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这难度名让我想到了邪恶的东西……
Easy
很好 没问题
hard
00:58:944 (1,2) - 这里的绿线最好像easy那样
01:14:650 (4) - new combo
01:27:532 (2) - new combo
01:28:591 (4,5) - ^
Ass这难度名……
把F@uck you 去掉，谢谢，这不是兄贵- -
就这样，音效正常点
kudo不许忘
Easy
很好 没问题
hard
00:58:944 (1,2) - 这里的绿线最好像easy那样
01:14:650 (4) - new combo
01:27:532 (2) - new combo
01:28:591 (4,5) - ^
Ass这难度名……
把F@uck you 去掉，谢谢，这不是兄贵- -
就这样，音效正常点
kudo不许忘
EnakoRin
done
唔可能有一些理解出错不过就先酱紫好了【喂
thank for mod
Download: Larval Stage Planning - Kimi+Nazo+Watashi JUMP!!(TV Size) (Weiren) [tutuhaha's Hard].osu
唔可能有一些理解出错不过就先酱紫好了【喂
thank for mod
Download: Larval Stage Planning - Kimi+Nazo+Watashi JUMP!!(TV Size) (Weiren) [tutuhaha's Hard].osu
from my que
[General]
fine
[Normal]
00:29:120 (2) - this is not following the music well
01:01:767 (3,4) - not same arc
[tutuhaha's Hard-]
rename to hard
HD+2
AR+1 or 2
OD+1 or 2
[哲♂学]
00:06:620 (2) - this is not following the music well
00:45:356 (2) - start at 00:45:532
哎哟
[General]
fine
[Normal]
00:29:120 (2) - this is not following the music well
01:01:767 (3,4) - not same arc
[tutuhaha's Hard-]
rename to hard
HD+2
AR+1 or 2
OD+1 or 2
[哲♂学]
00:06:620 (2) - this is not following the music well
00:45:356 (2) - start at 00:45:532
哎哟
hihi~
一些建議:
[General]
tags一欄里面留個aniki和tutuhaha已經足夠了
[Normal]
00:29:120(2) - 這個slider的timing有錯誤,建議改為:
00:47:297(T) - 這綠線有用...?
00:51:885(3,4,1) - 這幾個堆在一起太別扭了...換個擺法吧
01:07:414(6) - new combo.
[tutuhaha's Hard-]
...Hard-是神馬
00:53:120(2) - 個人覺得這紅線不適合放finish...
00:54:532(6) - ^
比想象中的要好不少~
[Weiren's Ass]
00:02:473(1) - 這spinner在00:05:297結束
00:06:620(2) -
00:18:179(1) - 這里的結尾需要一個前面那種大聲點的打屁股音效
00:22:238(1) - 同上,不過結尾換成開頭
00:58:591(4) - 這里需要那個啊~~~的音效
00:18:709(1) - 這里的開頭需要那個啊~~~的音效
01:28:591(1) - 這里的結尾需要那個啊~~~的音效
既然要用哲學音效為何不徹底一點...
加油!
so
star~
啊已經給過星了
一些建議:
[General]
tags一欄里面留個aniki和tutuhaha已經足夠了
[Normal]
00:29:120(2) - 這個slider的timing有錯誤,建議改為:
00:51:885(3,4,1) - 這幾個堆在一起太別扭了...換個擺法吧
01:07:414(6) - new combo.
[tutuhaha's Hard-]
...Hard-是神馬
00:53:120(2) - 個人覺得這紅線不適合放finish...
00:54:532(6) - ^
比想象中的要好不少~
[Weiren's Ass]
00:02:473(1) - 這spinner在00:05:297結束
00:06:620(2) -
00:22:238(1) - 同上,不過結尾換成開頭
00:58:591(4) - 這里需要那個啊~~~的音效
00:18:709(1) - 這里的開頭需要那個啊~~~的音效
01:28:591(1) - 這里的結尾需要那個啊~~~的音效
既然要用哲學音效為何不徹底一點...
加油!
so
star~
EnakoRin
WCX：
[Normal]
00:29:120 (2) - this is not following the music well
01:01:767 (3,4) - not same arc
[哲♂学]
00:06:620 (2) - this is not following the music well
00:45:356 (2) - start at 00:45:532
All fixed
JPY：
[General]
tags一欄里面留個aniki和tutuhaha已經足夠了
哲学音效出自比爷的吼声和TDN的F@ck you所以得加上- -
[Normal]
00:29:120(2) - 這個slider的timing有錯誤,建議改為:
00:47:297(T) - 這綠線有用...?
00:51:885(3,4,1) - 這幾個堆在一起太別扭了...換個擺法吧
01:07:414(6) - new combo.
