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Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2017-04-06T07:32:10+00:00

General

Combo Color 1 is above a Luminosity value of 220. Under the new ranking criteria, we would consider this slightly too bright. Can you make the color slightly darker?
Doyak's

00:04:336 (3,4) - Try stacking 4 with 00:03:993 (1) - instead. I don't think the 4th circle really needs that much of a spacing increase compared to the other circles. (Same applies for 00:05:880 (4) - )
00:10:679 (6,1) - 00:13:422 (5,1) - Rhythms like this end up making it seem like you aren't following the violin since when the violin enters a held note, you instead map it to a circle followed by a click afterwards. The click causes the player to think you must be following another layer. however, you follow the violin rhythm relaly closely with 00:11:193 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - (every click/release there corresponds to the violin) so imo, either Ctrl+G these rhythms to show the violin being mapped to a held gameplay element (slider) or don't follow the violin as closely with your rhythm choice.
00:37:422 (1) - This slider could be set up better. I think you've overcurved the wave, resulting in a poor blanket with 00:37:936 (3,1) - .
00:52:507 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - The NC'ing on the stream looks kinda bad imo... Like, it breaks a consistent visual structure (the stream) into 3 arbitrary sections based on different colors. I guess it's a bit subjective, but i would recommend keeping it one combo for the stream.

huh, I never knew you mapped hexagon grids lol.

Insane

00:00:737 (1,1) - How about using some blanket with the wave slider instead? Looks more visually appealing than an overlap.

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00:12:222 (1,2) - This is still a pretty big jump even if it doesn't feel like one since you can release early. I don't particularly like how sharp the angle is though. An interesting alternative is 47||175 which will fit your structure and still make it look like a jump without feeling like a big jump haha.
00:32:793 (1,2,3,4,5) - I recommend using blankets here instead. if you notice, the linear sliders cause the slider-edges to be almost touching which looks kinda bad imo.

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Excellent

Hard

00:47:193 (3) - This doesn't look that nice imo. Try Ctrl+J'ing it and using that instead?

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Easy

00:41:708 (3,4,1) - I think 3 clicks here is kinda random, especially going into a quieter section of music. The density is very high here for an Easy. Actually, its more dense than the kiai, since you don't even use 3 circles in a row in Kiai. Just make 3+4 a slider to fix. (Also, this will reduce the star rating to below 1.50 which is always nice

).

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Call me back when you've sorted out a name for Doyak i guess. If you have metadata just link it to me, otherwise I can help provide metadata. Again, sorry for the delay ;c.

Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Affirmation 2017-04-07T11:35:04+00:00

Monstrata wrote:
General

Combo Color 1 is above a Luminosity value of 220. Under the new ranking criteria, we would consider this slightly too bright. Can you make the color slightly darker?
Insane

00:00:737 (1,1) - How about using some blanket with the wave slider instead? Looks more visually appealing than an overlap.
~
00:12:222 (1,2) - This is still a pretty big jump even if it doesn't feel like one since you can release early. I don't particularly like how sharp the angle is though. An interesting alternative is 47||175 which will fit your structure and still make it look like a jump without feeling like a big jump haha.Changed other way,
00:32:793 (1,2,3,4,5) - I recommend using blankets here instead. if you notice, the linear sliders cause the slider-edges to be almost touching which looks kinda bad imo.changed other way
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Excellent

Hard

00:47:193 (3) - This doesn't look that nice imo. Try Ctrl+J'ing it and using that instead? Just for symmetry
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Easy

00:41:708 (3,4,1) - I think 3 clicks here is kinda random, especially going into a quieter section of music. The density is very high here for an Easy. Actually, its more dense than the kiai, since you don't even use 3 circles in a row in Kiai. Just make 3+4 a slider to fix. (Also, this will reduce the star rating to below 1.50 which is always nice ).Umm,,, I don't know well, I think this part can be emphasized,

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Call me back when you've sorted out a name for Doyak i guess. If you have metadata just link it to me, otherwise I can help provide metadata. Again, sorry for the delay ;c.

Thanks for mod, I'' discuss about Doyak's diff with Doyak

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2017-04-08T15:51:53+00:00

Monstrata wrote:
Doyak's

00:04:336 (3,4) - Try stacking 4 with 00:03:993 (1) - instead. I don't think the 4th circle really needs that much of a spacing increase compared to the other circles. (Same applies for 00:05:880 (4) - ) There are not just same sounds. Only 00:03:993 - 00:04:508 - 00:05:365 - 00:05:879 - has a lower piano sound so imo they are really worth emphasizing.
00:10:679 (6,1) - 00:13:422 (5,1) - Rhythms like this end up making it seem like you aren't following the violin since when the violin enters a held note, you instead map it to a circle followed by a click afterwards. The click causes the player to think you must be following another layer. however, you follow the violin rhythm relaly closely with 00:11:193 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - (every click/release there corresponds to the violin) so imo, either Ctrl+G these rhythms to show the violin being mapped to a held gameplay element (slider) or don't follow the violin as closely with your rhythm choice. If I make myself strictly stick to the violin sounds like you said, I have like 3 options: https://doyak.s-ul.eu/hNWiDL6N https://doyak.s-ul.eu/rtOa0qDv https://doyak.s-ul.eu/XbjKjcKP . None of these really satisfies me because they're like focusing on 00:11:022 - this nothing-beat than 00:10:851 - this strong downbeat (and the 2nd one gives just too weak experience). I really tried my best to differentiate them from other violin sounds by stacking them which shows that I'm not terribly concerned about these sounds,
and you can see that only 00:10:851 (1) - is out of the fan pattern of 00:11:193 (2,3,4) - . Not only click/held actions can show what they're focusing on imo,
they can also be expressed by cursor movements and visual differentiation.
00:37:422 (1) - This slider could be set up better. I think you've overcurved the wave, resulting in a poor blanket with 00:37:936 (3,1) - . I guess I have no aesthetic sense lol, I'm fixing it second time.
00:52:507 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - The NC'ing on the stream looks kinda bad imo... Like, it breaks a consistent visual structure (the stream) into 3 arbitrary sections based on different colors. I guess it's a bit subjective, but i would recommend keeping it one combo for the stream. It really fit well the drum beats but oh well, fixed it.

huh, I never knew you mapped hexagon grids lol. Your older maps gave me some inspiration I think lol, I mean it's pretty good for keeping constant spacing concepts.

ye thanks for the mod!

Doyak's "Expert"

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Affirmation 2017-04-09T01:51:54+00:00

Kwan said meta looks correct.
updated Doyak's diff

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Monstrata 2017-04-15T09:01:34+00:00

Easy

00:41:708 (3,4) - I still highly recommend changing this to a 1/1 slider. Your reasoning isn't good imo. 00:42:051 (4) - Is a much weaker beat compared to the other two. It doesn't need to be clicked. Your reasoning also sets you up for counter arguments like for example. "Since you made this clickable, why aren't stuff like 01:00:908 (3,1) - cuz there's a strong sound on head + tail.... etc" Right now this section is much denser than your kiai, and this isn't good because the 3 circles are going into a calmer section of the song too.

I'm fine with everything else, but please consider this point again.

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Affirmation 2017-04-19T07:40:25+00:00

I changed it into 1sliser&1circle

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Monstrata 2017-04-21T05:30:23+00:00

Bubble~