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Okie quick modderino
In general you should smoothen out your streams. The best way to do this is make a slider with 3 points and then click ctrl+shift+f to make it a stream.
00:27:292 (1,2) - 00:31:042 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - You should increase the spacing to be closer to 00:26:692 (4,5) - (There's more like this, but would take forever to list them all out)
00:28:942 (3) - Could have a stream start here and end at 00:29:842 () -
00:44:917 (12) - There's nothing that justifies the sharp angle change here. You should look at Promethean Kings if you want some examples of when to changes stream angles.
00:51:667 (6,7) - Don't stack like that :v hard to read and play
03:18:292 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't think there's anything that justifies the random DS change, but I might be missing something. (Same thing happens in other parts too)
04:01:042 (1,1) - Why is the whole stream NCs?
In general you should smoothen out your streams. The best way to do this is make a slider with 3 points and then click ctrl+shift+f to make it a stream.
00:27:292 (1,2) - 00:31:042 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - You should increase the spacing to be closer to 00:26:692 (4,5) - (There's more like this, but would take forever to list them all out)
00:28:942 (3) - Could have a stream start here and end at 00:29:842 () -
00:44:917 (12) - There's nothing that justifies the sharp angle change here. You should look at Promethean Kings if you want some examples of when to changes stream angles.
00:51:667 (6,7) - Don't stack like that :v hard to read and play
03:18:292 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't think there's anything that justifies the random DS change, but I might be missing something. (Same thing happens in other parts too)
04:01:042 (1,1) - Why is the whole stream NCs?
Brightness
00:10:642 (2) - doens't look good.
00:25:042 (9) - stop the stream here
00:25:342 (1) - section starting at this point is boring, map it more.
00:29:392 (5,6,7) - eh, fix timing.
00:32:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - don't start or end streams there.
00:58:942 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - would change this.
01:28:342 (5,6) - spread apart.
01:40:642 (2) - delete this and vv
01:39:442 (1) - select this then click ctrl + h then replace it where 2 was.
01:45:442 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - what is this,
01:55:642 (7) - follow the rhythmmmm
02:01:942 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - ew.
02:07:042 (1) - why is this even there.
02:09:892 (7,8) - open space between there.
02:11:917 (1,1) - change this
02:16:342 (1) - why is this there.
02:37:492 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36) - what's this.
02:47:842 (7,8,9,10,11) - curved wierdly.
02:50:692 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A LITTLE TOO SPACED.
02:54:817 (1,2,3) - change
03:09:067 (9,10,11) - ^
03:16:492 (11,1) - space in between kinda awkward.
03:19:342 (8,9) - ^
03:56:842 (9,10,11,12) - space out more.
04:01:042 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - remove all of the ncs
04:05:917 (1,2) - random space in between
04:11:542 (9,10) - ^
00:10:642 (2) - doens't look good.
00:25:042 (9) - stop the stream here
00:25:342 (1) - section starting at this point is boring, map it more.
00:29:392 (5,6,7) - eh, fix timing.
00:32:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - don't start or end streams there.
00:58:942 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - would change this.
01:28:342 (5,6) - spread apart.
01:40:642 (2) - delete this and vv
01:39:442 (1) - select this then click ctrl + h then replace it where 2 was.
01:45:442 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - what is this,
01:55:642 (7) - follow the rhythmmmm
02:01:942 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - ew.
02:07:042 (1) - why is this even there.
02:09:892 (7,8) - open space between there.
02:11:917 (1,1) - change this
02:16:342 (1) - why is this there.
02:37:492 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36) - what's this.
02:47:842 (7,8,9,10,11) - curved wierdly.
02:50:692 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A LITTLE TOO SPACED.
02:54:817 (1,2,3) - change
03:09:067 (9,10,11) - ^
03:16:492 (11,1) - space in between kinda awkward.
03:19:342 (8,9) - ^
03:56:842 (9,10,11,12) - space out more.
04:01:042 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - remove all of the ncs
04:05:917 (1,2) - random space in between
04:11:542 (9,10) - ^
Topic Starter
Potatoe751 wrote:
Okie quick modderino
In general you should smoothen out your streams. The best way to do this is make a slider with 3 points and then click ctrl+shift+f to make it a stream.
