frost-b-spec wrote:

hi XD

[Insane]
1.28.801(1) - more long end:1.35.218 Fixed!

[Normal]
0.00.108(x) - try this Fixed!

0.40.123(3) - spacing new combo add!
0.41.444(x) - try this Fixed!

0.51.070(4) - more long end:0.51.448 Fixed!

[Easy]
0.15.963(x) - add note Fixed!
0.24.456(1~3) - no good idea...change or delete. delete...
0.55.034(1) - more long start:0.54.845
this change
1.01.451(1,2) - delete and (2) slider start no. 1:02:018 - のClapがならないからです。
あと、tickを２にすればいいと思ったんですが　
それだとNomalよりもEasyのほうがコンボ数が多くなってしまいますので、これにしました。
1.14.664(2) - more long start:1.14.475　Fixed!
+star

Star and Mod Thank you~

Good map! Some suggestions...

[General]
- Disable letterbox during breaks (Song Setup > Storyboard > Misc toggles). Always disable when you have a video. Do this for all difficulties.
- Check AImod (ctrl+shift+a) and make sure all errors are intentional. There is a lot of spacing errors in Insane, make sure that they are either jumps or note that you moved so that it look better.

Almost perfect map, need some more modding from more experience modders and this should be ready for ranking. Starred!

merchat7 wrote:

Good map! Some suggestions...

[General]
- Disable letterbox during breaks (Song Setup > Storyboard > Misc toggles). Always disable when you have a video. Do this for all difficulties.
- Check AImod (ctrl+shift+a) and make sure all errors are intentional. There is a lot of spacing errors in Insane, make sure that they are either jumps or note that you moved so that it look better.

Almost perfect map, need some more modding from more experience modders and this should be ready for ranking. Starred!

Star and Mod Thank you~

Fixed!

Timing
Only one red section and imo :
BPM 159
Offset 126
fix green timing points after that too (especially kiai)

General
waw, fine

Insane
00:21:446 (5) - clap to the end?
00:48:805 (1) - whistle to the start
00:49:182 (2) - ^
00:49:559 (1) - add finish to the start

Hard
00:23:701 (1) - add finish
00:37:480 (1) - add finish to the start
00:48:616 (3,1) - i suggest to make that :
00:49:560 (1) - add finish
00:53:335 (1,2,3,4,5) - make it better without distance snap?
01:04:471 (1) - remove nc

Normal
AR +1, OD -1
00:45:031 (3,4,5) - imo, will be better (or make slider instead of 2 notes) :
01:01:824 (1,2,3) - imo, will be better :

Easy
00:23:135 (2) - add reverse?
00:48:805 (6,1) - why you changed clap rhythm here? Middle + high ticks sounds good in this diff
01:01:829 (2) - imo, make slider (2) from 01:01:829 till 01:02:018 (short 1/2 slider)

Very good, star'd~

Aleks719 wrote:

Timing
Only one red section and imo :
BPM 159 Fixed!
Offset 126 Fixed!
fix green timing points after that too (especially kiai) Fixed!

General
waw, fine

Insane
00:21:446 (5) - clap to the end? Fixed!
00:48:805 (1) - whistle to the start Fixed!
00:49:182 (2) - ^ Fixed!
00:49:559 (1) - add finish to the start Fixed!

Hard
00:23:701 (1) - add finish Fixed!t
00:37:480 (1) - add finish to the start Fixed!
00:48:616 (3,1) - i suggest to make that : Good idea! Fixed!

(3,4) - whistles

00:49:560 (1) - add finish Fixed!
00:53:335 (1,2,3,4,5) - make it better without distance snap?

figure

This was changed to

SPOILER

01:04:471 (1) - remove nc Fixed!

Normal
AR +1, OD -1 Fixed!
00:45:031 (3,4,5) - imo, will be better (or make slider instead of 2 notes) :

timeline

This was changed to

SPOILER

01:01:824 (1,2,3) - imo, will be better :

timeline

This was changed to

SPOILER

Easy
00:23:135 (2) - add reverse? Fixed!
00:48:805 (6,1) - why you changed clap rhythm here? Middle + high ticks sounds good in this diff sorry, it's my mistake. Fixed!
01:01:829 (2) - imo, make slider (2) from 01:01:829 till 01:02:018 (short 1/2 slider) Fixed!

