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banvi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年10月25日 at 17:32:08

Artist: ALiCE'S EMOTiON
Title: Voice
Source: Touhou
Tags: Intervention Aramaki Yoko Nomiya Ayumi REDALiCE Saigyouji Yuyuko Border of Life Takos Patchouli
BPM: 165
Filesize: 4235kb
Play Time: 02:08
Difficulties Available:
  1. Lunatic (5 stars, 490 notes)
  2. Normal (2.91 stars, 153 notes)
  3. Patchouli's Insane (4.99 stars, 331 notes)
  4. Takos' Hard (4.77 stars, 242 notes)
Download: ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Voice
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Circle: ALiCE'S EMOTiON / Vocal: 荒牧陽子 / Lyrics: 野宮あゆみ / Arrange: REDALiCE
幽雅に咲かせ、墨染の桜 ~ Border of Life / 東方妖々夢

Normal : done
Hard : done (Guest :Takos) -> a nice hard diff
Insane : done (Guest : Patchouli) -> awesome jump maker
Lunatic : done -> stream._.

3I... But [Takos' Hard] really seems not Insane. So I think this is ok

Oh , My first Touhou map? Yes , I love Touhou too <3

Thanks for modding~ :)
Nivails
valuable
Byakugan249
Tenshi-nyan
s h i o n
Breeze
Graven
namazun_old
:3
Thite
star~ :)
S o r d a
wa-
Mercurius
8-)
Takos
fighto~
Melancholy
:)
Candy_old_1
:)
Naichatta
:oops:
swish
kami~ :)
Cyril Scarlet
ALiCE'S EMOTiON キタ━━(゚∀゚)⌒Y⌒(。A。)⌒Y⌒(゚∀゚)⌒Y⌒(。A。)⌒Y⌒(゚∀゚)━━!!w

5日前か まだ新しい (✧≖‿ゝ≖)
KSHR
:)
Nooko
´ω`)ノ
valuable_old
:cry:
pekos
:)
Norn_NNN
wa- :)
Suzully
ばんび先生の東方じゃー :lol:

Second Darksideは東方じゃなくてBMSカウントなのね・・・w
Orgol
:roll:
kurohana
remove unuseless timing points in insane at
00:10:271, 00:21:908 and 01:20:090
star ^^
Topic Starter
banvi

kurohana wrote:

remove unuseless timing points in insane at
00:10:271, 00:21:908 and 01:20:090
star ^^
Hmm , this is still WIP. ([Insane] is remaking now by Patchouli...)
But thanks for check & star~ ;)

@Suzully
ん?Second Darksideなんてあったっけ?
あれは東方BMSで東方要素50%なのでこうして自分で東方ボーカルで作るのはじめてとなります(ノ゚ω゚)ノ
すたーさんくす! :)

@Everyone
まだ全部完成してないし宣伝もしてないのに…
Really thanks for star~~~ :)
Iris
star~ :)
Rare
phonic
Star



Rnked頑張ってください ;)
Topic Starter
banvi
Suzully
ほぉn
Niva
banviiiiiiiiiiiii~ :3

[General]
-> Set audio lead-in time in [Normal] and [Patchouli's Insane] to 2000 manually
-> idk why but combo color orange doesn't fit imo ><

