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Nyquill
I can't believe I said that I take marathon maps in my queue. >:(

Mod post reserved, doing this right now.

Kay, here I go.

[General]
So many slider speeds *.*
The offset sounds slightly off at some points. Could be just me :/

[Devil Kings]
00:12:176 - There really REALLY should be a note here after giving the slider at 00:10:176
00:16:176 - ^
00:20:176 - ^
00:24:176 - ^
01:29:051 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Having spacing like (4,5,1) that is exactly the same as (1,2,3) is a fairly bad idea as people might read it as having the same intervals. Do something like 1:32:551 (4,5,1)
01:48:301 (5,6,7,8) - Fix the spacing for (8)
02:28:551 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Quite honestly, I think keeping consistant with (1,2,3,4) would be a better idea. But this is up to you.
03:02:801 (5,6,1) - You probably should fix the spacing infragments like the one on (1). I'll refrain from mentioning these from now on as there are way too many any probably aren't worth mentioning any more.
04:41:551 (5,6,7) - Wanna have this as a reverse slider instead? Haven't had one of those in a while have we ._.
Gonna go ahead and fix your last slider for you xD
SPOILER
In Hiroshi Shibasaki - Sengoku Basara Marathon (Celeste76) [Devil Kings].osu Replace:
(The entire last line)
216,96,321051,6,2,B|232:56|272:48|312:40|360:48|400:72|432:112|432:160|432:224|416:264|376:288|304:304|248:304|232:296|192:280,1,560 
with
200,80,321051,2,0,B|384:-16|512:192|384:384|192:280,1,560
[Winber1's Era]
This diff's streams made me shit rainbows.
In my opinion, one slider speed should have 1 stream spacing. In the first 1.5x section you had 2. Although you can't really map that long stream to have the same spacing as the others, I'm suggesting you reconsider the other spacings. At the same time, because of those streams and this being a marathon map, I'm suggesting OD -1 and DR -1
I'm not a good enough player to judge the diffuculty of the patterns, but I personally can't beat them xD. At most I can make it to the third break (I'm ashamed to say that I failed once because of the gap at 02:20:801)

I'm sorry but I can't really find anything else about this diff. Probably because player wise I'm not really good enough xD
Topic Starter
Celeste76

Nyquill wrote:

[General]
So many slider speeds *.*
The offset sounds slightly off at some points. Could be just me :/

[Devil Kings]
03:02:801 (5,6,1) - You probably should fix the spacing infragments like the one on (1). I'll refrain from mentioning these from now on as there are way too many any probably aren't worth mentioning any more. I like that the way it is.
I did everything except the above!
winber1
I guess i could OD and HP -1, since it's not much of a change, could you do it for me?

Also, I don't exactly get what you're trying to say. I dont get your 1 stream and 2 stream spacing. that doesn't really make sense to me >_>.
but are you just talking about the variation in the spacing of the streams? cuz those are based on the SV in the current section of the song
Vortex_old
Hmm, let's have a look :P (sorry for beeing so late) --> Stress :S

DevilKings
00:11:301 (7) New combo
00:15:301 (7) ^
00:18:551 (6) I don't like this slider :P make it more symmetrical
00:19:301 (7) New combo
00:23:301 (7) New combo
01:34:801 (4) New combo
02:13:051 - 02:13:551 (1,2,3,4,5) This stream looks ugly in my opinion :P
03:03:051 (1) Spacing --> put this slider 2 ticks left
03:57:051 (1) This slider should be more symmetrical
04:30:551 (13) spacing, 1 tick left
04:49:051 (8) This slider doesn't look very nice
05:08:051 (4) spacing, 1 tick right
05:10:051 (4) ^

Guest Diff
03:18:551 (1) Remove new combo
03:30:801 (7) Spacing looks strange after the circles before. 1 tick higher

Hope it helps :3 keep workin'

Vortex
Topic Starter
Celeste76

Vortex wrote:

Hmm, let's have a look :P (sorry for beeing so late) --> Stress :S

DevilKings
Did everything above!
winber1
I did not remove the new combo, cuz i wanted to emphasize the guitar slide. I moved that other note a bit, but no 1 grid up, if that's wat you meant.

