senaya wrote:

Hello.
Hi~
[General]
Offset: 1067 feels better
00:59:230 - useless timesection?
01:53:776 - ^
all fixed thanks for offset
[Relax~]
Needs more hitsounds during first minute of the song, at least.
00:34:248 (2,3,4) - compare this and 01:56:976 (1,2,3). notice spacing difference? but i'd personally stack all three.
02:22:867 - useless timesection?
all fixed
[Harmony~]
Combo color #3 and #4 is the same red one: that sucks, remove or change one of them. I believe they are the default colours...
00:01:049 (1) - why is it here? remove if following lyrics or add another note 1/4 before the 1st one, if following music. it fits quite well
00:08:339 (6,1) - unexpected jump here not really
00:14:930 (4) - maybe remove whistle? mm... no
01:04:476 (1) - remove nc? you didn't use it 01:00:839 (5) before.. fixed
02:43:112 (5) - i'd changed this to a slider that ends at 02:43:339 instead it's good like this

Actually, nice use of combo colors when changing spacing in most parts of the song thank you so much for mod

Raging Bull wrote:

Hi. (Again :3)
Hello~
General:
Ehh.. Why is there different combo colors for Relax and Harmony? Make them the same color? I would pick Relax's colors because it has more colorful colors :L oh.. I think I actually setted them to default... weird how you saw different colours.
Hitsoundssss. Add some soft whistles. I like those sounds.

Easy:
00:09:703 (3,4) - Possibly space these? Because you stacked 1/2 notes earlier, this could trick beginners. i think with that AR it's fine
00:11:521 (3,4) - ^ ^
00:32:430 (5,6,2,3) - Orz two different type of stacks quite fast. I would stack 5,6 and space out 2,3,4. ok
01:14:021 (1) - End spinner at 01:16:521 so the next note doesn't come too fast after the spinner. done
01:24:248 (5) - I think it would be nice if you don't stack this. ok
02:37:657 (1) - Shorten to 02:40:157. Same reason as the one above...the one above. done
02:53:794 (1) - Delete 2 then move this slider to the big white tick. Then add a note afterwards. I just thought 3 short sliders could be confusing. Although it's up to you. I think this is ok


Hard:
Seems alright. Only thing I can complain about (or lack of) is the gap. There's no normal It jumps for a easy song to some jumpy song. I suppose you could lower HP tick rate by 1 so some beginners who want a challenge won't fail so easy.
01:27:657 (4) - Clap no
01:34:930 (2) - Clap ok
02:43:112 (5) - Ehh. Not sure about clap. Remove it. i like it
02:51:294 (3) - Clap ok
02:54:703 (5) - Clap on reverse arrow. ok
02:58:339 (3) - Clap on slider end no

Lol sounds like hitsound mod. anything's good

spboxer3 wrote:

[Relax~]
02:31:976 (3) - why not straight
it is straight
[Harmony~]
00:35:385 (2,3) - stack ok
00:40:612 (6) - left 1 grid (size 3)? ok thx
00:54:248 (6,7) - spacing ? fine
02:04:703 (1,2,3,4) - let it stack? I tried.. it's hard
02:13:567 (2,3) - i think it's not good idea because it can make more confused for player ok

other: I think you may use other color blue and green is not fit IMO

star~

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

HiHi~~
HI~
General
- no any TAG?
nope
Relax~
- i suggest, delete the "~" on your difficulty title O.O the tilda's fine
00:13:339 (1) - up+right 1 grid
00:48:794 (2) - make it more beautiful, and this style' repeating slider cant see clearly for [Normal players].
01:24:021 (4) - right 4 grid?
01:29:703 (2,3,4) - this note style like "HARD" style, change it to simple. this is fine i think
01:54:703 (3) - again, make it more beautiful, and this style' repeating slider cant see clearly for [Normal players].
01:57:430 (3) - overlap it to previous circle. no
01:59:248 (1) - this slider start at 01:59:021? no
02:42:885 (4) - again, make it more beautiful, and this style' repeating slider cant see clearly for [Normal players].
02:53:339 (1,2,3) - this note style like "HARD" style, change it to simple. this is fine i think
everything else fixed
Harmony~
- same as Relax, delete the "~" on your difficulty title.
00:30:612 (3) - make it more beautiful
00:47:885 (6) - Looks a bit strange of this slider
01:01:748 (1) - make it more beautiful
01:06:521 (6) - ^
01:12:885 (5) - delete this repeat. and next spinner start at 01:13:794. no
01:19:021 (6,7) - delete this two note. and add a slider at 01:19:021 to 01:19:479, then do a one repeat. I changed this
01:48:112 (6) - up 1 grid
02:01:067 (3) - right 3 grid
02:14:021 (3) - left 1 grid
Everything else fixed~
----
cute song + Nice map
加油~!! thank yoU~~