All Fixed
[Weiren's Ass]
00:02:473(1) - 這spinner在00:05:297結束
Fixed
00:06:620(2) -
Fixed
00:18:179(1) - 這里的結尾需要一個前面那種大聲點的打屁股音效
Fixed
00:22:238(1) - 同上,不過結尾換成開頭
Fixed
00:58:591(4) - 這里需要那個啊~~~的音效
我给弄成“HO”了
00:18:709(1) - 這里的開頭需要那個啊~~~的音效
01:28:591(1) - 這里的結尾需要那個啊~~~的音效
这两个我试过了，感觉不好于是没动
Thanks for help
[Normal]
00:29:120 (2) - this is not following the music well
01:01:767 (3,4) - not same arc
[哲♂学]
00:06:620 (2) - this is not following the music well
00:45:356 (2) - start at 00:45:532
All fixed
JPY：
[General]
tags一欄里面留個aniki和tutuhaha已經足夠了
哲学音效出自比爷的吼声和TDN的F@ck you所以得加上- -
[Normal]
00:29:120(2) - 這個slider的timing有錯誤,建議改為:
00:47:297(T) - 這綠線有用...?
00:51:885(3,4,1) - 這幾個堆在一起太別扭了...換個擺法吧
01:07:414(6) - new combo.
All Fixed
[Weiren's Ass]
00:02:473(1) - 這spinner在00:05:297結束
Fixed
00:06:620(2) -
Fixed
00:18:179(1) - 這里的結尾需要一個前面那種大聲點的打屁股音效
Fixed
00:22:238(1) - 同上,不過結尾換成開頭
Fixed
00:58:591(4) - 這里需要那個啊~~~的音效
我给弄成“HO”了
00:18:709(1) - 這里的開頭需要那個啊~~~的音效
01:28:591(1) - 這里的結尾需要那個啊~~~的音效
这两个我试过了，感觉不好于是没动
Thanks for help
偷懒萌妹子王在此
[NM]
00:29:120 (2) - 折返点在蓝线上明显违和..拆成slider+circle吧
00:54:709 - nmhit?
00:57:709 (5) - whistle
[图图哈哈萌妹子]
00:18:179 (6,1) - 6摆上来一点 1和6重叠
00:37:414 (2) - 这应该要提前1/4 延长1/4 后面同理
01:00:885 (5) - soft finish
01:03:356 - ^
01:03:532 - ^
01:05:650 (3) - 这位置有点违和...很容易点到折返点上
01:17:473 (6,1) - 和第一条一样不解释
01:23:297 (3,4) - 摆成和01:22:238 (2,3) 相同间距
01:29:473 (3) - ctrl+r?
[猥人的~~啊~~~~]
哲学化很好 但是个人认为需要个正常音效补丁
真的 不是每个人都能接受这种口味...(虽然我还能接受wwww
00:31:414 (5) - clap 摔门吓死人了
00:42:356 (4) - ctrl+r 容易按反啊混蛋
00:52:767 (1) - remove nc ; 00:53:297 (4) - nc
00:56:650 (1,4) - finish
01:12:532 (1) - 音效的时间有点违和..
这音效真心碉堡了
+star= =加过了
[NM]
00:29:120 (2) - 折返点在蓝线上明显违和..拆成slider+circle吧
00:54:709 - nmhit?
00:57:709 (5) - whistle
[图图哈哈萌妹子]
00:18:179 (6,1) - 6摆上来一点 1和6重叠
00:37:414 (2) - 这应该要提前1/4 延长1/4 后面同理
01:00:885 (5) - soft finish
01:03:356 - ^
01:03:532 - ^
01:05:650 (3) - 这位置有点违和...很容易点到折返点上
01:17:473 (6,1) - 和第一条一样不解释
01:23:297 (3,4) - 摆成和01:22:238 (2,3) 相同间距
01:29:473 (3) - ctrl+r?
[猥人的~~啊~~~~]
哲学化很好 但是个人认为需要个正常音效补丁
真的 不是每个人都能接受这种口味...
00:31:414 (5) - clap 摔门吓死人了
00:42:356 (4) - ctrl+r 容易按反啊混蛋
00:52:767 (1) - remove nc ; 00:53:297 (4) - nc
00:56:650 (1,4) - finish
01:12:532 (1) - 音效的时间有点违和..
