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Rena Uehara - Todokanai Koi

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Shad0w1and
1,586 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
Shad0w1and
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, October 7, 2017 at 11:10:26 AM

Artist: Rena Uehara
Title: Todokanai Koi
Source: WHITE ALBUM2
Tags: Leaf introductory closing chapter coda galgame Flask Pata-Mon
BPM: 135
Filesize: 17907kb
Play Time: 02:04
Difficulties Available:
  1. Flask's Normal (1.79 stars, 180 notes)
  2. Mou Hito o Aise Nai. (4.2 stars, 419 notes)
  3. Pata-Mon's Hard (2.88 stars, 265 notes)
Download: Rena Uehara - Todokanai Koi
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#29 上原れな - 届かない恋
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WHITE ALBUM2
Game OP | 2010

Insane: Me |Hard: Pata-Mon |Normal: Flask

Audio Tuned by me
WHITE ALBUM
WHITE ALBUM:
Anime OP Theme: 水樹奈々 - 深愛 (For Rina)
WHITE ALBUM2:
【MAD】 Melody: Ruppina - violet flow
Game OP Theme: 上原れな - 届かない恋
Game ED Theme: 上原れな - closing <Insane / Extra> (For Touma)
Game OST: 上原れな - After All 〜綴る想い〜 (For Setsuna)
Game OST: 上原れな - Answer (For Setsuna)
传达不到的爱
Last edited by Shad0w1and , edited 20 times in total.
Lavender
Beatmap Nominator
891 posts
Joined January 2014
Lavender
a
[Normal]
  1. 00:00:428 (1,1) - 只有半拍，RC规定hard要空一拍
  2. 01:54:872 (1,1) - 总感觉这里timing不太对，应该是有红线的
[Insane]
  1. 00:14:205 (6) - 大概可以3/4
  2. 00:37:094 (1,2,3) - 为了这vocal好像不太合适
没啥好说的，不会1/2跳爆
Ellyu
429 posts
Joined May 2014
Ellyu
总算可找到了
[就算被钉在棺材里，我也要用腐朽的声音喊出]
怕他的gd音效是默认？？？
tags请把gder名字加上

[疯]

00:23:983 (3,4,5) - 这个三连改成红线起吧，白线总觉得好怪，手感不好，而且这里00:23:539 (1,2,3,4,5) - 跟这里00:19:983 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 音乐节奏是相同的。
00:26:650 (5) - 这个没stack好，应该是调sr时没改过来
00:51:316 (1,2,3) - 慢歌这样叠感觉有点糊，干脆不overlap吧
01:06:205 (1,2) - 要不把1延长到蓝线上，然后这样叠，因为目前这样打击感对我而言有些怪。https://puu.sh/vb3Fe/a6fb36d0ce.png
01:16:872 (1,5) - 可以搞个blanket
01:55:761 (2) - 感觉可以nc

[巴达兽的硬]
00:06:872 (1) - 这个……干脆别clickable吧，音很轻啊，而且rc规定要空一拍
00:46:205 (3,1) - 建议搞个overlap，目前这样间距太大了
01:05:761 (5,6,1) - 都是二分之一的空拍间距差别太大了，知道你想强调，但是还是过分了。把56间距加大点
01:05:316 (3,4,5) - 要么全图多放点连打，要么不放，就只有一个太难受人了
01:54:872 (1) - 这个nc没必要

[F酱的脑膜]
00:14:650 (1,2) - 这个叠的太多了，缩圈都被挡住一半了
01:54:872 (1,2) - 要nc不该是2nc吗？
Otosaka-Yu
1,119 posts
Joined August 2013
Otosaka-Yu
/吓
m4m:https://osu.ppy.sh/s/631705 or https://osu.ppy.sh/s/612033 谢谢

Normal

  1. 00:14:650 (1) - 这样摆不太友好……
  2. 00:14:650 (1,2) - flow感觉不是那么顺……？感觉卡手了点，不过应该没什么大问题
  3. 00:42:650 (5,1) - 这样摆会不会好点呢？

