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narakucrimson

Mustaash wrote:

Another awesome map then
let's mod! :D

[General]

Didn't find anything makes trouble :(

[Collab]

NarakuArmin > All

01:04:423 (1) - I think this note is a bit touching the hp bar :( No it isn't :O Maybe you deleted the custom bar?
01:06:506 (1,2,3,4,5) - Trouble with this spacing change :-( But the spacing is very close to 1,0x here :P
01:55:673 (3,4) - i don't really like how the (4) is hided by the (3) i think this will more readable like this : http://puu.sh/ajrz Yeah, looks nice too :P The only problem is that the end of (5) would be fully overlapped and I don't want that hehe
01:56:923 (5) - Clap at the beggining of the note? Hmm... I'll keep it with no clap. It doesn't quite fit the music with it.
03:15:048 (3) - I found this a bit confusing when i play first time °° Yeah, it is rather confusing... I hope Armin doesn't mind if I change it :P
03:20:673 (8,1) - Don't really like that spacing really confusing because of the spacing heard before It's ok, it's after a series of pretty big jumps so it's readable and flows well.
03:40:465 (5,1) - Confusing when i play first time too :-( Hmm... Spacing has to be big because of the speed change, if I changed the spacing so drastically it would feel wrong...

Anyways, really love this difficulty, I love your mapping both ofyou <3 Thanks :3

[Armin's Hard]

00:22:340 (9) - i can't really write a thing about but look both images and theeeeeen :D
Oh, it's just the way in which he makes sliders. He won't change his techniques, believe me :P
00:37:756 (5) - I think this note is a bit touching the hp bar :( Again, did you remove the custom bar? :O

didn't find anything else gg :o

[Normal]

Awesum :] btw i really don't know howto mod easy diffs so.. :(:(:(
oh and i say just for the easy, i don't see a lot of differences of difficulty in both of them ( normal & easy ) :S

btw Awesome map, i've not kds for the moment can't star D:
Oh don't worry for the star! And you get kudosu for your mod, anyway :P
Thank you!
mancuso_JM_
Me dieron ganas de modear este map :P

Easy:
00:44:840 (1): Creo que deberias jugar con la voz aca, y eliminar el New Combo aca y agregarlo en 00:45:256 (2)
01:13:590 (3): Un New Combo juega bien aca
01:40:881 (1): Lo mismo que al principio, elimina el New Combo aca y agregalo en 01:42:131 (2)
01:46:715 (1): Un kick slider con mas de 1 repeticiones en Easy?? Creo que es dificil de leer para los nuevos jugadores. Quizas puedas llevar este slider hasta 01:47:131 (Tick Blanco) y luego agregarle un reverse arrow
01:50:881 (4): Un New Combo no juega mal aca
02:00:881 (3): Creo que es un poco mas consistente (viendo los otros kiai) si agregas un New Combo aca y eliminas el New Combo en 02:01:715
02:13:590 (3): Este kick slider tiene 2 reverse arrow, pero realmente no se si esta del todo bien para estas dificultades

Normal:
Approach Rate: +1 esta bien :)
01:02:756 (6): Quizas un clap al final del Slider

Armin's Hard:
HP Drain Rate: +1
01:04:423 (7): I suggest a New Combo here (at the beginning of kiai) and Remove New Combo in 01:05:048 (1)
02:02:131 (1): I think that you have to Remove New Combo here
03:35:048 (1): I suggest to Remove New Combo here and add a New Combo in 03:35:465. Plays better with vocal

Collab:
Viendo el BPM (144) Approach Rate +1 juega bien.
01:29:215 (x): Una nota aca va bien con el ritmo

Bueno eso es todo :).
Gran Map como siempre :P
Espero que sea rankeado pronto. Buena Suerte ;)
(En un futuro modeare el de TDCC xD)
Topic Starter
narakucrimson

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Me dieron ganas de modear este map :P

Easy:
00:44:840 (1): Creo que deberias jugar con la voz aca, y eliminar el New Combo aca y agregarlo en 00:45:256 (2)
01:13:590 (3): Un New Combo juega bien aca
01:40:881 (1): Lo mismo que al principio, elimina el New Combo aca y agregalo en 01:42:131 (2)
01:46:715 (1): Un kick slider con mas de 1 repeticiones en Easy?? Creo que es dificil de leer para los nuevos jugadores. Quizas puedas llevar este slider hasta 01:47:131 (Tick Blanco) y luego agregarle un reverse arrow
01:50:881 (4): Un New Combo no juega mal aca
02:00:881 (3): Creo que es un poco mas consistente (viendo los otros kiai) si agregas un New Combo aca y eliminas el New Combo en 02:01:715
02:13:590 (3): Este kick slider tiene 2 reverse arrow, pero realmente no se si esta del todo bien para estas dificultades

Sobre los new combos, no cambié exactamente todo lo que me dijiste pero me hiciste dar cuenta de que muchos new combos no eran del todo consistentes, así que cambié unos cuantos. Gracias por eso~
En cuanto a los kick sliders, la SV es tan lenta que hasta para los nuevos jugadores debería no ser difícil leerlos.


Normal:
Approach Rate: +1 esta bien :) Bbbbbueno esta bien!
01:02:756 (6): Quizas un clap al final del Slider ya hay un clap che :P


Collab:
Viendo el BPM (144) Approach Rate +1 juega bien. Bo todo el mundo me pide que cambie esto a cada rato... Unos a 7, otros a 8. Sabés? Voy a decidir yo al final. 8.
01:29:215 (x): Una nota aca va bien con el ritmo Lo prefiero sin. Espuma.

