Ito Kanako - Uncontrollable (TV Size) · forum

Shyotamaze

916 posts

Joined December 2014

Shyotamaze 2017-03-27T21:14:30+00:00

Hi, from #modreqs

Chaos

00:02:453 (1) - It should be a 1/2 slider + 1 circle instead so you follow the vocals better and you don't miss the important sound here 00:02:595 (well you'll still miss it a bit since it will be a sliderend but atleast you'll miss it less than before)
00:03:881 (2) - You could put a circle instead of the reverse arrow so it would be like that -> a 1/2 slider + 1 circle, same for 01:01:024 (2) -
00:04:453 (4,5) - 1/2 slider instead, same for 00:06:595 (3,4) - 01:01:595 (4,5) - 01:03:738 (3,4) - 01:06:310 (1,2) -
00:08:310 (1,2,3) - Tbh some SV changes would be pretty cool here to show the difference in intensity, same for 00:19:453 (6) -
00:15:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Your rhythm here emphasizes the claps with 1/2 sliders but you only did it here, why not do it like here 00:12:881 (1,2,3,4) - 00:10:595 (1,2,3,4) - for more consistency?
00:42:738 (2) - Why not a 1/1 slider just like 00:38:167 (2) - for more consistency?
00:43:595 (2) - I'm not a fan of the shape tbh :^)
01:06:738 (1,1) - Unnecessary NCs

Good luck!

Jabba

813 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-03-27T22:07:33+00:00

Shyotamaze wrote:
Hi, from #modreqs

Chaos
00:02:453 (1) - It should be a 1/2 slider + 1 circle instead so you follow the vocals better and you don't miss the important sound here 00:02:595 (well you'll still miss it a bit since it will be a sliderend but atleast you'll miss it less than before) ehh I still think a 1/1 slider fits in here but already like three people suggested this so I'll do it
00:03:881 (2) - You could put a circle instead of the reverse arrow so it would be like that -> a 1/2 slider + 1 circle, same for 01:01:024 (2) - I'd rather keep it like this for now, for me it feels like a repeat-slider would be better. I'll change it if there are more complaints about it!
00:04:453 (4,5) - 1/2 slider instead, same for 00:06:595 (3,4) - 01:01:595 (4,5) - 01:03:738 (3,4) - 01:06:310 (1,2) - I kept the star patterns at 00:04:453 (4,5) - and 01:01:595 (4,5) - for the second one it's actually justified to have (5) as a circle cause there's also a strong beat and I don't really want to change patterns for the same vocals. might change it later as well! as for 01:06:453 (2) - I don't really want to have a slider in the middle of a jump part so I'll keep it for now as well. fixed the rest
00:08:310 (1,2,3) - Tbh some SV changes would be pretty cool here to show the difference in intensity, same for 00:19:453 (6) - the first section is pretty much the same intensity I think, for the second one lowering the SV works well so I did it
00:15:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Your rhythm here emphasizes the claps with 1/2 sliders but you only did it here, why not do it like here 00:12:881 (1,2,3,4) - 00:10:595 (1,2,3,4) - for more consistency? did smth else, now there are two sections that use such patterning
00:42:738 (2) - Why not a 1/1 slider just like 00:38:167 (2) - for more consistency? true, fixed
00:43:595 (2) - I'm not a fan of the shape tbh :^) same tbh
01:06:738 (1,1) - Unnecessary NCs they're fine, if you listen to the music with no hitsounds you'll hear that 01:06:738 (1,2,3) - is actually a pattern in the background, same goes to 1-2-1-2
Good luck!

thanks!

CircleFairy

221 posts

Joined January 2015

CircleFairy 2017-03-31T00:46:49+00:00

Hey I came from #modreqs, m4m please :3 p/5911313#p5911313

Mod below

Normal
01:01:453 (3) - This slider could use more length to the white tick, I think it flows better for normal difficulty.
01:10:595 (3) - Same as the above.

Asuka_-'s Insane
00:45:024 (2) - Maybe some slider variance here?
00:45:881 (2) - And here too.
01:04:881 (4,5,6) - This part is quite an awkward angle.

eze's Extra
Couldn't spot a single thing with this difficulty.

Chaos
00:55:595 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't think these should be triples, stay consistent with the song and the jumps, they are hard enough already and the triples may be slightly overmapping.
01:30:167 (2) - I liked this note more towards the center.

Hope it helps :3

Jabba

813 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-04-01T16:19:34+00:00

CircleFairy wrote:
Hey I came from #modreqs, m4m please :3 p/5911313#p5911313

Mod below
Normal
01:01:453 (3) - This slider could use more length to the white tick, I think it flows better for normal difficulty.
01:10:595 (3) - Same as the above. both of those are following the vocals

Chaos
00:55:595 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't think these should be triples, stay consistent with the song and the jumps, they are hard enough already and the triples may be slightly overmapping. explained this already, I think it fits
01:30:167 (2) - I liked this note more towards the center. tweaked the pattern slightly in a different way

Hope it helps :3

thanks!

Zel

240 posts

Joined April 2014

Zel 2017-04-01T23:54:15+00:00

can I make a ~6-7* extra? :3

been mapping for 2 years so it shouldnt be complete trash

Jabba

813 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-04-02T00:04:58+00:00

Zel wrote:
can I make a ~6-7* extra? :3

been mapping for 2 years so it shouldnt be complete trash

ya sure! aim for smth like 6.5*

Reywateil

481 posts

Joined March 2017

Reywateil 2017-04-02T17:48:10+00:00

eze's Extra

00:06:595 (3) - Ctrl+G
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00:50:453 (6) - i think you should place it like that https://puu.sh/v6ZD9/f0ee3dc882.png , it would be more comfortable to play
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01:17:738 (1) - slow slider please instead of reverse.
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01:20:024 (1) - 2 notes
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Sorry for that short mod, that's all i noticed weird.

Hope i helped you! <3

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Asuka_- 2017-04-03T02:14:39+00:00

CircleFairy wrote:
Asuka_-'s Insane
00:45:024 (2) - Maybe some slider variance here? hmm...??
00:45:881 (2) - And here too. ...?
01:04:881 (4,5,6) - This part is quite an awkward angle. Ok. but keep for now.

Thanks!!!

Zel

240 posts

Joined April 2014

Zel 2017-04-03T03:46:25+00:00

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eeezzzeee

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eeezzzeee 2017-04-05T14:53:08+00:00

stickAcc wrote:
00:06:595 (3) - Ctrl+G what i have now seems better
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00:50:453 (6) - i think you should place it like that https://puu.sh/v6ZD9/f0ee3dc882.png , it would be more comfortable to play
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01:17:738 (1) - slow slider please instead of reverse.
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01:20:024 (1) - 2 notes youre right that they sound kinda off so i changed it both to 1/4

thanks!

update

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Zel

240 posts

Joined April 2014

Zel 2017-04-07T09:00:46+00:00

epic mod

Normal

00:10:310 (4) - align so it is straight with 00:09:881 (3) - would be a good idea imo
http://i.imgur.com/JDMxZGN.png

good map

Asuka's Insane

i would change ar to 9.1 or 9 for better spread +dt
00:10:167 (5) - a better angle might be like this http://i.imgur.com/sD6OSp0.png
00:20:024 (2,3) - the spacing here is pretty large in comparison to the rest of the section
00:36:881 (1,2,3) - i would have these spaced more since its more intense then the part previous, but i like what you did so up to you lol
00:37:453 (4,5,2) - blanket is off
00:42:024 (1,2) - could be blanketed kind of like http://i.imgur.com/glvv2AW.png
01:04:881 (4,5,6) - center 4 for a better aes
01:07:453 (5,6) - might work better as a stream
01:12:881 (3,5,1) - center 3 between 1 and 5

eze's Extra

00:02:595 (1) - the flow here is really poor for the intro imo, and not enough reason for emphasis
00:21:453 (4) - i dont think this should be completely straight, maybe just slightly off
00:22:167 (2) - ^

very nice map

Chaos

interesting about the small amount of sv changes
00:06:881 (4) - would be good snapped on the end of 00:07:738 (3) - imo
00:20:024 (2) - move 2 to X:498 Y:242 for nice aes;
- if you use the above mod, move 00:21:167 (2,3,4) - accordingly to apply same effect you were using
00:24:310 (1,2,3,4) - these feel weird at a perfect 45 degree angle idk
00:31:310 (2,4) - blanket is off
00:33:738 (3) - move to X:164 Y:182 for nicer aes with 00:33:595 (2,3,5) -
00:36:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i feel like these are way to extreme for what was just occurring in the section before, just ctrl+s some
00:45:738 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this would be better as a perfect star instead imo, use compose>create polygon circles
01:05:453 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - i think you should slightly tone down just these first two patterns to warm up to the across the screen

and finally an update to my gd :p

Zel's Extreme

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Jabba

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Jabba 2017-04-08T01:09:08+00:00

