happy30 wrote:

[General]
Add Ryafuka in the tags

[Ryafuka's Hard]
01:36:300 (2) - Put a new combo on this note so the previous spinner ends properly.
00:47:400 (4) - and 00:48:000 (7) - New combos here? I think it would make it easier to read.
all ok~

happy30 wrote:

[General]
Add Ryafuka in the tags
Fixed

[Normal]
00:57:900 (4) - this note hits the slidertrack, maybe move it a bit away so It will look better
01:30:300 (3) - IMO, this doesn't look really good. Maybe make it not overlap the previous slider.
01:32:100 (5) - This should not overlap (3)

01:09:300 (2) - Put a new combo on this note so the previous spinner ends properly.
01:38:100 (2) - ^
01:48:000 (2) - ^
All fixed~

[Holo]
put AR8 back. Natteke is silly
lol , okay AR baaaaaaack

happy30 wrote:

here you go!

happy30 wrote:

sorry! I just checked it again and I noticed that there are a few more things that need some attention.

[General]
Add a few more tags? (Naoki Maeda Junko Karashima Konami)　ほろさんに任せます～

[Ryafuka's Hard]
00:30:000 (1) - I think it flows better when this is spaced away. sorry no change~ T_T
00:36:900 (6,7) - lol, trap. maybe change this so that it won't be confusing. ok~
00:40:950 - I expected to hear a beat here. I don't really like this slider 00:39:900 (3) - and 00:41:400 (5) - that overlaps it. Maybe change the pattern here? ok, I changed pattern~
00:44:700 (1,2,3) - Same thing. (and there should be a finish on the start) ok~
00:50:550 - Here too. ok~
00:59:100 (1) - Add a finish on the start? ok~
01:07:200 - Place a beat here and make the spinner appear 1/1 later? no change~

happy30 wrote:

sorry! I just checked it again and I noticed that there are a few more things that need some attention.

[General]
Add a few more tags? (Naoki Maeda Junko Karashima Konami)-okay
at 01:27:825 - in Holo and Normal you have 1 section here with 70% volume instead of 60%. Was this on purpose?-changed

[Normal]
00:59:100 (1) - Add a finish on the start?
01:00:000 (2) - This slider sounds a bit weird. I expected it to start at 01:00:300 -. the rhythm at 01:04:800 (2,3) - is good, maybe make it similar?
01:03:300 (6) - Make this note 1/2 earlier, follow it up with an extra beat at 01:03:600 - ?
01:03:900 (1) - Add a finish on the start?
01:09:300 (1,2) - Same thing again
01:12:900 (5) - ^

01:14:700 (2) - Maybe add a finish here?
01:15:900 (1,2) - having a stack here is a bit weird. maybe make it more similar with 01:53:700 (4) -
01:47:700 - Add a note here? (or maybe better add a slider like 01:38:100 (1) - )
01:51:900 (1) - Add a finish on the start?
01:53:100 (3) - Maybe add a finish here as well?
-All fix and changed
[Holo]
00:48:450 (2,3,4) - For a better flow you could remove the stack here and place one on (5) instead.-hmm... ok changed~

Dangaard wrote:

the offset should be set to 1495ms (-5ms in effect) こちらでオフセット変更はしてないのでほろさんお願いしますー

[Ryafuka's Hard]
00:27:900 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - The 2nd pattern is identical to the first one and it is quite confusing to read. Working this over shouldn't be a problem, just come up with something so that the patterns differ from each other (shape/position) ok,I changed this in this way. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/283821

Dangaard wrote:

the offset should be set to 1495ms (-5ms in effect)-hmm... changed

Dangaard wrote:

rebubbled