[Normal]
  • 00:07:362 (4,5) - Curve them like this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168914 ?
    00:29:180 (1) - Add finish on slider's start? Sounds lonely without it (:
    00:46:635 (1) - Why not in the center ><
    00:56:817 (3) - Snap the inherit section to the slider end?
    01:06:999 (1) - Maybe curve this slider? (curve it like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168916 also works good imo)
    01:56:453 (1) - Should be one grid up and left to this slider is in the same y-axis with 01:53:544 (1)
[Takos' Hard]
  • 00:03:362 (2,4) - Try to move these two few grids down perhaps? Would be a good jump imo (:
    00:21:908 (1) - The hitsound volume progression here is quite weird but sounds really good :3
    00:28:635 (4) - Finish at slider's end?
    00:34:999 (1) - Snap the inherit section 1/4 earlier
    00:39:362 (1) - Snap the inherit section 1/4 earlier
    00:47:180 (4 and other sliders like this) - Add whistle on slider's end?
    00:57:726 (5) - Move the endpoint few grids up so it doesn't touch (3)?
    01:26:817 (4) - Finish at slider's end?
    01:32:817 (x) - Add a note with finish here maybe?
    01:59:362 (1) - Move few grids left so it doesn't touch (6)?
[Patchouli's Insane]
  • 00:13:726 (4,1) - This pattern is quite shocking me at first glance, but plays well though
    00:34:090 (2) - Add finish on slider start?
    01:23:362 (2) - To be honest I didn't expect the stack here. Repeating slider better imo
    01:27:726 (x) - Add note?
    01:32:090 (1,1,1) - I don't think you need new combo this much...
    01:42:817 (1,2,3) - I'd rather form a triangle between these two, plays better imo
    01:58:999 (5) - CTRL+R maybe?
[Lunatic]
  • 00:29:180 (1) - Add finish on slider start?
    00:59:362 (6) - Err... too close to (7) imo (I know you want to make a triangle here, though)
    01:38:817 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Try to make a pattern like this perhaps : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168920? (I hope this picture is clear enough ^^)
    Beautiful diff, can't mod much (:
go go banvi, hope my mod helps ~
valuable_old
T_T

[Normal]
00:02:635 (4) 1 grid left?(lv4)
00:33:908 (2,3) add clap?
01:09:908 (1) keep volume 70% and add finish?
01:32:090 (4,5) add clap?
good ^^

[Takos' Hard]
00:11:726 ~ 00:21:726 sounds noisy because of many whistle. usually I don't like mixed whistle&clap T_T
00:39:362 (1,2,3) remove whistle?
00:51:726 (3) 1 grid right?
00:51:908 (4) 1 grid left?
00:57:726 (5) change direction like this?? When playing , I felt not flow this.
[attachment=0:1c102]1.png[/attachment:1c102]
01:09:908 (1) keep volume 70% and add finish?
01:33:090 sounds silently , maybe volume +10%?
01:37:544 (1,2,3) remove whistle?
02:07:908 (5) add clap?
good ^^

[Patchouli's Insane]
01:02:090 (3,4) add clap?
01:09:908 (1) keep volume 70% and add finish?
01:39:090 (2) delete? sounds weird -_-
01:48:635 (3,4) add clap?
awesome!! very fun! ^^

[Lunatic]
00:41:726 (1,2,3) not jump?
01:09:908 (1) keep volume 70% and add finish?
stream T_T great & beautiful as always! ^^
Takos

Nivalis wrote:

[Takos' Hard]
  • 00:03:362 (2,4) - Try to move these two few grids down perhaps? Would be a good jump imo (:
    00:21:908 (1) - The hitsound volume progression here is quite weird but sounds really good :3
    00:28:635 (4) - Finish at slider's end?
    00:34:999 (1) - Snap the inherit section 1/4 earlier
    00:39:362 (1) - Snap the inherit section 1/4 earlier
    00:47:180 (4 and other sliders like this) - Add whistle on slider's end?
    00:57:726 (5) - Move the endpoint few grids up so it doesn't touch (3)?
    01:26:817 (4) - Finish at slider's end?
    01:32:817 (x) - Add a note with finish here maybe?
    01:59:362 (1) - Move few grids left so it doesn't touch (6)?
All fixed, thanks Nivalis!

valuable wrote:

[Takos' Hard]
00:11:726 ~ 00:21:726 sounds noisy because of many whistle. usually I don't like mixed whistle&clap T_T Sorry, I'll keep this
00:39:362 (1,2,3) remove whistle?
00:51:726 (3) 1 grid right?
00:51:908 (4) 1 grid left?
00:57:726 (5) change direction like this?? When playing , I felt not flow this. oh nice catch
ATTACH[1.png]
01:09:908 (1) keep volume 70% and add finish? hmm, no
01:33:090 sounds silently , maybe volume +10%?
01:37:544 (1,2,3) remove whistle?
02:07:908 (5) add clap? no~
good ^^
All of the others are fixed.
Thanks for mod valuable~


Download: ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Voice (banvi) [Takos' Hard].osu
Topic Starter
banvi

Nivalis wrote:

banviiiiiiiiiiiii~ :3

[General]
-> Set audio lead-in time in [Normal] and [Patchouli's Insane] to 2000 manually fixed
-> idk why but combo color orange doesn't fit imo >< hmm. someone suggests other color , I'll change.

[Normal]
  • 00:07:362 (4,5) - Curve them like this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168914 ?
    00:29:180 (1) - Add finish on slider's start? Sounds lonely without it (:
    00:46:635 (1) - Why not in the center ><
    00:56:817 (3) - Snap the inherit section to the slider end?
    01:06:999 (1) - Maybe curve this slider? (curve it like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168916 also works good imo)
    01:56:453 (1) - Should be one grid up and left to this slider is in the same y-axis with 01:53:544 (1)
All fixed!

[Patchouli's Insane]
  • 00:13:726 (4,1) - This pattern is quite shocking me at first glance, but plays well though This is his mapping style XD
    00:34:090 (2) - Add finish on slider start? no
    01:23:362 (2) - To be honest I didn't expect the stack here. Repeating slider better imo ok
    01:27:726 (x) - Add note? ok
    01:32:090 (1,1,1) - I don't think you need new combo this much... Hmm , but looking good o.o
    01:42:817 (1,2,3) - I'd rather form a triangle between these two, plays better imo nah
    01:58:999 (5) - CTRL+R maybe? ok
[Lunatic]
  • 00:29:180 (1) - Add finish on slider start? ok
    00:59:362 (6) - Err... too close to (7) imo (I know you want to make a triangle here, though) maybe fixed
    01:38:817 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Try to make a pattern like this perhaps : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168920? (I hope this picture is clear enough ^^) Hmm , no changed
    Beautiful diff, can't mod much (: Thanks~
go go banvi, hope my mod helps ~
Thank you always!! >w</
Topic Starter
banvi

valuable wrote:

T_T

[Normal]
00:02:635 (4) 1 grid left?(lv4)
00:33:908 (2,3) add clap?
01:09:908 (1) keep volume 70% and add finish? Takos says "no". So no changed
01:32:090 (4,5) add clap?

[Patchouli's Insane]
01:02:090 (3,4) add clap?
01:09:908 (1) keep volume 70% and add finish? same as ~
01:39:090 (2) delete? sounds weird -_- he says no
01:48:635 (3,4) add clap?

[Lunatic]
00:41:726 (1,2,3) not jump? no
01:09:908 (1) keep volume 70% and add finish? same as ~
Others are fixed.
Thank you always too~
YTYuyu
yo modding this song because of ur request :)

Normal:
00:01:544(3) - Aline this to the end of (2) to make it easier for beginners
00:48:090(4) - NC
00:53:908(3) - ^
01:46:271(4) - ^
01:57:908(4) - ^

Takos' Hard:
00:01:544(5) - NC
00:04:453(5) - ^
00:07:362(5) - ^
00:13:180(5) - ^
00:16:090(5) - ^
00:18:999(5) - ^
00:48:090(6) - ^
00:53:908(4) - ^
00:59:726(5) - ^
01:05:544(4) - ^
01:49:180(4) - ^
01:57:908(4) - ^
02:00:817(6) - ^
02:03:726(4) - ^

Patchy's Insane:
00:16:635(3) - the end of the slider looks like its touching the scoreboard. i suggest u make this lower
00:28:090(4) - NC

Lunatic:
no problems here

this is the best i can do. wat impressed me the most is patchy's insane diff and ur lunatic diff. so 2 stars from me and GL :D
Tenshi-nyan
heya.