Zel wrote:

epic mod

Normal

00:10:310 (4) - align so it is straight with 00:09:881 (3) - would be a good idea imo yes
http://i.imgur.com/JDMxZGN.png

good map

Chaos

interesting about the small amount of sv changes
00:06:881 (4) - would be good snapped on the end of 00:07:738 (3) - imo that would require me to change the 2-3-4 pattern or else I'd get low DS and I don't really want to do either; it's fine I think
00:20:024 (2) - move 2 to X:498 Y:242 for nice aes;
- if you use the above mod, move 00:21:167 (2,3,4) - accordingly to apply same effect you were using eh this whole pattern started looking weird so I kinda reworked it and ctrl-h'd the rest of the section
00:24:310 (1,2,3,4) - these feel weird at a perfect 45 degree angle idk ^ changed it as well
00:31:310 (2,4) - blanket is off woah fixed
00:33:738 (3) - move to X:164 Y:182 for nicer aes with 00:33:595 (2,3,5) - sure
00:36:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i feel like these are way to extreme for what was just occurring in the section before, just ctrl+s some I'll keep those for now but I might change the two sliders before - the stream itself is fine
00:45:738 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this would be better as a perfect star instead imo, use compose>create polygon circles (6) is more emphasized than the rest cause it's both a clap and a new vocal line
01:05:453 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - i think you should slightly tone down just these first two patterns to warm up to the across the screen sure

and finally an update to my gd :p

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thanks!

Gordon123

1,038 posts

Joined June 2013

Gordon123 2017-04-08T15:39:42+00:00

Hello m4m
[general]

Delete in all diffs : widescreen support(only for SB)
what about tags : "chaos child" because u have it in Sourse,but idk what mean tags how : itou and head ?

[normal]

00:12:881 (1,3) - overlap, (1) overlaped (3)
00:26:024 (4) - maybe try tilt a little for a smooth transition to 00:26:310 (5) -
00:51:738 (1,3) - 00:52:310 (2,4) - overlap
00:58:595 (1,2) - ctrl+g,as it seems to me not convenient to start the kiai time with a circle//
01:07:024 (2) - why you use white point in slider if its not tilted
01:11:024 (4) - You can make it more interesting > https://puu.sh/vdwIE/f3684369c2.jpg
01:19:738 (4) - Tilt the slider or remove the white point in the slider

[Asuka_-'s Insane]

00:21:453 (3,1) - 00:23:024 (1) - 00:24:738 (3) - 00:27:024 (2) - 00:27:738 (1) - 00:28:881 (1,2) - 00:29:881 (1) - 00:30:595 (4) - etc, how in Normal diff : Tilt the slider or remove the white point in the slider
01:07:453 (5,6) - i think you have big distanse here(i mean in Insane), maybe (6) move closer to (5)
01:30:024 (1,2,3,4) - look interesting how : http://puu.sh/vm7Zt/956302a10c.jpg

[Chaos]

00:29:453 (4) - 00:32:167 (1) - Move them below because they overlaps with health bar//
01:06:310 (1,2) - As I think it is not realistic to play in this context with patterns(jumps)
01:06:595 (1) - delete NC

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Good Luck

Last edited by Gordon123 2017-04-16T15:52:29+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Jabba

813 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-04-08T17:27:06+00:00

Gordon123 wrote:
Hello m4m
[general]
Delete in all diffs : widescreen support(only for SB) whoops
what about tags : "chaos child" because u have it in Sourse,but idk what mean tags how : itou and head ? the source is stylized so I put the romanization in tags; chaos;head is a prequel to this anime, and ito kanako's name is sometimes written as 'itou kanako'
[normal]

00:12:881 (1,3) - overlap, (1) overlaped (3) eh I agree but fixing this would require me to change the whole pattern and that'd be quite troublesome, so I'll keep it for now - it's not really that noticeable
00:26:024 (4) - maybe try tilt a little for a smooth transition to 00:26:310 (5) - sure
00:51:738 (1,3) - 00:52:310 (2,4) - overlap intended, (1) disappears completely from the screen even before (4) starts appearing so it's fine
00:58:595 (1,2) - ctrl+g,as it seems to me not convenient to start the kiai time with a circle// follows the vocals
01:07:024 (2) - why you use white point in slider if its not tilted it actually was slightly curved but I changed it anyway
01:11:024 (4) - You can make it more interesting > https://puu.sh/vdwIE/f3684369c2.jpg ehh I prefer this way of mapping this, also I'd have to change 01:01:881 (4,5) - as well but there's no such possibility
01:19:738 (4) - Tilt the slider or remove the white point in the slider fixd

00:29:453 (4) - 00:32:167 (1) - Move them below because they overlaps with health bar// true, fixed
01:06:310 (1,2) - As I think it is not realistic to play in this context with patterns(jumps) I made those two the largest jumps cause even if (2) doesn't have a beat it still has like the most emphasized vocal line
01:06:595 (1) - delete NC if you listen closely to the beats you can hear that 01:06:738 (1,2,3) - is clearly a different pattern from 01:06:595 (1) - , which has a new vocal line and a clap so it can't be in the same pattern as 01:06:310 (1,2) - . that's why I NCd it
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Good Luck

thanks!

Stack

osu! Alumni

729 posts

Joined March 2015

Stack 2017-04-14T17:51:05+00:00

M4M from modreqs

Normal

00:25:310 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I would change some objects from this string of sliders to circles

looks like a solid diff

Asuka_-'s Insane

00:02:453 (4) - Just a suggestion but maybe this can be a 1/2 slider instead of a circle

00:05:310 (3) - The sound on this sliderend should be mapped as it is a very loud beat

00:06:595 (3) - Would also map this sliderend, the way it's mapped right now doesn't fit

00:08:453 (2,4,6) - There is no sound on these, maybe map 00:08:310 (1,3,5) - as sliders so there is no weird gap

00:10:595 (1) - The sliders starting here are a bit samey to play as there are alot of them so put down some circles

00:41:167 (1) - remove NC

00:42:595 (1) - ^, these aren't really needed

00:45:738 (1) - ^

01:21:453 (1,2) - This feels mapped way too slow

eze's Extra

00:03:310 (3,4,5) - idk about this triple, it doesn't feel needed as the sounds are extremely quiet but you map this sound often so I guess it's ok

00:06:881 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - These NC's look weird

00:19:024 (2,1) - This jump feels a bit on the small side

00:32:167 (1) - sliderend should be mapped, so how about 1/2 slider + circle instead of a 1/1

00:42:167 - I know you probably want to be consistent with 00:39:738 (4,1) - but there is a sound here so map 00:42:024 (4) - as a 1/2 slider

00:50:453 (6,2) - some overlap you may or may not want to fix

01:00:024 (2) - sound on sliderend is too strong to not be circle/sliderhead

01:09:167 (2) - ^

01:11:167 (1,2) - The vocals start on these sliderends so if u want to follow those which is suggested by 01:11:024 (5) - than move the sldiers 1/2 later

01:15:953 (3) - Not sure if u should map this

01:23:738 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - would just keep same spacing between 12 and not make it smaller but thats your choice

You can just mod 2 diffs on my map as I didn't really say anything about the normal
My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/584389

Gl with the map

Jabba

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Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-04-15T15:29:28+00:00

gottagof4ast wrote:
M4M from modreqs

Normal
00:25:310 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I would change some objects from this string of sliders to circles would bump the difficulty and that's bad; also the current patterning follows the vocals nicely so I don't want to remove any sliderends

looks like a solid diff

You can just mod 2 diffs on my map as I didn't really say anything about the normal
My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/584389

Gl with the map

thanks!

