1. Kotomi (3,47 stars, 107 notes)
2. Kyou (4,87 stars, 197 notes)
3. Nagisa (4,85 stars, 197 notes)
4. Tomoyo (1 stars, 57 notes)

Minty Gum wrote:

Hi, this is a great map, but it needs a little help. Here's what I think for normal mode:
-00:09:594 (blue 1) This doesn't need to be a new combo as far as I can see, it's just a part of the piano piece.
-00:27:265 (red 1) No new combo needed here, either
-00:35:312 (orange 1) No new combo here!
-Spinner at 01:08:00 - Shorten a little, by about 2 beats in 1/2 time, and make the (green 1) repeating slider 1 more repeat and move it back a space. In other the part where it says "itsumademo" it only hits "sumademo", if that makes more sense.
-0:1:14:067 through 0:1:26:00 - The pattern in combos here is inconcistent - it goes "slider slider" (new combo) "slider slider slider etc." even though it's following a repeating pattern of repeating sliders. Make it something like "slider slider" (new combo) "slider slider" (new combo) etc. for this part.

Also, if just for fun if you want to but optional:
-Change the combo colors to match with the video/background to make it more exciting and unique.
-Add a kiai mode

For future map-making:
I can see you made this on grid level 3, and I don't know if this was intentional, but you might have an easier time if you make it on grid level 2 or 1. To change it (if you don't know how) click view>grid level>(1 through 4). This will make it easier to get things spaced very evenly. Also use distance snap when possible if you weren't using it already.

The rest of the beatmap seems to be good A star for you~ Hope this helped and if you have any questions feel free to ask me.

Joshua Lost wrote:

Clannad ~ My favourite =w=

Mod time ~
Red-You must fix it.
Blue-You'd better to fix it.
Black-Suggestion only.

[General]
●BG resolution should be 4:3 (800*600 or 1024*768), and I suggest you to conver it to .jpg format in order to reduce the file size.
●All diff's slider multiplier are not completely accurate.Open the .osu file in text to fix them.

I try to mod your diffs but your offset is wrong...
Offset:2770
I will be back after you fix the timing~ @_@

●All diff's slider multiplier are not completely accurate.Open the .osu file in text to fix them.

Joshua Lost wrote:

Clannad ~ My favourite =w=

Mod time ~
Red-You must fix it.
Blue-You'd better to fix it.
Black-Suggestion only.

[General]
●BG resolution should be 4:3 (800*600 or 1024*768), and I suggest you to conver it to .jpg format in order to reduce the file size.
●All diff's slider multiplier are not completely accurate.Open the .osu file in text to fix them.

I try to mod your diffs but your offset is wrong...
Offset:2770
I will be back after you fix the timing~ @_@

●All diff's slider multiplier are not completely accurate.Open the .osu file in text to fix them.

JoJo wrote:

OMG .. O.O
Sorry I forgot to mark this map so I am missing to recheck this T_T
(Why don't you PM me in game to catch me xD)

Try to mod but... The BPM is wrong.

Since you decided to map the first part of the song, The Timing should be

BPM OFFSET
140.00 2770
139.00 17120

You need 2 red lines in your map. Do this in your every diff.
Sorry again >< I have not noticed this in my last mod @_@

• ●Red-You must fix it.
  ●Blue-You'd better to fix it.
  ●Black-Suggestion only.

• ●Fix your SliderMultiplier manually in all diffs by open ".osu" files in textpad. (E.g. Normal: 1.10000000596046 → 1.1)
  ●Disable countdown in all diffs since they're useless.
  ●I suggest change a BG ? Since there are some words which do not make sence.. @.@

• Oh hey ~ T.T You only change the timing in this diff and you do not resnap all notes as well... So I can't mod it continuously.. Sorry
  But feel free to call me at anytime ~ I shall keep my eyes here.

JoJo wrote:

Sorry for delay ~ But here I am ~
Do not give me kudosu this time plz since I have already got too many here... ;_;

• ●Red-You must fix it.
  ●Blue-You'd better to fix it.
  ●Black-Suggestion only.

[General]

• ●Fix your SliderMultiplier manually in all diffs by open ".osu" files in textpad. (E.g. Normal: 1.10000000596046 → 1.1) I don't understand this . 1.10000000596046 is to change to → 1.1. That is, just change it to: 1.1? wakaranai no desu ... but I'll see if I can do it again.
  ●Disable countdown in all diffs since they're useless. Fixed
  ●I suggest change a BG ? Since there are some words which do not make sence.. @.@ Fixed, but...I don't know it changed here

[Easy]

• Oh hey ~ T.T You only change the timing in this diff and you do not resnap all notes as well... So I can't mod it continuously.. Sorry
  But feel free to call me at anytime ~ I shall keep my eyes here. Ok no desu!

