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Neoskylove wrote:

[Insane]
00:29:129 - add a beat? can be better for vocal. section will become more dense than the next section
fixed unmentioned!
thanks neosl :D
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from my mod q, ill do my best

[insane]

first off, i think AR 9 is way too slow for a relatively dense 191 bpm map like this. something like 9.2/3 would suit it much better.

00:01:772 (2) - blankets off here, blankets only work when approach circles fit the slider track (sorry if im patronizing, hehe)

00:03:394 (1,2) - theres no symmetry here, which makes it look very ugly etc. copy and paste one slider, and then move it accordingly
00:09:475 (3) - blanket here is off, but ill stop pointing them out from here on. look at this guide for more info on how to make a good one
00:17:988 (3,1) - i think this would be a lot better if the slider tracks didnt overlap
00:20:826 (2) - maybe have this be more directly infront of the slider end?
00:39:024 (1) - this has a lot opportunities to be more supportive of your structure, but it takes none. (e.g., it could blanket the slider head of 00:38:710 (7) - )

the rest of the map is fun to play, and predominantly has issues already mentioned thus far (blankets, lack of support for your structure).

on the matter of what can be improved, i think that a few of your overlaps, while purposeful, can be improved using follow points. in other words, you can use follow points to make your partial overlaps less messy if you make it so that the line passes directly through the center of the overlapped hitcircle. to me, it looks a lot better and keeps your ratios/structure a lot more consistent, but if you disagree, power to you. its simply my philosophy.
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lovely map, you did a nice job on the hitsounds. a bit more work on some messy slider stuff, and this has a very good chance at rank.
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Ali- wrote:

from my mod q, ill do my best

[insane]

first off, i think AR 9 is way too slow for a relatively dense 191 bpm map like this. something like 9.2/3 would suit it much better. sure

00:01:772 (2) - blankets off here, blankets only work when approach circles fit the slider track (sorry if im patronizing, hehe) sure

00:03:394 (1,2) - theres no symmetry here, which makes it look very ugly etc. copy and paste one slider, and then move it accordingly wasn't really aiming for perfect symmetry
00:09:475 (3) - blanket here is off, but ill stop pointing them out from here on. look at this guide for more info on how to make a good one sure
00:17:988 (3,1) - i think this would be a lot better if the slider tracks didnt overlap i think it looks nice
00:20:826 (2) - maybe have this be more directly infront of the slider end? it wouldn't make sense to have unusual spacing than the others here
00:39:024 (1) - this has a lot opportunities to be more supportive of your structure, but it takes none. (e.g., it could blanket the slider head of 00:38:710 (7) - ) i think it supports the structure just fine

the rest of the map is fun to play, and predominantly has issues already mentioned thus far (blankets, lack of support for your structure).

on the matter of what can be improved, i think that a few of your overlaps, while purposeful, can be improved using follow points. in other words, you can use follow points to make your partial overlaps less messy if you make it so that the line passes directly through the center of the overlapped hitcircle. to me, it looks a lot better and keeps your ratios/structure a lot more consistent, but if you disagree, power to you. its simply my philosophy.
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lovely map, you did a nice job on the hitsounds. a bit more work on some messy slider stuff, and this has a very good chance at rank.
thanks for the enlightenment :D
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hallo from Q

[Insane]
00:17:988 (1) - maybe NC this slider since u didnt use 4combos in this part so keep the consistency perhaps
00:31:485 (1) - idk but this slider looks far visually why not blanket it with 00:31:170 (6) - then just adjust the next notes and overlaps after
00:35:882 (3) - i think u intended not to overlap this with 00:34:783 (5) - so maybe adjust it a bit to the left to align it
00:34:626 (4,4) - intended not to stack?
00:38:396 (5) - i'd nc this to emphasize the percussion
00:56:144 (4) - uhh dont u think this is p high mayb adjust ds as well as 3
00:57:244 (3) - adjust ds of this note? mayb blanket it with 00:57:715 (1) - perhaps adjust 4 as well
01:00:228 (1) - this too adjust ds it kinna touches hp bar a bit
01:12:008 (2,1) - idk overlap them? fix overlaps for 01:12:008 (2,2) - as well so spacing would be consistent with 01:14:207 (1,2) -
01:20:804 (2,1) - intended not to overlap or not
01:26:773 (1) - feel free to ignore but id make this a triangle for 01:26:144 (3,4) -

