Charles445 wrote:

Easy

1. 01:36:126 - Start mapping again here. The break has overstayed its welcome. done
2. 02:08:968 (1) - This comes much too soon after the spinner. it's 2/1, so I think it's long enough...
3. 02:11:494 (1,2,3,4,1) - This is overkill for the easiest difficulty. Make it easier. it's all sliders, so I think it's not so hard.. in fact, I think the next part is harder cause it's a more complicated rhythm

Leyko's Normal

1. 02:05:178 (5) - This should repeat on 1/3, not 1/4
2. 02:18:441 - Add circle on top of that blue slider.
3. 03:08:650 - Slightly unsnapped, move it around in the timeline to fix.
4. 03:10:545 - Slightly unsnapped, move it around in the timeline to fix.
5. 03:11:492 - Slightly unsnapped, move it around in the timeline to fix.
6. 03:11:650 - Slightly unsnapped, move it around in the timeline to fix.
7. 03:11:808 - Slightly unsnapped, move it around in the timeline to fix.
8. 03:13:071 - Slightly unsnapped, move it around in the timeline to fix.

Hard

1. 02:05:178 (1,2,3) - Turn these into a repeat slider. The reason these should be changed is that the map mostly focuses on 1/1 beats, 1/2 beats, and 1/4 beats. This is suddenly 1/3, which is extremely unexpected. IMO a repeat slider doesn't fit cause it's more like 3 separate beats. also, I think the spacing indicates that it's 1/3, so I think it's not too confusing...
2. 02:35:494 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Consider flipping these horizontally. The reason for that is I think most players spin counterclockwise, and having them go along those objects in a counterclockwise direction will set them up for the spinner. (I play clockwise, so I prefer them as they are now, but I think most would like it flipped.) don't really think it's a big deal, but changed anyway
3. 03:16:862 (3) - Make this repeat on 1/3, not 1/4 fixed

Lunatic

1. 00:33:757 (1,1,1) - These are pretty overkill jumps. Also the new combo spam can mess up the HP drain. I want to emphasize this part.. also, about the HP drain, I discussed it with Sakura and mm201 some months ago and they said it should be fine.
2. 01:21:599 (4,5,6) - Turn these into a repeat slider. The reason these should be changed is that the map mostly focuses on 1/1 beats, 1/2 beats, and 1/4 beats. This is suddenly 3/4, which is extremely unexpected. If you remember while playtesting this I hit this extremely early. IMO, a repeat slider doesn't fit here cause it's 3 separate beats, so I did NatsumeRin's suggestion instead.. it should make it easier to read cause players will see the stack
3. 01:23:494 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This part is particularly jagged and frustrating to play. I recommend pointing the combos towards the next so it flows a little more. changed pattern
4. 01:38:494 (4,1,2) - Noticeable spacing inconsistency. fixed
5. 02:05:178 (3,4,5) - Like before, players are not expecting 1/3 in the map. Putting this in a repeat slider would be more readable. IMO it follows the song and makes a fun jump, and flows nicely with the 0.5 slider after it, so no change
6. 02:10:389 (7,8,9,1) - A stream right after an antijump can be confusing. IMO, it's a stack and the previous sliders can point out the correct rhythm, so no change
7. 02:51:915 (1) - I think this should be replaced with circles and sliders instead. there's a guitar in the BG that has a long hold note here, so I put a spinner here to build up to the next part

I can't rank immediately after these changes, too many modifications. Get another bubble and call me back.

1. 03:17:178 - The map should end in this place, the current place is so awkward cause it's still continue to the rest of the music
2. The taiko diff is an Oni level so rename it to zsr123's Taiko Oni. Also I would like for the Taiko diff to have more mod, cause it barely have some mod from what I can see. If you can please ask other taiko modder (lepidon, wmf, arken, etc) to take a look at this cause Oni level diff need to be looked at expert modder. It's ok if you don't feel like searching for more taiko mod, but please, please get them to at least comment on it

• This is more of a Normal than an Easy, not to mention that 02:11:494 (1,2,3,4,1) is quite a jump in the difficulty (cause it's the only objects that are 1/2 beats apart, compared then the other which have at least 1/1 beat gap). Well I can't blame you cause the music itself is quite complex, still Normal is more appropriate here

1. 00:27:283 (2) - This slider start with the same with the guitar so it's better to end it it together which is on 00:27:915, this place is also in the down beat which gives a better effect for the slider end
2. 02:05:810 - Hmm I suggest to max the volume for this soft hitsample. IMO the soft hitsound still a bit weak, it's probably just me though