Wiinter wrote:

Oh hey ~
hi~!
General
No custom combo colours? ;;~
please suggest values to me I'm bad with colours
[Relax~]
01:24:703 (1,2,3) - hmm.. the pause between 2 and 3 sounds a bit bad imo >_< I suggest you to map something there - I'd make something like this http://puu.sh/3Ce9 -
01:26:976 (1,2,3) - same here..
Ohwell.. I was going to suggest some stuff like starting some sliders 1/2 earlier, but since I noticed all of them were starting on the white ticks >_< (but if you wanna know them, just let me know)
oh... I know what you mean. but I thought about doing that while mapping but then it's the easy diff so I figured I'd drop the idea.
.. and that's all D: nothing to complain about on [Harmony~]. Starr'd

justnobody wrote:

[Harmony~]
is this 4.80 stars?! i thought it's somewhat 4.99
this diff becomes crazy after the first kiai starts....
01:20:157 (1,2,3,4) - this jump looks senseless imo.
01:25:385 (x) - add note?
01:33:794 (1,2,3,4) - ^^
02:08:339 (1,2,3,4,5) - don't you think this is crazy?
02:35:612 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^
02:42:657 (4,5) - sounds strange.
02:49:930 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - jump again...
I guess this diff is more of a jumpy diff compared to the easy one. so nothing changed sorry.
[Relax~]
00:01:067 (1) - sounds strange.
this diff is fine though.
same here
+star.

kanpakyin wrote:

Whee~ hi~~
As per your request:
Mostly are suggestion only,you don't need to follow them if you disagree.

[General]

1. You need to do a full submit!Because you have a "Test" diff after import.And different title. oops.. sorry
   
2. Probably set audio lead in to 1000? I think it's ok
3. Timing: I got offset:1075 (+8).Please check it and resnap all the notes if you change it.Please check the mod before check the timing!

I actually got more 100s with 1075, so I think 1067 is fine.

[Relax~]

1. 00:05:612 (3) - Please change a position of this!The reverse is hidden by (1)'s skin element!It probably rankable for this but I recommend you avoid this in "Easy/Normal" diff.
   
2. 00:34:248 (2,3,4) - I suggest you use a slider to instead of notes.Just follow the previous slider.Please fix the spacing problem at 00:35:385 (1) - if you don't change it!
3. 00:50:157 (3) - rhythm suggestion here:Move this slider to 00:49:930 - and stop at 00:50:612 - .It should be fit the music after fix this.
4. 01:25:612,01:27:430 - Add a note here and there to consistent the beat you place in Kiai Time.
5. 01:57:430 (3) - Spacing!Please don't make any spacing in low difficulty like easy or normal.Just follow the distance snap!
6. 02:59:248 (5) - rhythm suggestion here:Remove two reverse then add a spinner at 03:01:294 - and stop at 03:02:885 -

all fixed~

[Harmony~]