这音效真心碉堡了
ok
osu为啥发言短了就不让发了太抽了这【无重点
。。又发了两次请随便下一个【扶额无力
Download: Larval Stage Planning - Kimi+Nazo+Watashi JUMP!!(TV Size) (Weiren) [tutuhaha's Hard-].osu
Download: Larval Stage Planning - Kimi+Nazo+Watashi JUMP!!(TV Size) (Weiren) [tutuhaha's Hard-].osu
osu为啥发言短了就不让发了太抽了这【无重点
。。又发了两次请随便下一个【扶额无力
Download: Larval Stage Planning - Kimi+Nazo+Watashi JUMP!!(TV Size) (Weiren) [tutuhaha's Hard-].osu
Download: Larval Stage Planning - Kimi+Nazo+Watashi JUMP!!(TV Size) (Weiren) [tutuhaha's Hard-].osu
EnakoRin
[NM]
00:29:120 (2) - 折返点在蓝线上明显违和..拆成slider+circle吧
00:54:709 - nmhit?
00:57:709 (5) - whistle
All Fixed
[猥人的~~啊~~~~]
哲学化很好 但是个人认为需要个正常音效补丁
考虑下暂时不弄- -
真的 不是每个人都能接受这种口味... (虽然我还能接受wwww
萌妹重口
00:31:414 (5) - clap 摔门吓死人了
Fixed
00:42:356 (4) - ctrl+r 容易按反啊混蛋
Fixed
00:52:767 (1) - remove nc ; 00:53:297 (4) - nc
Fixed
00:56:650 (1,4) - finish
Fixed
01:12:532 (1) - 音效的时间有点违和..
我得去找Naked那个声音来替代
00:29:120 (2) - 折返点在蓝线上明显违和..拆成slider+circle吧
00:54:709 - nmhit?
00:57:709 (5) - whistle
All Fixed
[猥人的~~啊~~~~]
哲学化很好 但是个人认为需要个正常音效补丁
考虑下暂时不弄- -
真的 不是每个人都能接受这种口味... (虽然我还能接受wwww
萌妹重口
00:31:414 (5) - clap 摔门吓死人了
Fixed
00:42:356 (4) - ctrl+r 容易按反啊混蛋
Fixed
00:52:767 (1) - remove nc ; 00:53:297 (4) - nc
Fixed
00:56:650 (1,4) - finish
Fixed
01:12:532 (1) - 音效的时间有点违和..
我得去找Naked那个声音来替代
Modding your map as your request.
Hope it helps :3
[!] = You NEED to change.
[?] = Suggestion.
[.] = If possible, change.
General
- What about these as the combo colours: (Don't forget: If you decide to change it, you must change in all the difficulties)
00:19:767 - Drag the beginning of the Break here.
00:25:767 (2) - Move this slider a bit to the left, so it won't touch and overlap the previous note ? (Don't forget to fix the spacing of the whole combo.)
00:47:650 (1) - This note is too far away from the previous one, change the spacing ?
00:48:532 (2) - I suggest putting (2) - under - (1), so it wont touch nor overlap the previous slider.
00:49:238 (3) - This beat is too far from the previous one, fix the spacing following the 0.8x distance spacing.
00:57:356 (4) - New combo.
01:18:709 (1,2,3,4) - You forced small jumps here to make the patter pretty, however, it can be confusing for players who aren't experienced in the game.
[tutuhaha's Hard]
00:12:356 (4) - New combo.
00:14:650 (3) - This jump looks out of the context. Maybe fix the spacing as a normal combo?
00:19:767 - Drag the beginning of the Break here.
00:23:650 - Drag the end of the Break here.
00:36:003 (5) - New combo.
00:36:356 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:37:767 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:38:826 (2) - New combo.
00:42:356 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:43:061 (3) - New combo.
00:49:944 (6) - New combo.
00:50:473 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:51:356 (3) - New combo.
01:11:650 (4) - New combo.
[Weiren's Ass]
... evansama's hitsounds here :T ?
Perfect way to screw a map.
Hope it helps :3
[!] = You NEED to change.
[?] = Suggestion.
[.] = If possible, change.
General
- What about these as the combo colours: (Don't forget: If you decide to change it, you must change in all the difficulties)
Combo1 : 225,112,110
Combo2 : 162,128,38
Combo3 : 152,26,47
00:19:767 - Drag the beginning of the Break here.
00:25:767 (2) - Move this slider a bit to the left, so it won't touch and overlap the previous note ? (Don't forget to fix the spacing of the whole combo.)
00:47:650 (1) - This note is too far away from the previous one, change the spacing ?
00:48:532 (2) - I suggest putting (2) - under - (1), so it wont touch nor overlap the previous slider.
00:49:238 (3) - This beat is too far from the previous one, fix the spacing following the 0.8x distance spacing.
00:57:356 (4) - New combo.