A1caida

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Joined May 2016

A1caida 2017-04-17T13:20:34+00:00

В исполнителе Itou должно быть
https://www.google.ru/search?num=40&newwindow=1&q=Itou+Kanako&spell=1&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwia3_ykyqvTAhUF3iwKHXGsBi4QBQgiKAA&biw=1280&bih=913

Jabba

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Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-04-17T16:46:55+00:00

-Alcaida wrote:
В исполнителе Itou должно быть
https://www.google.ru/search?num=40&newwindow=1&q=Itou+Kanako&spell=1&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwia3_ykyqvTAhUF3iwKHXGsBi4QBQgiKAA&biw=1280&bih=913

я базировался на официальной обложке сингла http://www.achanime.net/wp-content/uplo ... llable.jpg
плюс в видео 5pb тоже используется Ito https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0JIJzmBip-o
я энивэй еще буду уточнять мету (в основном из-за названия анимы) у японцев, но спасибо! без кд, надеюсь, не обидишься с:

Rotmas

Rotmas 2017-04-24T22:56:12+00:00

Крч я как про модер наляпую сюда все что мне непонравилось а дальше сам думай насколько это важные замечания)

chaos

00:19:453 (6) - яб тут прыгающий слайдер поставил с максимальной скоростью и велосити 5%
00:19:738 (1) - тут ты выделяешь 2 четких бита слайдером, не вижу на то причин т.к. нету вокал, фигач джамп.
00:20:024 (2,3,4) - А тут наоборот есть вокал, а у тебя 2 ноты
00:20:024 (2,3) - яб тут поставил слайдер
00:20:310 (4) - это закончил на красном тике на белом ноту и далее идёт вокал можно так и оставить всеж выделять такой бит началом слайдера более мение, но заканчивать слайдер на таком сильном бите такое себе
00:35:738 (1) - вот ещё аналогично, ты с этих битов обычно начинаешь, а этот слайдер на таком сильном бите заканчивается
Сократи слайдер до красного тика и начни с белого сильного бита новую комбу
00:52:310 (3) - нью комбо
00:53:453 (3) - ^
я тут послушал по 50% этот вот момент 00:55:881 (7,8,9) - думал там нет трипла т.к. его тупо не слышно, а нет он есть, а вот тут вот 00:55:595 (4,5,6) - его нету, так что овермап неиначе 00:55:667 (5) - от этого я бы избавился, а тем трем нотам понизил бы звук хитсаунда, ото чот их не слышно совсем
00:47:595 (3,4) - тут то же 2 лишние ноты, там канешн есть чот жужащее на фоне, раз уж овермапаешь тогда уж сделай стрим от этой ноты 00:47:453 (2) - до этой 00:47:738 (5) - на полный хронометраж сего жужания.
Окей не буду так докапываться до всех триплов которые я не понимаю откуда там взялись. (видать я ракал)
00:48:881 - новая мода на пропуск белых тиков) Хоть бы маленький слайдер поставил до синего тика, да и под вокал подошло бы, отож ваще голяк.
00:49:738 (3,4,5,6) - вот тож момент, тут ка бы стримчик, а не трипл... Хотя один хрен овермапом попахивает, ну да ладно, все теперь точно все триплы скипаю)
00:58:310 (1) - очень спорный момент, яб на красном тике закончил, да и смотрится как то, я канешн понимаю что эт такой момент который ты решил выделить по особому но у тебя это странно вышло. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7915259 вот так вроде прикольней смотрится
скорость слайдера 1.5

Extreme

Такс тут кстати нету таких моментов как в прошлой просмотренной дифе, так что вообще без претензий.
Она неплохо замапанна, так что просто дам пару советов.
01:11:738 (4,5,6,7) - вот как бэ паттерн, и между этими битами 01:11:738 (4,5) - большой спесинг, а между этими 01:11:880 (5,6) - нет, хотя сильный бит который стоило бы выделить более высоким спесингом именно этот 01:12:023 (6) - а в данном патерне почему то эта нота выделяется 01:11:880 (5) -
И определённо я думаю что с этой ноты 01:12:023 (6) - должна идти новая комба.
Ну вот ещё моментик 01:14:167 (4,5) - тут один спесинг в пол экрана 01:14:595 (1,2) - тут казалось бы на тот же самый момент в фул срин джамп.
А потом вот эти 2 сильных бита 01:14:881 (3,4) - опять всего в пол экрана хотя лучше бы именно этот джамп сделать в фул срин.
Ну тут все, в остальном очень приятная дифа.

Ой чот чую нехватит меня на ещё 2 дифы. Я пробежался быренько по Екстра дифе она мне больше всего понравилась, не знаю что сказать. Инсейн и нормал даж смотреть не буду.
Если мод покажется тебе бесполезным можешь оставить меня без кудосу.
Успехов.

Jabba

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Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-04-25T00:20:35+00:00

Rotmas wrote:
Крч я как про модер наляпую сюда все что мне непонравилось а дальше сам думай насколько это важные замечания)

chaos
00:19:453 (6) - яб тут прыгающий слайдер поставил с максимальной скоростью и велосити 5% слайдербрейков будет куча, я единственное что мб сделаю с этим слайдером это закручу его посильнее, т.к. там на бэке саунд подходящий
00:19:738 (1) - тут ты выделяешь 2 четких бита слайдером, не вижу на то причин т.к. нету вокал, фигач джамп. вся секция под вокалы замапана, поэтому тут слайдер оправдан, аналогично 00:22:024 (1) - . я зато заметил, что 00:26:310 (4) - немного выбивается из этого, заменил слайдером
00:20:024 (2,3,4) - А тут наоборот есть вокал, а у тебя 2 ноты под вокал мапается
00:20:024 (2,3) - яб тут поставил слайдер ^
00:20:310 (4) - это закончил на красном тике на белом ноту и далее идёт вокал можно так и оставить всеж выделять такой бит началом слайдера более мение, но заканчивать слайдер на таком сильном бите такое себе ^
00:35:738 (1) - вот ещё аналогично, ты с этих битов обычно начинаешь, а этот слайдер на таком сильном бите заканчивается
Сократи слайдер до красного тика и начни с белого сильного бита новую комбу ^ - хотя эта идея неплоха, но если я так сделаю, оно будет выбиваться из всего куплета, потому что там-то такие затяжные вокалы везде замапаны как 1/1, а здесь так бац и 1/2 поехали, а т.к. я ремапить куплет не хочу (ибо там классно под вокал все), то и эти оставлю
00:52:310 (3) - нью комбо понимаю, к чему клонишь, но я здесь не начинаю еще джампопаттерн как чуть позже, но зато здесь был косяк с хитсаундами - пофиксил
00:53:453 (3) - ^ ^
я тут послушал по 50% этот вот момент 00:55:881 (7,8,9) - думал там нет трипла т.к. его тупо не слышно, а нет он есть, а вот тут вот 00:55:595 (4,5,6) - его нету, так что овермап неиначе 00:55:667 (5) - от этого я бы избавился, а тем трем нотам понизил бы звук хитсаунда, ото чот их не слышно совсем про триплу уже не первый раз говорят, поменял ее; насчет хсов - там и так должно нормально читаться, как по мне
00:47:595 (3,4) - тут то же 2 лишние ноты, там канешн есть чот жужащее на фоне, раз уж овермапаешь тогда уж сделай стрим от этой ноты 00:47:453 (2) - до этой 00:47:738 (5) - на полный хронометраж сего жужания. я чет упорно там не слышу на 00:47:524 - , да, в этих триплах вторая нота довольно слабая, но а) она там есть и б) они хорошо подходят под триплы с более выраженной второй нотой 00:48:738 (3,4,5) - . да и вообще, в 2к17 удивляться относительно рандомным триплам лол
Окей не буду так докапываться до всех триплов которые я не понимаю откуда там взялись. (видать я ракал)
00:48:881 - новая мода на пропуск белых тиков) Хоть бы маленький слайдер поставил до синего тика, да и под вокал подошло бы, отож ваще голяк. а мне кстати нравится идея с кикслайдерами, я предыдущие триплы на них изменил (как раз там слабую вторую ноту пофиксить), а эти оставил + поменял паттерны немного в целом
00:49:738 (3,4,5,6) - вот тож момент, тут ка бы стримчик, а не трипл... Хотя один хрен овермапом попахивает, ну да ладно, все теперь точно все триплы скипаю) ^
00:58:310 (1) - очень спорный момент, яб на красном тике закончил, да и смотрится как то, я канешн понимаю что эт такой момент который ты решил выделить по особому но у тебя это странно вышло. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7915259 вот так вроде прикольней смотрится
скорость слайдера 1.5 выглядит неплохо, но скорость 1.5 для слайдера, на котором по сути нет никакой музыки и только вокал, будет немного оверкилл ящитаю. + там довольно затяжной вокал, поэтому 3/4

Ой чот чую нехватит меня на ещё 2 дифы. Я пробежался быренько по Екстра дифе она мне больше всего понравилась, не знаю что сказать. Инсейн и нормал даж смотреть не буду.
Если мод покажется тебе бесполезным можешь оставить меня без кудосу.
Успехов.

модить экстрим на русском было не лучшей идеей ибо там гдшер не русский лол
спасибо!

translation for Zel:
01:11:738 (4,5,6,7) - you have large spacing between 01:11:738 (4,5) - and small spacing between 01:11:880 (5,6) - , but (6) is stronger than (5)
01:12:023 (6) - NC
01:14:167 (4,5) - , 01:14:595 (1,2) - similar sounds in the background but the second jump is much bigger; after that there are two strong beats 01:14:881 (3,4) - which deserve a fullscreen jump more
nice diff

polka

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Joined March 2014

polka 2017-04-26T12:43:45+00:00

[

General:]

Girl's gotta unplug her nose when she sings.
Whoa hitsounds are loud on your diffs. I would copy what the first Insane did. Sounds nicer.

