1. The Normal is too hard to be the easiest diff of the mapset imo. Adding an Easy would be preferable.

1. 00:07:493 (1,2,3) - These overlaps looked rather weird in-game. I'm sure there's a way to place the slider so they don't overlap.
2. 00:14:093 (1) - This slider becomes abruptly silent. It sounds really bad while playing.
3. 00:17:493 (1) - This is just a suggestion, but you could add a crescendo from 00:18:693 - to 00:21:093 - and make the spinner silent at 00:21:293 - ?
4. 00:32:397 (1,2) - This sounds quite out of place to be honest, because it has lots of 1/2 very suddenly, while the map as a whole has more 1/1 and 3/2 rhythms.
5. 00:36:188 (3,4) - This sounds rather weird as well, because you were following the vocals, but the end of (1) matches nothing in the vocals.
6. 01:04:869 (3) - For consistency with what was previously mapped, add a new combo.
7. 01:07:507 (3) - Same.
8. 01:13:111 (2,5) - Do not silence notes like that. Each beat is expect to give a hitsound, and these don't, which is confusing. Also, there IS something in the song at that point, so there's no reason why you would silence them. Reducing the volume would make sense, but not that much.
9. 01:54:979 (4) - If anything, this should be a long slider, not a repeat one, to match the vocals. If you want to keep it a repeat slider, the second repeat surprised me, as you've been using only repeat sliders with one repeat, and nothing in the song made me expect a second one here.
10. 01:56:792 (1,2) - Same as 00:32:397 (1,2) -
11. 02:04:210 (1,2,3,4) - I find this beat/slider placement to be rather poor. It leaves blanks in the map which feel rather bad, and could match the lyrics better. Maybe try this timeline:
12. 02:18:715 (2,3,4) - For consistency with what was mapped before, make these all new combos.
13. 02:27:617 (5) - Silenced beats. (see above)
14. 02:29:430 (2) - The repeat sounds rather weird in this case. The lyrics don't have this beat at all, and you've been mapping to the lyrics all along so far.
15. 02:48:056 (8) - You should make this section louder... The beats are hardly hearable right now.
16. 03:09:155 (5,1) - This overlap looks really bad and could be very easily avoided.
17. 03:29:924 (4) - Change this slider's shape to avoid the overlap with 03:31:573 (3) - ?
18. 03:38:825 (6) - You should make this louder. It's hardly hearable right now.
19. 03:48:715 (7,1) - This overlap could be easily avoided. D:
20. 03:51:188 (2) - Same as 02:29:430 (2) -
21. 03:54:814 (3,4) - This overlap could be easily avoided. D:
22. Extend the last spinner so it ends at the same time as for the Hard diff ?

1. This is closer to an Insane than a Hard imo... I'm not a big fan of all the added 1/4 either.

1. Use tick rate 2 to make the speed changes more readable.

1. Even for a taiko, some parts seriously feel overmapped.
2. The slider speed during the 180BPM section is really fast. Maybe reduce it a bt ?

Odaril wrote:

ykcarrot

1. 00:54:320 (1,2) - Unreadable speed change ! This should be fixed if tick rate 2 is used. // meh
   
2. 01:09:155 (3) - Here again ! // ^

Odaril wrote:

KPY & Kana's Taiko

1. Even for a taiko, some parts seriously feel overmapped. X,not really.Some part overmapped is acceptable in Taiko diff.
2. The slider speed during the 180BPM section is really fast. Maybe reduce it a bt ? X,Since SV1.4 is really simple SV in Taiko diff,so not decide to change it.

Odaril wrote:

General

1. The Normal is too hard to be the easiest diff of the mapset imo. Adding an Easy would be preferable.

okey, making now bit wait

Collab

1. Use tick rate 2 to make the speed changes more readable.

No,tick rate 2 Score and Combo really high

Sorda

1. Extend the last spinner to make it end at the same time as the endtime of Hard ? Or add a new one, your call.

Fixed

KanaRin

1. 00:34:540 (5,1) - This overlap could be easily avoided.I think its okey
2. 00:43:276 (7,1) - I find this stack to be a bad idea because it stops the cursor very suddenly and kills the flow of the map.changed
3. 01:51:353 (3) - This speed change is unreadable because the only tick of the slider is hidden under another slider's path. This should be fixed if tick rate 2 is used.changed tick rate 2
4. 02:40:968 (7,8) - Can't say I agree with this jump. The placement is unintuitive (the patterns are obviously going up and you add a random 3,1 jump to the very bottom ?) and the jumps itself is unexpected.no,keep it sorry

Patchouli

1. 00:16:893 (1,2) - I... kinda understand why you did that jump, but it's very sudden and confusing. If you want to keep it, you should space 00:16:693 (3,1) - the same way as 00:16:493 (2,3) - to make the jump more consistent. changed spacing

Odaril wrote:

Normal

1. 00:07:493 (1,2,3) - These overlaps looked rather weird in-game. I'm sure there's a way to place the slider so they don't overlap.
2. 00:14:093 (1) - This slider becomes abruptly silent. It sounds really bad while playing.
3. 00:17:493 (1) - This is just a suggestion, but you could add a crescendo from 00:18:693 - to 00:21:093 - and make the spinner silent at 00:21:293 - ?Sorry I'll keep
4. 00:32:397 (1,2) - This sounds quite out of place to be honest, because it has lots of 1/2 very suddenly, while the map as a whole has more 1/1 and 3/2 rhythms.
5. 00:36:188 (3,4) - This sounds rather weird as well, because you were following the vocals, but the end of (1) matches nothing in the vocals.
6. 01:04:869 (3) - For consistency with what was previously mapped, add a new combo.
7. 01:07:507 (3) - Same.
8. 01:13:111 (2,5) - Do not silence notes like that. Each beat is expect to give a hitsound, and these don't, which is confusing. Also, there IS something in the song at that point, so there's no reason why you would silence them. Reducing the volume would make sense, but not that much.
9. 01:54:979 (4) - If anything, this should be a long slider, not a repeat one, to match the vocals. If you want to keep it a repeat slider, the second repeat surprised me, as you've been using only repeat sliders with one repeat, and nothing in the song made me expect a second one here.
10. 01:56:792 (1,2) - Same as 00:32:397 (1,2) -
11. 02:04:210 (1,2,3,4) - I find this beat/slider placement to be rather poor. It leaves blanks in the map which feel rather bad, and could match the lyrics better. Maybe try this timeline:
12. 02:18:715 (2,3,4) - For consistency with what was mapped before, make these all new combos.
13. 02:27:617 (5) - Silenced beats. (see above)
14. 02:29:430 (2) - The repeat sounds rather weird in this case. The lyrics don't have this beat at all, and you've been mapping to the lyrics all along so far.
15. 02:48:056 (8) - You should make this section louder... The beats are hardly hearable right now.
16. 03:09:155 (5,1) - This overlap looks really bad and could be very easily avoided.
17. 03:29:924 (4) - Change this slider's shape to avoid the overlap with 03:31:573 (3) - ?
18. 03:38:825 (6) - You should make this louder. It's hardly hearable right now.
19. 03:48:715 (7,1) - This overlap could be easily avoided. D:changed
20. 03:51:188 (2) - Same as 02:29:430 (2) -
21. 03:54:814 (3,4) - This overlap could be easily avoided. D:
22. Extend the last spinner so it ends at the same time as for the Hard diff ?

Odaril wrote:

Tick rate 2 is needed to make the slider speed changes readable.

157,129,176463,6,0,B|157:207|209:277,1,135,0|0
224,236,176792,2,0,B|317:236|385:306,1,180

Odaril wrote:

Muya

1. 02:56:875 (5) - Don't silence beats like that. Each beat is expected to produce at least one hitsound.

Odaril wrote:

01:13:111 (2,5) - Do not silence notes like that. Each beat is expect to give a hitsound, and these don't, which is confusing. Also, there IS something in the song at that point, so there's no reason why you would silence them. Reducing the volume would make sense, but not that much.

Odaril wrote:

02:24:650 (3) - This slider's repeat is hidden under a hitburst.

Odaril wrote:

02:56:875 (5) - Don't silence beats like that. Each beat is expected to produce at least one hitsound.

Lilac wrote:

Odaril wrote:

01:13:111 (2,5) - Do not silence notes like that. Each beat is expect to give a hitsound, and these don't, which is confusing. Also, there IS something in the song at that point, so there's no reason why you would silence them. Reducing the volume would make sense, but not that much.

Might want to make it a soft hitsound then. It will still sound good. Besides, there is no such thing as silencing notes unless you do it manually with a .wav file.

Back for old ver. Fixed

Odaril wrote:

02:24:650 (3) - This slider's repeat is hidden under a hitburst.

Pretty sure you can see it afterwards. Might need someone else's opinion... LIKE GARVEN.
changed.Fixed

Odaril wrote:

02:56:875 (5) - Don't silence beats like that. Each beat is expected to produce at least one hitsound.

Now that you've removed it...it sounds REALLY bad, I suggest fixing up the mapping altogether.
Back for old ver too Fixed~


ごめん。

Oh yes, I also believe that you didn't need an easier difficulty. That was overkill. One more thing...

[Easy]
00:43:111 (5,1) - The spacing is really close.
oops. Spacing Fixed

Please, no kudosu.

Snowy Dream wrote:

>w< nice map desu
ready to be ranked.
star~☆~ desu

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
[Collab & Hard] - At the end BPM already goes slow, why add on top of it a 0.5x section? sorry but i disagree.
04:15:161 (1) - 10 second long spinner... are u kidding me?, btw the fade out ends at 04:24:268, so you should probably end the spinner there, although even then it only makes it 1 second shorter =_= ok,Remove 0.5x section Also spinner remove end for 04:14:982

[Collab]
02:23:496 (4) - Most of the slider and it's repeat are hidden by a hitburst.Move the note Fixed.

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Easy]
00:42:452 (5) - Put below (3) for aesthetic purposes.
00:42:452 (5) - Put below (2) ,also 00:43:111 (1) - Put below (3) is better. imo