thats all gudluck too busy to mod other diffs im sorry hope i helped something
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AJamez wrote:

hallo from Q

[Insane]
00:17:988 (1) - maybe NC this slider since u didnt use 4combos in this part so keep the consistency perhaps im ncing every other downbeat this section
00:31:485 (1) - idk but this slider looks far visually why not blanket it with 00:31:170 (6) - then just adjust the next notes and overlaps after it doesn't look too far
00:35:882 (3) - i think u intended not to overlap this with 00:34:783 (5) - so maybe adjust it a bit to the left to align it sure
00:34:626 (4,4) - intended not to stack? yeah and it might be to far for (5) aswell
00:38:396 (5) - i'd nc this to emphasize the percussion breaks consistency
00:56:144 (4) - uhh dont u think this is p high mayb adjust ds as well as 3 i think it's fine for kiai
00:57:244 (3) - adjust ds of this note? mayb blanket it with 00:57:715 (1) - perhaps adjust 4 as well ^
01:00:228 (1) - this too adjust ds it kinna touches hp bar a bit ok
01:12:008 (2,1) - idk overlap them? fix overlaps for 01:12:008 (2,2) - as well so spacing would be consistent with 01:14:207 (1,2) - not visible during gameplay, it's fine
01:20:804 (2,1) - intended not to overlap or not ^
01:26:773 (1) - feel free to ignore but id make this a triangle for 01:26:144 (3,4) - not sure how

thats all gudluck too busy to mod other diffs im sorry hope i helped something
thanks!
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M4M

Easy
  1. 00:09:475 - I think that you can pick up the vocals here
    00:02:988 (3) - Like this
  2. 00:23:259 (1) - If quiet mapping so far this sound is very uncomfortable. delete
  3. 00:37:453 (2,3) - If you match vocals I think that the rhythm with Ctrl+G is correct
  4. 00:42:479 - Why are you ignoring this sound?
    00:39:966 - I think that it can be picked up just like this sound
  5. 00:58:814 - 01:06:354 - 01:18:919 - Add Circle
    00:53:788 (4) - Just like here


Normal
  1. 00:11:299 (3) - Why did you put a circle here?
    00:04:813 - You should make a spacing just like here
  2. 00:12:718 - The sound at the end of the slider is not in the song
  3. 00:22:853 (1) - Remove NC
    I thought it better to match NC to lyrics than to downbeat
  4. 00:37:296 - Why not pick up this sound?
    00:33:998 (1,2) - I think the same as this pattern is good
  5. 00:53:160 (4) - 01:13:579 (5) - Why are the rhythms different?


Akitoshi's Hard (どこにでも居る)
  1. 00:57:558 (4,5) - Ctrl+Gしてみません?
    00:57:087 (2,3,4) - 左に流れてからいきなり00:57:558 (4,5,1) - で離れる感じだとやりづらいと思った
  2. 01:07:139 (2,3,4,5) - これだけリズムが違うのはなぜですか?
    01:04:155 - ここから01:07:767 - ここまでは同じリズムの方が良いと思う


Hazu's Insane
  1. 00:22:853 (1) - Remove NC
  2. 00:51:118 (4) - How about making this a position like an image? Image


Good luck!
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Yasaija 714 wrote:

Akitoshi's Hard (どこにでも居る) もうデフォルトって事で
  1. 00:57:558 (4,5) - Ctrl+Gしてみません?
    00:57:087 (2,3,4) - 左に流れてからいきなり00:57:558 (4,5,1) - で離れる感じだとやりづらいと思った ok
  2. 01:07:139 (2,3,4,5) - これだけリズムが違うのはなぜですか?
    01:04:155 - ここから01:07:767 - ここまでは同じリズムの方が良いと思う 声の高さ意識しながら別のパターンにしてまふ
thanks! :D

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posted

Yasaija 714 wrote:

Normal
  1. 00:12:718 - The sound at the end of the slider is not in the song that's when the sound ends, that's also why it's on sliderend
  2. 00:22:853 (1) - Remove NC i don't think so
    I thought it better to match NC to lyrics than to downbeat
  3. 00:37:296 - Why not pick up this sound? feels a bit too dense, 00:33:998 (1,2) - is to emphasize the new section and the vocal
    00:33:998 (1,2) - I think the same as this pattern is good
fixed others that were unmentioned!
thanks :D
posted
hi, nm from my queue i think
SPOILER
Easy
01:06:354 (3,2) - bad blanket
01:06:668 (1,2) - you use a 3/2 repeating slider here, but not for here 01:04:155 (1,2) and imo it would be better if you used it both places

Normal
00:04:205 (2) - sharp angled slider seems unnecessary here + 00:03:394 (1) isn't perfectly spaced between the slider head and tail
00:10:691 (2) - same thing about the sharp angle (and a lot of the other times you use sharply angled sliders i don't think are appropriate. i don't feel like pointing them all out/)

Insane
00:08:259 (2,3) - bad blanket
00:11:299 (3,1) - why is spacing so big here this part of the song is pretty calm
00:18:799 (4,1) - uncomfortable to play imo
00:34:626 (4,1) - imperfect blanket as well
00:39:024 (1,1,1) - why are these slider shapes so different when they represent basically the same thing
00:54:417 (2,1) - blanket

good luck!
posted
Remapped my diff based on your suggestions xd
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320,304,52218,1,2,0:1:0:0:
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320,368,86773,5,4,0:0:0:0:
posted
hihi

[Insane]

  • why not just ar9

  1. 00:09:475 (3,1) - swapping these works better due to the hold vocal note on 00:09:475 -
  2. 00:20:826 (2) - well vocals end here but a circle doesnt really represent it well. extending the previous slider until this point or just deleting the circle are better choices cuz music doesnt support a circle. the only thing its doing is making the gap between it and the next slider shorter
  3. 00:33:998 (1,2) - music doesnt really supports such a large jump so what about doing this http://puu.sh/xydrb/b0af8b4131.jpg
  4. 00:49:862 (4,5) - 00:52:375 (4,5) - 00:57:401 (4,5) - and so on. id rather map them like you did with 00:54:888 (4) - or at least using less distance between them cuz theres nothing that stands out to. there are some that are kind of justified like 00:57:401 (4,5) - 00:57:401 (4,5) - 01:07:453 (4,5) - where 5 has a vocal note but ur map seems to be more drums oriented so what i said earlier should work better


[Hazu's Insane]
  1. 00:49:704 (3,4) - yo creo que la distancia es demasiada para lo poco intenso que es el beat. aunque hiciste esto en hartas partes asi que no se si lo quieras cambiar xd


[Akitoshi's Hard]
  1. 00:06:232 (4) - u better leave this beat unmapped like in the other diffs since theres literally nothing to map here also less density expresses better how calm the song is
  2. 00:06:637 (1) - this rhythm 00:00:151 (1,2,3) - works better here so u make all vocals clickable and delete 00:08:664 (2) - cuz vocals are more and u already shown that u priorize vocals on 00:02:178 -
  3. 00:30:385 (2,3) - right now youre giving importance to the white tick on (3)'s head while it doenst really stand out as much as the red one on its tail. ctrlging them fixes that
  4. 00:57:558 (4,5) - 01:02:113 (2,3) - you usually dont use such a large spacing for 1/2 consecutive clickable objects even if some shows more importance. the rest ones are spaced equally so u better stick to ds on those patterns too


[Normal]
  1. 00:12:313 (4,5) - higher density than higher diffs doesnt make much sense to me. u can maybe try something like this http://puu.sh/xz1iO/9fc72876f1.jpg
    well most of the beginning is more dense than hard so try to use larger gaps or sliders
  2. 00:20:826 (2) - same as insane
  3. 00:35:097 (4,5) - that 3/4 gap feels weird considering that u were following vocals with the previous notes. this sound more fitting imo http://puu.sh/xz1uT/9192f4c69b.jpg
  4. 00:35:882 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - ^same goes to this pattern. http://puu.sh/xz1z9/f04791fb79.jpg
  5. 00:39:024 (1) - 00:42:793 (2) - same as 00:12:313 (4,5) - i think u can even reduce the sv a bit here