Hard

  1. 00:27:539 (1,1) - 强迫症QAQ

Insane

  1. 00:25:316 (1,2) - 滑条尾stack一下
  2. 00:32:427 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:30:650 (1,2) - 间距离远一点？
  4. 00:57:761 (2,1) - 滑条reverse好像遮住了
  5. 01:12:872 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - 感觉这堆滑条有点乱了
  6. 01:27:094 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
嗯就这样了（（懒癌症晚期水摸越来越水，各位大神加油飞图啊
顺便对不起占了这么久才摸，红豆泥
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I Must Decrease
913 posts
Joined June 2013
I Must Decrease
01:47:539 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - :\
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
[Normal]
  1. 00:00:428 (1,1) - 135还不够低，只空一拍是违rule必死了
  2. 00:14:650 (1,2) - 这样的遮挡不建议在低难度使用，把2的大部分都漏出来比较好，放到右下或者下方
  3. 00:28:427 (6,7,1) - 连续三个stack也会有些问题，尤其是最低难度下．最好还是把这种都改成滑条
  4. 00:35:983 (1,2) - 类似
  5. 00:46:650 (1) - 低难度这种滑条红锚点处建议用钝角
  6. 00:49:761 (6,7,1) - 类似
  7. 00:52:650 - 加个音效比较好，要不然听着不跟鼓会比较怪
[Insane]
  1. 00:24:094 (4) - 不太舒服，我仔细听了下原曲应该也没明显声音
  2. 00:31:094 (2,3,4,5) - 稍微远点较好
  3. 01:35:316 (4,1,2,3) - 视觉ds有点近了
GL
Nailim
Nailim
[Normal]
  1. 01:49:983 - some object belongs here, since other meassures of the same rhythm have them places as well
  2. 01:53:316 (5) - placed to no sound whatsoever, 01:50:650 (1,2,3,4) - should be arranged in a square instead of a pentagon. the only beat that stands out is 01:53:761 -
[Hard]
  1. 00:09:094 - the guitar starts here, so 00:09:316 (1) - would belong here instead of a circle. You seem to emphasize the guitar (as seen on 00:07:539 (1,2,3,4) - )
  2. 00:12:650 - same deal as above
  3. 00:16:205 - same deal as above
  4. 01:28:872 (5) - i think letting this flow straight down would emphasize the next NC a lot better, maybe try something like this ( http://i.imgur.com/kJ46uRt.png )
  5. 01:41:538 (5) - same as first problem
  6. 01:45:094 (5) - same as above
  7. 01:48:650 (5) - same as above
[Insane]
  1. 00:48:427 (1,3,4,5) - due to stacking, this stacks ugly into the sliderend, consider manually stacking them/moving them appart
  2. 01:27:983 (3,3,4) - same stacking issue
  3. 01:45:094 (8,9,1) - i would space this further appart from 01:44:872 (7) - to make it space out more and more between objects. If applied, also move 01:45:761 (2) - so that the spacing from 01:45:316 (1,2) - and 01:45:761 (2,3) - stays roughly the same
  4. 01:47:761 (3,4,5,8,9,1) - this tripplet-overlap is not very nice. you could ctrl+g 01:47:539 (2,6) - and then proceed to move 01:48:650 (8,9,1) - onto 01:47:539 (2) -
cool version of this song
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
看了好幾遍好像沒什麼問題，只有Hard diff有一些建議。

[Pata-Mon's Hard]

00:06:872 (1) - 欸這個note跟轉盤相距只有半拍，但Hard規定是要隔一拍呢這要改掉。
01:21:761 (4) - 沒必要的開頭finish，因為背景音聽起來沒什麼重音，這樣連續加了感覺有點吵。
01:47:094 (1) - 這邊反而忘了finish?
Shad0w1and
1,586 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
Shad0w1and
同志们开始改模啦，我搬家期间估计要咕咕到8月去了
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
@薰衣草 unrank改了 timing那里其实我也觉得按说应该加红线，但1/3正好是准的所以也无所谓吧，看虾抖

Ellyu wrote:

[巴达兽的硬]
00:06:872 (1) - 这个……干脆别clickable吧，音很轻啊，而且rc规定要空一拍 改了
00:46:205 (3,1) - 建议搞个overlap，目前这样间距太大了 这段类似地方都有个小跳，滑条后的这种很好打没事
01:05:761 (5,6,1) - 都是二分之一的空拍间距差别太大了，知道你想强调，但是还是过分了。把56间距加大点这个问题不大 不会读错
01:05:316 (3,4,5) - 要么全图多放点连打，要么不放，就只有一个太难受人了 好
01:54:872 (1) - 这个nc没必要？ 给一下吧，类似于变速
@1112 这个隔了比较多没事 现在这样比较好看
@Nailim all you mentioned is at the bar line, which need to emphasis more; about 01:28:872 (5) - I think ds would be to big in your suggestion so I wanna keep.
@船业 第二点那里我觉得01:20:427 - 01:21:094 - 01:21:761 - 这三处一起加finish很自然，可以强调下半段kiai处的过度，所以keep；其他都改了

thanks for mod!