Bueno eso es todo :).
Gran Map como siempre :P
Espero que sea rankeado pronto. Buena Suerte ;)
(En un futuro modeare el de TDCC xD)
Bueno, gracias por tomarte la molestia de moddearlo!
Armin
Armin's Hard:
HP Drain Rate: +1 Fixed
01:04:423 (7): I suggest a New Combo here (at the beginning of kiai) and Remove New Combo in 01:05:048 (1) New combos in this case are given for pattern and they're not following the song's verse
02:02:131 (1): I think that you have to Remove New Combo hereNah, I prefer it in this way >.<
03:35:048 (1): I suggest to Remove New Combo here and add a New Combo in 03:35:465. Plays better with vocal Sure thing

[Armin's Hard]

00:22:340 (9) - i can't really write a thing about but look both images and theeeeeen :D
fixed e_e
00:37:756 (5) - I think this note is a bit touching the hp bar :( As naraku said
Thank you for the mods and for your time. :3
also fixed that "naziii" stuff written on PM (I hope T_T)

Download: Within Temptation - Frozen (narakucrimson) [Armin's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
narakucrimson
Awesome! Updated~
Ulysses
Hello!
All suggestion.
[Collab]
01:00:881 (2) - I think here you hv better not to use 6° of 01:00:465 (1).I think you should use the copy of 01:00:465 (1) ww.
01:44:631 (3) - I just think that it's better if you del the wistle of the slider slide.
02:51:090 (1) - 100% volume is the way too high of this spinner.It's too noisy.I think 70% is fit.Add at 02:50:985
02:54:215 - And slience here is the best xp.
03:47:548 - And here.

[Armin's Hard]
03:53:381 - slience here is the best xp.

[Normal]
03:05:465 (1) - Make it 2 sliders?
03:53:381 - slience here is the best xp.

[Easy]
03:53:381 - slience here is the best xp.

Hehe,sorry for my poor modding.
I can't find anything. :< :(
Topic Starter
narakucrimson
Lowered the volume of the spinners and added some more inherited sections, thanks!
Roddie
Ha Ha! Time for Recheck!

No need to kudosu this post, man.

General
  1. You have background2.png not being used. Delete it.
Skin
  1. You're missing the reversearrow.png file. Add it in
Timing Points
  1. 03:53:381-On Easy, Normal, Armin's Hard and Collab, this timing point isn't snapped properly on the white tick. Consider on resnapping it.
Easy

Looks good.

Normal

Great Normal!

Armin's Hard
  1. 03:37:548-Perhaps put a new combo here?
Collab

Fantastic.

All right. That's about it.

Call me back so I can recheck it~
Topic Starter
narakucrimson

Roddie wrote:

Ha Ha! Time for Recheck!

No need to kudosu this post, man.

General
  1. You have background2.png not being used. Delete it. Uhhh you must have an old version, there isn't such a file :P I'll FS anyway because of the next point.
Skin
  1. You're missing the reversearrow.png file. Add it in Right. My bad.
Timing Points
  1. 03:53:381-On Easy, Normal, Armin's Hard and Collab, this timing point isn't snapped properly on the white tick. Consider on resnapping it. No, it's unsnapped on purpose so that the section is before the end of the spinner (and the volume changes earlier)
Easy

Looks good.

Normal

Great Normal!

Armin's Hard
  1. 03:37:548-Perhaps put a new combo here? Well this NC is actually consistent with the other kiais so I'll speak for him this time and say that I won't change this :P
Collab

Fantastic.

All right. That's about it.

Call me back so I can recheck it~
Thanks Roddie!
Roddie
Alright then.

Everything checks out okay! :D

Bubbled.

SPOILER
and Happy Birthday. :)
Topic Starter
narakucrimson
Oh thanks Roddie :D!
Shiro
well I have nothing to say. Decent map. The spread is quite good. Ranked.
Topic Starter
narakucrimson
Oh so cool! Thanks a lot Odaril! :D
Nymph
hey grats naraku! =A=
mancuso_JM_
Felicitaciones naraku!!!
Mercurial
Felicitaciones y felíz cumpleaños! (^)
Pokie
Congrats :D
Roddie
Excellent. Your map finally got ranked!

Congrats, naraku!

And once again, Happy Birthday. 8-)

Edit: Capitalization....
Topic Starter
narakucrimson
Thank you guys :D Your responses really mean a lot to me ;w;
mancuso_JM_
Oops... Feliz cumple Tambien :P
IceBeam
congrats,naraku!
and happy birthday once more :3
Katsuri
felicitaciones por ter su mapa rankeado y feliz cumpleaños.
Gonzvlo
Seriously guys, you need to stop ninja'ing me. I was planning to rank this for naraku's birthday :v

Congratulations and Happy Birthday <3
MoodyRPG
Feliz cumpleaños y gratz por el map :3
Topic Starter
narakucrimson
Thanks again guys <3
freakkater
THX! for this perfect map! i hope i get better soon to finish the collab-diff (ctb)!
MoonShade
Great Map, I love it! :3
F_PhoenixStar_A
How To Make Song To Ranked ?
Topic Starter
narakucrimson
Simple:

1) Submit your finished map to Pending.
2) Start asking users to mod your beatmap, in order to improve it.
3) When you have a good amount of mods, start asking MATs to check it. If they think it's ready to be ranked, they will bubble it ().
4) Once your map is bubbled, a BAT will eventually check it and, if everything is ok, he'll mark it with this icon:
And your map will be ranked :D
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