1. Hard (4.88 stars, 438 notes)
2. Normal (2.82 stars, 192 notes)

DJNightmare wrote:

Blue = Suggestions
Red = Recommended
Green = Comments

General
Please make use of Kiai time as a period of time where the music is, lets say epic. Try not to use it just for show in the the parts like (02:38:992 and 02:52:805). At least make a kiai period from 02:38:992 to 02:52:589 and so.
Also, i feel that some parts for the new hitcombo are put in an awkward way, try to fix it.

[Normal]

01:06:834 (1,2,3) - Try making it more curved and smooth. << i think that's ok
01:08:560 (5,6,7) - ^ << ^
01:24:747 (8) and 01:26:906 (2) - Overlapping it doesn't seem to have a nice pattern or symmetry. << fix it
02:22:589 (1,2,3,4) - Make it vertically symmetry would be nice (4 grid up is also good) << Well... I fix it but, symmetry.

[Insane]
Very well done, i can't seem to find any modding to be done. << thx

Good luck on your map =D

1. 01:03:380 (2,3,4) - this: http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot222-0.jpg it fits the song better
2. 01:08:776 (6) - clap
3. 01:48:920 (1) - add clap at the end
4. 01:50:647 (2) - remove clap
5. 01:51:078 (3) - add note on head
6. 02:36:402 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing is different..?

1. 00:48:057 (1) - clap here
2. 01:02:301 (2) - it's hard to see the slider path because of slider (7) hitburst from the previous combo, how about this slider going left
3. 01:55:826 (5) - add finish it fits the music
4. 01:56:042 (7) - remove clap here
5. 02:21:510 (6) - add clap here

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hi, from my queue

good map, star

oh and why WIP, you should move to pending

Normal

1. 01:03:380 (2,3,4) - this: http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot222-0.jpg it fits the song better
2. 01:08:776 (6) - clap
3. 01:48:920 (1) - add clap at the end
4. 01:50:647 (2) - remove clap
5. 01:51:078 (3) - add note on head
6. 02:36:402 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing is different..?

Hard

1. 00:48:057 (1) - clap here
2. 01:02:301 (2) - it's hard to see the slider path because of slider (7) hitburst from the previous combo, how about this slider going left
3. 01:55:826 (5) - add finish it fits the music
4. 01:56:042 (7) - remove clap here
5. 02:21:510 (6) - add clap here

that's all



Good luck~

JauiPlaY wrote:

Hi
Some suggestions:

[General]
I think the title should be lastendconductor?
And the background's size should be 1024x768.

[Normal]
00:54:316 (6) - Add clap to 00:54:747.
01:24:747 (8) - Add clap to 01:26:042.
01:34:891 (4) - Add clap.
01:36:618 (8) - ^
01:44:603 (7) - Remove clap from the end.
01:55:395 (4) - Add clap.
02:25:179 (T) - You have no custom hitsound so it's an useless timing point. Delete it.
02:37:697 (6) - Move to x256y320.
And you'd better control your combo between 3-6 since it's a normal diff.

[Hard]
00:28:201 (5) - Ctrl+R and more interesting.
01:15:467 (4) - Clap.
01:43:740 (1) - Add clap to the beginning.
02:45:251 (1) - Clap.

The hard was nice, but I'm afraid the normal was not good enough...really I mean.
Good luck~

L_P wrote:

hi.. from modq
although your mod is short, but your map is impressively clean , especially when it is made 9 months ago, god
im quite curious where the heck did you get those stars, in 3 pages of mods..? damn pro

General: if you find a MAT who dont wanna bubble too many maps, he will sure point out this: the gap between 2 diff. is too big (you know the score different is 8M

Normal
general: .. some very easy long sliders, some very hard notes sliders pattern, but kinda made it below 3 stars, pro.

00:32:949 (5,1) - me dont like overlapping the repeat sign in the lowest diff. although there is no problem at all, but not very pretty << Fix it
01:16:762 (1,2,3,4) - make it a curve? << No... This part is my mistake is distance...

02:16:546 (2,3,4,5) - 2 sliders or repeating slider? feel like it would be easier.. << Fix it
02:22:589 (1,2,3,4) - same << Fix it

Hard
OD is a bit too low, when i play this part 02:18:057 (6,7) - i misjudge it and play it like 1/4 but i still got 300...