Very good, star'd~

Star and Mod Thank you~

star~

Remon_Coppola wrote:

star~

Star Thank you~

hmm..

interested map^^

star



--------my pending map---------


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CMP wrote:

hmm..

interested map^^

star



--------my pending map---------


http://osu.ppy.sh/s/31388

Thank you~

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Hihi~~
These are all suggestions :>

[General]
-I think Easy should be 2 stars or less.. and Normal should be 3 stars. But you don't really have to I guess.
Insane difficulty finishes at 01:35:220. The others are not.. all difficulties end at the same time?

[Easy]
00:10:314 (1) - extend to 00:13:710 and delete 00:13:710 - (1) and add finish to make it easier
00:16:352 (5) - New combo
00:23:144 (2) - mm... not a good idea in Easy. maybe make a slider from 00:23:144 to 00:23:710
00:26:541 (2,3) - this may be a bit confusing for beginners. maybe just make slider from 00:26:541 to 00:26:918. and then add circle at 00:27:295
00:28:427 (4) - New combo here, remove new combo here: 00:29:937 (1)
00:52:201 (5) - New combo
01:01:446 (1,2) - This is not good in Easy.. slider from 01:01:446 to 01:02:012
01:08:050 (5) - New combo, remove new combo: 01:08:427 (1)
01:16:352 (4) - New Combo

[Normal]
Imo 1.5 spacing is too big. maybe lower it to 1.2 at least or 1
00:06:541 (1) - Remove new combo
00:09:182 (5) - New combo
00:07:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - mm.. this may be a bit crazy. But it's perfectly ok if you don't change it
00:15:031 (1) - Remove new combo, new combo: 00:15:975 (2)
00:41:824 (2) - extend to 00:42:390? and delete 00:42:390 - (3)
00:45:975 (4) - delete and add circle at 00:46:163
00:46:541 (5) - New combo
00:51:069 (4) - New combo
01:01:824 (1) - :< too hard I think. just add a circle at 01:02:012 with clap
01:06:918 (6) - clap on the end

[Hard]
00:04:465 (4,1) - spacing?
00:05:975 (5,1) - ^ if it's intentional don't change it
00:08:993 (6) - New combo, 00:09:748 (1) - remove new combo
00:22:767 (2) - Don't stack this on 3, when was playing I thought 2 was a slider
00:30:880 (1) - remove new combo
00:31:824 (1) - ^
00:51:635 (5) - mmm maybe new combo? and 00:53:333 (1) remove new combo
00:54:842 (1) - remove new combo
01:04:088 (1) - ^
01:21:069 (5) - New combo and delete new combo 01:22:201 (1)

[Insane]
Very good !

I think Easy and Normal needs more work because they are both too difficult right now. Good map!
That's all ~~ ! I love 橋本 みゆき!
いい曲^^

hoLysoup wrote:

Hihi~~
These are all suggestions :>

[General]
-I think Easy should be 2 stars or less.. and Normal should be 3 stars.sorry.Leave this
But you don't really have to I guess.
Insane difficulty finishes at 01:35:220. The others are not.. all difficulties end at the same time? sorry.Leave this

[Easy]
00:10:314 (1) - extend to 00:13:710 and delete 00:13:710 - (1) and add finish to make it easier No Fixed
00:16:352 (5) - New combo Fixed!
00:23:144 (2) - mm... not a good idea in Easy. maybe make a slider from 00:23:144 to 00:23:710 Fixed!
00:26:541 (2,3) - this may be a bit confusing for beginners. maybe just make slider from 00:26:541 to 00:26:918. and then add circle at 00:27:295 Fixed!
00:28:427 (4) - New combo here, remove new combo here: 00:29:937 (1) Fixed!
00:52:201 (5) - New combo Fixed!
01:01:446 (1,2) - This is not good in Easy.. slider from 01:01:446 to 01:02:012 Fixed!
01:08:050 (5) - New combo, remove new combo: 01:08:427 (1) Fixed!
01:16:352 (4) - New Combo Fixed!