1. 00:08:112 (5,6,7) - I just feel little bit awkward during gameplay!I guess unstack can solve my problem lol my opinion only.
2. 00:31:521 - How about add a note here?It would be great if you add it because here has a drum sound.However you need to adjust the spacing if you don't want to jump here.
3. 01:05:385 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - No please!Here is inappropriate for a jump and it's really sudden because you didn't make a jump previous with same melodies. it fits the music, she's singing 2 repeating notes and that fits that part imo
4. 01:20:157 (1,2,3,4) - [Nazi]Do you make a square here?If yes,please make it more regular!
5. 01:55:044 (6) - Probably unstack this?Sounds better in my eyes! haha.. you mean looks better??
6. 02:08:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This jump pattern is really ugly imo,If you really want to keep these jump,I would suggest you to use some slider instead of note.It may sounds better for me.
7. 02:37:430 (1) - For consistent the previous part,please add a circle here then move this spinner to 02:37:657 - and stop at 02:40:612 - !
8. 02:41:066 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing,please use distance snap and close the grid snap to fix them.
9. 02:55:612 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't know why you put so many jump at the end D: It's obvious don't fit the music and the whole difficulty,I mean it's difficult then overall. well if you play through the difficulty, it's actually quite jumpy. So I would say the end is fine.

everything else fixed~
That's it!

Wiinter wrote:

hi~!
hmm.. maybe this ones? http://puu.sh/3LqF
If you like them.. here's the code:

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,150,100
Combo2 : 251,125,163
Combo3 : 174,222,73

(In case you don't know how to add them, ask me that I explain you how to do it )

EDIT: aand in case you want some other suggestion, catch me online so we can talk about it~

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi, here's my mod
hihi~
Song's Info;
- Source >> Album doesn't go on source put it on tags instead

General;
- The diff names look kinda silly with the "~" but whatever
fixed
Relax;
- 00:42:885 (2,3) >> Delete (3), extend (2) by 2 ticks this is fine as the way it is
- 01:50:385 (1,2,3,4) >> Might be a bit too hard for the easiest diff hope this fixes it
- 01:59:021 >> The slider sounds better if you start it here and end it at 01:59:703 then add a note at 02:00:157 fixed
- 02:13:567 >> Slider sounds better if you start it here fix
- 02:53:339 >> Do this instead ? sure fixed

- 02:59:248 >> Flip horizontally and move to the right side of (4) ? Looks better
- Nice, but the spacing is kinda inconsistent, I mean at parts some notes are on red ticks then white ticks then red white red red white or something like that, and that makes the spacing different, and blah, maybe you get what I wrote I really don't know how to explain ._.
LOL... yea but I can't help it.. the spacing is consistent, it's just the rhythm she sings in is like that. so :>

Harmony;
- 00:31:748 >> Shorten by 1 tick
- 00:35:385 >> ^
- 00:49:930 >> ^
- 00:59:248 >> Why the slowdown ? ): Feels the same to me as the whole song
- 01:26:294 >> Shorten by 1 tick
- 01:55:044 >> Unstack
- 01:55:385 >> Shorten by 1 tick
- 01:57:885 >> ^
- 01:59:021 >> ^
- 02:04:703 (1,2,3,4) >> The end of all these aren't stacked perfectly ): yea I realized... but I really dont' know the trick to do it... T__T
- 02:09:930 >> Shorten by 1 tick
- 02:13:567 >> ^
- 02:22:867 >> Slowdown again ? ):
- 02:42:657 >> Shorten by 1 tick
- I guess is fine, but I don't know ;/
all the shorten by 1 tick you metioned or extend by 1 tick is to make the map feel skippy. if you try to pLay it you'll understand as for the slow down, I don't know it just feels like those bridges needed a 0.75x slow down because it sounds like it could use some. thanks for modding ~
* Star ~

Nymph_ wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from: Kanon's mod queue~
hihi Nymph~
General:
Fine~

Relax:
For this diff seems more like a Normal than a Easy, I suggest AR+2. Ok I did AR+1

00:48:794 (2,3) - 1.5 spacing here, is it on purpose? sorry fixed
01:14:021 (1) - suggest this spinner stops at 01:16:976 to fit the vocal fixed
01:56:976 (1,2,3) - like these I am totally Okay with this, but not sure if it confused new players fixed
02:37:657 (1) - suggest this spinner stops at 02:40:612 to fit the vocal fixed



Harmony:
Wow this is really a jumping diff.. yea.. :>
Not quite confident to mod a diff like this, so here are just some suggestions:

As it jumps of the most, then probably don't use too much stacking notes?
For example:
00:12:885 (5,6,7) -
00:15:157 (5,6,7,8,9) -
seems not very beautiful and a little too crowed for me, maybe use some different spacing? I'm probably not going to change this because.. well there's not many moving streams in this so yea..