Download: Hiroshi Shibasaki - Sengoku Basara Marathon (Celeste76) [Winber1's Era].osu
jossieP
marathonic mod from kei&kyon's queue
hi~

Devil Kings

00:12:176 (5,6) - unstack?
00:16:176 (5,6) - ^
00:29:051 (7) - remove whistle from slider body
00:32:051 (5,8) - add whistle, and remove clap from 8) ?
00:35:051 (7,9) - remove whistle from slider body
00:43:051 (7) - +finish (start of the slider)
00:45:051 (1) - +finish here
00:50:301 (1) - no new combo, and new combo on next object?
00:57:801 (2~) - moar spacing on next objects?
01:00:031 (1) - no new combo, and new combo on next object?
01:49:551 (2) - +finish?
01:50:551 (4) - +finish?
01:51:551 (2) - +finish?
01:52:551 (4) - +finish?
01:53:551 (2,6) - +finish?
01:57:051 (1) - weird sowdown
02:07:557 (3) - space it correctly please
02:15:051 (1) - +whistle on start of slider?
02:16:051 (4) - ^
02:30:051 (11) - new combo?
02:59:051 (1) - no new combo, and new combo on next object? OMG half part of the map /.\
03:02:801 (5) - new combo, and no new combo on next (1) ?
03:05:051 (11) - new combo
03:20:176 (4) - hidden hit circle, space it correctly please
03:22:176 (4) - ^
03:53:051 (4) - new combo, and no new combo on next object?
03:55:051 (1~) - unstack?
04:25:801 (7) - (nazi) a grid left?
04:45:051 (6) - +finish on start of slider?
04:47:051 (1) - +finish?
04:49:051 (8) - +finish on start of slider?
04:53:051 (5) - ^
04:57:051 (5) - ^
05:51:051 (1) - delete all whistle and finish on end of the slider?

Winber1's Era

-Random jumps, highly spaced streams, trying to make a kirby mix????

00:10:801 (5) - prev: 2,92x next:3,96 /.\ too far?
00:17:051 (1) - no new combo and new combo on next object?
00:25:051 (1) - ^
00:34:551 (3) - out of the grid?
01:13:051 (1) - no new combo?
01:31:051 (1) - less spacing?
01:37:051 (1) - ^
01:55:301 (2) - 4,56x spacing O.O reduce it?
01:56:301 (2) - ^
01:57:051 (T) - useless timing section
03:55:051 (1) - no new combo, new combo on next object?
04:07:301 (3,4) - stack with (1,2) ?
04:08:051 (3,4) - ^
05:17:051 (1) - out of the grid?
05:23:051 (1) - no new combo

that is all >_< ok now Im tired
Topic Starter
Celeste76

ikari_kyon wrote:

marathonic mod from kei&kyon's queue
hi~

Devil Kings

00:12:176 (5,6) - unstack? Done
00:16:176 (5,6) - ^ ^
00:29:051 (7) - remove whistle from slider body No
00:32:051 (5,8) - add whistle, and remove clap from 8) ? I added a whistle on 5 and 8, but didn't remove the clap
00:35:051 (7,9) - remove whistle from slider body No
00:43:051 (7) - +finish (start of the slider) Done
00:45:051 (1) - +finish here Done
00:50:301 (1) - no new combo, and new combo on next object? Done
00:57:801 (2~) - moar spacing on next objects? Done
01:00:031 (1) - no new combo, and new combo on next object? Done
01:49:551 (2) - +finish? Done
01:50:551 (4) - +finish? ^
01:51:551 (2) - +finish? ^
01:52:551 (4) - +finish? ^
01:53:551 (2,6) - +finish? ^
01:57:051 (1) - weird slowdown How is it weird?
02:07:557 (3) - space it correctly please Done
02:15:051 (1) - +whistle on start of slider? Done
02:16:051 (4) - ^ ^
02:30:051 (11) - new combo?
02:59:051 (1) - no new combo, and new combo on next object? OMG half part of the map /.\ No
03:02:801 (5) - new combo, and no new combo on next (1) ? No
03:05:051 (11) - new combo Done
03:20:176 (4) - hidden hit circle, space it correctly please Done
03:22:176 (4) - ^ ^
03:53:051 (4) - new combo, and no new combo on next object? Done
03:55:051 (1~) - unstack? No
04:25:801 (7) - (nazi) a grid left? Done
04:45:051 (6) - +finish on start of slider? Done
04:47:051 (1) - +finish? Done
04:49:051 (8) - +finish on start of slider? Done
04:53:051 (5) - ^ ^
04:57:051 (5) - ^ ^
05:51:051 (1) - delete all whistle and finish on end of the slider? I didn't delete all the whistle, but I added the finish to the end and deleted the whistle from the end.
Thank you for the mod!
winber1