01:18:709 (1,2,3,4) - You forced small jumps here to make the patter pretty, however, it can be confusing for players who aren't experienced in the game.
[tutuhaha's Hard]
00:12:356 (4) - New combo.
00:14:650 (3) - This jump looks out of the context. Maybe fix the spacing as a normal combo?
00:19:767 - Drag the beginning of the Break here.
00:23:650 - Drag the end of the Break here.
00:36:003 (5) - New combo.
00:36:356 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:37:767 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:38:826 (2) - New combo.
00:42:356 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:43:061 (3) - New combo.
00:49:944 (6) - New combo.
00:50:473 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:51:356 (3) - New combo.
01:11:650 (4) - New combo.
[Weiren's Ass]
... evansama's hitsounds here :T ?
Perfect way to screw a map.
OKOK~
now done
凑字凑字凑字。。。。
Download: Larval Stage Planning - Kimi+Nazo+Watashi JUMP!!(TV Size) (Weiren) [tutuhaha's Hard-].osu
now done
凑字凑字凑字。。。。
Download: Larval Stage Planning - Kimi+Nazo+Watashi JUMP!!(TV Size) (Weiren) [tutuhaha's Hard-].osu
EnakoRin
poisonchan wrote:
General
- What about these as the combo colours: (Don't forget: If you decide to change it, you must change in all the difficulties)Fixed
Combo1 : 225,112,110
Combo2 : 162,128,38
Combo3 : 152,26,47
[Normal]
00:19:767 - Drag the beginning of the Break here.
It is fine now I think
00:25:767 (2) - Move this slider a bit to the left, so it won't touch and overlap the previous note ? (Don't forget to fix the spacing of the whole combo.)
Fixed
00:47:650 (1) - This note is too far away from the previous one, change the spacing ?
Fixed
00:48:532 (2) - I suggest putting (2) - under - (1), so it wont touch nor overlap the previous slider.
Fixed
00:49:238 (3) - This beat is too far from the previous one, fix the spacing following the 0.8x distance spacing.
Fixed
00:57:356 (4) - New combo.
Fixed
01:18:709 (1,2,3,4) - You forced small jumps here to make the patter pretty, however, it can be confusing for players who aren't experienced in the game.
It's fine to noob I think..You needn't to move cursor
[Weiren's Ass]
... evansama's hitsounds here :T ?
I got them from Nico Nico Douga
Perfect way to screw a map.
[General]
Probably none
[Normal]
00:43:767 (2) - 放在00:43:591 然后拉长到00:44:122怎样
00:44:826 (1) - 缩到00:45:537
00:56:120 (2) - 1 grid up
01:00:532 (1) - 这个slider的时间点真的感觉很奇怪..不过我试了一下1/4好像找不到特别合适的点._.
[tutuhaha]
除了diff名有点猎奇以外其他都挺好
[伟人哲♂学♂家]
据说有对diff的start point是否一致很看重的MAT/BAT。如果是这样的话建议NORMAL和HARD都改到和这个diff一样的开始点
00:45:532 (2) - 缩短一半吧...这里前后都很跟vocal就这里不怎么合感觉很奇怪
00:58:591 (4) - 这个音量有点重了
01:12:532 (1) - ^
Nice map。我整个人都哲♂学了
Definitely Star
Probably none
[Normal]
00:43:767 (2) - 放在00:43:591 然后拉长到00:44:122怎样
00:44:826 (1) - 缩到00:45:537
00:56:120 (2) - 1 grid up
01:00:532 (1) - 这个slider的时间点真的感觉很奇怪..不过我试了一下1/4好像找不到特别合适的点._.
[tutuhaha]
除了diff名有点猎奇以外其他都挺好
[伟人哲♂学♂家]
据说有对diff的start point是否一致很看重的MAT/BAT。如果是这样的话建议NORMAL和HARD都改到和这个diff一样的开始点
00:45:532 (2) - 缩短一半吧...这里前后都很跟vocal就这里不怎么合感觉很奇怪
00:58:591 (4) - 这个音量有点重了
01:12:532 (1) - ^
Nice map。我整个人都哲♂学了
Definitely Star
[weiren's ass]
07,679 move closer?
24,709 move to note 5's position
32,473 note 1 and note 2 exchange position
35,826 change to note style
58,591 move further?
103,709 add note same as position of note 2
110,591 move further？
[weiren]
31,414 slider ends at 31,767
32,297 note change to 32,120
32,650 slider change to 32,473 ( offbeat.... although it fit the song, but it doesnt fit the rhythm. if you ever played the anime beatmap pack you will know what i mean)
49,944 slider change to 49,767 end at 50,120
50,473 add note
thats all! STAR!