00:27:292 (1,2) - 00:31:042 (2,3,4,5,6,7) ✔ Nice, thanks for that, i never thought it. - You should increase the spacing to be closer to 00:26:692 (4,5) - (There's more like this, but would take forever to list them all out)
00:28:942 (3) - Could have a stream start here and end at 00:29:842 () - I didn't did a stream but it looks better with a shoooort stream , ✔
00:44:917 (12) - There's nothing that justifies the sharp angle change here. You should look at Promethean Kings if you want some examples of when to changes stream angles.
00:51:667 (6,7) - Don't stack like that :v hard to read and play ✔ I did it and now its easy to read, thank you
03:18:292 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't think there's anything that justifies the random DS change, but I might be missing something. (Same thing happens in other parts too) x Sorry but i think its looks nice not all streams do the same way and directions.
04:01:042 (1,1) - Why is the whole stream NCs? ✔ i thought it looks nice but , anyways , ure right.
Topic Starter
✔Pickkle wrote:
Brightness
00:10:642 (2) - doens't look good. x I think random sliders on "slow timing" looks nice
00:25:042 (9) - stop the stream here ✔
00:25:342 (1) - section starting at this point is boring, map it more. ✔
00:29:392 (5,6,7) - eh, fix timing. ✔
00:32:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - don't start or end streams there. ✔
00:58:942 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - would change this. ✔
01:28:342 (5,6) - spread apart. ✔
01:40:642 (2) - delete this and vv ✔
01:39:442 (1) - select this then click ctrl + h then replace it where 2 was. ✔
01:45:442 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - what is this, ✔ idk
01:55:642 (7) - follow the rhythmmmm ✔
02:01:942 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - ew. :/ ✔
02:07:042 (1) - why is this even there. ✔
02:09:892 (7,8) - open space between there ✔[/color]
02:11:917 (1,1) - change this ✔
02:16:342 (1) - why is this there. ✔
02:37:492 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36) - what's this. idk x2 ✔
02:47:842 (7,8,9,10,11) - curved wierdly. ✔
02:50:692 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A LITTLE TOO SPACED. ✔
02:54:817 (1,2,3) - change ✔
03:09:067 (9,10,11) - ^ ✔
03:16:492 (11,1) - space in between kinda awkward. ✔
03:19:342 (8,9) - ^ ✔
03:56:842 (9,10,11,12) - space out more. ✔
04:01:042 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - remove all of the ncs ✔
04:05:917 (1,2) - random space in between ✔
04:11:542 (9,10) - ^
Topic Starter
Wezeh wrote:
✔Pickkle wrote:
Brightness
00:10:642 (2) - doens't look good. x I think random sliders on "slow timing" looks nice
00:25:042 (9) - stop the stream here ✔
00:25:342 (1) - section starting at this point is boring, map it more. ✔
00:29:392 (5,6,7) - eh, fix timing.
00:32:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - don't start or end streams there. ✔
00:58:942 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - would change this. ✔
01:28:342 (5,6) - spread apart. ✔
01:40:642 (2) - delete this and vv ✔
01:39:442 (1) - select this then click ctrl + h then replace it where 2 was. ✔
01:45:442 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - what is this, ✔ idk
01:55:642 (7) - follow the rhythmmmm ✔
02:01:942 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - ew. :/ ✔
02:07:042 (1) - why is this even there. ✔
02:09:892 (7,8) - open space between there ✔[/color]
02:11:917 (1,1) - change this ✔
02:16:342 (1) - why is this there. ✔
02:37:492 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36) - what's this. idk x2 ✔
02:47:842 (7,8,9,10,11) - curved wierdly. ✔
02:50:692 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A LITTLE TOO SPACED. ✔
02:54:817 (1,2,3) - change ✔
03:09:067 (9,10,11) - ^ ✔
03:16:492 (11,1) - space in between kinda awkward. ✔
03:19:342 (8,9) - ^ ✔
03:56:842 (9,10,11,12) - space out more. ✔
04:01:042 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - remove all of the ncs ✔
04:05:917 (1,2) - random space in between ✔
04:11:542 (9,10) - ^
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