[

Normal:]

00:17:453 (1,2,3,4) - Pattern's kinda cool but it creates numerous issues. 00:18:024 (2) - This overlap is a little unsightly and 00:18:881 (4) - goes right into the hp bar.
00:55:167 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I think replacing all of these with a spinner would make the map more fun.
01:24:595 (3,1) - Give (1) its own space because this is kinda ugly.

[

First Insane:]

AR is way too high for insane.
01:24:881 (1,2,3,4) - I would remove hs. THere's nothing that calls for them and it would help exaggerate how quiet the song gets here.

[

Afteword:]

I can't mod (or play) any higher in sr. Good luck with thiiis.

Jabba

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Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-04-26T13:20:37+00:00

PolkaMocha wrote:

[General:]
Girl's gotta unplug her nose when she sings.
Whoa hitsounds are loud on your diffs. I would copy what the first Insane did. Sounds nicer. sheesh lowered the volume
[Normal:]
00:17:453 (1,2,3,4) - Pattern's kinda cool but it creates numerous issues. 00:18:024 (2) - This overlap is a little unsightly and 00:18:881 (4) - goes right into the hp bar. true, fixed both
00:55:167 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I think replacing all of these with a spinner would make the map more fun. idk this section is pretty much strong and I don't really want to put a spinner here which takes all emphasis away
01:24:595 (3,1) - Give (1) its own space because this is kinda ugly. swapped (2) and (3) instead so that (2) would completely disappear before (1) even starts appearing. also it flows even better I think

thanks!

Zel

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Joined April 2014

Zel 2017-04-26T23:44:36+00:00

MadHypnofrog wrote:
Rotmas wrote:
Крч я как про модер наляпую сюда все что мне непонравилось а дальше сам думай насколько это важные замечания)

chaos
00:19:453 (6) - яб тут прыгающий слайдер поставил с максимальной скоростью и велосити 5% слайдербрейков будет куча, я единственное что мб сделаю с этим слайдером это закручу его посильнее, т.к. там на бэке саунд подходящий
00:19:738 (1) - тут ты выделяешь 2 четких бита слайдером, не вижу на то причин т.к. нету вокал, фигач джамп. вся секция под вокалы замапана, поэтому тут слайдер оправдан, аналогично 00:22:024 (1) - . я зато заметил, что 00:26:310 (4) - немного выбивается из этого, заменил слайдером
00:20:024 (2,3,4) - А тут наоборот есть вокал, а у тебя 2 ноты под вокал мапается
00:20:024 (2,3) - яб тут поставил слайдер ^
00:20:310 (4) - это закончил на красном тике на белом ноту и далее идёт вокал можно так и оставить всеж выделять такой бит началом слайдера более мение, но заканчивать слайдер на таком сильном бите такое себе ^
00:35:738 (1) - вот ещё аналогично, ты с этих битов обычно начинаешь, а этот слайдер на таком сильном бите заканчивается
Сократи слайдер до красного тика и начни с белого сильного бита новую комбу ^ - хотя эта идея неплоха, но если я так сделаю, оно будет выбиваться из всего куплета, потому что там-то такие затяжные вокалы везде замапаны как 1/1, а здесь так бац и 1/2 поехали, а т.к. я ремапить куплет не хочу (ибо там классно под вокал все), то и эти оставлю
00:52:310 (3) - нью комбо понимаю, к чему клонишь, но я здесь не начинаю еще джампопаттерн как чуть позже, но зато здесь был косяк с хитсаундами - пофиксил
00:53:453 (3) - ^ ^
я тут послушал по 50% этот вот момент 00:55:881 (7,8,9) - думал там нет трипла т.к. его тупо не слышно, а нет он есть, а вот тут вот 00:55:595 (4,5,6) - его нету, так что овермап неиначе 00:55:667 (5) - от этого я бы избавился, а тем трем нотам понизил бы звук хитсаунда, ото чот их не слышно совсем про триплу уже не первый раз говорят, поменял ее; насчет хсов - там и так должно нормально читаться, как по мне
00:47:595 (3,4) - тут то же 2 лишние ноты, там канешн есть чот жужащее на фоне, раз уж овермапаешь тогда уж сделай стрим от этой ноты 00:47:453 (2) - до этой 00:47:738 (5) - на полный хронометраж сего жужания. я чет упорно там не слышу на 00:47:524 - , да, в этих триплах вторая нота довольно слабая, но а) она там есть и б) они хорошо подходят под триплы с более выраженной второй нотой 00:48:738 (3,4,5) - . да и вообще, в 2к17 удивляться относительно рандомным триплам лол
Окей не буду так докапываться до всех триплов которые я не понимаю откуда там взялись. (видать я ракал)
00:48:881 - новая мода на пропуск белых тиков) Хоть бы маленький слайдер поставил до синего тика, да и под вокал подошло бы, отож ваще голяк. а мне кстати нравится идея с кикслайдерами, я предыдущие триплы на них изменил (как раз там слабую вторую ноту пофиксить), а эти оставил + поменял паттерны немного в целом
00:49:738 (3,4,5,6) - вот тож момент, тут ка бы стримчик, а не трипл... Хотя один хрен овермапом попахивает, ну да ладно, все теперь точно все триплы скипаю) ^
00:58:310 (1) - очень спорный момент, яб на красном тике закончил, да и смотрится как то, я канешн понимаю что эт такой момент который ты решил выделить по особому но у тебя это странно вышло. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7915259 вот так вроде прикольней смотрится
скорость слайдера 1.5 выглядит неплохо, но скорость 1.5 для слайдера, на котором по сути нет никакой музыки и только вокал, будет немного оверкилл ящитаю. + там довольно затяжной вокал, поэтому 3/4

Ой чот чую нехватит меня на ещё 2 дифы. Я пробежался быренько по Екстра дифе она мне больше всего понравилась, не знаю что сказать. Инсейн и нормал даж смотреть не буду.
Если мод покажется тебе бесполезным можешь оставить меня без кудосу.
Успехов.
модить экстрим на русском было не лучшей идеей ибо там гдшер не русский лол
спасибо!

translation for Zel:
01:11:738 (4,5,6,7) - you have large spacing between 01:11:738 (4,5) - and small spacing between 01:11:880 (5,6) - , but (6) is stronger than (5) youre right, i was trying to emphasize with backwards rotation but the flow is still normal so not awkward enough, remapped pattern
01:12:023 (6) - NC disagree, no reason to and it would break the nc structure
01:14:167 (4,5) - , 01:14:595 (1,2) - similar sounds in the background but the second jump is much bigger; after that there are two strong beats 01:14:881 (3,4) - which deserve a fullscreen jump more youre right, ctrl+g on large pattern fixes it
nice diff thank you for mod! <3

Zel

240 posts

Joined April 2014

Zel 2017-04-26T23:47:29+00:00

update

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-YN

9 posts

Joined December 2013

-YN 2017-05-03T07:36:39+00:00

Random mod passing by.

Eze's Extra

00:08:310 (1,2,3) - Try to stay consistent with how the slider looks here. Same tone from vocalist.
01:04:167 (3,1) - have same spacing as 01:03:881 (1,2) - since it's same bass sound. Also feels different when playing.

Zel's Extreme

00:19:310 (1,2) - Since you mapped this on a distinct sound that differs from a lot of sounds throughout the song I would personally curve the sliders instead of tilting them.
00:19:453 (2) - set volume to 5% ?
00:29:453 (4,1) - idk if you mapped vocal here, but having 2 complete looking sliders on same kind of tone the vocalist hits is weird. Use same style of slider here?
01:11:738 (4,5,6,7,1,2) - You have put emphasis on white ticks with higher spacing, but 01:12:166 (7,1) - contradicts that with sudden lower spacing by a lot.

Good luck ranking this btw! <3

Zallies

499 posts

Joined April 2015

Zallies 2017-05-03T11:18:09+00:00

m4m

hey don't mind my modding skills, im really bad at it
ill do my best!