Lunatic
00:08:817 (1,1,1,1) - New Combo spam? Meh.

Nice and clean - just how I like it. Nice diff.

Patchouli
The claps on the sliderticks are really weird.

01:28:090 (4,5) - arrange in like this? http://puu.sh/7DxG

Yes, this map is also nice.

Tako
The claps on the sliderticks are really, REALLY weird.

00:04:453 (5,6,7,8) - you want to place claps? then add them on the white, and not on the red ticks.
00:07:362 (5,6,7) - ^
01:08:635 - remove clap from slidertick.
01:54:271 (2) - ^ ...
Takos

Byakugan249 wrote:

Takos' Hard:
00:01:544(5) - NC
00:04:453(5) - ^
00:07:362(5) - ^
00:13:180(5) - ^
00:16:090(5) - ^
00:18:999(5) - ^
00:48:090(6) - ^
00:53:908(4) - ^
00:59:726(5) - ^
01:05:544(4) - ^
01:49:180(4) - ^
01:57:908(4) - ^
02:00:817(6) - ^
02:03:726(4) - ^
All fixed
Thanks for mod Byakugan249~


Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Tako
The claps on the sliderticks are really, REALLY weird. I talked about this with banvi and we decided that this is fine.

00:04:453 (5,6,7,8) - you want to place claps? then add them on the white, and not on the red ticks. Removed them
00:07:362 (5,6,7) - ^ ^
01:08:635 - remove clap from slidertick. Removed, these hitsounds were added to the wrong tick
01:54:271 (2) - ^ ... ^
Thank you for mod Tenchi-nyan~

Download: ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Voice (banvi) [Takos' Hard].osu
Topic Starter
banvi

Byakugan249 wrote:

yo modding this song because of ur request :)

Normal:
00:01:544(3) - Aline this to the end of (2) to make it easier for beginners ok
00:48:090(4) - NC too short!?
00:53:908(3) - ^ ^
01:46:271(4) - ^ ^
01:57:908(4) - ^ ^

Patchy's Insane:
00:16:635(3) - the end of the slider looks like its touching the scoreboard. i suggest u make this lower fixed[/color]
00:28:090(4) - NC ok

Lunatic:
no problems here (:

this is the best i can do. wat impressed me the most is patchy's insane diff and ur lunatic diff. so 2 stars from me and GL :D
Thanks for modding and precious star!! :)
Topic Starter
banvi

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

heya.

Lunatic
00:08:817 (1,1,1,1) - New Combo spam? Meh. Yeah , but I think this is fine.

Nice and clean - just how I like it. Nice diff. (:

Patchouli
The claps on the sliderticks are really weird. same as Takos

01:28:090 (4,5) - arrange in like this? http://puu.sh/7DxG nah

Yes, this map is also nice.
Thanks for modding & star~ :)
S h i o n
Hi,banvi <3 (Sorry for a little late mod T.T)


General
- Combo2 : 255,128,0 misfits and try some pink (255,149,202) ?


Normal
00:34:908 - Why 50% here ? I don't see very good reason to do that. On the contrary, this part is too quite to hear them and thus confusing. At least 60% to this part.
01:08:999 (2,3) - Confusing to make an accurate beat to new players. Use a slider instead ?
01:43:908 (2) - Remove this note maybe feel better ? Otherwise, a little confusing.


Takos' Hard
- Unused timing section : 01:33:090
00:37:908 (4) - Curve it.
00:50:999 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:07:908 (1,2,3,4) - Kinda random position ? Make it better.
01:23:180 (3) - ^ Associated with 01:24:271 (5) ? Have a try like this:
160,296,83180,2,0,B|80:302|24:356,2,150
124,232,84090,1,10
72,180,84271,2,0,B|144:156|200:100,2,150
01:54:271 (2) - Remove the clap on slider tick. Sounds weird.


