Elly-chan wrote:

2012 views ohnoes ! ! ! ! ITS THE END OF THE WORLDDDD

Pereira006 wrote:

Elly-chan wrote:

2012 views ohnoes ! ! ! ! ITS THE END OF THE WORLDDDD

lololololo and nothing happened

Elly-chan wrote:

lololololo and nothing happened

Wait for it. It will comeeee soooooon enouuuugh

Elly-chan wrote:

2012 views ohnoes ! ! ! ! ITS THE END OF THE WORLDDDD

Arusha Shuna wrote:

SB is kinda pointless though since there's only pulsing and wave of lava (?) in few parts of the song
maybe try to add more SB ( besides pulsing and "wave of lava")

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Sb]
In guest difficulties, When "diff.png" appear, make appear the name of the diff maker and NOT the name of the mapper. I swear I thought I fixed this earlier... Thanks for pointing it out
I don't like the "storm.jpg" part... ( Use this? ) I'm starting to think about changing it, but I still like it and I haven't got any complaints since I changed the speed..

[Easy]
00:16:851 (1,2) - Krisom Sliders fit really good!, ( i don't like how they are now ) fixed
00:20:381 (3) - make it like this to vary rhythmn ( a simple Arch as Shape is good, preferably placed to the right ) fixed
01:43:322 (2,3,4) - You could use the 2 suggestion i arleady said with different slider shapes this as exmple
the suggestion work at 01:07:146 (1,2) and 02:33:616 (1,2) done

[Hard]
Could have mapped the 2nd spinner after the choruses ...
01:05:822 (1,2,3,4,5) and 02:32:293 (1,2,3,4,5) - Wasn't the star but downside(upside in the 2nd) more good? ( just copypaste and move 01:02:293 (1,2,3,4,5) - , and flip ) fixed

Deserve Star + Kudosu Star, i really liked the skin, plus the diff seems well mapped

1. SB: Seems... ok, not a big fan of it tho.
2. Skin: Good job, I like it.
3. Remove these files since they are not necessary because they are not used anywhere.
4. I'll check the skin elements in detail tomorrow, my pc is having some problems atm.

1. I don't see major problems here, the only thing that bothers me are the really long sliders than can be easily replaced with some creative sliders.
2. 01:14:204 (1) - You can easily replace this spinner with something like this, this is the code is you want to use it.
3. 02:40:675 (1,1,1) - Same here, You can easily replace 1 long spinner with some sliders, consider doing it.

1. Same suggestion as [Easy] you should replace the 1st slider of 01:14:204 and 02:40:675 with some sliders. Seriously, I think you can be way more creative than simple spinner.
2. 00:36:043 (1) - I wouldn't suggest to use this spinner for this diff, I think that a slider would suit better this diff. Plus, It seems a bit short and a bit unexpected.
3. 00:55:454 (1) - I know this is spaced using distance snap but the current spacing breaks the flow and it's a bit confusing. Try moving it some more grids away to fix this.
4. 01:47:734 (3) - Due to the previous repeating slider and the fact that you've used mostly short sliders, you should add a NC here. Otherwise, this slider-speed will seem to be slower causing a combo break.
5. 02:12:660 (2) - Add a NC here like you did with the first chorus, please.

1. Same suggestions for the spinners, you can easily replace at least one of them with some slider formations, creating nice patterns instead of a long and boring spinner. (Same for Insane)
2. 00:58:763 (1,2,3,4,5) - Perhaps, make this star formation a bit better like you did with the last ones?
3. 01:12:440 (1,2,3,4) - Try an Horizontal Flip to improve the flow of this pattern.
4. 02:25:234 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as before, I'm pretty sure you can do better.

1. Same suggestion for the long spinners.
2. 00:21:704 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern makes no sense at all, listen to the song and notice how the music changes at (3) but the jumps are still going. I strongly suggest to re-arrange this pattern, keep in mind that the objects from (3) to (6) belong to a completely different pattern (listen to the music).
3. 00:31:410 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as before, not it makes even less sense. You copied the same pattern for a completely different part of the song. Try re-arranging this one too, please. (It would be even better if you completely re-make this pattern since it doesn't fit this part of the song)
4. 01:00:087 (3) - Try adding a NC here since the music change is quite noticeable. Also, consider removing the jumps from the next objects since those jumps don't fit this part too well.
5. 01:08:469 (7) - It was quite surprising to find a repeating slider following the bad apple's beat in the middle of the chorus, it's a bit unexpected so consider adding some more of them before, so it's more intuitive. (There shouldn't be any problem since that beat goes through all the chorus)
6. 01:56:116 (3) - Try a Reverse Selection for this slider, it would improve the flow by a lot.
7. 02:19:499 (3) - Same as before, I don't see why you joined this part of the song with the last one in a single pattern, the music change is too noticeable. At least, place a NC please.
8. 02:34:940 (7) - Same as before about the beat.
9. The combos on the first part of the map are quite messed up, try to check them in detail and try to do something about it. (If you need more help with this, catch me in IRC)

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]

1. SB: Seems... ok, not a big fan of it tho.
2. Skin: Good job, I like it.
3. Remove these files since they are not necessary because they are not used anywhere. Done
4. I'll check the skin elements in detail tomorrow, my pc is having some problems atm.