[general]

Remove Widescreen Support, it only uses when you have a Storyboard

[Chaos]

00:02:881 (3,4,5) - since i tried 3 to turn 20 degree, 4 and 3 arent the same shape
also I dislike this pattern, cuz the vocal change on 4
00:04:738 (1) - for my perspective, 00:04:881 - this part is stronger than you make the 1/2 on red tick
00:05:310 (3) - same as here, it make the music go awkward
00:07:167 - beat is really important than the vocal on this heavy drop incoming
00:07:453 (2,3,4) - not the same shape ehh
00:08:738 (2) - there so much space on the right side?
00:26:167 (3,4) - too awkward for me
00:26:595 (1,2) - i dont know if you're wanna blanket 1, or you just wanna do this pattern?
00:27:738 (1,2) - low ds. and the music start intense beat and you did a low ds on this
00:32:595 (2,3,4) - did you really shaped all?
00:33:595 (2,4) - why not try blanketing 2? looks like 4 is out of place
00:35:738 (1) - my suggestion: why not start 1 on the upper right pattern?
00:54:595 (1,2) - and these two starting a big jump, and not this 00:55:024 (2) - also this is not arrange on 00:54:453 (2) - 2 because 00:54:167 (2,2) - these two are looking good
00:56:024 (4,5) - overplaced xd
00:57:738 - my suggestion: make this 1/1? cuz the music fade its kinda cool though to add
00:59:453 (5,3,4,5) - looks good, but i not a fan doing this xd
i dont understand at this point xddddddddd, 01:01:881 (1,2) - are super close, and three started to make a BIGGG DS. please fix the patterns indeed
01:02:881 - i miss the clap hitsounds, its important
01:04:595 (2,3,4) - well 4 start curvy <3
01:06:310 (1,2) - too much </3 rather than 01:05:453 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this was so cool patternsss
01:11:595 (3,4) - ^
01:12:024 - i really love putting clap on this
01:14:595 (1,1) - remove nc
01:14:881 (2) - perfect v it?
01:22:024 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - OVERMAPPED

my personal look, i dont like the mapping much xd smh its like an overmapped.

[Zel's Extreme]

00:05:453 - i can't agree to ignore the beat hitsound
00:09:167 (3,1) - stack with them??
00:17:310 (6) - im thinking that this part should be clickable, and i dont think 1/2 red tick is my choice on making white tick on beat cuz it makes awkward
00:50:310 (5,6,1,2) - this is also a square jump, r u really using this jump instead of star etc?
01:04:167 (1,2,3) - not fan patterns xd
01:07:453 (3,1) - its kinda little bit over ds. unlike 00:58:310 (1,1) - this is good af
01:13:310 (1,2,3) - wat it made me confuse
01:14:453 (6,1) - overmap tbh
01:16:595 (5) - why not copy 3? its kinda cool imo
01:26:024 (1) - you have to do better than dat xd try make it good

[eze's Extra]

00:17:453 (1,2,3,1,2) - you did it like falling pattern, why not doing the same with 00:18:881 (1,2) - ?
00:58:881 - missing?
01:04:310 (1,2) - lets try blanketing 1?

smh its good

[Asuka_-'s Insane]

are you sure putting ur gd name "_-'s"?
00:02:595 - important beat, why did you ingnore?
00:14:024 (1,2,3,4) - this was good pattern. 00:12:881 (1,2) - i really dont understand this pattern?
00:17:453 - just add a circle, its needs the beat hitsound
01:09:167 (3,4) - ... wanna try back and forth?

i actually like the 00:47:167 - all of this patterns, its really clean and organize =w=
good work

normal and mentai is all good there's nothing on that diff xd

GOOD LUCK HAVE FUN
P90 RUSH B

Jabba

813 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-05-03T20:50:41+00:00

Zallies wrote:
m4m

hey don't mind my modding skills, im really bad at it
ill do my best!

[general]
Remove Widescreen Support, it only uses when you have a Storyboard #blamementai2k17
[Chaos]
00:02:881 (3,4,5) - since i tried 3 to turn 20 degree, 4 and 3 arent the same shape
also I dislike this pattern, cuz the vocal change on 4 they weren't even supposed to be the same LOL but anyway the point about (4) being different is legit so I changed the pattern slightly
00:04:738 (1) - for my perspective, 00:04:881 - this part is stronger than you make the 1/2 on red tick I know but I focus on the vocals, so those are emphasizing the vocal lines instead
00:05:310 (3) - same as here, it make the music go awkward ^ and also I swapped 2 and 3 according to the point above, I liked the idea
00:07:167 - beat is really important than the vocal on this heavy drop incoming ^^
00:07:453 (2,3,4) - not the same shape ehh fixd LOL
00:08:738 (2) - there so much space on the right side? I don't really think that's a big problem since the section starting on 00:03:738 - utilized the whole right side. also I like this pattern :>
00:26:167 (3,4) - too awkward for me I'm aware that flow is a bit weird there, but I tried to do the similar thing on the second half of the verse - the whole verse has a nice circular flow, then on the last vocal lines it starts to become more awkward, kind of like a buildup. I'll change this if I come with a better way of positioning it!
00:26:595 (1,2) - i dont know if you're wanna blanket 1, or you just wanna do this pattern? wait weren't they supposed to blanket each other LOL fixed
00:27:738 (1,2) - low ds. and the music start intense beat and you did a low ds on this fixd
00:32:595 (2,3,4) - did you really shaped all? k I get it
00:33:595 (2,4) - why not try blanketing 2? looks like 4 is out of place yes
00:35:738 (1) - my suggestion: why not start 1 on the upper right pattern? eh I think that (5) - (1) would be kinda forced
00:54:595 (1,2) - and these two starting a big jump, and not this 00:55:024 (2) - also this is not arrange on 00:54:453 (2) - 2 because 00:54:167 (2,2) - these two are looking good k so 00:54:167 - has a weak sound as well as 00:54:453 - , the beat gets stronger at 00:54:738 - so the DS here is larger as well. as for the second one I chose parallel jumps over stacking those two notes like I did before, so I'll leave it like that for now
00:56:024 (4,5) - overplaced xd uh wut? if you meant making 4-5 and 2-3 parallel I did it, if not - then idk, that was the only thing I noticed
00:57:738 - my suggestion: make this 1/1? cuz the music fade its kinda cool though to add sure
00:59:453 (5,3,4,5) - looks good, but i not a fan doing this xd changed this a bit, like in the beginning
i dont understand at this point xddddddddd, 01:01:881 (1,2) - are super close, and three started to make a BIGGG DS. please fix the patterns indeed yes I swapped 2 and 3 there as well
01:02:881 - i miss the clap hitsounds, its important emphasizes the held vocal
01:04:595 (2,3,4) - well 4 start curvy <3 fixed lmao I didn't even bother making them the same
01:06:310 (1,2) - too much </3 rather than 01:05:453 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this was so cool patternsss eh why? this is just a big jump that emphasizes the 'tro' syllable in 'uncontrollable', and I made it parallel to 01:05:595 (2,3) - cause it flows well and looks nice imo
01:11:595 (3,4) - ^ ^
01:12:024 - i really love putting clap on this ^^
01:14:595 (1,1) - remove nc the actual clap-drum-drum pattern starts at 01:14:738 - and not on the downbeat, hence I ncd it
01:14:881 (2) - perfect v it? not really sure about this one, 01:15:024 - has a weaker vocal than 01:14:881 - so I don't really want to make them the same; gotta think about it
01:22:024 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - OVERMAPPED nope. this is the most intense section of the whole song
my personal look, i dont like the mapping much xd smh its like an overmapped.

normal and mentai is all good there's nothing on that diff xd nice

GOOD LUCK HAVE FUN
P90 RUSH B

wowsies I had to rethink lots of patterns, thanks!

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Asuka_- 2017-05-07T06:03:36+00:00

im not good at english.

Zel

Zel wrote:
i would change ar to 9.1 or 9 for better spread +dt change to 9.2
00:10:167 (5) - a better angle might be like this http://i.imgur.com/sD6OSp0.png little change
00:20:024 (2,3) - the spacing here is pretty large in comparison to the rest of the section its fine
00:36:881 (1,2,3) - i would have these spaced more since its more intense then the part previous, but i like what you did so up to you lol nice~
00:37:453 (4,5,2) - blanket is off k
00:42:024 (1,2) - could be blanketed kind of like http://i.imgur.com/glvv2AW.png kk
01:04:881 (4,5,6) - center 4 for a better aes k
01:07:453 (5,6) - might work better as a stream keep
01:12:881 (3,5,1) - center 3 between 1 and 5 ok

gottagof4ast

gottagof4ast wrote:
00:02:453 (4) - Just a suggestion but maybe this can be a 1/2 slider instead of a circle nice

00:05:310 (3) - The sound on this sliderend should be mapped as it is a very loud beat i'd like follow vocal

00:06:595 (3) - Would also map this sliderend, the way it's mapped right now doesn't fit ^ its fine

00:08:453 (2,4,6) - There is no sound on these, maybe map 00:08:310 (1,3,5) - as sliders so there is no weird gap its fine

00:10:595 (1) - The sliders starting here are a bit samey to play as there are alot of them so put down some circles little canged

00:41:167 (1) - remove NC keep for now

00:42:595 (1) - ^, these aren't really needed

00:45:738 (1) - ^

01:21:453 (1,2) - This feels mapped way too slow

Zallies

Zallies wrote:
[Asuka_-'s Insane]
are you sure putting ur gd name "_-'s"? yesxD
00:02:595 - important beat, why did you ingnore? fixed~
00:14:024 (1,2,3,4) - this was good pattern. 00:12:881 (1,2) - i really dont understand this pattern? its fine
00:17:453 - just add a circle, its needs the beat hitsound no
01:09:167 (3,4) - ... wanna try back and forth? its fine..?