[Normal]
Imo 1.5 spacing is too big. maybe lower it to 1.2 at least or 1 Becomes difficult to see objects close together that the distance 1.20x
00:06:541 (1) - Remove new combo Fixed!
00:09:182 (5) - New combo Fo Fixed!
00:07:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - mm.. this may be a bit crazy. But it's perfectly ok if you don't change it No Change
00:15:031 (1) - Remove new combo, new combo: 00:15:975 (2) No Fixed
00:41:824 (2) - extend to 00:42:390? and delete 00:42:390 - (3) Fixed!
00:45:975 (4) - delete and add circle at 00:46:163 Fixed!
00:46:541 (5) - New combo Fixed!
00:51:069 (4) - New combo Fixed!
01:01:824 (1) - :< too hard I think. just add a circle at 01:02:012 with clap Fixed!
01:06:918 (6) - clap on the end Fixed!

[Hard]
00:04:465 (4,1) - spacing? Fixed!
00:05:975 (5,1) - ^ if it's intentional don't change it The spacing to 1.2x ><
00:08:993 (6) - New combo, 00:09:748 (1) - remove new combo Fixed!
00:22:767 (2) - Don't stack this on 3, when was playing I thought 2 was a slideroh..sorry.Fixed!
00:30:880 (1) - remove new combo Fixed!
00:31:824 (1) - ^ Fixed!
00:51:635 (5) - mmm maybe new combo? and 00:53:333 (1) remove new combo Fixed!
00:54:842 (1) - remove new combo Fixed!
01:04:088 (1) - ^ Fixed!
01:21:069 (5) - New combo and delete new combo 01:22:201 (1) Fixed!

[Insane]
Very good ! Thanks!

I think Easy and Normal needs more work because they are both too difficult right now. Good map!
That's all ~~ ! I love 橋本 みゆき! me too
いい曲^^

Mod and Star thank you~

[!] = You NEED to change.
[.] = If possible, change.
[?] = Suggestion/nazi.

[NC] = Add New Combo.
[RNC] = Remove New Combo.

You can ignore hitsound mod if you don't like it.

[Easy]
00:18:805 (4) - level3grid で 4grid上？ nazi
00:48:805 (6) - NC.
00:49:937 (1) - RNC.
00:51:069 (2) - NC.
00:52:201 (1) - RNC
00:53:333 (3) - NC.
00:54:842 (1) - RNC ?
00:58:239 (4) - NC.
00:58:616 (1) - RNC
00:59:748 (3) - NC.
01:00:503 (1) - RNC.
01:04:276 (3) - NC.
01:05:031 (1) - RNC.
01:06:918 (4) - NC.
01:08:050 (1) - RNC.
01:08:427 (2) - NC.

[Normal]
00:58:616 (1) - RNC.
00:59:182 (2) - NC ?
01:13:522 (3) - ^

[Hard]
00:31:258 (*) - Add Circle ?
01:00:503 (1) - RNC.
01:00:880 (2) - NC.
01:14:465 (*) - Add Circle.

[Insane]
00:02:578 (3,4,5) - (3) が (1) と被らないように配置してください。(3,4,5)は、きれいな円になるように配置してください。
00:37:484 (5) - NC.
00:38:050 (1) - RNC.
00:39:748 (5) - NC.
00:39:937 (1) - RNC.
00:55:975 (2) - スタックは曲と合ってないので変えた方がいいです。
00:56:729 (5) - ^
00:58:616 (7) - NC.
00:59:182 (1) - RNC.
01:03:899 (*) - Add circle.
01:28:616 (1) - このスピナーを少し先に移動して、ここにサークルを追加。

Apricot wrote:

[!] = You NEED to change.
[.] = If possible, change.
[?] = Suggestion/nazi.

[NC] = Add New Combo.
[RNC] = Remove New Combo.