07,679 move closer?
24,709 move to note 5's position
32,473 note 1 and note 2 exchange position
35,826 change to note style
58,591 move further?
103,709 add note same as position of note 2
110,591 move further？
[weiren]
31,414 slider ends at 31,767
32,297 note change to 32,120
32,650 slider change to 32,473 ( offbeat.... although it fit the song, but it doesnt fit the rhythm. if you ever played the anime beatmap pack you will know what i mean)
49,944 slider change to 49,767 end at 50,120
50,473 add note
thats all! STAR!
EnakoRin
Megurine Luka：
[Normal]L_P：
00:43:767 (2) - 放在00:43:591 然后拉长到00:44:122怎样
Fixed
00:44:826 (1) - 缩到00:45:537
Fixed
00:56:120 (2) - 1 grid up
做这个的时候我没开Grid Snap LOL
01:00:532 (1) - 这个slider的时间点真的感觉很奇怪..不过我试了一下1/4好像找不到特别合适的点._.
Fixed
据说有对diff的start point是否一致很看重的MAT/BAT。如果是这样的话建议NORMAL和HARD都改到和这个diff一样的开始点
我把开头一段给去掉了
00:45:532 (2) - 缩短一半吧...这里前后都很跟vocal就这里不怎么合感觉很奇怪
Fixed
00:58:591 (4) - 这个音量有点重了
Fixed
01:12:532 (1) - ^
Fixed
07,679 move closer?Thank you for help
This part were deleted-0-
24,709 move to note 5's position
It's fine now
32,473 note 1 and note 2 exchange position
It's fine now I think, If anyone points this out again, I will fix this
35,826 change to note style
Fixed
58,591 move further?
It's fine now
103,709 add note same as position of note 2
It's fine now I think, If anyone points this out again, I will fix this
110,591 move further？
It's fine now
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Hi!
Mod requested by tutuhaha
都是意見而已,不同意的話可無視之.
[General]
[Weiren's Ass]
Mod requested by tutuhaha
都是意見而已,不同意的話可無視之.
[General]
- 我建議把一開始的部分都map掉..timing我測了,80%準.如果改的話要記得re-snap note和綠線阿,先看mod
BPM//Offset:
83.97//5203
170//10939
- 00:12:356 (2) - 無論在聽配樂,vocal,在各方面都顯示了這個slider應該在1/2後結束!如果是因為要對稱才做成這樣我覺得不太值w
- 00:19:591 (x) - 其實Hard的想法很好,在00:19:767 - barek才開始..
- 00:37:061 (3) - 我在想在這裏加new cobmo會不會比後面好 :/ 要不這裏加,00:38:473 (1) - 這裏也加把 xD
- 00:42:003 (1) - 說真的,這個slider略醜..
- 00:47:650 ~ 00:52:591 (x) - 可以嘗試在這部分加一點whistle,感覺現在的hitsound比較單調 :/
- 01:10:944 (x) - 這個加和1/2 slider和一個reverse?配合音樂
- 01:18:709 (1,2,3,4) - 麻,這種排版其實比其他的pattern間距是會比較大的,建議換個pattern,而且這種pattern可能會誤導新手..(因為你沒有E,所以要在這個難度考慮新手的能力)
- 我不知道身麼原因要在Hard後面加個"-" 請rename to "tutuhaha's Hard"而且貌似現在也不允許加+/-了
- 00:43:856 (3) - 為甚麼不在這裏做個3/4節奏?其實我覺得vocal有點off..你自己決定= =
- 00:48:709 (2) - 如果把這個note推前1/2會舒服多,00:48:709 - 畢竟這裏沒vocal,估聲也不是太突出,如果跟vocal的話效果會突出很多.
- 00:58:414 (5) - 突然跑出個soft-clap還要調低音量到40%於是違和感滿載,要不就+音量,要不就remove掉,我倒是覺得remove比較好
- 01:04:591 (1,2) - 這個combo長度比其他的都短:/ 為了配合overall,請在01:05:650 (1) - remove new combo!
- 01:18:532 (1) - 這個poistion不建議,雖然不是unrankable,但感覺還是怪怪的..
- 01:26:297 (6,7) - 感覺這裏還是跟鼓聲比較好,我的意思是(6)-換成note!然後01:26:650 - 這裏加note!
[Weiren's Ass]
- 阿,哲♂學阿..
- 00:16:944 (4) - 感覺可以和(1)- 再拉開一點,感覺上好看一點..
- 00:18:003 (x) - 這個位置不建議漏音,因為你之前跳得很爽,現在突然來個停頓,於是詭異感滿載= =
- 00:30:532 (1) - 考慮這裏加個clap?這樣會比較好聽,個人感覺.