upd

osu file format v14

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Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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TitleUnicode:Uncontrollable
Artist:Ito Kanako
ArtistUnicode:いとうかなこ
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Icekalt

507 posts

Joined December 2014

Icekalt 2017-05-08T01:04:48+00:00

Just passing by form #modrequest~ (amatuer modder inc: RUN :p)

Chaos

- 00:04:738 (1,4) - maybe put these 2 a tiny bit higher so you can blanket better with 00:04:453 (4) -
- stack 00:09:453 (1) - with 00:08:738 (2) - (sliderend)
- stack 00:36:167 (2) - with 00:35:453 (5) - (botth sliderend)
- you used the same DS for the jump 00:41:738 (3,1) - and 00:42:024 (1,2) - but the sound on 00:42:024 (1,2) - is much stronger so you should lower the DS between 00:42:024 (1,2) -
- 00:52:310 (3,4,5) - and 00:53:453 (3,4,5) - are so hard to aim~
- try to strg+g 00:57:024 (5) - because the flow isnt nice there as it is
- 00:58:595 (1) - looks not so nice and plays wierd - maybe increase the DS there
- arrange 01:00:595 (5) - so that 01:00:024 (3,4,5) - form a somewhat triangle like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8031672
- stack 01:01:881 (1) - with 01:02:738 (4) - (sliderend) and then put 01:01:738 (5) - in the middle of 01:01:881 (1) - and 01:01:024 (2) - like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8031703
- maybe blanket 01:04:167 (1) - with 01:04:595 (2) - (sliderend)

the other diffs seems fine too me
Gl with the set^^

Jabba

813 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-05-08T10:25:52+00:00

IceKalt wrote:
Just passing by form #modrequest~ (amatuer modder inc: RUN :p)

Chaos
- 00:04:738 (1,4) - maybe put these 2 a tiny bit higher so you can blanket better with 00:04:453 (4) - nice one, I swear it was a proper blanket once
- stack 00:09:453 (1) - with 00:08:738 (2) - (sliderend) would kinda mess up the flow
- stack 00:36:167 (2) - with 00:35:453 (5) - (botth sliderend) whoops
- you used the same DS for the jump 00:41:738 (3,1) - and 00:42:024 (1,2) - but the sound on 00:42:024 (1,2) - is much stronger so you should lower the DS between 00:42:024 (1,2) - true, tweaked it a bit
- 00:52:310 (3,4,5) - and 00:53:453 (3,4,5) - are so hard to aim~ I know, that's intended, I'll keep them for now
- try to strg+g 00:57:024 (5) - because the flow isnt nice there as it is intended as well, the flow goes in some form of an up-and-down movement there (you have to move your cursor up at (4), then down to aim (5), then up again etc), and I think it fits this section quite well
- 00:58:595 (1) - looks not so nice and plays wierd - maybe increase the DS there sure why not
- arrange 01:00:595 (5) - so that 01:00:024 (3,4,5) - form a somewhat triangle like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8031672 made it a bit neater
- stack 01:01:881 (1) - with 01:02:738 (4) - (sliderend) and then put 01:01:738 (5) - in the middle of 01:01:881 (1) - and 01:01:024 (2) - like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8031703 uh I didn't really get this one but I noticed that 01:01:881 (1) - has kinda low DS so I fixed it
- maybe blanket 01:04:167 (1) - with 01:04:595 (2) - (sliderend) would result in low DS

the other diffs seems fine too me
Gl with the set^^

thanks!

AthenaPvP

10 posts

Joined November 2016

AthenaPvP 2017-05-12T23:50:58+00:00

Easy

To be honest, I just find 01:26:024 (1,1) - this to be a little weird. Though maybe I'm missing something. Other than that solid build!

Normal

01:26:024 (1,1) - Why are these two notes quieter than...
01:26:024 (1,1) - These two? I could tell there was a rhythm going on with the sounds, but it suddenly was silenced and it stuck out.

Honestly, me going any farther with difficulties would be difficult. Though I'm sure they're all really great!

ababa

180 posts

Joined June 2016

ababa 2017-05-17T21:53:15+00:00

M4M #modreq

Light Insane

SPOILER

Try to populate the edges and corner more https://puu.sh/vTdlk/f171208784.jpg

Maybe you can try to halve the amounts of NCs you have here, it's kinda much for a 4.2* map with HP5.5

00:14:738 (5,6,7) - This comes a bit unexpected, there aren't any other parts in the song that are as dense. Maybe try to replace with simple circles?

00:18:024 (4,5,1,2) - Make 1,2 the same spacing as the 3,4 from before?

00:58:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - Kinda hard to read imo, maybe put the 3 between the 2 sliders? https://puu.sh/vTdcb/3058d1fb68.png

01:07:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same here

Mentai's Hard

SPOILER

00:02:738 (3) - Try to space this more, this rhythm can be confusing for this diffuculty range

00:03:881 (1) - Maybe it's just me but you could put a circle on the white tick (I can hear a sound there, or I'm just dumb) to compensate for the strange rhythm on the 1, kinda complicated if beats start on red ticks

00:09:167 (3,1) - Space instead of stack?

~~00:10:595 (1) - 00:17:167 (4) - Maybe try to space everything a bit less~~ Edit: Actually, keep it.

00:48:881 (3,4,5) - They don't kinda fit with the 1/2 slider rhythm, yoiu switching from mapping drums to mapping vocal in that moment. Maybe continue to use the 1/2 slider rhythm...

00:53:453 (3,4,5) - Here aswell

00:56:738 (2,3) - Weird rhythm again, I know, the song makes it hard to map on white ticks in these parts but I'd do it anyways to avoid confusing rhythms

01:23:738 (1,2,3) - 1,2 could be mistaken as a 1/2 gap, space them more.

I don't really like the rhythm style here, the "I'll leave the white tick because it would fit the music perfectly" style, because that can and will make some things unreadable. And this is a 3.2*, AR8 would be fine I guess

Normal

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(I'll see everything from the exes of a beginner)

00:01:453 (1,1,1) - Why NCs? The HP is low enough

00:11:738 (3,4,5,6) - Idk, it's a bit too hard for a Normal imo

00:24:310 (1) - 00:36:595 (3) - You sure it's ok with the occasional pauses and odd slider lengths in this difficulty range? I don't know what else you could put there, but this definitely is a bit too hard for a normal... (I couldn't even fc this)

00:55:167 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe make this a smooth curve for the looks? https://puu.sh/vTeLF/0662602442.png

00:58:310 (1,1) - So if you want to keep 00:11:738 (3,4,5,6), then emphasize this point in the music with a slightly bigger jump

01:10:024 (1,2,3) - You could make this a triangle https://puu.sh/vTeT6/9d9fe3cf68.png
There are some places where you could make trangles 01:06:310 (3,1,2) -

You're clearly an experienced mapper, can't find that many flaws... (or maybe I'm just a shit modder)

Mentai

472 posts

Joined June 2016

Mentai 2017-05-18T01:09:20+00:00

IceDynamix wrote:
M4M #modreq

Mentai's Hard

00:02:738 (3) - Try to space this more, this rhythm can be confusing for this diffuculty range nah, ds 1.00x is being used in this opening for the spaced rhythms

00:03:881 (1) - Maybe it's just me but you could put a circle on the white tick (I can hear a sound there, or I'm just dumb) to compensate for the strange rhythm on the 1, kinda complicated if beats start on red ticks yes, but its not the sound i want to map

00:09:167 (3,1) - Space instead of stack? why? i use this a couple times in the map, fits imo

~~00:10:595 (1) - 00:17:167 (4) - Maybe try to space everything a bit less~~ Edit: Actually, keep it.

00:48:881 (3,4,5) - They don't kinda fit with the 1/2 slider rhythm, yoiu switching from mapping drums to mapping vocal in that moment. Maybe continue to use the 1/2 slider rhythm... i actually map vocals the entire map, just i'm not gonna just have a spinner or extended slider when the music picks up drastically here

00:53:453 (3,4,5) - Here aswell ^

00:56:738 (2,3) - Weird rhythm again, I know, the song makes it hard to map on white ticks in these parts but I'd do it anyways to avoid confusing rhythms this is spaced correctly and has 1/1 gap, how is that weird?