You can ignore hitsound mod if you don't like it.

[Easy]
00:18:805 (4) - level3grid で 4grid上？ nazi 2grid 上に修正
00:48:805 (6) - NC.　fixed!
00:49:937 (1) - RNC. fixed!
00:51:069 (2) - NC. fixed!
00:52:201 (1) - RNC fixed!
00:53:333 (3) - NC. fixed!
00:54:842 (1) - RNC ? fixed!
00:58:239 (4) - NC. no fixed
00:58:616 (1) - RNC no fixed
00:59:748 (3) - NC. fixed!
01:00:503 (1) - RNC. fixed!
01:04:276 (3) - NC. fixed!
01:05:031 (1) - RNC. fixed!
01:06:918 (4) - NC. fixed!
01:08:050 (1) - RNC. fixed!
01:08:427 (2) - NC. fixed!

[Normal]
00:58:616 (1) - RNC. no fixed
00:59:182 (2) - NC ? no fixed
01:13:522 (3) - ^ fixed!

[Hard]
00:31:258 (*) - Add Circle ? no fixed
01:00:503 (1) - RNC. fixed!
01:00:880 (2) - NC. fixed!
01:14:465 (*) - Add Circle.

[Insane]
00:02:578 (3,4,5) - (3) が (1) と被らないように配置してください。(3,4,5)は、きれいな円になるように配置してください。きれいな円がなかなかできないのです＞＜　でも少し円らしくしました
00:37:484 (5) - NC. fixed!
00:38:050 (1) - RNC. fixed!
00:39:748 (5) - NC. no fixed
00:39:937 (1) - RNC. no fixed
00:55:975 (2) - スタックは曲と合ってないので変えた方がいいです。 fixed!
00:56:729 (5) - ^ fixed!
00:58:616 (7) - NC. fixed!
00:59:182 (1) - RNC. fixed!
01:03:899 (*) - Add circle. fixed!
01:28:616 (1) - このスピナーを少し先に移動して、ここにサークルを追加。 fixed!

Mod Thank you~

hello from #modreqs
all suggestions

Easy:
00:02:956 (3) - 1/2 shorter?
00:03:899 (4) - 1/2 back?
00:06:541 - add note?
00:06:918 - ^
00:14:088 - ^
00:14:842 - ^
00:15:597 - ^
00:32:201 - ^
00:32:956 - ^
00:38:427 (1,2,3) - move 1/2 back?
00:41:258 - 00:43:144 add spinner? (delete all notes at that part) if you do that, dont forget to move the next slider next to the spinner.
00:44:842 - make something like this? spinner from 00:46:352 - to 00:48:427
01:04:842 (2) - make 1/2 long slider?
01:05:409 - add note?
01:06:163 - add note?
01:09:182 (2) - make 1/2 longer?
01:18:993 - add a 1/1 long slider.
01:21:258 - how about something like that?

nice map...

Normal:
call that diff normal+?
00:03:710 - maybe its to hard, but it sounds good if you add a 1/2 slider
00:15:031 (1) - +1 repeat? if you do that, move the next note closer.
00:47:295 (2) - +1 repeat? if you do that, make ctrl+r at that slider.
00:48:239 (3) - and a 1/2 long repeat slider? you can make 2 repeats, but you have to delete the next note. Fix the spacing if you do that.
01:21:258 - make something like that?

nice map too...

Hard:
i didn't find anything, very nice map

Insane: same as hard...

easy has 2,78 diff stars, so its okay.
this map is woth a star

Andruchon wrote:

hello from #modreqs
all suggestions

Easy:
00:02:956 (3) - 1/2 shorter? no fixed
00:03:899 (4) - 1/2 back? no fixed
00:06:541 - add note? no fixed
00:06:918 - ^ no fixed
00:14:088 - ^ no fixed
00:14:842 - ^ no fixed
00:15:597 - ^ no fixed
00:32:201 - ^ no fixed
00:32:956 - ^ no fixed
00:38:427 (1,2,3) - move 1/2 back? no fixed
00:41:258 - 00:43:144 add spinner? (delete all notes at that part) if you do that, dont forget to move the next slider next to the spinner. fixed!
00:44:842 - make something like this?