- 00:39:003 (x) - 加個note把,還有跳
把note放到中心(x:0,y:0),這個中距離跳很好玩w - 00:43:238 (x) - 這裏不應該是個spinner阿 D: 換成note/slider把..
- 00:52:238 (7) - 加New combo阿..和其他combo長度略略統一!這是nazi而已
- 01:11:650 (1,2,3,4) - 這個跳可以放大一點,因為是斷音,所以跳大一點無所謂.
[General]
就像之前说过的，我觉得如果没有一个备用音效包（或是干脆把现在的Sounds文件夹备用了），恐怕没人敢挑战这个下限。
[Normal]
hitsounds太单薄了，多加一些吧这样不太过的去。
HP/OD/AR三项都可以+1，作为这个note密度我觉得3.00这种难度正好（AR3略低）
00:25:061 (1) - 这个无论弧度长度都有限根本盖不好2，我建议换成一个左边过来的直线还顺眼一点
01:13:061 (1,2,1,2) - 有点丑了啊这。
[tutuhaha's Hard-]
Hard就Hard，还减啥。
AR+1/+2，Hard只AR5的现在见不到。OD+1
如果可以的话，希望你把间距调大一点重摆一下。现在的间距是两个1/2 note间正好叠上那么一点点，真心不好看。只摆不重排节奏应该花不了太长时间。
00:15:885 (5,1,2) - 这就属于特别难看的典型，后面的234则是一个可以肉眼看到的间距不等。
01:05:650 (1,2,3,4) - 建议改note。因为你这种间距这个实在不好看的出来，前面两个1/2后，用折返slider过掉那两个3/4，再回到1/2节奏。
01:10:238 (1) - 1分钟还复制粘贴，希望自重。
01:26:297 (6) - 折返那里的那一拍不该有。
整体来看，横平竖直的slider多的莫名其妙而且比较糟糕的是他们很多在连用，在美观上太扣分。
[Weiren's Ass]
AR+1建议，其他no comments.
就像之前说过的，我觉得如果没有一个备用音效包（或是干脆把现在的Sounds文件夹备用了），恐怕没人敢挑战这个下限。
[Normal]
hitsounds太单薄了，多加一些吧这样不太过的去。
HP/OD/AR三项都可以+1，作为这个note密度我觉得3.00这种难度正好（AR3略低）
00:25:061 (1) - 这个无论弧度长度都有限根本盖不好2，我建议换成一个左边过来的直线还顺眼一点
01:13:061 (1,2,1,2) - 有点丑了啊这。
[tutuhaha's Hard-]
Hard就Hard，还减啥。
AR+1/+2，Hard只AR5的现在见不到。OD+1
如果可以的话，希望你把间距调大一点重摆一下。现在的间距是两个1/2 note间正好叠上那么一点点，真心不好看。只摆不重排节奏应该花不了太长时间。
00:15:885 (5,1,2) - 这就属于特别难看的典型，后面的234则是一个可以肉眼看到的间距不等。
01:05:650 (1,2,3,4) - 建议改note。因为你这种间距这个实在不好看的出来，前面两个1/2后，用折返slider过掉那两个3/4，再回到1/2节奏。
01:10:238 (1) - 1分钟还复制粘贴，希望自重。
01:26:297 (6) - 折返那里的那一拍不该有。
整体来看，横平竖直的slider多的莫名其妙而且比较糟糕的是他们很多在连用，在美观上太扣分。
[Weiren's Ass]
AR+1建议，其他no comments.
sorry for my lazy mod
just suggestions
[Normal]
感觉可以ar-1诶..
00:25:767(2)-节奏感觉好奇怪啊..虽然silder拉的很好看啦..
音效太空了..适当加点soft-whis吧
[tutuhaha's Hard-]
音效插绿线的时候 如果是单note 不要把绿线插在白线上 否则有人提前按了就听不到了 所以适当提前一点
00:17:650(4,5)-是不是要和(2)对齐？one grid left 然后(8,9)右移一格-..-
01:05:650(1)-我怎么觉得向上弯比较好看..和(2)对称？-.-
[Weiren's Ass]
00:45:532(2)-add clap?
00:46:414(2,3)-我怎么觉得位置换下比较顺手-_-
00:48:532(4)-add clap?
00:59:650(3)-^
01:03:885(1)-add finish?
01:09:532(4)-add clap
..不太懂音效 给点小小的意见-_-表fuck偶
star
just suggestions
[Normal]
感觉可以ar-1诶..
00:25:767(2)-节奏感觉好奇怪啊..虽然silder拉的很好看啦..