[Easy]
  1. 00:06:637 (1,2,1,2) - the way u handled vocals leaded you to this pattern 00:12:313 (2,1) - which is very misleading cuz there are no hold vocal notes during the first slider and the actual one starts where the slider ends ignoring it completely, then we have this 00:12:313 (2) - which isnt following vocals like the rest of this section and gives importance to a faint sound. this rhythm fixes all that stuff http://puu.sh/xz1Tj/62ab78d0cd.jpg
  2. due to the really low density i cant really tell what layer of the music are you mainly mapping. id buff it a bit to make that more clear
    some examples are 00:28:972 (1,2,1,2) - 4 2/1 sliders doesnt makes sense for me but this does http://puu.sh/xz4at/ae30b1bf29.jpg
    maybe using more 3/4 sliders in places like 01:24:259 (1,2,3,1) - http://puu.sh/xz4mC/64507533ce.jpg
    increasing density in general would be great


gl
posted
titan

- titan wrote:

Easy
01:06:354 (3,2) - bad blanket fixed
01:06:668 (1,2) - you use a 3/2 repeating slider here, but not for here 01:04:155 (1,2) and imo it would be better if you used it both places might be too dense for easy so i variate it

Normal
00:04:205 (2) - sharp angled slider seems unnecessary here + 00:03:394 (1) isn't perfectly spaced between the slider head and tail idk,
kinda feels unnecessary

00:10:691 (2) - same thing about the sharp angle (and a lot of the other times you use sharply angled sliders i don't think are appropriate. i don't feel like pointing them all out/)

Insane
00:08:259 (2,3) - bad blanket i really can't blanket lo l
00:11:299 (3,1) - why is spacing so big here this part of the song is pretty calm it's for the triangle
00:18:799 (4,1) - uncomfortable to play imo it's ok
00:34:626 (4,1) - imperfect blanket as well
00:39:024 (1,1,1) - why are these slider shapes so different when they represent basically the same thing they actually get stronger
00:54:417 (2,1) - blanket
good luck!
pk h g

pkhg wrote:

[Insane]

  • why not just ar9 sure

  1. 00:09:475 (3,1) - swapping these works better due to the hold vocal note on 00:09:475 - idk, it feels a bit weird to me
  2. 00:20:826 (2) - well vocals end here but a circle doesnt really represent it well. extending the previous slider until this point or just deleting the circle are better choices cuz music doesnt support a circle. the only thing its doing is making the gap between it and the next slider shorter fixed
  3. 00:33:998 (1,2) - music doesnt really supports such a large jump so what about doing this http://puu.sh/xydrb/b0af8b4131.jpg okay
  4. 00:49:862 (4,5) - 00:52:375 (4,5) - 00:57:401 (4,5) - and so on. id rather map them like you did with 00:54:888 (4) - or at least using less distance between them cuz theres nothing that stands out to. there are some that are kind of justified like 00:57:401 (4,5) - 00:57:401 (4,5) - 01:07:453 (4,5) - where 5 has a vocal note but ur map seems to be more drums oriented so what i said earlier should work better fixed


[Normal]
  1. 00:12:313 (4,5) - higher density than higher diffs doesnt make much sense to me. u can maybe try something like this http://puu.sh/xz1iO/9fc72876f1.jpg
    well most of the beginning is more dense than hard so try to use larger gaps or sliders i did something similiar
  2. 00:20:826 (2) - same as insane fix
  3. 00:35:097 (4,5) - that 3/4 gap feels weird considering that u were following vocals with the previous notes. this sound more fitting imo http://puu.sh/xz1uT/9192f4c69b.jpg fix
  4. 00:35:882 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - ^same goes to this pattern. http://puu.sh/xz1z9/f04791fb79.jpg fix
  5. 00:39:024 (1) - 00:42:793 (2) - same as 00:12:313 (4,5) - i think u can even reduce the sv a bit here ok