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TitleUnicode:届かない恋
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ArtistUnicode:上原れな
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Shad0w1and
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Shad0w1and

Lavender wrote:

a

[Insane]
  1. 00:14:205 (6) - 大概可以3/4
  2. 00:37:094 (1,2,3) - 为了这vocal好像不太合适
没啥好说的，不会1/2跳爆
先这样，vocal那里再看看

Ellyu wrote:

总算可找到了
[就算被钉在棺材里，我也要用腐朽的声音喊出]
怕他的gd音效是默认？？？
tags请把gder名字加上

[疯]

00:23:983 (3,4,5) - 这个三连改成红线起吧，白线总觉得好怪，手感不好，而且这里00:23:539 (1,2,3,4,5) - 跟这里00:19:983 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 音乐节奏是相同的。 :arrow: 听吉他
00:26:650 (5) - 这个没stack好，应该是调sr时没改过来
00:51:316 (1,2,3) - 慢歌这样叠感觉有点糊，干脆不overlap吧
01:06:205 (1,2) - 要不把1延长到蓝线上，然后这样叠，因为目前这样打击感对我而言有些怪。https://puu.sh/vb3Fe/a6fb36d0ce.png
01:16:872 (1,5) - 可以搞个blanket
01:55:761 (2) - 感觉可以nc :arrow: 差不多

Suzuki_1112 wrote:

/吓
m4m:https://osu.ppy.sh/s/631705 or https://osu.ppy.sh/s/612033 谢谢

Insane

  1. 00:25:316 (1,2) - 滑条尾stack一下
  2. 00:32:427 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:30:650 (1,2) - 间距离远一点？
  4. 00:57:761 (2,1) - 滑条reverse好像遮住了 :arrow: 没有
  5. 01:12:872 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - 感觉这堆滑条有点乱了
  6. 01:27:094 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
嗯就这样了（（懒癌症晚期水摸越来越水，各位大神加油飞图啊
顺便对不起占了这么久才摸，红豆泥

Pata-Mon wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:24:094 (4) - 不太舒服，我仔细听了下原曲应该也没明显声音 :arrow: 舒服，做强调重音用
  2. 00:31:094 (2,3,4,5) - 稍微远点较好 :arrow: 三连强调够了
  3. 01:35:316 (4,1,2,3) - 视觉ds有点近了
GL

Nailim wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:48:427 (1,3,4,5) - due to stacking, this stacks ugly into the sliderend, consider manually stacking them/moving them appart :arrow: does not matter
  2. 01:27:983 (3,3,4) - same stacking issue
  3. 01:45:094 (8,9,1) - i would space this further appart from 01:44:872 (7) - to make it space out more and more between objects. If applied, also move 01:45:761 (2) - so that the spacing from 01:45:316 (1,2) - and 01:45:761 (2,3) - stays roughly the same :arrow: triplets will emphasis enough xc
  4. 01:47:761 (3,4,5,8,9,1) - this tripplet-overlap is not very nice. you could ctrl+g 01:47:539 (2,6) - and then proceed to move 01:48:650 (8,9,1) - onto 01:47:539 (2) - :arrow: that is intentional thou
cool version of this song
Shad0w1and
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Topic Starter
Shad0w1and
@Flask 第一个转盘recover要死，记得改
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Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,466 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask 
osu file format v14

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Title:Todokanai Koi
TitleUnicode:届かない恋
Artist:Rena Uehara
ArtistUnicode:上原れな
Creator:Shad0w1and
Version:Flask's Normal
Source:WHITE ALBUM2
Tags:Leaf introductory closing chapter coda galgame Flask Pata-Mon
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smallboat
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Joined January 2010
smallboat
Looks fine so give it Bubbled
Nao Tomori
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2014
Nao Tomori
[insane]
add edgy diffname !!

00:00:650 - start spinner here imo

00:08:650 (6,7) - slider cuz melody is nice in all cases of this

00:16:427 (1,2) - same ctrl g etc.

00:25:316 (1,2) - check ur pixel stacks

00:33:761 (5,1) - u can make the unstack more obvious so ppl don't play it as 1/4 gap

00:35:539 (6,7,1) - nc on 6 instead, like at 00:37:094 (1) -

01:01:539 (3,1) - make it 1/2 slider, click on 1 ruins the vocal hold

01:30:650 (4,5,6,1) - too big of a jump

01:44:650 (6,7) - same about melody, dont put random fullscreen jumps on the background drum track plz

[hard]
start spinner at00:00:650 -

00:12:650 (5,1) - ctrl g better for melody imo

00:15:539 (3,4) - same

01:20:427 (1,3) - would be nice to use blanket concept here somehow
[normal]
00:35:983 (1,2,3) - looks confusing, removing overlap is easier i think

01:22:205 (1,2) - same, too much overlap i think

zz topdiff is so overdone.. why
Shad0w1and
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Shad0w1and

Naotoshi wrote:

[insane]
add edgy diffname !!