00:42:885 (4) - bad flow. Change the direction of this slider? It seems to be more comfortable. fixed

00:44:703 (1) - some spacing like this....Imo I think this is too hard for a song like this, but just personal opinion...I think spacing under 2.4 is fine....(Well Ok, I like easy maps..... mmm.. ok well after the previous change of slider direction hopefully this jump is easier because it fits the direction you jump to now

Others seems fine for me...cause not hard to Fc... so no more opinions, sorry

Then good luck=v= yayay thank you ~ !

kurohana wrote:

[Relax]
nothing to say ^^

[Harmony]
00:35:839 (3) stack correctly under 2 fixed~

sweet song ^^

tutuhaha wrote:

HI~
Relax

This is easy diff or normal?...If this is easy you need HP2 OD2 or this is normal you maybe can use AR4?
and this diff look a little crowd I think...
00:35:157 - (X) add circle and add whistle is better....
00:39:930 - (X) ^
00:41:521 - (X) add whistle
00:42:430 - (X) add whistle
00:49:703 - (X) add circle and add whistle is better....
00:58:794 - (X) add circle and add finish then you can add whistle on 00:59:248
01:01:521 - (X) add circle and add whistle is better....
01:02:885 - (X) add finish
01:04:703 - (X) add whistle

01:50:385 - (X) crowd,no good

then 01:53:794 - 02:37:430 the same problem ^^^

you need more whistle I think, New mapper can make some law rhythm to help you finish you hitsounds,Try it
And pay attention to the Slider velocity,if this is easy,I like 1.40

Harmony
Some problem same as Relax ^^^^^^^^
But!
Why you don't use distance snap????????????????
it is best to use distance snap................
More spacing problem i think, need more work:<


but something so nice~star~ all fix except for adding circles because it will be too hard imo. Thanks for modding~!

karenying wrote:

Chata<3 I know right? omg <3
can I make a hard diff?
Yea gogogo!

modding here
all are suggestion
General
um,maybe delete .osb?
it somehow keeps coming back..

Relax
00:13:794 (2) - delete 1 repeat and add a circle better
00:41:067 (1) - like this more fit,add whistle at 00:41:521 - ,00:42:430 - ,00:43:339 -
00:48:794 (2) - Ctrl+J&stack with (4) looks more good for me
00:56:521 (2) - whistle
02:06:521 (3) - delete 1 repeat and add a circle better,add whistle at 02:07:430 -
all fix~
Harmony
00:50:612 (3) - add whistle?
00:51:066 - ^
00:52:657 (2) - ^
00:53:680 (4) - ^
00:54:248 (6) - ^
01:03:339 (5) - ^
01:05:612 (2) - ^
01:06:066 (4) - ^
01:06:521 - ^
01:06:748 - ^
01:22:657 (1) - ^
01:30:839 (3) - no overlap,ugly
02:05:157 (2,3,4) - add whistle at the head of slider
02:16:976 (4) - add whistle
02:24:476 (5) - ^
02:25:612 (2,4) - ^
02:29:248 (2,4) - ^
02:30:157 (6) - ^ the head and repeat
all fix~!
lol long hitsounds mod thank you for hitsound mod!