01:23:738 (1,2,3) - 1,2 could be mistaken as a 1/2 gap, space them more. i can see that, fixed

I don't really like the rhythm style here, the "I'll leave the white tick because it would fit the music perfectly" style, because that can and will make some things unreadable. And this is a 3.2*, AR8 would be fine I guess mapping the music perfectly is a good thing, there is no weird 3/4 or 1/4 rhythms i used, so i think the map expresses the music correctly and well

thanks for mod

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234,159,60881,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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120,180,61738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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226,89,63167,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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404,280,63738,2,0,B|396:220|396:220|376:200|376:200|368:144,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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80,188,64881,2,0,L|47:123,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,272,65167,2,0,L|7:221,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,304,65453,6,0,P|144:356|112:376,2,70,12|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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360,360,66310,2,0,L|432:384,1,70,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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420,220,66738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,272,66881,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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312,228,70024,5,2,0:0:0:0:
312,228,70167,2,0,L|300:300,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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216,192,70881,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,192,71024,2,0,P|176:168|124:180,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,132,71310,2,0,P|282:95|229:89,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,112,71595,2,0,P|404:67|357:43,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,168,71881,2,0,P|456:212|380:200,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,132,72310,5,2,0:0:0:0:
104,132,72595,2,0,L|96:52,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,200,72881,2,0,B|180:252|180:252|164:284|164:284|172:344,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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512,88,74310,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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440,68,84167,2,0,L|369:73,1,62.9999980773926,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,86024,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86167,12,2,90024,0:0:0:0:

Jabba

813 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-05-18T08:47:18+00:00

IceDynamix wrote:
M4M #modreq

Light Insane

SPOILER
Try to populate the edges and corner more https://puu.sh/vTdlk/f171208784.jpg don't really think that's much of a problem, I can try this if I decide to change some patterns

Maybe you can try to halve the amounts of NCs you have here, it's kinda much for a 4.2* map with HP5.5 used hp6 instead, removing nc would increase combos up to 12 or smth

00:14:738 (5,6,7) - This comes a bit unexpected, there aren't any other parts in the song that are as dense. Maybe try to replace with simple circles? actually both hard and other insane don't have those 1/4s mapped so yes, I guess I'd just use circles there

00:18:024 (4,5,1,2) - Make 1,2 the same spacing as the 3,4 from before? whoops

00:58:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - Kinda hard to read imo, maybe put the 3 between the 2 sliders? https://puu.sh/vTdcb/3058d1fb68.png (3) is the same as (1), but I spaced 5 out - should be better now

01:07:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same here ^

Normal

SPOILER
(I'll see everything from the exes of a beginner)

00:01:453 (1,1,1) - Why NCs? The HP is low enough not a big problem imo, indicates the big gap between those notes

00:11:738 (3,4,5,6) - Idk, it's a bit too hard for a Normal imo it's not that hard but apparently this is the only section where I use this, so I changed it

00:24:310 (1) - 00:36:595 (3) - You sure it's ok with the occasional pauses and odd slider lengths in this difficulty range? I don't know what else you could put there, but this definitely is a bit too hard for a normal... (I couldn't even fc this) what's exactly odd about this? I know, the diff is pretty much hard (it's even more like an advanced and not normal). all those sliders are following the vocals and there are only 1/2 and 1/1 gaps between objects

00:55:167 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe make this a smooth curve for the looks? https://puu.sh/vTeLF/0662602442.png sure

00:58:310 (1,1) - So if you want to keep 00:11:738 (3,4,5,6), then emphasize this point in the music with a slightly bigger jump jumps in normals are a no-no :<

01:10:024 (1,2,3) - You could make this a triangle https://puu.sh/vTeT6/9d9fe3cf68.png
There are some places where you could make trangles 01:06:310 (3,1,2) - I can literally make triangles out of everything (that's what I did in easy), as for this diff I went with the idea of such objects not touching so that it's easier to read

You're clearly an experienced mapper, can't find that many flaws... (or maybe I'm just a shit modder)

thanks!

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2017-05-20T15:29:37+00:00

Hi, here to fulfill the m4m request

I would call your Easy a Normal and your Normal an Advanced tbh. Not because of the icon but because of patterns in Easy being too difficult for an 'Easy' new player e.g. consecutive circles at relatively highish bpm at 00:55:167 (3,4,5,6,1) -

Easy

The difficulty spread within this difficulty is rather uneven imo, with that midway point being at 00:28:881 (1) - . Before this time, everything was mostly 2/1 with the occastional 1/1. After this however, it becomes mostly 1/1 with very occasional 1/1. I find this to be a rather big problem in the diff considering the song intensities between the two parts isn't that much different. A more obvious example would be to compare 00:19:738 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - to 00:10:595 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - . The first timestamp music is relatively calmer than the second timestamp music yet has less objects placed. I may even go as far as to say this unevenness makes the diff unrankable
00:32:881 (4,1,2,3) - you usually do a trapezium pattern with these objects, so try applying that here too (e.g. 00:30:595 (3,1,2,3) - , 00:34:024 (3,4,5,1) - )
00:53:738 (3,1) - move slider 1 slightly more to the right for zig-zag flow at 00:52:881 (1,2,3,1) - ?
01:00:881 (1) - don't like this 3/2 repeat slider as the white tick to either side of that red tick is much more audible/important (left white tick is a snare and right white tick is a strong vocal)
01:10:024 (1) - ^
01:09:453 (3,1,2) - don't you usually place the third object somewhere so makes a 'triangle'? e.g. 01:00:024 (3,1,2) - , 01:06:595 (2,1,2) - , etc.
yeahh, it kinda felt like 30% an Easy diff and 70% a Normal diff fused together.. give my first point some thought ://

Mentai's Hard

00:03:167 (4) - following vocals when there's rather strong percussion like at the large white tick is rather difficult.. try changing this slider into a repeat slider so that large white tick is mapped somewhat
00:04:738 (1,2,3,4) - try this rhythm instead? current is a bit too dense considering this part of the music is relatively calm
00:10:024 (3) - that white tick is rather weak compared to the red tick in between, try adjusting the rhythm here to include that red tick
00:10:881 (2,3) - doesn't look nice compared to your other instances of this (e.g. 00:12:024 (2,3) - , 00:13:167 (2,3) - , etc.)
00:11:738 (1,2,3,4) - flow in this pattern is kinda strange compared to other times like 00:10:595 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:16:310 (1,2,3,4) - ). In those times, the flow in the pattern 'rotates' for the first three sliders but then the fourth slider goes in the other rotation. However over here, the change in flow rotation happens with the third slider instead. perhaps adjust this pattern so that same flow pattern is seen here
00:21:738 (6,1) - bit strange to increase spacing for new measure here when you didn't at parts like 00:24:024 (6,1) - , 00:26:310 (6,1) - , etc.
00:29:881 (4) - is the whistle on the slider end here accidental? not seen in other diffs
00:37:738 - rather prominent percussion beat, would map this with a circle. Especially since the next section revolves around the percussion
01:06:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - if this is meant to be a square pattern, it's kinda sloppily done ://
01:26:024 (4) - NC this, literally every other diff in this mapset does

Light Insane

00:02:453 (4,1) - perhaps you can ctrl+g this so it is slider then circle? seeing as you seem to be mapping primarily to the vocals. also because you mapped similar parts to this like 00:04:453 (4,1) - as to the vocals and without making the large white tick clickable
00:07:167 (1) - forgot drum sampleset at slider head I think
00:10:310 (3) - would be nice to hitsound this note tbh, like a drum sampleset
00:31:595 (3,4,1) - perhaps move circle 4 a bit closer to slider 3 to make that vocal spacing theme you have going on more distinct (e.g. 00:33:881 (2,3,1) - )
00:36:595 (3) - not too sure but I don't hear a sound on that first blue tick. perhaps change this to a circle and 1/4 slider?
00:38:167 (2,3) - and 00:39:024 (2,3) - , space circle 3 out a bit more? a short compared to the next couple of times you use this pattern like at 00:40:453 (2,3) - , 00:42:738 (2,3) - , etc.
00:50:738 (2) - drum sampleset if you want to highlight those two percussion sounds, which is what I think you are doing since you mapped this as two circles
01:02:738 (4,1) - spacing here seems a bit short imo, try moving slider 4 lower
01:04:310 (1,2,3,4) - tbh, I don't find this kinda of pattern appropriate. purely my opinion but I think this kind of pattern only works well in build ups in the music as the distance between slider pairs is increasing. it works at 00:07:167 (1,2,3,4) - because there is a build up in music intensity here
01:13:453 (1,2,3,4) - same thing as previous point tbh
01:22:881 (3,4) - imo, these would look better if each slider was rotated 10deg about the selection centre

good luck!

