I know it is your first map and for this it really is not bad at all. And I really love the music.
There is a lot of stuff in those boxes. plz don't feel bad because of all these. (especially the second)
fineGood map just add kans(blue notes)
00:02:508 - add a kan
00:06:137 - add something here
00:08:537 (7,8,9) - make it big and the middle one a kan
00:09:604 (9,10,11) - - a bit undermapped between those
00:14:671 (12,13,14) - - here as well
00:21:871 (16) - should be a kan
00:25:737 - please map something here these are very strong sounds
00:26:671 (19,20,21) - also undermapped
00:35:071 (23) - make it big and add a slider after it
00:36:537 (1) - add a slider after
00:38:671 (1) - same
00:40:804 (2) - same (just copy the part form your other difficulty here
01:07:594 - here are strong sounds again pls map something there
I can see you tried making a very easy map but please just don't undermap to much.
not badThis may seem like a lot of problems, but it is actually a really good map. see these more as tips on how to improve instead of me pointin out mistakes.
You should really add in kans(blue notes) to your map
00:06:137 (9) - make it a kan
00:08:404 (14,15,16) - make em Big Circles and make 15 a kan
00:17:471 (31) - maybe make it big as well
00:25:471 (46,47,48) - same and make 47 a kan
00:40:404 - add a kan here
00:43:071 - ad a kan here
00:44:671 - sound beginns here
00:45:604 - sound beginns here
00:50:937 (21,22) - should be kans
00:50:937 (21,22) - sound starts here
00:50:937 (21,22) - same
00:57:468 - add another note here
00:59:471 (3,4) - make them kans
01:03:871 - add something here
01:04:937 - same
01:06:004 - same
01:08:004 (15,16) - make them kans
01:09:204 (19,20,21,22,23,24) - maybe add some notes before the sliders
01:16:671 (27,28) - same
01:17:871 (31,32,33,34,35,36) - maybe add some notes before the sliders
01:24:937 (39,40) - make them kans
01:28:271 (2) - make it a kan
01:29:871 (6) - make it a big circle
01:34:804 (17) - make it a spinner
01:36:937 (20) - same
01:38:137 (22) - make it a kan
01:39:204 (25) - make it a spinner
01:43:604 (34) - same
01:46:271 (38,39,40,41,42,43) - put some kan in this pattern
01:46:271 (38,39,40,41,42,43) - make some kans
02:04:804 (14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - same
02:08:937 (27) - make it a slider
02:11:071 (29) - same
02:11:071 (29) - add one or two notes here or place sliders.
02:12:137 (30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37) - same
02:17:604 (41) - make it a slider
02:19:737 (44,45,46,47,48,49) - sliders
02:32:137 (16,17) - big kans
02:33:204 (19,20) - same
02:34:271 (22,23) - same