• 00:04:393 (7) - Since the beginning is a very quiet part, I don't think this note is necessary at all, remove it.
you're right,that note is too quiet for add a note.• From 01:08:208 to 01:17:919 - Is this stream completely necessary? I would suggest cutting it by removing the rest of the stream after this note : 01:10:636 (201) - and then remap the this part. I think it is important in order to highlight these parts with a finisher note :
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oops,background music goes 1/4,so long pattern would be better.• 02:03:353 (9) - Change this note to a
d, it sounds lower than the following notes and similar to 02:03:700 (13)
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The same suggestion applies to 00:45:665 (9) - but I previously missed it)
i was planning this but there is a finisher at the end of the pattern.if i change it as dkkkD,it might be too hard.• 02:06:474 (31) - You could consider changing this note to a
k to highlight the electric guitar.
oops,vocal sound goes the same tone.so keep :c○ 02:07:861 (42) - Change to
k to highlight the guitar and the vocals
there is a low pitch sound and vocal goes same note: 02:07:688 (41) - change it to a
d in order to emphasize 02:07:861 (42)
sounds good,changed• 02:11:936 - Add a
d and change 02:12:023 (73) - to a
k to follow the guitar.
i did test it,but 5plet isn't fit here imo• 02:23:122 (156) - Change to a
k to emphasize the cymbal sound.
Done and changed next note as kat,too• From 02:25:896 to 02:35:607 - The exact same suggestion than previously, if you decided to change that part the apply the exact same changes for that part.
I explained it,1/4 bgm sounds o:• 02:38:208 - I don't think that this break is necessary, in the first kiai time there was no such break at the beginning of it.
Oops,I couldn't realize that inconsistent thing.But I think this break is necessary,I don't know why.Just sounds better After I wrote this,I did review on here.And your suggestion does make more sense.Fixed• From 02:59:191 to 03:21:387 - You might consider remapping this part in order to follow the melody, this part just looks dull and repetitive as it is to me.
Yes,I am going to fix it• 03:23:295 (513) - Change to
k? It sound similar to 03:23:815 (518) -
03:23:815 (519) - changed don instead○ Same suggestion with 03:28:844 (556) -
These aren't same part,similar parts.03:29:451 - Added kat because i couldn't hear this sound while i'm mapping this• 04:04:394 (816) - I think you forgot to put a finisher on that note :3
I thought these are similar parts,but there is drum sound.Fixed • 04:05:780 - This stream could be broke down into severall pieces.
I think that only the non-singing "La la la" parts : 04:05:780 to 04:08:555 - & 04:11:329 to 04:13:757 - & 04:16:879 to 04:19:306 - & 04:22:428 to 04:26:590 - Should be mapped with long streams. Between those part I recommend a regular mapping style.
I remapped here • 04:49:827 (9) - Change to
d if you previously applied the suggestion.
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From 04:50:173 to the end of the song I just love how you mapped this part ~ Thanks :3