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my english is so poor, so i may not understand your suggestions rightlyIncomp wrote:
Hey there. From #modreq.
[General]Congratulations on your first map! Mapping isn't an easy thing to pursue, and few people make it this far.
If you wish to push this map towards ranked status, it would take a lot of work. It would need a proper background. Proper hitsounding. You might even have to remap the whole song more than once
Regardless, you have good knowledge of sounds that are important enough to place notes on, and that's super important for any new mapper. Don't let this mod discourage you from mapping. I hate to sound like the tutorial map, but you have potential.
[Hard]00:03:137 (6) - There is no sound here.hasn't fixed. the note is follwing vocal
00:08:529 (2) - There is no sound here.hasn't fixedthe note is follwing vocal
00:10:098 (8) - Extend this slider out so that it is not a repeating slider, as the repeat doesn't land on any important sound. You should also avoid placing slider heads on blue ticks, if possible.fixed maybe
00:17:238 (3) - You should place a note on the white tick following this slider.i don't know how to do that
00:23:425 (3) - You should place a note on the white tick following this note.i don't know how to do that
00:27:175 (1) - Consider removing this note and placing a kick slider on the red tick before it, like this:
Also, consider placing a 1/2 slider on the red tick after that note, like this:
maybe fixed
00:32:425 (11) - This slider passes right through important sounds (like the beat). You should consider mapping to instruments more than vocals, as a new mapper. You should also place a note on the white tick following this slider.fixed
00:37:675 (1) - Remove the new combo here.fixed
00:38:425 (1) - ^fixed
00:39:175 (1) - ^fixed
00:44:238 (6) - Replace this slider with a note on the red tick (where the slider ends). The sounds that slider ends land on should never be more important than the sounds the slider heads begin on.fixed. maybe
00:47:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The spacing here is inconsistent. Use the same distance snapping for these.fixed
00:49:488 (8) - This slider also passes through important notes, and the instrumental sounds after it are completely ignored.fixed
00:58:863 (1) - Remove the new combo here, as it is unnecessary.fixed
00:59:613 (1) - ^fixed
01:00:363 (1) - ^fixed
01:01:675 (3,4) - The spacing here is confusing to players of this skill level. You should replace these two notes with a 1/2 sliderfixed
01:05:613 (9) - Make this into a new combo.fixed
01:04:863 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) - The spacing on these 1/2 notes is not consistent.fixed
01:11:238 (4,5,6,7) - ^fixed
01:18:550 (1,2,3,4) - ^fixed
01:20:050 (1,2,3,4) - ^fixed
01:26:050 (1,2,3) - ^fixed
01:34:113 (1,2,3) - ^ and the slider overlap.fixed maybe
01:40:863 (2,3,4) - ^fixed
01:46:863 (2,3,4,1) - ^fixed
01:47:425 (1) - There doesn't need to be a new combo here.fixed
01:48:925 (1,1,1) - Or on any of these three notes.hasn't fixed i can't understand "or on any of"