Jabba

813 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-05-20T16:27:01+00:00

Rizen wrote:
Hi, here to fulfill the m4m request

I would call your Easy a Normal and your Normal an Advanced tbh. Not because of the icon but because of patterns in Easy being too difficult for an 'Easy' new player e.g. consecutive circles at relatively highish bpm at 00:55:167 (3,4,5,6,1) -

Easy
The difficulty spread within this difficulty is rather uneven imo, with that midway point being at 00:28:881 (1) - . Before this time, everything was mostly 2/1 with the occastional 1/1. After this however, it becomes mostly 1/1 with very occasional 1/1. I find this to be a rather big problem in the diff considering the song intensities between the two parts isn't that much different. A more obvious example would be to compare 00:19:738 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - to 00:10:595 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - . The first timestamp music is relatively calmer than the second timestamp music yet has less objects placed. I may even go as far as to say this unevenness makes the diff unrankable actually this section 00:10:595 - was really too simplified so I added more 1/1 beats to it. as for 00:28:881 - the music here gets more intense so I use more 1/1 rhythms. I guess buffing the very first part would work, as that would make the 00:19:738 - section relatively easier
00:32:881 (4,1,2,3) - you usually do a trapezium pattern with these objects, so try applying that here too (e.g. 00:30:595 (3,1,2,3) - , 00:34:024 (3,4,5,1) - ) true, fixed
00:53:738 (3,1) - move slider 1 slightly more to the right for zig-zag flow at 00:52:881 (1,2,3,1) - ? ye sure
01:00:881 (1) - don't like this 3/2 repeat slider as the white tick to either side of that red tick is much more audible/important (left white tick is a snare and right white tick is a strong vocal) changed to 2/1 + circle
01:10:024 (1) - ^ ^
01:09:453 (3,1,2) - don't you usually place the third object somewhere so makes a 'triangle'? e.g. 01:00:024 (3,1,2) - , 01:06:595 (2,1,2) - , etc. redid the pattern anyway cause I had to change 01:10:024 (1) -
yeahh, it kinda felt like 30% an Easy diff and 70% a Normal diff fused together.. give my first point some thought :// I'm fine with renaming the diff as long as it can be an acceptable lowest diff LOL cause I had lots of trouble reducing the rhythm in both normal and hard

Light Insane
00:02:453 (4,1) - perhaps you can ctrl+g this so it is slider then circle? seeing as you seem to be mapping primarily to the vocals. also because you mapped similar parts to this like 00:04:453 (4,1) - as to the vocals and without making the large white tick clickable fixd
00:07:167 (1) - forgot drum sampleset at slider head I think whoops forgot to do this one since the highest diff (which I copied hs from) doesn't have this tick mapped
00:10:310 (3) - would be nice to hitsound this note tbh, like a drum sampleset eze's diff actually has a finish on this note and I like how it sounds, so yes, changed
00:31:595 (3,4,1) - perhaps move circle 4 a bit closer to slider 3 to make that vocal spacing theme you have going on more distinct (e.g. 00:33:881 (2,3,1) - ) increased spacing on both 3-4 and 4-1
00:36:595 (3) - not too sure but I don't hear a sound on that first blue tick. perhaps change this to a circle and 1/4 slider? there's a trill in the background, it's fine imo
00:38:167 (2,3) - and 00:39:024 (2,3) - , space circle 3 out a bit more? a short compared to the next couple of times you use this pattern like at 00:40:453 (2,3) - , 00:42:738 (2,3) - , etc.yes
00:50:738 (2) - drum sampleset if you want to highlight those two percussion sounds, which is what I think you are doing since you mapped this as two circles not really sure if there's an actual drum sound in the background but I think it fits well. I mapped those two as circles cause it's the end of the section tho, before the more intense part lol
01:02:738 (4,1) - spacing here seems a bit short imo, try moving slider 4 lower tweaked it a bit
01:04:310 (1,2,3,4) - tbh, I don't find this kinda of pattern appropriate. purely my opinion but I think this kind of pattern only works well in build ups in the music as the distance between slider pairs is increasing. it works at 00:07:167 (1,2,3,4) - because there is a build up in music intensity here
01:13:453 (1,2,3,4) - same thing as previous point tbh I think those are fine cause they act as the buildup for the jump section that comes right after. I might change it tho if I come up with a better idea
01:22:881 (3,4) - imo, these would look better if each slider was rotated 10deg about the selection centre agreed
good luck!

thanks!

-Helix-

67 posts

Joined February 2017

-Helix- 2017-05-20T17:06:19+00:00

hi m4m from modreq(i use google translate)
◾Asuka_-'s Insane
00:27:453 (4) - How about reversing the end of the slide?
00:35:738 (1,3,5) - The position is slightly uneven.
00:56:310 (1,2,3,4) - Can not it be more in the middle? (its my personal opinion.)
01:05:453 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I hope you have the same jump length.
01:16:595 (6,7) - move slightly right
01:21:453 (1) - move up
01:23:881 (2) - I'd better go a little more clockwise.

◾eze's Extra
00:07:167 (1) - remove NC
00:08:024 (1) - remove NC
00:08:310 (1) - I think it is a slide little far
00:13:595 (2) - There is a feeling closer to other circles.
00:21:167 (3) - move slightly down
00:26:881 (1,2,3,4) - Make it regular
00:58:596 (1) - remove NC
00:59:453 (3) - remove NC
01:05:881 (1) - move down
01:08:595 (1) - remove NC
01:11:738 (1) - remove NC
01:12:167 (4) - NC
01:12:310 (1) - remove NC
01:23:453 (1) - remove NC

m4m my map please
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/607007
good luck~

guijcl

19 posts

Joined July 2016

guijcl 2017-05-20T19:22:23+00:00

M4M Req xd

Light Insane

00:09:453 (1,2) - Those to slider are copy pasted but if u notice they got two diferent sounds
00:23:738 (3) - wierd slider shape, maybe do like this, cuz has two diferent "iiii" http://prntscr.com/fa4qyu
00:34:310 (3) - U can try to do a blanket from this
00:37:167 (2,3) - Fix
00:41:167 (1,2,3) - Maybe u should change to something like this: http://prntscr.com/fa4src
00:44:881 (1,2,3) - ^
00:56:310 (1,2,3) - Better like this imo: http://prntscr.com/fa4tmc
01:04:167 (4,2) - Fix
01:14:881 (3,6) - Fix

Good Diff in imo
GL

Jabba

813 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Jabba 2017-05-20T21:02:59+00:00

q1ffaay wrote:
M4M Req xd

Light Insane
00:09:453 (1,2) - Those to slider are copy pasted but if u notice they got two diferent sounds legit, changed
00:23:738 (3) - wierd slider shape, maybe do like this, cuz has two diferent "iiii" http://prntscr.com/fa4qyu there's no actual vocal in the middle, and this is the usual pattern I do in this diff so it's fine
00:34:310 (3) - U can try to do a blanket from this that'd mess up with the ds, but I'll think about maybe tweaking it somehow
00:37:167 (2,3) - Fix uh there's nothing wrong with it tho?
00:41:167 (1,2,3) - Maybe u should change to something like this: http://prntscr.com/fa4src this section is based on repetitive patterns cause the sounds in the background are the same
00:44:881 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
00:56:310 (1,2,3) - Better like this imo: http://prntscr.com/fa4tmc my intention was to put 2 and 3 on the same line, though I like your idea
01:04:167 (4,2) - Fix uh if you were talking about stacks then yes, fixed
01:14:881 (3,6) - Fix ^

Good Diff in imo
GL

thanks!

Mentai

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Mentai 2017-05-21T08:38:03+00:00

Rizen wrote:
Hi, here to fulfill the m4m request

Mentai's Hard
00:03:167 (4) - following vocals when there's rather strong percussion like at the large white tick is rather difficult.. try changing this slider into a repeat slider so that large white tick is mapped somewhat i would really like to avoid this
00:04:738 (1,2,3,4) - try this rhythm instead? current is a bit too dense considering this part of the music is relatively calm due to bpm, you're right
00:10:024 (3) - that white tick is rather weak compared to the red tick in between, try adjusting the rhythm here to include that red tick i'd rather not have my map be ALL 1/2 spam...
00:10:881 (2,3) - doesn't look nice compared to your other instances of this (e.g. 00:12:024 (2,3) - , 00:13:167 (2,3) - , etc.) first set of these always rotate this way, the others are just designed differently, i could space them a bit more?
00:11:738 (1,2,3,4) - flow in this pattern is kinda strange compared to other times like 00:10:595 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:16:310 (1,2,3,4) - ). In those times, the flow in the pattern 'rotates' for the first three sliders but then the fourth slider goes in the other rotation. However over here, the change in flow rotation happens with the third slider instead. perhaps adjust this pattern so that same flow pattern is seen here yes
00:21:738 (6,1) - bit strange to increase spacing for new measure here when you didn't at parts like 00:24:024 (6,1) - , 00:26:310 (6,1) - , etc. THIS was an accident xd
00:29:881 (4) - is the whistle on the slider end here accidental? not seen in other diffs intentional
00:37:738 - rather prominent percussion beat, would map this with a circle. Especially since the next section revolves around the percussion originally this just sounded like white noise to me, i can hear something rather faintly, but also most of my hearing is gone so people will hear things i can't anymore. i'll take your word for it... for now
01:06:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - if this is meant to be a square pattern, it's kinda sloppily done :// i tried eyeballing
01:26:024 (4) - NC this, literally every other diff in this mapset does i guess!

good luck![/notice]

thx for mod xd

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