Pereira006 wrote:

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Hello~~

IMO <- My opinions

General

The Tags What mean "bl"? i need konw it and the symbol " __ " pleasse remove it all diff
I can see you mp3 is 320kbps pleasse enconding to 192kbps or 128kbps


Some Suggestions
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[Easy]

Slider tick rate 1? i can see diff another is 2 pleasse same this

00:04:765 (1) - the start slider hitsound whistle?i can hear men higer voice with strong drums that mean remove whistle and add finish IMO
00:20:466 (4) - another strong drums so add finish?
00:27:195 (1) - ^
00:52:990 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - lack hitsound pleasse use clap or whistle if you wanna
01:00:840 (1) - add finish
01:19:906 (5,1) - I can see is incosiente spacing pleasse fix this spacing if you change try fix spacing at 01:22:709 (2,3,4)
01:22:709 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - so random spacing why? pleasse fix this spacing

this good play but time kiai so random spacing pleasse fix and some here have lack hitsound pleasse try it
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[Normal]

00:22:709 (1) - incosiente combo so only 00:23:270 (1) - remove new combo
00:46:541 (1,2) - Incosiente spacing if you fix this don't forget fix spacing at 00:48:504 (3,4,5) no
01:03:924 (1,2) - Incosiente spacingno
01:06:167 (4,1) - jump huh but i not sure Normal can't make jump i suggest you fix this spacing you can ignore this if you wanna
01:31:681 you finish here but another diff finish is 01:34:485 so add spinner on 01:32:242 and until to 01:34:485 to make same all diff finish
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[hard]

01:29:438 time kiai is finish here but another diff are 01:29:999 you should all diff consienty time kiai
00:06:448 (1) - 3 hitsound o.o? pleasse remove finish and whistle and clap stay
00:35:607 (1) - this is nothing drums or lyrics and are overmapped pleasse remove this
01:18:223 (1) - that same 00:06:448 (1)

very nice this mapset
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[tutuhaha's harsukoi]

well nothing wrong here okay.jpg
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that all i think
good luck

DragonSparta wrote:

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Hi~

Easy
00:02:522 (1) - This spinner ends too early. Find a way to make it have enough bonus and not that short no,but if others think so , i will change it
00:19:345 (3 and 4) - One grid left ok
01:03:083 (5) - Make it balanced on both sides of this slidersok

Normal
00:19:391 (4) - Move this away from overlapping (1) ok
00:24:438 (4) - ^ok
00:55:840 (5) - New combo no
01:00:086 (7) - Overlapping with (4) it isn't ?

Hard
00:11:530 (1,2,3) - Make this a triangle in the center of the map ok
Some Overlapping notes occur in the diff. I would like to see a clean map

Insane
Ok~
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That's all~

shikyu wrote:

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Request via modding queue

[Easy]
00:32:837 (2) - down 3 grid (end of slider) ok
00:37:323 (3) - add clap at the end of slider ok
01:22:183 (3,4) - add clap at the end of slider ok

[Normal]
00:28:912 (3) - add clap ok

[Hard]
Fine for me

[tutuhaha's Hatsukoi]
some suggestion... fix hitsounds, sounds weird in some places ok

Hope it useful

tutuhaha wrote:

搞好了- -
还是有很多问题的- -
need more mod in my diff - -
Oyeah - -y【slap(╬￣皿￣)＝○＃(￣＃)３￣)】
mi sa同学你简直太好人了有没有QAQ....

HellDawn wrote:

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General
Your bg 960x768 please change 1024x768 or 800x600 fixed

Normal
00:03:678- Spacing ok

Byakugan249 wrote:

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Ok time to mod this

Easy:
00:04:799(1) - 2 grids up at the 2nd point of the slider. ok
00:27:229(1) - 1 grid down ok
01:14:332(4) - 1 grid down and keep the same movement from there. ok

Normal:
00:08:725(3) - Make the slider like this, and x:424 y:128 ok

00:19:379(4) - 2 grids diagonal to the bottom right ok
01:04:239(2) - take out the last point. that's not needed. and make the slider like this ok

01:26:108(2) make the 2nd point of the slider like a curve. it's straight ok

Hard:
00:06:201(6) - 1 grid up ok
00:08:164(5) - 1 grid down ok
00:21:622(3) - make the slider like this no,but i make it like (1)

00:36:201(1) - 7 grids to the right for the 3rd point ok
00:40:687(3) - make it a curve slider like this. ok