No kds

Combo1 : 243,120,141
Combo2 : 77,189,202
Combo3 : 215,40,40
Combo4 : 248,222,135
Combo5 : 238,123,38

lovhin456 wrote:

hello ~ let me help you for no aparent reason other than not having anything else to do!
*puts on nerdy glasses*

general;
- I believe the BG with Nagisa is the only one missing the CLANNAD logo, care to fix it ? Fixed
- Oh, please take off the audio from the video Leave it to me, watashi ni makasete.
- Eh, there's a notepad document on the folder, get rid of it ~ Yeah Ok
- Make sure all BGs are 1024x768 in dimensions I think I fix this problem.
- Maybe try these colors ? Good idea! I liked it

Combo1 : 243,120,141
Combo2 : 77,189,202
Combo3 : 215,40,40
Combo4 : 248,222,135
Combo5 : 238,123,38

To change colors, open each diff with the notepad and switch this code for the one on the document then save
- Tick rate 2 for all diffs ~ OK

tomoyo;
* No hitsounds ? Try to put on some please ~ I do not think to need to add hitsounds it, I'll try some and I'll see if it gets good.
* Inconsistent spacing all over the map: Hm...fixed.
- 00:03:198 (1,2) >> spacing
- 00:10:055 (1,2) >> ^
* Those are some examples, there are obviously more so try to check the whole map for any issues Hm...ok.
- 00:06:198 >> new combo maybe
- 00:13:055 >> new combo
- 00:14:341 (3,4) >> mix into a slider, easier for players of this level to hit imo Fixed
- 00:22:731 >> remove a repeat, then delete (2) and add a slider from 00:24:889 to 00:25:753 Fixed]
- 00:26:184 >> this linear slider kinda ruins the flow Fixed
- 00:42:155 >> add a finish at the start, make the curve smoother and also add new combo Fixed
- 00:52:083 >> actually a note here and a little slider that starts at 00:52:514 and ends at 00:52:946 also add new combo to that little slider ~ Fixed
- 00:54:241 >> i think is better to end the first kiai here rather than in the middle of a slider (goes for all diffs) Fixed
- 00:55:967 >> add finish Fixed
- 00:57:694 >> curve a little smoother Fixed
- 01:02:874 >> finish Fixed
- 01:09:780 >> end the kiai here (goes for all diffs) Fixed

kotomi;
- Isn't the distance spacing too much ? try 1.0x Hm...good i'll try.
- The first section is not the same as the tomoyo, should have offset 2770, modding according to the new offset Fixed, i think.
- 00:07:270 (2,3) >> end (2) here and after that move (3) to 00:07:484 then add a repeat to (3) Fixed
- 00:17:551 >> remove new combo Fixed
- 00:19:709 >> new combo Fixed
- 00:22:731 >> new combo then remove new combo on the next note Fixed
- 00:25:321 >> new combo Fixed
- 00:33:091 >> new combo Fixed
- 00:34:817 (3,4) >> linear sliders kinda break the flow, also new combo on (4) Fixed
- 00:37:623 >> delete Fixed
- 00:41:724 >> remove new combo Fixed
- 00:42:155 >> finish Fixed
- 00:43:450 >> no reason for slowdown :/ rsrs ok fixed
- 00:55:968 >> ^ Fixed
- 01:16:472 >> new combo Fixed
- Actually the only issue in this map are the slowdowns that make no sense at all, please get rid of them Yeah ... I'm working on it

nagisa; (I will remap this because I'm having trouble to update this update diff. But I'll remember to fix it all. )

kyou;
- 00:17:551 >> remove new combo fixed
- 00:23:163 >> ^ this point is ok
- 00:23:810 >> delete Fixed
- 00:27:048 >> remove new combo Fixed
- 00:27:911 >> delete I did the opposite, that the note was deleted at 00:27:695 and left a note that was 00:27:911. Is that right?
- 00:30:932 >> new combo and remove new combo at 00:31:796 Fixed
- 00:35:681 >> remove new combo and start the new combo on the next slider Fixed
- 00:41:724 >> remove new combo Fixed
- 00:45:609 >> ^ I only made one small change.
- 00:50:357 >> start the spinner here Fixed
- 01:02:012 >> new combo Fixed
- 01:15:609 (7) >> move it here Fixed
- 01:21:436 >> remove new combo Fixed
- Biggest issues, spacing and slowdowns

* Still needs more work overall