[Easy]
  1. 00:06:637 (1,2,1,2) - the way u handled vocals leaded you to this pattern 00:12:313 (2,1) - which is very misleading cuz there are no hold vocal notes during the first slider and the actual one starts where the slider ends ignoring it completely, then we have this 00:12:313 (2) - which isnt following vocals like the rest of this section and gives importance to a faint sound. this rhythm fixes all that stuff http://puu.sh/xz1Tj/62ab78d0cd.jpg fix
  2. due to the really low density i cant really tell what layer of the music are you mainly mapping. id buff it a bit to make that more clear
    some examples are 00:28:972 (1,2,1,2) - 4 2/1 sliders doesnt makes sense for me but this does http://puu.sh/xz4at/ae30b1bf29.jpg
    maybe using more 3/4 sliders in places like 01:24:259 (1,2,3,1) - http://puu.sh/xz4mC/64507533ce.jpg
    increasing density in general would be great ok


thanks guys :3
posted
nm nm nm nm
im not good at enlglsh, modding.

Easy
00:19:610 (1) - hp
00:32:113 (2) - ^
00:52:218 (2,1) - intentional unstack?
01:17:348 (2,3) - blanket pls lol
01:21:118 (3,3) - you can avoid this overlap
01:24:259 (1,2,3) - i think there rhythm dont much music, because melody doesnt change until 01:26:773 (1) - and there are in kiai, so i think you should make the rhythm more difficult a little more. (but imo xd) maybe https://i.gyazo.com/43027c2cbd698e76137 ... 9aa5bc.png

Normal
00:32:741 (3) - hp!!!
00:38:396 (5,1) - you can blanket

Akitoshi

Yasaija 714 wrote:

(どこにでも居る) i agree
00:29:914 (4) - もうちょい上に上げて、前後の間隔を同じにしてもいいかも Aメロだしその方が流れていいと思う こーんな感じ 
https://i.gyazo.com/c72ec59d7cd19e89f78 ... edbb9e.png

Hazu
widescreen is uncheck only this diff.
01:13:265 (2,3) - there are too close, so i think not good flow here. maybe move 01:13:579 (3,4,1) - to 261:361 ?? (good to me xd)

Insane
00:19:610 (1) - move tail of the slider to 00:20:826 - ?
because you did follow vocal before here in 00:16:367 (1,2,3,4) - (slider's head, tail, reverse have big vocal),so 00:20:826 - which have big vocal is better than 00:20:421 - . (remove whistle).
00:47:663 (1,1) - nazi, blanket is off xd
01:00:071 (5,1) - compared to other pattern(01:20:019 (4,5,1) - etc...), they are too close, so you cannot emphasize (1) imo. move to 193:40 better to me.

fun map (^^♪
good luck!!!!!!!!
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fixed all from asuka!
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pkhg wrote:

hihi

[Hazu's Insane]
  1. 00:49:704 (3,4) - yo creo que la distancia es demasiada para lo poco intenso que es el beat. aunque hiciste esto en hartas partes asi que no se si lo quieras cambiar xd Si, se que tiene mucho spacing, pero esa era la idea xd quizá los reduzca luego.


gl

Asuka_- wrote:

nm nm nm nm
im not good at enlglsh, modding.

Hazu
widescreen is uncheck only this diff. Agatsu you can fix this for me? thx :d
01:13:265 (2,3) - there are too close, so i think not good flow here. maybe move 01:13:579 (3,4,1) - to 261:361 ?? (good to me xd) Mmm... I'll ask for testplay, but I think is a good flow imo.

fun map (^^♪
good luck!!!!!!!!
Thankies~
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rp

pkhg wrote:

[Akitoshi's Hard]
  1. 00:06:232 (4) - u better leave this beat unmapped like in the other diffs since theres literally nothing to map here also less density expresses better how calm the song is
  2. 00:06:637 (1) - this rhythm 00:00:151 (1,2,3) - works better here so u make all vocals clickable and delete 00:08:664 (2) - cuz vocals are more and u already shown that u priorize vocals on 00:02:178 -
  3. 00:30:385 (2,3) - right now youre giving importance to the white tick on (3)'s head while it doenst really stand out as much as the red one on its tail. ctrlging them fixes that
  4. 00:57:558 (4,5) - 01:02:113 (2,3) - you usually dont use such a large spacing for 1/2 consecutive clickable objects even if some shows more importance. the rest ones are spaced equally so u better stick to ds on those patterns too increased the number of jumps instead