1. 00:52:547 (3) - Try to continue the zigzag jump from the previous objects, it'll make the overall pattern to flow better
   
   Example

   
2. 02:05:810 - Same as in Easy
3. 03:03:441 (2,3,4) - Hmm maybe increase the spacing for these jumps? imo they are too small (for me that is), I prefer 1.4x

1. 00:33:757 (1,1,1) - I agree with Charles about this. The jump is quite big, it's playable but tedious. And the NC spam is more of a messy rather than an emphasis for a jump
2. 01:21:599 (4,5,6) - These is very unexpected. This caught me of guard because this is the first beat that's on 3/4, not only that, the (6) always makes hesitate to hit this as you only need (5) to follow the guitar. Just like Charles said replacing them with slider will give more time to player to react. I suggest this pattern below
   
3. 01:48:757 (1,2,3,1) - Yummy~ too bad 01:50:494 (3,4) is messy if you look it up very carefully =P
4. 02:05:389 (4,5) - The 1/3 is hard to read, but somehow I can hit it just fine, probably because I've already similar with the music. Still, I suggest to change them into sliders to make them less surprising

Sallad4ever wrote:

Sorry for the late reply that's fine owo

[General]

1. 03:17:178 - The map should end in this place, the current place is so awkward cause it's still continue to the rest of the music extended the spinner to 03:19:704 to follow the guitar, it's probably a better ending time than 03:18:441
2. The taiko diff is an Oni level so rename it to zsr123's Taiko Oni. Also I would like for the Taiko diff to have more mod, cause it barely have some mod from what I can see. If you can please ask other taiko modder (lepidon, wmf, arken, etc) to take a look at this cause Oni level diff need to be looked at expert modder. It's ok if you don't feel like searching for more taiko mod, but please, please get them to at least comment on it hm, I see a lot of diffs with just "Taiko" in the name so I think it should be ok..

[Easy]

• This is more of a Normal than an Easy, not to mention that 02:11:494 (1,2,3,4,1) is quite a jump in the difficulty (cause it's the only objects that are 1/2 beats apart, compared then the other which have at least 1/1 beat gap). Well I can't blame you cause the music itself is quite complex, still Normal is more appropriate here I really think it should be OK.. it's mostly 2/1 with some 1/1 parts (and as you said that's the only 1/2 part and it's sliders..)

1. 00:27:283 (2) - This slider start with the same with the guitar so it's better to end it it together which is on 00:27:915, this place is also in the down beat which gives a better effect for the slider end IMO the rhythm goes more like 4 notes with decreasing pitch and then the 5th note is the start of the new part, so I prefer to end it here
2. 02:05:810 - Hmm I suggest to max the volume for this soft hitsample. IMO the soft hitsound still a bit weak, it's probably just me though sure

[Hard]

1. 00:52:547 (3) - Try to continue the zigzag jump from the previous objects, it'll make the overall pattern to flow better sure
   
   Example

   
2. 02:05:810 - Same as in Easy done
3. 03:03:441 (2,3,4) - Hmm maybe increase the spacing for these jumps? imo they are too small (for me that is), I prefer 1.4x hm, keep in mind it is only hard diff, so I'd rather not put too big jumps ><

[Insane]

1. 00:33:757 (1,1,1) - I agree with Charles about this. The jump is quite big, it's playable but tedious. And the NC spam is more of a messy rather than an emphasis for a jump I think it's fine >_< I can play it just fine and I really want to keep it...
2. 01:21:599 (4,5,6) - These is very unexpected. This caught me of guard because this is the first beat that's on 3/4, not only that, the (6) always makes hesitate to hit this as you only need (5) to follow the guitar. Just like Charles said replacing them with slider will give more time to player to react. I suggest this pattern below okay, done
   
3. 01:48:757 (1,2,3,1) - Yummy~ too bad 01:50:494 (3,4) is messy if you look it up very carefully =P not sure how it's messy ._.
4. 02:05:389 (4,5) - The 1/3 is hard to read, but somehow I can hit it just fine, probably because I've already similar with the music. Still, I suggest to change them into sliders to make them less surprising IMO, I really think having separate beats plays better and makes a fun jump.. I really want to keep it

That's all from me, Good Luck
Yeah that's all, call me back if you're ready (I prefer if we can talk about this in-game though)