00:47:416(5) - 2-3 grids to the right for the end point ok
00:49:099(3) - 1 grid up and 4 grids right for the 2nd point ok
01:16:575(4) - Make this a new combo ok
01:18:257(1) - 4 grids up for the end point ok
01:31:715(5) - 1 grid right ok

tutuhaha's Hatsukoi:
No problems here

Alright this is the best i can do. GL

YGOkid8 wrote:

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General:
- Preview time in tutuhaha's diff. is different from the rest. fixed
- You must keep the timing sections in all of your diffs. consistent, unless there's a really good reason (guest diffs. don't count)
what should i do ? @@
Easy:
00:00:314 (1,1) - Spinners are too short.
00:02:556 (1,1) - Not enough spinner recovery time.
00:33:958 (1,1) - ^
00:49:659 (1) - End spinner @00:51:902 - instead.
01:25:547 (6) - New Combo.
01:27:790 (1) - No New Combo.
01:30:033 (4) - New Combo.
ok to all

Normal:
00:00:314 (1,1) - Not enough spinner recovery time. ok
00:51:902 (1,1) - Spinner too short, and that ^ ok

S h i o n wrote:

YGOkid8 wrote:

- You must keep the timing sections in all of your diffs. consistent, unless there's a really good reason (guest diffs. don't count)
what should i do ? @@

YGOkid8 wrote:

simple. manually go through all your diffs. and make them the same.
also kudosu previous post

• Hitsounds are a bit too low in all diffs. Raise their volume by 10% or something.

• Several times, it seems you forgot to add claps to the beats to follow your clap pattern. You should go through the difficulty again to add the missing claps. That's pretty much all I have to say about the diff. Nice !

• Same as Easy.

• Same as Easy and Normal. Additionally:

1. 00:53:585 (3,4) - I tripped on this because I didn't know they were sliders (the first one is hidden by the text that pops out after the spinner). Replace them with circles ?

1. Why not give this a standard name ?
2. I'm not a big fan of 1/4 streams mixing sliders and circles. I think it plays bad because it breaks the movement your fingers have to do to stream, and they're confusing (the slider being quite slow they will be confused for circles).

Odaril wrote:

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As per your request.

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game.

General

• Hitsounds are a bit too low in all diffs. Raise their volume by 10% or something.

ok , 5% raised

Easy

• Several times, it seems you forgot to add claps to the beats to follow your clap pattern. You should go through the difficulty again to add the missing claps. That's pretty much all I have to say about the diff. Nice !

claps added

Normal

• Same as Easy.

claps added

Hard

• Same as Easy and Normal. Additionally:

1. 00:53:585 (3,4) - I tripped on this because I didn't know they were sliders (the first one is hidden by the text that pops out after the spinner). Replace them with circles ?

hmm.. somehow tricky,changed to circles

tutuhaha's Hatsukoi

1. Why not give this a standard name ? changed
2. I'm not a big fan of 1/4 streams mixing sliders and circles. I think it plays bad because it breaks the movement your fingers have to do to stream, and they're confusing (the slider being quite slow they will be confused for circles).

Very nice map. Have a look at this post and call me when you're done making fixes (or not making any if you don't want to).
No need to kudosu unless you really think this was helpful.

qilliam wrote:

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hm.. looks like i was late to mod

edit: oh, i found something actually, but it doesn't really affect the gameplay

on easy, normal and hard difficulty:

00:01:715 - remove timing section It's a soft hitsound,so remains

change the hitsounds and volume of the red line to match the timing section you just deleted

You should probably talk to odaril about this beforehand if you're considering to pop your bubble for this. It's very minor, all it does is remove one unnecessary timing section.

edit2: [tutuhaha's Insane]
00:08:164 (5,6) - not stacked properly It is stacked properly ~

Roddie wrote:

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Well, it looks like your map got bubbled already before I get a chance to mod it. *sigh* Oh, well. You won't be needing my mod anymore.

Good luck!

S h i o n wrote:

qilliam wrote:

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hm.. looks like i was late to mod

edit: oh, i found something actually, but it doesn't really affect the gameplay

on easy, normal and hard difficulty:

00:01:715 - remove timing section It's a soft hitsound,so remains

change the hitsounds and volume of the red line to match the timing section you just deleted

You should probably talk to odaril about this beforehand if you're considering to pop your bubble for this. It's very minor, all it does is remove one unnecessary timing section.

edit2: [tutuhaha's Insane]
00:08:164 (5,6) - not stacked properly It is stacked properly ~

Thank you all the same

S h i o n wrote:

qilliam wrote:

on easy, normal and hard difficulty:

00:01:715 - remove timing section It's a soft hitsound,so remains

change the hitsounds and volume of the red line to match the timing section you just deleted