SPOILER

spinner from 00:46:352 - to 00:48:427 fixed!
01:04:842 (2) - make 1/2 long slider? no fixed
01:05:409 - add note? no fixed
01:06:163 - add note? no fixed
01:09:182 (2) - make 1/2 longer? fixed!
01:18:993 - add a 1/1 long slider. fixed!
01:21:258 - how about something like that? fixed!

nice map...

Normal:
call that diff normal+? no fixed
00:03:710 - maybe its to hard, but it sounds good if you add a 1/2 slider no fixed
00:15:031 (1) - +1 repeat? if you do that, move the next note closer. no fixed
00:47:295 (2) - +1 repeat? if you do that, make ctrl+r at that slider. 00:48:239~00:48:427 - slider add
00:48:239 (3) - and a 1/2 long repeat slider? you can make 2 repeats, but you have to delete the next note. Fix the spacing if you do that. no fixed
01:21:258 - make something like that? no fixed

nice map too...

Hard:
i didn't find anything, very nice map

Insane: same as hard...

easy has 2,78 diff stars, so its okay.
this map is woth a star

Mod and Star thank you~

Easy
Beat snap divisor 1/2 please

Insane
00:30:880- whistle
00:31:446- ^
00:36:918- ^

HellDawn wrote:

Easy
Beat snap divisor 1/2 please what?

Insane
00:30:880- whistle have already added a whistle
00:31:446- ^ no fixed
00:36:918- ^ have already added a whistle

Mod thank you~

sorry. No kudos

Hi~

Easy
These spinners end to early for an Easy.
00:10:314 (1) - End this at 00:12:956
01:06:918 (5) - New combo and remove the new combo at 01:08:417

Normal
Fine~

Hard
00:55:597 (1) - Too near from the previous note

Insane
Fine but try not to make notes overlap eah other
____________________
That's all~

DragonSparta wrote:

Hi~

Easy
These spinners end to early for an Easy.
00:10:314 (1) - End this at 00:12:956 no fixed
01:06:918 (5) - New combo and remove the new combo at 01:08:417 fixed!

Normal
Fine~

Hard
00:55:597 (1) - Too near from the previous note fixed!

Insane
Fine but try not to make notes overlap eah other sorry.not understand...orz But I have slightly fixed!
____________________
That's all~

Mod thank you~

Easy
00:22:012 (6) - More symetric with (5)
00:23:899 (x) - Delete break
00:31:824 (1) - More symetric with (5)

Normal
00:15:031 (1) - Remove new combo
00:30:314 (1) - Remove new combo and add new combo here 00:31:446 and here 00:31:824
01:12:578 (1) - ^

Hard
OK

Insane
01:28:616 (1) - Delete whistle and add finish

Thats it

MoodyRPG wrote:

Easy
00:22:012 (6) - More symetric with (5) fixed!
00:23:899 (x) - Delete break fixed!
00:31:824 (1) - More symetric with (5) fixed!

Normal
00:15:031 (1) - Remove new combo fixed!
00:30:314 (1) - Remove new combo and add new combo here 00:31:446 and here 00:31:824 fixed!
01:12:578 (1) - ^ fixed!

Hard
OK

Insane
01:28:616 (1) - Delete whistle and add finish fixed!

Thats it

Mod Thank you~

[Easy]

1. I feel slidertick rate 2 is a bit high, how about use 1?
2. 00:03:522 (3) - Remove finish sounds better IMO
3. 00:49:559 (1) - How about add finish here?
4. 00:55:597 (1) - ^
5. 01:01:446 (1) - ^
6. 01:13:522 (1) - ^
7. 01:25:786 spinner - ^

[Normal]

1. 00:01:069 (2) - How about add a finish sound here?
2. 00:04:654 (3) - Remove finish seems better, it doesn't fit here IMO
3. 01:25:786 spinner - ^

[Hard]

