Asuka_- wrote:

Im not good at english.

Kibbleru wrote:

hard
the entire diff uses 1.0 SV multiplier, i would like some variety, at least try using 0.8 here 00:24:344 - change to 0.9 because avoid overlap.

Kibbleru wrote:

actually u can lower SV but increase the DS so they wont overlap, its fine for now, just for next time. I see... I'll be careful.

some NC issues in normal
01:10:844 (4) - missing nc oh sry... Fixed

00:25:844 - NC pattern gets offset here, NC should be on 00:27:344 - 00:30:344 -
instead of what u currrently have 00:25:844 (1) - 00:28:844 (1) - 00:31:469 (1) - okay Fixed

Momochikun wrote:

super quick m4m :333

[Insane]
00:22:094 - the stream is already start here, maybe you can use some 1/4 slider ? keep
01:06:344 (1) - finish okay
00:25:469 - this part until 00:36:156 - can add some whistle imo, so it wouldn't be too plain keep

[Hard]
00:24:906 (2) - i think its better 2 circles here because its weird to leave strong sound on the slider tail okay
00:29:594 (3,4) - this overlap kinda ugly imo but good flow imo xD
01:03:344 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - they just need nc on the first kick slider, no need spam okay

[Normal]
00:53:219 - missing clap oh thx

[Easy]
some overlap like 00:22:844 (3,4) - and 01:07:844 (1,2) - might be hard for beginners to understand, try avoid this kind of pattern in easier diff
keep plz

cute song and bg, good luck !

KuranteMelodii wrote:

starされたらmodいらないでしょうｗｗｗｗｗｗｗ

1. Denki 電気 (he wrote the lyrics, and compose the song)
2. LoveMatic (the studio that developped the eroge)
3. Koipia (the eroge is also known as Koipia)
4. Koi to Koi Suru Utopia (always have the romanized title of the eroge as tag) striked word aren't needed, even if it's the full title, because they are already on the metadata, with the title (and there is also no need to have twice the same word on tag)

1. audio.mp3 is 254kbps which is unrankable, maximum allowed is 192kbps.
2. storyboarded hitsounds is something that i don't really agree with, the samples will be played even if you don't hit any object which is confusing.

1. 00:02:969 (5,6) - this should be snapped to 1/6 if you're following vocals
2. 00:31:469 (4,5,1) - looks a bit too cramped compared to similar patterns, maybe try to use more distance so it doesn't look inconsistent?
3. 00:37:844 (1,2,3,4) - looks visually odd, 00:37:844 (1,2) - should be equal to 00:38:406 (3,4) - ,yet 00:38:781 (4) - is closer to 00:38:406 (3) - than 00:38:219 (2) - is to 00:37:844 (1) - . try to use the same distance for these two so that it looks more visually appealing
4. 01:03:344 - can you add some hitsounds to the streams? it feels empty. adding some whistles to strong beats such as 01:03:344 - 01:03:719 - 01:04:094 - would be better imo

1. can you add some 1/4 on the streamy sections? (this 00:21:344 - for example) insane uses 8 notes streams so the gap between difficulty might be too much, you should at least use some 1/4 sliders with reverse arrow
2. 01:28:094 (3,4) - i don't get why such a different spacing here. it's just an 1/2 gap so space it normally?

1. could use a spinner like you did on easy, else scores on the map will be all the same

1. 00:22:844 (3,4) - can you avoid this type of overlap? the way the sliders covers the slider end circle and the sliderbody at the same time is just confusing for newbies. (same issue on 01:07:844 (1,2) - )

Kagetsu wrote:

1. audio.mp3 is 254kbps which is unrankable, maximum allowed is 192kbps.

Kagetsu wrote:

1. audio.mp3 is 254kbps which is unrankable, maximum allowed is 192kbps. oh sorry... changed mp3
   → offset changed plz check...
   
2. storyboarded hitsounds is something that i don't really agree with, the samples will be played even if you don't hit any object which is confusing. ok removed

[Insane]

1. 00:02:969 (5,6) - this should be snapped to 1/6 if you're following vocals ok plz check
2. 00:31:469 (4,5,1) - looks a bit too cramped compared to similar patterns, maybe try to use more distance so it doesn't look inconsistent? ok i tried.
3. 00:37:844 (1,2,3,4) - looks visually odd, 00:37:844 (1,2) - should be equal to 00:38:406 (3,4) - ,yet 00:38:781 (4) - is closer to 00:38:406 (3) - than 00:38:219 (2) - is to 00:37:844 (1) - . try to use the same distance for these two so that it looks more visually appealing i tried.
4. 01:03:344 - can you add some hitsounds to the streams? it feels empty. adding some whistles to strong beats such as 01:03:344 - 01:03:719 - 01:04:094 - would be better imo nice thanks

[Hard]

1. can you add some 1/4 on the streamy sections? (this 00:21:344 - for example) insane uses 8 notes streams so the gap between difficulty might be too much, you should at least use some 1/4 sliders with reverse arrow ok start in 00:22:844 -
2. 01:28:094 (3,4) - i don't get why such a different spacing here. it's just an 1/2 gap so space it normally? fix

[Normal]

1. could use a spinner like you did on easy, else scores on the map will be all the same
   okay, I put it in the same place as Easy

[Easy]

1. 00:22:844 (3,4) - can you avoid this type of overlap? the way the sliders covers the slider end circle and the sliderbody at the same time is just confusing for newbies. (same issue on 01:07:844 (1,2) - ) fix

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

grats!

-Nanaka- wrote:

おめでとうございます

Meg wrote:

おめでとうございます

歌詞のXXXXXのところは「with me 楽園に」ですよ～

Gloria Guard wrote:

このゲームのOPが Qualified されるの待ってました!!

ランクになるのが楽しみです ~ それと、、

ナイスです! おめでとうございます

Homura- wrote:

nice job!

joker- wrote:

おめでとうございます～！

Nanashima Asami wrote:

おめでとうございます

Akitoshi wrote:

おめです

CanadianBaka wrote:

I wish I knew japanese

gj

Yasaija 714 wrote:

おめでとうございます

Kin wrote:

おめでとう！！

CanadianBaka wrote:

I wish I knew japanese



gj

1. 00:18:394 - ここにfinishを追加。そしてここからのパートは白線にclap置けます
2. 00:57:394 - 同じくfinish追加で白線にclap
3. 01:06:394 - 寂しい感じするしadd finishかな？
4. 01:12:769 - add clap
5. 01:28:894 - add finish

Meg wrote:

Hitsound mod.

1. 00:18:394 - ここにfinishを追加。そしてここからのパートは白線にclap置けます
2. 00:57:394 - 同じくfinish追加で白線にclap
3. 01:06:394 - 寂しい感じするしadd finishかな？
4. 01:12:769 - add clap
5. 01:28:894 - add finish

以上です～