00:00:650 - start spinner here imo :arrow: its unsnapped anyways, I think it does not matter

00:08:650 (6,7) - slider cuz melody is nice in all cases of this :arrow: I prefer the current

00:16:427 (1,2) - same ctrl g etc. :arrow: I prefer the current

00:25:316 (1,2) - check ur pixel stacks

00:33:761 (5,1) - u can make the unstack more obvious so ppl don't play it as 1/4 gap :arrow: ?why people wont read it as a 1/4 anyways, and a pause gives nice feeling for new section

00:35:539 (6,7,1) - nc on 6 instead, like at 00:37:094 (1) - :arrow: does not feel like that way

01:01:539 (3,1) - make it 1/2 slider, click on 1 ruins the vocal hold :arrow: nice

01:30:650 (4,5,6,1) - too big of a jump :arrow: not really? played through it many times

01:44:650 (6,7) - same about melody, dont put random fullscreen jumps on the background drum track plz :arrow: reduced
fixed for flask as well
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Pata-Mon
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@Naotoshi
about spinner: I see the other 2 diffs start at 00:00:428 - too, but you only suggest me to change it... hmm let @Shad0w1and decide it I think. If it need to be changed, then every diff need to be changed.

00:12:650 (5,1) - 00:15:539 (3,4) - in this part, I want to emphasis every sound at bar line too, such as 00:09:316 - 01:41:761 - 01:45:316 - I use the same rhythm so I want to keep.

01:20:427 (1,3) - I'm satisfied the pattern now (01:21:094 (3,4,1) - I think it's fine too) so I wanna keep.

Thanks for mod!
smallboat
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smallboat
Reb it by mapper request.
jonathanlfj
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jonathanlfj
白学现场
Isn't artist Uehara Rena (switch first and last name)

[Normal]
00:29:539 (2,3,4) - I know when I was a newbie I had troubles hitting straight line patterns, so its best if you had some sort of direction change here
01:07:983 (2) - NC
01:55:761 (1) - people are gonna screw up here anyways, removing the NC actually makes it easier to read

[Hard]
AR7, gap is too big from Normal (tbh at this bpm I'd go with 6.5 but 7 is fine too)

[明明是我先的]
00:24:872 (2) - this beat is very strong, I would have expected a bigger jump tbh
00:51:761 (3,1) - distance change here is a bit hard to hit, I'd increase 00:51:316 (1,2,3) spacing to aid with flow
01:01:539 (3,4) - I misread this as 1/4, its better if you used a NC or a bigger spacing here
01:39:316 (5) - I'd add a NC here to emphasize the vocal switch and direction switch of the sliders
Pata-Mon
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Pata-Mon
好啊，改成6.5吧，其实我就是喜欢低的只是现在用那么低反而更容易被说（
@虾抖 帮我改成ar6.5，od5.5，hp4.5，然后堆叠系数改成4吧
谢谢~
Shad0w1and
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Topic Starter
Shad0w1and

jonathanlfj wrote:

白学现场
Isn't artist Uehara Rena (switch first and last name)
[Normal]
00:29:539 (2,3,4) - I know when I was a newbie I had troubles hitting straight line patterns, so its best if you had some sort of direction change here
01:07:983 (2) - NC
01:55:761 (1) - people are gonna screw up here anyways, removing the NC actually makes it easier to read

[明明是我先的]
00:24:872 (2) - this beat is very strong, I would have expected a bigger jump tbh :arrow: 00:24:427 (1,2) - the flow cutting from anti-clockwise to clockwise serve as a strong emphasis to the music. Its my mapping theory so xc
00:51:761 (3,1) - distance change here is a bit hard to hit, I'd increase 00:51:316 (1,2,3) spacing to aid with flow
01:01:539 (3,4) - I misread this as 1/4, its better if you used a NC or a bigger spacing here
01:39:316 (5) - I'd add a NC here to emphasize the vocal switch and direction switch of the sliders
updated patamon's diff as well.
Thanks a ton.
meta 是对的，现在都反着来，因为官英
jonathanlfj
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jonathanlfj
guess im out of the loop for RC changes xD
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