1. 00:05:597 (4) - How about add a finish here?
2. 00:09:937 (5) - ^
3. 01:08:427 (1) - This 2 reverse slider confuse me while testing, maybe use 2 slider would better, just my own opinion
4. 01:25:786 spinner - ^

[Insane]

1. 00:09:937 (2) - Use finish instead of clap seems fit music more
2. 00:59:182 (2) - Add finish?
3. 01:03:899 (6) - remove clap sounds better IMO

いい譜面です
let me know when you have any reply

Breeze wrote:

[Easy]

1. I feel slidertick rate 2 is a bit high, how about use 1? ok. fixed! and Normal diff also 1
2. 00:03:522 (3) - Remove finish sounds better IMO fixed!
3. 00:49:559 (1) - How about add finish here? fixed!
4. 00:55:597 (1) - ^ fixed!
5. 01:01:446 (1) - ^ fixed!
6. 01:13:522 (1) - ^ fixed!
7. 01:25:786 spinner - ^ fixed!

[Normal]

1. 00:01:069 (2) - How about add a finish sound here? fixed!
2. 00:04:654 (3) - Remove finish seems better, it doesn't fit here IMO fixed!
3. 01:25:786 spinner - ^ fixed!

[Hard]

1. 00:05:597 (4) - How about add a finish here? fixed!
2. 00:09:937 (5) - ^ fixed!
3. 01:08:427 (1) - This 2 reverse slider confuse me while testing, maybe use 2 slider would better, just my own opinion ok. fixed!
4. 01:25:786 spinner - ^ fixed!

[Insane]

1. 00:09:937 (2) - Use finish instead of clap seems fit music more fixed!
2. 00:59:182 (2) - Add finish? fixed!
3. 01:03:899 (6) - remove clap sounds better IMO fixed!

いい譜面です ありがとう
let me know when you have any reply

Mod Thank you very much~

OK, then. Fixed something in Easy
Now it looked nice for a bubble

Breeze wrote:

OK, then. Fixed something in Easy
Now it looked nice for a bubble

bubble !!!!!!!!!!

Breeze sama~ Thank you~~<33333

おおバブルやー
いいないいな
おめでとーーー

Chocopikel wrote:

おおバブルやー
いいないいな
おめでとーーー

(　･´ｰ･｀)(　･´ｰ･｀)

ありがとうー

Something doesn't feel right with this map...... i'll check back on it shortly.

Hmmm.... the audio and video has a poor quality. I can hear digital noise from the audio and the video seems quite blurry. The rest of the map seems fine so far, but I can't rank it like this. Make sure to get that fixed, then recheck the offset with the new .mp3 and video. After that, let me know and i'll rebubble.

whymeman wrote:

Something doesn't feel right with this map...... i'll check back on it shortly.

Hmmm.... the audio and video has a poor quality. I can hear digital noise from the audio and the video seems quite blurry. The rest of the map seems fine so far, but I can't rank it like this. Make sure to get that fixed, then recheck the offset with the new .mp3 and video. After that, let me know and i'll rebubble.

oh... ok.

mp3 and video changed!!

I guess better now than before

Mod Thank you~

Alright, looking better than before. Just make sure in the future to double check the quality of the audio with decent headphones and the video with a decent monitor (and proper settings).

whymeman wrote:

Alright, looking better than before. Just make sure in the future to double check the quality of the audio with decent headphones and the video with a decent monitor (and proper settings).

ok.
Star and rebubble Thank you~

This has been in Pending for too long. Everything seems good to me!

Ranked~

Grats, look like I mod this a very long time ago, sorry for lame mod.

omedeto ~ gamu chan~

osuplayer111 wrote:

This has been in Pending for too long. Everything seems good to me!

Ranked~

Thank you~

osuplayer111 sama~


Everyone Thank you~

Rankおめでとう～

oo ranked~!! congrats!

ranked omedetou~!

ranked　おめでと～

おめでと～！！

1st rankedおめでとう

ランクドおめでとうなのです

Thanks everyone!!!

congratulations ~

Thank you~

I'm amused at how I realized that my name is somewhere in the metadata... lol...

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