EDIT: The master has spoken

pieguy1372 wrote:

[General]

1. 03:17:178 - The map should end in this place, the current place is so awkward cause it's still continue to the rest of the music extended the spinner to 03:19:704 to follow the guitar, it's probably a better ending time than 03:18:441 The problem with ending it on 03:19:704 is, if you're following the guitar, the map should be continue by putting notes on 03:20:178, 03:20:652, and so on. Lowering the volume of the spinner won't work cause the guitar sound is very obvious and without any feed back from the hit object it just make the spinner more awkward. You really should end the map on 03:17:178 (just like the other 2 guest diff)

[Easy]

• This is more of a Normal than an Easy, not to mention that 02:11:494 (1,2,3,4,1) is quite a jump in the difficulty (cause it's the only objects that are 1/2 beats apart, compared then the other which have at least 1/1 beat gap). Well I can't blame you cause the music itself is quite complex, still Normal is more appropriate here I really think it should be OK.. it's mostly 2/1 with some 1/1 parts (and as you said that's the only 1/2 part and it's sliders..) I still think Normal is more appropriate diff name for this diff seeing how 02:11:494 (1,2,3,4,1) is making the diff too complex then any other part in the diff. Changing the name to Normal is the easy way to compensate for 02:11:494 (1,2,3,4,1) if you decide not to simplified it, but I'll leave it to BAT to decide so I'm not going to nag about this again

[Hard]

1. 03:03:441 (2,3,4) - Hmm maybe increase the spacing for these jumps? imo they are too small (for me that is), I prefer 1.4x hm, keep in mind it is only hard diff, so I'd rather not put too big jumps >< Umm.. actually, I suggest this to you because on 03:13:389 (1,2,3,4) you use 1.38 DS and I quite like it my self as it's not too Hard and very challenging. Of course it's your choice

[Insane]

1. 00:33:757 (1,1,1) - I agree with Charles about this. The jump is quite big, it's playable but tedious. And the NC spam is more of a messy rather than an emphasis for a jump I think it's fine >_< I can play it just fine and I really want to keep it...At least remove the NC spam, no matter how many time I play the diff, the NC spam strike me as a rather bad executed idea rather then an attempt to emphasize the jump
2. 01:48:757 (1,2,3,1) - Yummy~ too bad 01:50:494 (3,4) is messy if you look it up very carefully =P not sure how it's messy ._. I mean the stack, but it's not very obvious because of the hit burst so don't worry about it

Sallad4ever wrote:

pieguy1372 wrote:

[General]

1. 03:17:178 - The problem with ending it on 03:19:704 is, if you're following the guitar, the map should be continue by putting notes on 03:20:178, 03:20:652, and so on. Lowering the volume of the spinner won't work cause the guitar sound is very obvious and without any feed back from the hit object it just make the spinner more awkward. You really should end the map on 03:17:178 (just like the other 2 guest diff) listen carefully, there's 2 guitars there the one the spinner follows continues the previous rhythm and fades out. it's just like 02:06:520 (1) on Lunatic.. and I'd rather end the map with a spinner, but the main rhythm doesn't end at 03:17:178, so I put a spinner here.. if you really want I can remove the spinner, but I'd rather end the map here if it's OK ...

[Easy]

• I still think Normal is more appropriate diff name for this diff seeing how 02:11:494 (1,2,3,4,1) is making the diff too complex then any other part in the diff. Changing the name to Normal is the easy way to compensate for 02:11:494 (1,2,3,4,1) if you decide not to simplified it, but I'll leave it to BAT to decide so I'm not going to nag about this again okay, changed

[Hard]

1. 03:03:441 (2,3,4) - Umm.. actually, I suggest this to you because on 03:13:389 (1,2,3,4) you use 1.38 DS and I quite like it my self as it's not too Hard and very challenging. Of course it's your choice hm, this one is a more complex formation, so I'd rather use a bit lower DS on this one.

[Insane]

1. 00:33:757 (1,1,1) - At least remove the NC spam, no matter how many time I play the diff, the NC spam strike me as a rather bad executed idea rather then an attempt to emphasize the jump ><, I'd really like to keep it if it's OK...
2. 01:48:757 (1,2,3,1) - I mean the stack, but it's not very obvious because of the hit burst so don't worry about it fixed...I think..

I still not satisfied with your reason on the end of the map issue, so I'll hold the bubble for now