音效太空了..适当加点soft-whis吧
[tutuhaha's Hard-]
音效插绿线的时候 如果是单note 不要把绿线插在白线上 否则有人提前按了就听不到了 所以适当提前一点
00:17:650(4,5)-是不是要和(2)对齐？one grid left 然后(8,9)右移一格-..-
01:05:650(1)-我怎么觉得向上弯比较好看..和(2)对称？-.-
[Weiren's Ass]
00:45:532(2)-add clap?
00:46:414(2,3)-我怎么觉得位置换下比较顺手-_-
00:48:532(4)-add clap?
00:59:650(3)-^
01:03:885(1)-add finish?
01:09:532(4)-add clap
..不太懂音效 给点小小的意见-_-表fuck偶
star
kanpakyin 的改完了，Rin大的可能要花点时间，不自重的地方我会花点时间搞一下，间距嘞因为一调slider就错位了所以也要搞一下，不横平竖直的话我认为我可能会搞得更乱所以也要花一点时间搞一下。最后BakaHuang！假如改完后我还看的出来你在说什么的话我一定改的！
最后的最后！！猥人你丫的抽风么？！！
裤兜不要乱加啊！
最后的最后！！猥人你丫的抽风么？！！
裤兜不要乱加啊！假如改完后我还看的出来你在说什么的话我一定改的！
什么 你看不懂我说的中文？
什么 你看不懂我说的中文？
我比较怕改完后我不知道你说的哪里了。。。。。BakaHuang wrote:
假如改完后我还看的出来你在说什么的话我一定改的！
什么 你看不懂我说的中文？
EnakoRin
KPY:
[General]NTR：
我建議把一開始的部分都map掉..timing我測了,80%準.如果改的話要記得re-snap note和綠線阿,先看mod
BPM//Offset:
83.97//5203
170//10939
开始那一段我开始做了= =不过没上传
offset fixed
[Normal]
00:12:356 (2) - 無論在聽配樂,vocal,在各方面都顯示了這個slider應該在1/2後結束!如果是因為要對稱才做成這樣我覺得不太值w
00:19:591 (x) - 其實Hard的想法很好,在00:19:767 - barek才開始..
00:37:061 (3) - 我在想在這裏加new cobmo會不會比後面好 :/ 要不這裏加,00:38:473 (1) - 這裏也加把 xD
00:42:003 (1) - 說真的,這個slider略醜..
00:47:650 ~ 00:52:591 (x) - 可以嘗試在這部分加一點whistle,感覺現在的hitsound比較單調 :/
01:10:944 (x) - 這個加和1/2 slider和一個reverse?配合音樂
01:18:709 (1,2,3,4) - 麻,這種排版其實比其他的pattern間距是會比較大的,建議換個pattern,而且這種pattern可能會誤導新手..(因為你沒有E,所以要在這個難度考慮新手的能力)
All fixed
[Weiren's Ass]
阿,哲♂學阿..
看见Weiren's Ass就知道的♂
00:16:944 (4) - 感覺可以和(1)- 再拉開一點,感覺上好看一點..
00:18:003 (x) - 這個位置不建議漏音,因為你之前跳得很爽,現在突然來個停頓,於是詭異感滿載= =
00:30:532 (1) - 考慮這裏加個clap?這樣會比較好聽,個人感覺.
00:39:003 (x) - 加個note把,還有跳
00:43:238 (x) - 這裏不應該是個spinner阿 D: 換成note/slider把..
00:52:238 (7) - 加New combo阿..和其他combo長度略略統一!這是nazi而已
01:11:650 (1,2,3,4) - 這個跳可以放大一點,因為是斷音,所以跳大一點無所謂.
All fixed
[General]BH:
就像之前说过的，我觉得如果没有一个备用音效包（或是干脆把现在的Sounds文件夹备用了），恐怕没人敢挑战这个下限。
正在做音效
[Normal]
hitsounds太单薄了，多加一些吧这样不太过的去。
HP/OD/AR三项都可以+1，作为这个note密度我觉得3.00这种难度正好（AR3略低）
00:25:061 (1) - 这个无论弧度长度都有限根本盖不好2，我建议换成一个左边过来的直线还顺眼一点
01:13:061 (1,2,1,2) - 有点丑了啊这。
All fixed
[Weiren's Ass]
AR+1建议，其他no comments.
Fixed
[Normal]Thanks
感觉可以ar-1诶..
之前NTR叫我+1来着- -如果还有人觉得快了我就-
00:25:767(2)-节奏感觉好奇怪啊..虽然silder拉的很好看啦..