Garven wrote:

[Skin]
The sliderball is ... an odd choice. Kind of weird with how tiny it is.
Also: the snowflake in the SB is a little cut off on the edges of the glow. new one changed



[Easy]
00:02:556 (1) - Kinda soon after a spinner for an Easy. little soon i think, the following slider removed
00:02:837 - Can you set this up so that you only hear the normal slider slide after the rest of the band kicks in? Right now it's just this annoying hisssss sound before everything gets going. i remove this slider ^
00:36:201 (1) - Too soon after a spinner. Strange that this spinner is longer than the ones in Normal and Hard. fixed,keep them same
01:12:089 - Start kiai here fixed
01:30:033 (1) - Suddenly silent here... Applies to Normal/Hard too. i make the volume down gradually
01:32:276 (1) - Use several timing sections to have a gradual volume change instead of a sudden one at 01:32:276 (1) - Applies to all difficulties fixed

[Normal]
00:07:603 (5,1) - Whoa there, spacing it is!.. fixed
00:51:622 (1) - This spinner plays really awkwardly. It starts in a weird spot and covers a kind of short note. Might be better to map through it or try something similar to your Easy/Hard fixed
01:10:968 (3) - Would be better as two circles instead of a slider. i think slider is like something pushing ,and this pushes to the kia time..

[Hard]
00:50:781 (1) - Kind of a weird spot for a spinner. because it is an end of vocal and a short rest(instrument) to be followed
01:15:454 (3) - Maybe do two sliders instead of this repeating one. The fourth repeat ends in an awkward place. ok, fixed
01:22:463 (1) - This was kind of a weird spot for a jump yes , fixed~

[tutuhaha]
For the most part, the map is fine. The main things that were bugging me were your use of changing the emphasis of the click with the inconsistent use of slider vs. circle when you're applying 1/4 rhythms. It make for an awkward play for such a simple and smooth song. Try looking through your difficulty and see if you can make the rhythms and play style consistent with where you place them in the stanza to ensure a more natural play.Tutuhaha has done something to make it better,I think.

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Garven wrote:

[All difficulties]
01:32:276 - It'd be better if you started the fade out here instead. The song doesn't really change intensity until then anyway.fixed

[Easy]
Has different combo colors. Line them up please.fixed

[Normal]
00:04:799 (1) - Whistle intended on the sliderslide?fixed

[Hard]
00:11:528 (1,2) - Strange to have a jump here but not at 00:12:650 (4,5) - Was it intended?fixed
01:16:014 (4) - Add clapfixed

[tInsane] Let's wait tutuhaha's reply. edit: ok now
00:35:921 (7) - Doesn't feel right. I'd delete.
00:51:201 (5) - Awkward clap
01:00:594 (1) - This part is kind of weird. It feels like you accidentally set the distance snap too high. Use the larger spacing for smaller parts instead of entire sections for a greater effect.

Garven wrote:

[tInsane]
00:35:921 (7) - Doesn't feel right. I'd delete.
00:51:201 (5) - Awkward clap
01:00:594 (1) - This part is kind of weird. It feels like you accidentally set the distance snap too high. Use the larger spacing for smaller parts instead of entire sections for a greater effect.

Garven wrote:

[tInsane]
01:03:958 (1,2,3,4) - Just look through this entire section. You have some pretty high spacing for a very small intensity change in the music. Then compare this spacing to 01:13:211 (5,6,7) - in the chorus. It's smaller. Try to make things a little more balanced before the kiai starts so you have a better transition to each part of the song. It's not just the parts that I linked - look through the entire section.

Garven wrote:

[All difficulties]
01:30:033 - Make this timing section volume 50%fixed

[Normal]
00:04:799 (1) - You took the whistle off the head and left the whistle on the slider body. :/
Try to select the slider so that it looks like this:

You don't want the start of the end circle to be selected red - only the slider body. From there, you can turn the whistle off. Don't forget to put it back on the start.done

[tInsane]
01:03:958 (1,2,3,4) - Just look through this entire section. You have some pretty high spacing for a very small intensity change in the music. Then compare this spacing to 01:13:211 (5,6,7) - in the chorus. It's smaller. Try to make things a little more balanced before the kiai starts so you have a better transition to each part of the song. It's not just the parts that I linked - look through the entire section.

Garven wrote:

[tInsane]
01:29:893 - Set this timing section to 50% volume

osuplayer111 wrote:

[General]

You're missing the file "reversearrow.png" in your folder. Please make sure to add it and then do a full submission.

That's all, I can rank when you fixed it.