feedback
03:15:744 - kiai fits here?
[Insane]
01:16:542 (5) - nc here because it fits to the way you nc'd these back and forth jumps when they change its direction
01:48:456 (4,5) - more like this shouldn't really go back and forth. I understand the idea would fit 01:49:095 (1,2,3) - here since the vocals are repeated 01:49:095 (1,2) - (ko, ko) which is reasonably suitable, but the vocals 01:48:456 (4,5) - here are more like could belong to 01:47:818 (1,2) -
something02:07:605 (5) - nc for the spacing change? not really sure so let me just figure out lol
03:11:595 - might raise the voulume by 10 - 20%, the sliderend sounds quite muted for me
[Extra]
01:04:893 (1) - removing this will quite match to the drums and makes the rhythm more clearn that what you're putting the circles for
01:33:616 (7) - this is lame to me having a back and forth again, 01:32:659 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you built this pattern pretty cool and I actually really like it, but the extra circle kinda messed up the patterning thus this relatively looked out of place. I would map a triangle with the circle and 01:33:297 (5,6) - to create a relative pattern yet looking like your mapping?
01:47:818 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - kinda very similar idea from insane goes for this as well, i guess
03:17:658 (1,2,3) - expected an equal triangle here tbh
03:35:850 (5,6) - could be bigger? just my preference there you go
too many back and forth jumps, should be intended but it still feels TOO many lol especially when I compare with your other extra - such as rally go round