Fixed
音效太空了..适当加点soft-whis吧
Fixed
[Weiren's Ass]
00:45:532(2)-add clap?
试过了，加了不好听- -
00:46:414(2,3)-我怎么觉得位置换下比较顺手-_-
Fixed
00:48:532(4)-add clap?
Fixed
00:59:650(3)-^
我加到前面的2上了，效果要好一点
01:03:885(1)-add finish?
Fixed
01:09:532(4)-add clap
试过了，加了不好听- -
还有你想表达啥- -tutuhaha wrote:
最后的最后！！猥人你丫的抽风么？！！
先搞成这样了，明天后天坐飞机先这样
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Hello.
Folder is clean.
I liked that fail-background.png by the way.
I browsed the song in the web,and I think the correct title is Kimi + Nazo + Watashi de JUMP!!
If I'm mistaken,prove it with some link,please.
Also,there should be a space between the last letter and (TV Size).
So it should look like a Kimi + Nazo + Watashi de JUMP!! (TV Size) then.
Check out Tags field in [Normal].Why there're an extra space between kosug and Aniki's? Fix it.
[Normal]
Maybe lower AR by 1 as it supposed to be the easiest difficulty in this mapset?
00:12:351 (2) - I'd add a repeat to this slider,cause I feel like a note is missing at 00:13:409.
00:25:762 (2) - Shorten this slider to 00:26:291 and add a circle to 00:26:644.
00:36:351 (2) - What's with this slider shape? .__.
00:48:880 - Finish is missing.
01:00:174 - ^
[Weiren's Ass]
00:17:292 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing is so odd..make something like this:
00:44:468 (2) - Oh come on,it's not even readable..reduce this jump please.
Don't have much to say here..
But I'd suggest to add some warning about this difficulty to the map's description. Hitsounds might be annoying to others.
[tutuhaha's Hard] doesn't have anything major to point out,so good job.
Folder is clean.
I liked that fail-background.png by the way.
I browsed the song in the web,and I think the correct title is Kimi + Nazo + Watashi de JUMP!!
If I'm mistaken,prove it with some link,please.
Also,there should be a space between the last letter and (TV Size).
So it should look like a Kimi + Nazo + Watashi de JUMP!! (TV Size) then.
Check out Tags field in [Normal].Why there're an extra space between kosug and Aniki's? Fix it.
[Normal]
Maybe lower AR by 1 as it supposed to be the easiest difficulty in this mapset?
00:12:351 (2) - I'd add a repeat to this slider,cause I feel like a note is missing at 00:13:409.
00:25:762 (2) - Shorten this slider to 00:26:291 and add a circle to 00:26:644.
00:36:351 (2) - What's with this slider shape? .__.
00:48:880 - Finish is missing.
01:00:174 - ^
[Weiren's Ass]
00:17:292 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing is so odd..make something like this:
00:44:468 (2) - Oh come on,it's not even readable..reduce this jump please.
Don't have much to say here..
But I'd suggest to add some warning about this difficulty to the map's description. Hitsounds might be annoying to others.
[tutuhaha's Hard] doesn't have anything major to point out,so good job.
Due to stars being useless, they are currently being phased on.Good luck to you.
EnakoRin
IceBeam wrote:
Hello.
Folder is clean.
I liked that fail-background.png by the way.
I browsed the song in the web,and I think the correct title is Kimi + Nazo + Watashi de JUMP!!
If I'm mistaken,prove it with some link,please.
Also,there should be a space between the last letter and (TV Size).
So it should look like a Kimi + Nazo + Watashi de JUMP!! (TV Size) then.
OK it fixed
Check out Tags field in [Normal].Why there're an extra space between kosug and Aniki's? Fix it.
Fixed
[Normal]
Maybe lower AR by 1 as it supposed to be the easiest difficulty in this mapset?
Fixed
00:12:351 (2) - I'd add a repeat to this slider,cause I feel like a note is missing at 00:13:409.
Fixed
00:25:762 (2) - Shorten this slider to 00:26:291 and add a circle to 00:26:644.
Fixed
00:36:351 (2) - What's with this slider shape? .__.
I've changed the shape of this slider
00:48:880 - Finish is missing.
I prefer the normal-hitnormal, course finish is kinda loud
01:00:174 - ^
I prefer the normal-hitnormal, course finish is kinda loud
[Weiren's Ass]
00:17:292 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing is so odd..make something like this:
Fixed
00:44:468 (2) - Oh come on,it's not even readable..reduce this jump please.
Fixed
Don't have much to say here..
But I'd suggest to add some warning about this difficulty to the map's description. Hitsounds might be annoying to others.
Added
Good luck to you.
Thank you
EnakoRin