Patchouli's Insane
00:34:908 -
Why 40% here ? I don't see very good reason to do that. On the contrary, this part is too quite to hear them and thus confusing. At least 60% to this part.


Lunatic
00:00:817 (3,4,5,6) - This pattern plays awkward IMO though it kinda fitting the music.
- good diff


Good luck~~~
Takos

S h i o n wrote:

Takos' Hard
- Unused timing section : 01:33:090
00:37:908 (4) - Curve it.
00:50:999 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:07:908 (1,2,3,4) - Kinda random position ? Make it better. This isn't random ;w; I tried to make smooth curve across the screen
01:23:180 (3) - ^ Associated with 01:24:271 (5) ? Have a try like this:
160,296,83180,2,0,B|80:302|24:356,2,150
124,232,84090,1,10
72,180,84271,2,0,B|144:156|200:100,2,150
01:54:271 (2) - Remove the clap on slider tick. Sounds weird.
All others are fixed.
Thanks for mod S h i o n~ >w</


Download: ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Voice (banvi) [Takos' Hard].osu
Topic Starter
banvi

S h i o n wrote:

Hi,banvi <3 (Sorry for a little late mod T.T)

General
- Combo2 : 255,128,0 misfits and try some pink (255,149,202) ?

Normal
00:34:908 - Why 50% here ? I don't see very good reason to do that. On the contrary, this part is too quite to hear them and thus confusing. At least 60% to this part.
01:08:999 (2,3) - Confusing to make an accurate beat to new players. Use a slider instead ?
01:43:908 (2) - Remove this note maybe feel better ? Otherwise, a little confusing.


Patchouli's Insane
00:34:908 -
Why 40% here ? I don't see very good reason to do that. On the contrary, this part is too quite to hear them and thus confusing. At least 60% to this part.



Lunatic
00:00:817 (3,4,5,6) - This pattern plays awkward IMO though it kinda fitting the music. I don't think so...
- good diff


Good luck~~~
Others are fixed.
Thank you for modding~ :)
Breeze

General

  1. I feel map ends at 02:13:908 with a KIAI fountain effect would be nice :p

Tako's Hard

  1. 00:41:180 (2) - Slider end hidden by previous note, when you get 300, it's a bit hard to tell that's a slider while playing
  2. 01:44:817 (3) - Add finish?
  3. 01:49:180 (4) - I don't know why, but this clap sounds loud
  4. 01:50:635 (1) - Add finish?
  5. 02:02:271 (1) - ^
  6. 02:06:635 (3,4,5) - Add finish at slider start to (3,4) and note 5

Patchouli's Insane

  1. 00:34:999 - 00:39:180 - Why this period of time don't use clap sound? And so does 01:33:180 - 01:37:362
  2. 00:57:544 (3,4) - Rhythm is fine, but spacing of (2,3) is confusing (a bit far IMO), try to upside down start and end of (3), and stack (4) under (3)'s end?
  3. 01:55:726 (3) - Emm, yea, this one is spacing far, too IMO. Anyway, it's fine since Insane diff. though. Depends on yourself to change it or not

Lunatic

  1. 00:34:999 - 00:39:180 - Same to Insane, at least add some whistle...? 01:33:180 - 01:37:362, too
  2. 00:45:180 (1,2,3) - I think use larger spacing for these 3/4 beat space note would be better, since you've used almost same spacing to 00:44:635 (1,2,3), but which is 1/2 beat space. That might make 00:45:180 (1,2,3) misread to 1/2 beat space IMO
  3. 01:42:635 (3,4,5,6) - I think it's not a good idea to use gradually spacing up here, since it makes 01:43:362 (1,2,3) easily read to 1/2 beat space :/

Nice map
call me back for a recheck when you have any reply
Topic Starter
banvi

Breeze wrote:

General

  1. I feel map ends at 02:13:908 with a KIAI fountain effect would be nice :p
    Ah , yes. However we are hard to map at this part & have no idea because of complex rhythms.
    But I think this is not bad ending. So we keep this. Sorry ><;