00:09:639 (3,4,5,6) - feel like these 4 could make a rectangle, with bigger spacing << I don't want big spacing
01:03:812 (8) - maybe add 2 repeat? the next 2 notes seem out of arrangement to me..? << Not Wrong
01:29:496 (6,7) - feel like could do this, i think this looks prettier, and next slider is a repeat slider, that you could change it if you want to << Overlap...
02:42:445 (5,6) - stack these 2 together? << Humm... It's not wrong Maybe...

not much i could say, when this rank, i will surely play this haha.

edit: 800th post woohoo

nich95 wrote:

Hi, W h i t e

From my modding queue

[Normal]
00:26:042 (1) - Move slider down 2 slot. << fix it
00:58:848 (1) - Move slider left 2 slot. << fix it

[Hard]
01:42:661 (1) - Remove NC << Well... ok
02:43:524 (1) - Remove NC? << I think, that's ok

That's all, that I can find them.
nice map and song, star

Good luck.

Fenya wrote:

Hi

General:
I think .osb is unnecessary if you will not have SB nor custom hitsounds by .osb. << thx!

Normal:
Did CopyPaste in some parts? o.o << Ye..?
02:36:402 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing... Is supposed to be a normal, that these notes are like a stream? << fix it
02:37:697 (6) - Circle unnecessary, sounds bad D: << umm.. i think that's ok

Hard:
Good diff n.n
I think it would be better if you don't so many circles one above the other? http://puu.sh/iJnb << Ok... but I don't want to fix it... sorry
Did CopyPaste in some parts? o.o
00:18:920 (3) - 1 grid up << fix it
02:26:258 (6) - 1 grid down, so that the stream be symmetrical << fix it
02:33:164 (6) - 1 grid up << fix it

Well, I'm not good at this, I did everything I could >_< <<
Sorry for my bad English D:
Good work, good luck

hillaryzx wrote:

Here's my mod~ :3

General

- Inconsistency in Kiai time - http://puu.sh/iQHi

Normal

00:34:675(1) - add finish to the front of the slider << fix it
00:55:395(1) - add clap to the front of the slider << fix it
02:16:978(3) - extend this slider to 2:17:409 << Maybe it is not good... Sorry
02:23:021(2) - I sense wrong placed clap, should be at the tail of the slider << fix it

And Remapping...

Hard

01:16:114(1) - add finish at the beginning of the slider << fix it!!


What I can see is that my mod is short and the map is good.
Good luck!
And so, I'll take my leave...

S h i a wrote:

Oh hi hi hi o/
mod req. via my damn queue.

[Overall]
.osb file have different name with song. yes remove it.

[Normal]
hitsounds is kinda weird.
00:24:316 (1) - remove clap from middle of this slider and add clap at the end of the slider.
00:25:179 (2) - yes same ^
01:51:078 (4) - new combo here?
01:52:373 (1) - remove new combo
01:54:100 (4) - new combo
02:30:359 (3) - remove clap at slider ends
02:31:654 (4) - add clap
02:33:812 (4) - remove clap

All fix it

you should add SC2 clap to these sliders and notes below << if i make this, kiai time is so short... and beat is so wrong...
02:40:719 (3) - slider head
02:42:445 (1) - slider head
02:44:172 (3) - slider head
02:45:898 (1) - slider head
02:47:625 (4) -
02:49:352 (1) - slider head
02:51:078 (3) - slider head
02:54:532 (3) - slider head
02:56:258 (1) - slider head
02:57:985 (3) - slider head
03:01:438 (4) -
03:03:165 (1) - slider head

[Hard]
consider adding some SC2 clap. if you accept Normal's hitsounds suggestion
00:14:927 (5) - a triple stream here is weird, move this note to 00:14:711 sounds better to me. << fix it
00:38:560 (6) - weird triple sounds. better like this.

SPOILER

and don't forget add clap to << fix it
00:52:373 (6) - yeah. same weird thing happens. suggest you fix as 00:38:560 .
01:29:603 (7) - add note here? << humm... i think that's ok...
01:43:740 (1) - remove this clap at slider head. << fix it

Well. that's all. good luck.
Fight!

Really Thx a lot!!!