Asuka_- wrote:

Akitoshi

Yasaija 714 wrote:

(どこにでも居る) i agree
00:29:914 (4) - もうちょい上に上げて、前後の間隔を同じにしてもいいかも Aメロだしその方が流れていいと思う こーんな感じ fixed
https://i.gyazo.com/c72ec59d7cd19e89f78 ... edbb9e.png


basically fixed all, thanks uwu

upd
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99,217,75464,6,0,P|173:206|253:200,2,154.000004699707,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
13,269,76249,1,2,0:1:0:0:
99,318,76406,2,0,P|143:319|192:315,1,77.0000023498536,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,276,76720,6,0,P|276:223|275:187,1,77.0000023498536,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,216,77034,2,0,P|365:162|366:126,1,77.0000023498536,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,91,77348,2,0,P|285:37|284:1,1,77.0000023498536,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
168,8,77663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
105,105,77820,1,8,0:0:0:0:
211,152,77977,6,0,L|365:139,1,154.000004699707,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
463,126,78448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
453,225,78605,2,0,P|449:252|448:278,3,38.5000011749268,10|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
407,292,78919,2,0,P|411:319|412:345,3,38.5000011749268,10|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,375,79233,6,0,B|381:360|381:360|273:371,1,154.000004699707,6|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,342,79704,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,249,79862,2,0,P|228:191|221:160,1,77.0000023498536,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
124,172,80176,2,0,P|120:230|127:261,1,77.0000023498536,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,342,80490,6,0,P|238:348|323:277,1,154.000004699707,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,249,80961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
318,183,81118,2,0,L|404:185,1,77.0000023498536,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
301,82,81432,2,0,L|215:84,1,77.0000023498536,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,118,81746,6,0,B|79:162|79:162|90:269,2,154.000004699707,2|8|2,0:1|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
142,27,82532,1,2,0:1:0:0:
224,83,82689,2,0,L|301:82,1,77.0000023498536,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,174,83003,6,0,P|358:239|260:259,2,154.000004699707,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
293,162,83788,1,2,0:1:0:0:
201,232,83945,2,0,P|207:274|210:313,1,77.0000023498536,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
101,209,84259,6,0,P|113:121|119:39,1,154.000004699707,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,9,84731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,76,84888,1,2,0:1:0:0:
289,76,85045,2,0,L|380:67,1,77.0000023498536,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
441,155,85359,6,0,P|370:183|292:155,1,154.000004699707,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,137,85830,2,0,P|206:175|210:221,1,77.0000023498536,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,343,86144,1,2,0:1:0:0:
329,266,86301,1,2,0:1:0:0:
209,213,86458,2,0,P|171:211|114:214,1,77.0000023498536,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,355,86773,5,4,0:0:0:0:
posted
[easy]
00:09:880 (4) - u forgot a NC

[akitoshi hard]
01:05:882 (2,3,4) - weird flow u used here, it was the only time u used a angle like that

just get a BN for it, map is ok
posted
fixed nc
posted

MkGuh wrote:

[akitoshi hard]
01:05:882 (2,3,4) - weird flow u used here, it was the only time u used a angle like that i wanted to emphasize something different from 01:04:155 (1,2,3,4) - for the vocal changes. for the hard flow/angles, i used something similar or even harder at 00:56:301 (3,1) - 00:57:244 (3,4,5) - so it should be fine i hope
thank you for checking!
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ez
00:39:652 (1,2,1,2,3) - suggest using only 2/1 here. using 1/1 like this makes it pretty much the same as the rest of hte map (which song doesnt support)
01:01:642 (1,2) - ctrlg on 2 slightly broke the slidershape lol. should copy paste 1 then rotate by 180 instead
01:12:322 (2,3) - should gow ith some rhythm that covers the vocal/instrumental emphasis on 01:12:793 - . not following anything clear by skipping it

hard
00:30:699 (3,4) - follows vocals more clearly if rhythm is ctrlg'd. 4 seems out of place as is after 3 is vocal focus

hazu
00:33:998 (1) - try to make this section contrast more with the previous (since mapping staying the same while song changes is nonsense). easiest way to do that would be increasing sv

i can bubble if you mod heikousen 2 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/664417
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