[Easy]

1. I don't see major problems here, the only thing that bothers me are the really long sliders than can be easily replaced with some creative sliders.
2. 01:14:204 (1) - You can easily replace this spinner with something like this, this is the code is you want to use it. Ignoring. The spinners really fit the song here and I don't like the idea of using sliders instead
3. 02:40:675 (1,1,1) - Same here, You can easily replace 1 long spinner with some sliders, consider doing it. Same as above

[Hard]

1. Same suggestions for the spinners, you can easily replace at least one of them with some slider formations, creating nice patterns instead of a long and boring spinner. (Same for Insane) Same as Easy
2. 00:58:763 (1,2,3,4,5) - Perhaps, make this star formation a bit better like you did with the last ones? It looks better now. I didn't want to copy paste because I wanted to make the spacing get bigger with each star formation
3. 01:12:440 (1,2,3,4) - Try an Horizontal Flip to improve the flow of this pattern. Done
4. 02:25:234 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as before, I'm pretty sure you can do better. Done

Sorry for the delay, nice mapset. Good Luck

Magical Pokie wrote:

OH Big Mistake


You Should


Artist: Nico Nico Douga
Source:Puella Magi Madoka Magica Ending x Touhou Bad Apple

It's Fine

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]

1. I'll check the skin elements in detail tomorrow, my pc is having some problems atm.

Gonzvlo wrote:

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]

1. I'll check the skin elements in detail tomorrow, my pc is having some problems atm.

Checked, everything seems fine but a file in the SB folder. This is the fixed file if you want to use it.

Good luck o/

Leorda wrote:

Madoka have an apple!!!

General
* The tags is different on each diff!! Fixed
* The SB at 2nd kiai is makes me dizzy orz What should I do?

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Easy
* Make sure that the sliderbody has clearly visible. Hidden sliderbody are confusing for novice players (e.g. 00:10:234 (3)) I think its fine

02:27:881 (1) - Remove new combo for following lyric Ignored
02:31:410 (1) - ^ Ignored

Hard
* AFAIK, streams pattern are inappropriate for Hard diff, but Insane diff. But, I'm not sure about this.... (e.g. 00:04:940 (3,4,5,6,7)) Ignored, there are stream patterns in hard all the time, and I like it anyway.
* Some object are put some unnecessary finish hitsound and makes some weird sounds while gameplay (e.g. 02:13:763 (3)) Ignored, but I did add more hitsounds in places so it sounds better.

00:24:131 (3) - Inconsistent spacing? Ether you have a good eye, or you went through every single note to check spacing. Thanks.
01:50:602 (3) - Inconsistent spacing? Done, same as above.

cya

Leorda wrote:

Elly's Normal
00:17:954 (1) - Add 1 repeating slider for following vocal? sure
00:26:778 (x) - Add note? done..
00:35:601 (5) - Move to 00:35:381? Big No.
02:17:293 (2) - Clap+whistle at tail slider is noisy for me Wat
02:21:263 (4) - Clap+whistle at head slider is noisy for me ^
02:31:851 (5) - Clap+whistle at head slider and repeating slider is noisy for me ^

Leorda wrote:

Madoka have an apple!!! yup lol

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Pereira's Insane
* inb4 "LEORDAAAAAAA, hhhhnnnnnnnggggghhhhhhh" Lol !! sorry T_T
LEORDA !!!!!!! *hhhnnnnnnnnnnnnnggggggggghhhhhhhh* R.I.P
00:14:204 (5) - This object is place in HP Bar, and it's ugly overlap. Please change it fix
00:26:337 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Ugly pattern...... (Nazi)fix
00:30:307 (1) - Remove new combo?fix
01:05:601 (3,1) - This jumps are too far. Please reduce it? Pleaseeeeeeeee!!!!but but sad.face andfix
01:51:484 (7) - New combo?fix
01:53:249 (6) - ^fix
01:53:469 (1) - Remove new combo?fix
02:32:072 (3,1) - This jumps are too far. Please reduce it? Pleaseeeeeeeee!!!!:( okay.face and fix

Thank you !!!

_Gezo_ wrote:

Mod ~

(I barely hear the Bad Apple part orz) I didn't make the song, blame the author xD


Aesthetic, Settings, Suggestions : Don't need to fix
Gameplay : Could be fixed
Warning : Has to be fixed
Other
[Easy]
AIMod finds 25 spacing errors. No it doesn't...
00:38:469 (2,3,4) - Move at y=136 It's already there lol
AR=3 No thanks.

[Elly's Normal]+[Hard]
It's okay Yay

[Pereira's Insane]
00:26:337 (x) - Add a note ? There is a syllable not mapped. o.o

Starミ★(ﾉ°ω°)ﾉ

Makar8000 wrote:

00:38:469 (2,3,4) - Move at y=136

It's already there lol

Roddie wrote:

Hey there.

Well, here's my mod.
[General]

1. Excluding Ozzy's Taiko, 3 seconds is a bit much, don't you think? It might be a good idea if you set the lead-in time at 2 seconds for all the difficulties. It's like that because of the Epilepsy warning blocking notes.

[Easy]

1. 00:56:557 (1)-Add a clap on the reverse arrow? Done
2. 01:49:499 (1)-Add a finish? Done
3. 01:56:557 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning? Done
4. 02:03:616 (1)-^? Done
5. 02:21:263 (3)-Add a finish. Ignored

[Hard]

1. 00:14:315 (1)-Add a finish? Done
2. 00:21:263 (1)-Add a finish on the end. Done
3. 01:47:734 (1)-^ Done
4. 02:03:616 (1)-Add a finish. Done

And that's it. Here's a star.

Download: Kalafina - Bad MagiApple (Makar8000) [Ozzy's Taiko].osu

GLF09 wrote:

To much stars~