1. I suggest offest 7042 to you
2. Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
   Normal Kiai #2: Starts on 02:38:992, ends on 02:52:373
   Hard Kiai #2: Starts on 02:38:992, ends on 02:40:503
   make them the same?

ikari_kyon wrote:

hi /o/ good morning

[General]

- add W_h_i_t_e to tags? people with spaces on their user names always add those tag type
- soft-hitclap.wav uh this custom hitsound doesnt fit to this song >: but is just my opinion

<<

[Hard]

1. 00:07:049 (1) - finish to start of slider
2. 00:10:287 (6) - try a clap, for a double clap pattern, the start feels a bit boring
3. 00:13:740 (4) - clap ↑
4. 00:33:812 (7) - no finish on end of slider
5. 00:34:675 (1) - finish on start of slider
6. 00:58:848 (7) - finish on start of slider
7. 01:00:143 (4) - clap
8. 01:00:359 (5) - no clap
9. 01:08:344 (6) - clap on end of slider, is a nice double clap with your stream
10. 01:10:287 (5) - clap, for keep double clap from up
11. 01:22:157 (6) - clap on end of slider
12. 01:25:827 (3) - clap
13. 01:40:287 (3) - Im not sure if this slider is rankable, is getting back on the same slider tick
14. 01:56:474 (8) - finish on start of slider
15. 01:56:906 (9) - finish on end of slider
16. 02:25:179 (1) - clap on start of slider, feels better with clapping pattern change
17. 02:38:992 - Im not sure if this would be a nice place to add a second kiai, the first is enough

<< I don't want that...

[Normal]

- why this start later than [Hard]?

1. 00:58:848 (1) - clap on end of slider, support the clap on the repeat
2. 01:11:366 (3) - missing clap on start of slider
3. 01:13:093 (2) - no clap on start of slider, is enough with finish
4. 01:16:762 (1) - this red tick dont follow nothing on the song
5. 01:34:244 (1,2) - dont stack objects on the easiest diff, this should be played by beginners
6. 01:50:647 (2,3,1) - ↑
7. 01:52:373 (2) - no clap on end of slider
8. 01:53:668 (3,1) - dont stack
9. 01:54:100 (1) - no clap on end of this slider
10. 02:16:978 (3,4) - ↑
11. 02:22:589 (1) - no clap on end of slider
12. 02:23:021 (2) - clap on start of slider
13. 02:25:611 (1) - is totally covered by previous spinner hitburst, please move to other location
14. 02:35:970 (2) - stack on 1/1 and at end of slider may be fine, but dont get risk
15. 02:40:503 - oh you forgot the kiai from [Hard] xD if you wanna keep the second kiai from normal, check the kiai from this timeline to 02:52:373.
16. 02:46:546 (2) - delete this note please, is easiest for newbies witouth this
17. 02:47:625 (4,5) - dont stack
18. 03:00:359 (2) - please delete
19. 03:01:438 (4,5) - dont stack

LKs wrote:

From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

General

1. I suggest offest 7042 to you
2. Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
   Normal Kiai #2: Starts on 02:38:992, ends on 02:52:373
   Hard Kiai #2: Starts on 02:38:992, ends on 02:40:503
   make them the same?

Normal

custom slidertick is needed..you missed so many clap sound due to long sliders
01:11:366 (3) - clap
02:14:819 (1) - NC
02:16:114 (2) - remove NC
02:28:632 (1) - NC
02:29:496 (2) - remove NC, you must set NC on downbeat

Hard

01:57:229 (10) - I don't think it's necessary to NC here
02:14:603 (7) - whistle
02:15:035 (3) - move whislte to the beginning
02:15:467 (4) - whistle
02:26:150 (5) - clap here but not at 02:26:258
02:28:308 (6) - clap
02:29:603 (5) - clap here but not at 02:29:711
02:33:056 (5) - ^
02:36:509 (5) - ^
02:35:214 (6) - clap

quite good, GL

Frostmourne wrote:

Hi W h i t e (sorry for late modding, I was reading a book yesterday and twice to get exam )

From my mod queue (You don't need to follow all of my mod because it just be a suggestion)

Normal
00:37:265 (3) - move tail to x:444 y:252 and middle to x:476 y:192 for better balance
00:41:582 (1) - move up 2 grid can make it neat due to this 00:44:603 (2) - (middle of the hole of the slider)
00:58:848 (1,2,3) - I suggest you to remove all these clap because it will be a good sign to start next part
01:52:373 (2) - ^ and 2 clap (from 01:53:668 (3) - ) in 1 period is abnormal
02:34:667 (1) - move to x:256 y:72 , this will stack last 02:31:646 (5) -
02:35:962 (2) - then , you must move this to x:256 y:312
02:36:394 (3) - 1 grid right for balancing and 2 grid up for saving distance
02:37:689 (4) - yep , move this up 2 grid to stack with 2
02:51:070 (3) - remove this clap at the tail , it's not quite appropriate to use double clap in this part.

All fix it

Hard
00:31:214 (4) - up 1 grid to make it symmetrical to (2) and complete stack with 00:29:488 (5) - << No.1 is fix, but stack is not good, I think


Hard is good



Good luck ~