ikari_kyon wrote:

Winber1's Era

-Random jumps, highly spaced streams, trying to make a kirby mix???? not exactly. but I will say that some things were kind of inspired by a kirby mix I guess. Most of it was just me trying to map in a different way.

00:10:801 (5) - prev: 2,92x next:3,96 /.\ too far? I never liked the placement of this note anyways, it also always bothered me, so i moved it.
00:17:051 (1) - no new combo and new combo on next object? no, i plan on having combos like this, and it is consistent (at least if I recal correctly) throughout the song.
00:25:051 (1) - ^ ^
00:34:551 (3) - out of the grid? not really, only the node is out of the grid. The note is still perfectly playable
01:13:051 (1) - no new combo? no sry
01:31:051 (1) - less spacing? seems readable to me, so I'll leave it there for now. If it becomes a problem later on I will change it.
01:37:051 (1) - ^ ^
01:55:301 (2) - 4,56x spacing O.O reduce it? seems fine imo. perfectly playable and the song is quite slow as well.
01:56:301 (2) - ^ ^
01:57:051 (T) - useless timing section lol k deleted
03:55:051 (1) - no new combo, new combo on next object? hmm, i'm very tempted to, and it looks better, so i guess so. im just a little reluctant to deviate from my measure by measure combo pattern thing.
04:07:301 (3,4) - stack with (1,2) ? i wanted it to be like that. i think it's fine as it is, and it is readable
04:08:051 (3,4) - ^ ^
05:17:051 (1) - out of the grid? it doesn't really matter that much imo. It's perfectly playable.
05:23:051 (1) - no new combo no sry
Thanks for mod! :3

Download: Hiroshi Shibasaki - Sengoku Basara Marathon (Celeste76) [Winber1's Era].osu
marshallracer
hi
kinda late x3

mostly optical i guess

[Devil Kings]
03:55:426 (4) - 1 grid left, 1 grid down
03:55:801 (7) - 1 grid up, 1 grid left
03:56:551 (11) - place somewhere, where it isn't hidden
03:59:801 (4) - 2 grids right

[Winber1's Era]
01:07:051 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - uhhh ... what?


sorry i can't find much ... impressive work on both diffs.
winber1
That seems fine and is perfectly readable imo.

Nothing changed for now. Thanks for mod tho! :3
bmin11
[Winber1]
03:12:051 (5) - This feels a bit too close even though it has the right distance (probably because of all those jumps before this note). I suggest you to move it farther apart.
03:18:551 (1) - Slider would have fit in here

[Devil Kings]
01:53:801 (3,4,5) - This sudden change in distance is really hard to predict. I suggest you to fix it or give a parttern so it's easier to read.
01:55:801 (3,4,5) - ^


well that's all I can point it out. Good luck guys
Topic Starter
Celeste76

bmin11 wrote:

[Winber1]
03:12:051 (5) - This feels a bit too close even though it has the right distance (probably because of all those jumps before this note). I suggest you to move it farther apart.
03:18:551 (1) - Slider would have fit in here

well that's all I can point it out. Good luck guys
Thank you! Did everything!
winber1

bmin11 wrote:

[Winber1]
03:12:051 (5) - This feels a bit too close even though it has the right distance (probably because of all those jumps before this note). I suggest you to move it farther apart. k moved a little further away
03:18:551 (1) - Slider would have fit in here originally, i wanted to do this, but i also really wanted a note at 03:19:051 (1) - as well. I also did not want to silence a slider, but in the end i decided to just add a slider and silence the end.
Download: Hiroshi Shibasaki - Sengoku Basara Marathon (Celeste76) [Winber1's Era].osu
mancuso_JM_
Mod Request :P
Let's Start

Devil Kings:
01:11:051 (x): Add a note here and move the slider to 01:11:301 (Red Tick).The slider finish in 01:13:051
01:42:426 (6): I think that this note sound better in 01:42:551 (White Tick)
01:42:801 (7): And (7) in 01:42:676
(try to do the same in 01:44:301 and 01:46:301)
02:19:801 (7): New Combo
02:20:803 (11): Whistle + FINISH
03:48:301 (x): Add a Note
03:48:801 (x): Add a Note
04:38:301 (x): Add a Note with New Combo and after this remove the New Combo in 04:39:051
Some patterns repeat too many times but in general the difficulty haven't got big mistakes

Winber1's Era:
More than 3 unique slider speed are used in this beatmap, so unrankeable
02:38:801 (x): Add a note with New Combo and Remove the New Combo in 02:38:926
04:07:176 (2,3): This jump is quite unpredictable, please try to short it
04:07:926 (2,3): ^^
04:50:051 (3): Moved to 04:50:176 (Blue Tick)
05:01:051 (1,1,1,1): I think that is really unnecesary

Well That's all
Good Luck with your beatmap ;)
winber1

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Winber1's Era:
More than 3 unique slider speed are used in this beatmap, so unrankeable Only AIMod complains about that. having more than 3 SV's isn't unrankable, or at least as of yet, and it does not make sense to ever make it unrankable. There are plenty of songs that would logically need more than 3 SV's. Although there are not specific parts where it's truly needed in his map, I only used it once iirc, and it was used logically and is readable imo.
02:38:801 (x): Add a note with New Combo and Remove the New Combo in 02:38:926 lol just don't ask me why, i just like it like this some reason. worse comes to worse, I would just delete the blue tick note and put a new combo on the white tick one.
04:07:176 (2,3): This jump is quite unpredictable, please try to short it seems fine imo. This phrase in the music has already repeated once, so the player should know by now the rhythm of the music. I actualyl already moved this jump much closer than it used to be. I do not want it too close, but i do not want it too far either.
04:07:926 (2,3): ^^ ^
04:50:051 (3): Moved to 04:50:176 (Blue Tick) I don't see the point in this actually. Nothing seems to be playing on the blue tick. sorry , i didn't change
05:01:051 (1,1,1,1): I think that is really unnecesary I kinda like it like this, but if there is a really convincing reason why this is wrong, I will change it

Well That's all
Good Luck with your beatmap ;)
Sorry, nothing changed, but thanks for the mod! :3
Topic Starter
Celeste76

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Mod Request :P
Let's Start

Well That's all
Good Luck with your beatmap ;)
Thank you! I did everything up there!
YTYuyu
I apologize for the delay. time to mod this :)

Devil Kings:
00:28:801(6) - NC. listen to the vocal part carefully
00:24:426(5) - 2 grids down
00:49:051(4) - NC
00:59:032(9) - ^
01:07:051(6) - ^
02:32:036(4) - ^
02:36:551(5) - ^
03:15:051(1) - switch positions for (3) at 03:16:051
03:53:081(8) - NC
04:03:176(4) - ^
04:09:051(6) - ^
04:29:301(6) - ^
04:37:051(7) - ^
04:45:051(6) - ^

Winber1's Era:
02:21:051 - add a spinner and end it at 02:22:551 this part feels empty

This is the best i can do. Star and GL :D
winber1
sorry, I really like that emptiness. It just fits really well imo. D:
Topic Starter
Celeste76

Byakugan249 wrote:

I apologize for the delay. time to mod this :)

Devil Kings:
02:32:036(4) - ^ No
03:15:051(1) - switch positions for (3) at 03:16:051 Looks fine to me
Thank you for the mod! I did everything but the above!
SuperMIC
Sorry, I can't mod marathons or approval songs well. :?
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