Patchouli's Insane

  1. 00:34:999 - 00:39:180 - Why this period of time don't use clap sound? And so does 01:33:180 - 01:37:362
    because I want to prioritize backsounds. But I added whistles.
  2. 00:57:544 (3,4) - Rhythm is fine, but spacing of (2,3) is confusing (a bit far IMO), try to upside down start and end of (3), and stack (4) under (3)'s end? fixed
  3. 01:55:726 (3) - Emm, yea, this one is spacing far, too IMO. Anyway, it's fine since Insane diff. though. Depends on yourself to change it or not
    reduced spacing a bit

Lunatic

  1. 00:34:999 - 00:39:180 - Same to Insane, at least add some whistle...? 01:33:180 - 01:37:362, too add whistles
  2. 00:45:180 (1,2,3) - I think use larger spacing for these 3/4 beat space note would be better, since you've used almost same spacing to 00:44:635 (1,2,3), but which is 1/2 beat space. That might make 00:45:180 (1,2,3) misread to 1/2 beat space IMO
    yea , but I have no idea. So changed a silder :p
  3. 01:42:635 (3,4,5,6) - I think it's not a good idea to use gradually spacing up here, since it makes 01:43:362 (1,2,3) easily read to 1/2 beat space :/
    To be honest , I want to use gradually spacing up here. So changed a silder too ><

Nice map
call me back for a recheck when you have any reply ok~
Really thanks for modding~ :)
Takos

Breeze wrote:

General

  1. I feel map ends at 02:13:908 with a KIAI fountain effect would be nice :p I will let banvi decided this~

Tako's Hard

my name is Takos btw ;w;
  1. 00:41:180 (2) - Slider end hidden by previous note, when you get 300, it's a bit hard to tell that's a slider while playing fixed
    ATTACH[0.jpg]
  2. 01:44:817 (3) - Add finish? added
  3. 01:49:180 (4) - I don't know why, but this clap sounds loud removed the clap sound
  4. 01:50:635 (1) - Add finish? added
  5. 02:02:271 (1) - ^ ok
  6. 02:06:635 (3,4,5) - Add finish at slider start to (3,4) and note 5 added!

Thank you for modding Breeze~


Download: ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Voice (banvi) [Takos' Hard].osu
Breeze

Takos wrote:

my name is Takos btw ;w;
Sorry, Takos kun :p I misread

Rechecked this map and it's fine enough for a bubble
BTW I think lunatic is easier than Insane /w\
Topic Starter
banvi
Thank you very much!! \:D/

Breeze wrote:

BTW I think lunatic is easier than Insane /w\
I think Lunatic is harder than Insane because I can't pass streams. /w\
Garven
o/

[General]
02:13:908 - I find this point to be a better place to end the map since it's the end of the phrase.

[Patch]
01:32:453 (1) - Remove new combo

[Lunatic]
00:09:180 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo

Let me know what you think~
Topic Starter
banvi

Garven wrote:

o/

[General]
02:13:908 - I find this point to be a better place to end the map since it's the end of the phrase.

Breeze wrote:

General

  1. I feel map ends at 02:13:908 with a KIAI fountain effect would be nice :p
    Ah , yes. However we are hard to map at this part & have no idea because of complex rhythms.
    (And I don't want to add death rhythm at the last.)
    But I think this is not bad ending. So we keep this. Sorry ><;
[Patch]
01:32:453 (1) - Remove new combo ok

[Lunatic]
00:09:180 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo ok

Let me know what you think~
Thank you~ <3
Garven
Alrighty then. Ranked!
eveless
wow
Topic Starter
banvi
Thank you very much Garven!!
I love you~ <33333
KayeSara
H~a~p~p~y~R~a~n~k~i~n~g
Breeze
Hey, Garven, I'm glad you have same feeling as me
But it seems you haven't seen my last post /o/

And RANKおめでとうbanviさん~
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