:03:143 >> New combo
- 00:06:699 >> ^
- 00:12:032 >> Add a finish at start
- 00:29:810 >> Add a normal finish at the start ?
- 00:42:255 >> New combo
- 00:52:921 >> ^
- 00:54:699 (1,2) >> I think that in both sliders you should reverse the hitsounds, I mean the whistle shoud go at the end and the finish at the start
- 00:58:254 >> Reduce the volume for this spinner to 30% or 20%
- 01:10:699 >> Finish
- 01:11:588 >> Finish at start
- 01:13:810 >> Add a slider from here to 01:14:254 (also finish the kiai at this point) ?
- 01:40:921 >> New combo
- 01:44:921 >> ^
- 01:48:477 >> ^
- 01:49:810 >> Normal finish at start ?
- 01:53:365 (1,2,3) >> The finishes on all these sliders should go at the start not the end
- 02:10:254 >> Finish
- 02:11:143 >> Finish at start
- 02:12:921 >> ^ also end the kiai time here
- 02:41:365 >> Finish at start
- 02:52:032 (1,2,3) >> Same as 01:53:365
- 02:58:254 >> Finish
- 03:12:477 >> Could you move it down a little ? Is a bit high
- 03:20:921 >> Remove the clap here and reduce the volume to 10% from here to 03:21:699, it makes a nice effect. Do this in all difficultuies if you can.
- 03:24:032 >> Finish at start
- 03:27:143 >> Make a slider from here to 03:27:588 (end kiai here) ?
Normal:
- The speed seems a little too much for a normal diff :/
- 00:06:699 >> New combo
- 00:29:810 >> Add finish at start
- 00:44:032 >> ^
- 00:54:699 (1,2,3,4) >> On all the finishes should be placed at the start not the end
- 00:59:588 >> A whistle sounds better than finish
- 01:01:810 >> I don't really see the point for this new combo, remove it ?
- 01:10:699 (1,4) >> Finish at start
- 01:13:810 >> Same as Easy
- 01:28:477 >> Add a normal finish ?
- 01:55:143 >> This sounds better to me
[image]http://puu.sh/dpCW[/image]
- 02:49:365 >> Many notes in a row, kinda hard; try something else ?
- 02:53:810 >> New combo
- 03:18:699 >> ^
- 03:20:477 >> Basically the same a s easy, reduce the volume
- 03:25:810 (1,2,3) >> Spacing is not equal between notes
5150 no Yakuman:
- The BG for this diff is kinda ... suggesting but is really really slighty so no problem I think
- 00:15:588 >> Add a note with finish
- 00:35:143 >> Remove new combo
- 01:14:254 >> Add a note with finish
- 02:10:254 >> Remove new combo
- 02:55:810 >> Finish the spinner here and then add a new spinner from 02:56:032 to 02:58:254 with a finish
- 03:20:477 >> Same as Easy, reduce the volume for this section
- Hitsounds and patterns could be much better
Insane:
- 00:03:144 (7,8) >> Doesn't feel like a jump should be here
- 00:04:032 >> Why the sudden spacing change ? Doesn't feel right, also here you could put some 1/4 sliders with repeats, follow the song better
- 00:06:699 >> New combo
- 00:09:143 >> Delete this note, feels much better without it
- 00:09:366 >> The distance between these feels like is too much, the jumps fit but try to make the distance a bit bit smaller
- 00:10:254 (8,9,10) >> ^ also new combo on (8)
- 00:13:588 >> New combo
- 00:16:921 >> ^
- 00:20:477 >> ^
- 00:25:588 (8,9) >> Make a little jumo between these notes ?
- 00:26:254 (1,2) >> Jump doesn't fit
- 00:28:921 (7,8,9) >> I'm my opinion the jump should only be between (8,9)
- 00:31:588 >> New combo
- 00:35:143 >> ^
- 00:39:588 (8,9,10) >> The jump should be between (9,10) not (8,9)
- 00:41:143 (4,5,6,7,8,9) >> Jumps don't fit imo
- 00:49:143 >> New combo
- 00:52:921 (2,4) >> Delete these, feels like they are extra
- 00:57:365 >> Slowdown this slider ?
- 01:05:365 >> New combo
- 01:08:254 (5,6) >> Stack better under previous slider
- 01:08:921 >> New combo
- 01:12:032 (6,7) >> Delete (7), delete (6) and put a note at 01:12:032
- 01:30:254 >> New combo
- 01:33:810 >> ^
- 01:35:588 >> Make the centre slider point a normal one, not red
- 01:37:365 >> New combo
- 01:40:921 >> ^
- 01:45:588 >> Make the jump not so distant
- 01:48:032 >> New combo
- 01:56:477 >> Delete this
- 01:56:921 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) >> Reduce the volume for this notes
- 02:00:810 >> Add a note
- 02:04:032 >> New combo
- 02:07:588 >> ^
- 02:11:365 (2,4) >> Delete
- 02:12:921 >> Weird that you don't have a break here, I really suggest putting one here like other diffs for consistency and also give the players a rest
- 02:18:254 >> New combo
- 02:28:921 >> ^ then remove new combo at 02:29:810
- 02:32:477 >> New combo then remove new combo at 02:33:366
- 02:46:699 >> New combo
- 02:50:477 (2,4) >> Delete
- 02:53:588 >> New combo
- 02:55:143 (1,2,3) >> Doesn't feel jumpy here :/
- 03:04:477 >> New combo
- 03:07:810 >> ^
- 03:11:588 >> ^
- 03:18:699 >> ^
- 03:25:144 >> Touches the hp bar a little
* Overall, needs better hitsounding and patterns; needs more mods