[Oni]
00:10:298 (1) - the sound is the same with 00:10:139 (1) - it should be k
00:10:456 (1) - heavy sound here, d is better
00:10:771 (1) - ^
00:23:246 - add a d cuz u always use this rhythm like the former 00:21:982 (1,1) - and the backward 00:25:771 (1,1) - and there's the same rythm here
00:30:983 (1) - k, the reason is the same with what I said above. You always use d+k to represent the rhythm and the sound which should be put k here is a little delayed to 00:30:983 (1) but it still need to be emphasized
00:30:825 - it's blank here but there's the same sound with 00:30:193 (1,1,1) - so I suggest u to put something here
00:40:456 (1) - k cuz there's a finish and u followed the same sound here 00:39:193 (1) - too
00:41:404 (1) - cuz there're drum and finish sounds, changing to d is better
00:41:719 (1) - and this can be k
00:42:193 (1,1,1) - these can be k cuz the drum sounds here are smaller than 00:42:035 (1) -
00:42:667 (1) - d
00:43:930 (1) - d
00:45:035 (1) - almost no sound here, it should not be d
00:45:193 (1) - d
00:45:509 (1,1,1,1) - ^
00:47:246 (1,1,1) - the three are the same drum sounds but this one 00:47:404 (1) - is heavier than others, so it should be d and other can be k
00:50:246 (1) - the same sound with 00:50:088 (1) -
00:50:561 (1) - k
00:51:351 - it's not good to be blank here cuz there's a drum sound and u follow it very often.
01:01:614 (1) - d
01:03:825 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I think this part can be more simple cuz there're less sounds
00:47:719 (1) - d
00:48:983 (1) - d
01:11:719 (1) - d, the same sound with the former but it's a little bit louder
01:44:246 (1) - sound becomes heavier here, it can be d
01:45:351 (1,1) - u always follow the two sounds before. why are they two k?
I think the most problematic in the kiai part is that there're many same rhythms which also appears in other parts but u follow them with different k/d like 01:50:878 (1,1,1) - with 00:52:772 (1,1,1,1,1) -
ok small mod
( the song is too long and too many rhythms and problems are the same orz
I'm sorry if my English is not good to express what I want to say.