Kenezz wrote:

Hey o/
Kenezz's Bakamod~
hi~~
General

1. imo the soft sliderslide is needless, example: in "Harmony" from 00:59:248 (x) you don't use more this custom and does not change at all, but you choose delete it or not~
2. btw the song is cut suddenly, try not do again this, a simple fade can be fix this, http://puu.sh/4oeb

Relax

1. 00:32:885 (6) - New combo here, then..
2. 00:33:339 (1) - ... delete new combo here
3. 01:05:612 (6) - Missing hitsound~
4. 01:08:339 (3) - Change for this?
5. 01:35:612 (3) - Put whistle at the begin and at the repeat
6. 01:50:839 (3) - This note can be a bit confusing because the flow previously is different, furthermore the spacing is a bit strange, delete this? :3
7. 02:04:703 (1) - move this to 02:05:157 obviously remove this note 02:06:067 (2)
8. 02:06:521 (2) - Change this for a slider without repetition, sounds better :3
9. 02:15:612 (1) - whistle at the begin

all fix
Harmony

1. 00:34:248 (1) - remove new combo then put new combo here 00:35:385 (5) aand remove new combo here 00:36:976 (1) xD!
2. 00:46:294 (1) - this slider should be end here 00:46:521 or 00:46:748 where it ends now sounds a bit strange x:
3. 00:49:930 (1) - again ^
4. 00:51:976 (1) - Oh here, for example sounds cool, why? because you follow the voice ^^
5. 01:02:885 (4) - I Repeat but anyways is just a suggestion
6. 01:35:612 (1,3) - Whistle at the begin
7. 02:31:976 (3,1,3) - same as above ^
8. 02:59:248 (1,3) - ^

all fix~
Oh well made ^^
Starred! oh really "Due to stars being useless, they are currently being phased on. More details will follow soon. " Orz
haha anyways good luck and go go~ thanks for mod and imaginary star!

Lunatic Neko wrote:

Neko Mod Go ~

[Overall]
- There's an unused .osb File. Delete it ^-^.

[Relax]
00:35:385 (1) - How about makeing this slider something like that ~
00:49:930 (3) - Make this slider look something like that :3

01:00:839 - Add Circle?
02:04:703 (1) - Make this slider look a bit "rounder" i hope you know what i mean xD
02:10:157 (4) - ^

[Harmony]
02:01:067 (3) - Move this over (2). ^-^


I Liked this map a lot.
Good Luck with getting this Ranked :>

kiddly wrote:

All suggestions but the timing error.

[General]

• Offset: 1095. Yes yours is obviously wrong.
  The diff spread is a little...It will be cool if you can add a diff between your easy and hard.

I think your offset is too late now, so I made it 1080. :O but I'm not a timing expert so I asked for timing help. and karenying is making a hard diff in between
[Harmony]

• 00:15:640 ~ 00:30:185 - this blank in a hard diff feels boring. I strongly advise you to fill it. mm.. maybe.
  01:29:731 (4) - new combo.
  01:29:958 (1) - cancel new combo.
  01:59:049 (3) - new combo.
  02:27:231 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - feels a little wired. I know what you means but I suggest you make (5,6) & (3,4) as far as (5,6) & (7,8).
  02:34:731 (4) - new combo.

Everything fixed~

Breeze wrote:

Hi there hihi!
Red = Fix it
Blue = Think about it
Others are just suggestions

[General]

1. Diffculty spread seems not so good, If there could be a diff. between Relax and Harmony, then it will be better :/ Some jumps in Harmony diff. are really too hard as a Normal or general hard diff. IMO

yea.. originally there were only 2 difficulties so Harmony is supposed to be hard/insane. And that's why I named it Harmony. Then Karen asked for a hard diff so I fixed up Harmony diff a bit to make it easier.
[Relax]

1. 00:15:645 (4) - I feel hitsound a bit low, maybe use 60%-70% volume better?
2. 02:59:281 (5) - How about add whistle to 02:59:281, 03:00:190, 03:01:100?

Everything fixed!
[Harmony]

1. 02:01:554 (4-8), 02:54:736 (5-9) - I don't think stream fit music here, and make a general survey of this map, these unique stream looked awkwardi fixed the second one but I kept the first one becuase I some what like the first one :>
2. 02:25:418 (1-4,1) - Emm, a bit confusing here, though I can tell it...just feel a bit strange when first play
3. 02:41:706 (1) - Why snap here D:, shouldn't it snap at 02:41:668?

Oops sorry about this
Everything fixed
others are fine
this is a neat mapset
let me know when you done changes (forum or in-game PM) Thank you so much! I will msg once Karen replies to the mod