kurohana wrote:

remove unuseless timing points in insane at
00:10:271, 00:21:908 and 01:20:090
star ^^

• 00:07:362 (4,5) - Curve them like this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168914 ?
  00:29:180 (1) - Add finish on slider's start? Sounds lonely without it (:
  00:46:635 (1) - Why not in the center ><
  00:56:817 (3) - Snap the inherit section to the slider end?
  01:06:999 (1) - Maybe curve this slider? (curve it like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168916 also works good imo)
  01:56:453 (1) - Should be one grid up and left to this slider is in the same y-axis with 01:53:544 (1)

• 00:03:362 (2,4) - Try to move these two few grids down perhaps? Would be a good jump imo (:
  00:21:908 (1) - The hitsound volume progression here is quite weird but sounds really good :3
  00:28:635 (4) - Finish at slider's end?
  00:34:999 (1) - Snap the inherit section 1/4 earlier
  00:39:362 (1) - Snap the inherit section 1/4 earlier
  00:47:180 (4 and other sliders like this) - Add whistle on slider's end?
  00:57:726 (5) - Move the endpoint few grids up so it doesn't touch (3)?
  01:26:817 (4) - Finish at slider's end?
  01:32:817 (x) - Add a note with finish here maybe?
  01:59:362 (1) - Move few grids left so it doesn't touch (6)?

• 00:13:726 (4,1) - This pattern is quite shocking me at first glance, but plays well though
  00:34:090 (2) - Add finish on slider start?
  01:23:362 (2) - To be honest I didn't expect the stack here. Repeating slider better imo
  01:27:726 (x) - Add note?
  01:32:090 (1,1,1) - I don't think you need new combo this much...
  01:42:817 (1,2,3) - I'd rather form a triangle between these two, plays better imo
  01:58:999 (5) - CTRL+R maybe?

• 00:29:180 (1) - Add finish on slider start?
  00:59:362 (6) - Err... too close to (7) imo (I know you want to make a triangle here, though)
  01:38:817 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Try to make a pattern like this perhaps : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168920? (I hope this picture is clear enough ^^)
  Beautiful diff, can't mod much (:

Nivalis wrote:

[Takos' Hard]

• 00:03:362 (2,4) - Try to move these two few grids down perhaps? Would be a good jump imo (:
  00:21:908 (1) - The hitsound volume progression here is quite weird but sounds really good :3
  00:28:635 (4) - Finish at slider's end?
  00:34:999 (1) - Snap the inherit section 1/4 earlier
  00:39:362 (1) - Snap the inherit section 1/4 earlier
  00:47:180 (4 and other sliders like this) - Add whistle on slider's end?
  00:57:726 (5) - Move the endpoint few grids up so it doesn't touch (3)?
  01:26:817 (4) - Finish at slider's end?
  01:32:817 (x) - Add a note with finish here maybe?
  01:59:362 (1) - Move few grids left so it doesn't touch (6)?

valuable wrote:

[Takos' Hard]
00:11:726 ~ 00:21:726 sounds noisy because of many whistle. usually I don't like mixed whistle&clap T_T Sorry, I'll keep this
00:39:362 (1,2,3) remove whistle?
00:51:726 (3) 1 grid right?
00:51:908 (4) 1 grid left?
00:57:726 (5) change direction like this?? When playing , I felt not flow this. oh nice catch
ATTACH[1.png]
01:09:908 (1) keep volume 70% and add finish? hmm, no
01:33:090 sounds silently , maybe volume +10%?
01:37:544 (1,2,3) remove whistle?
02:07:908 (5) add clap? no~
good ^^

Nivalis wrote:

banviiiiiiiiiiiii~ :3

[General]
-> Set audio lead-in time in [Normal] and [Patchouli's Insane] to 2000 manually fixed
-> idk why but combo color orange doesn't fit imo >< hmm. someone suggests other color , I'll change.

[Normal]

• 00:07:362 (4,5) - Curve them like this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168914 ?
  00:29:180 (1) - Add finish on slider's start? Sounds lonely without it (:
  00:46:635 (1) - Why not in the center ><
  00:56:817 (3) - Snap the inherit section to the slider end?
  01:06:999 (1) - Maybe curve this slider? (curve it like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168916 also works good imo)
  01:56:453 (1) - Should be one grid up and left to this slider is in the same y-axis with 01:53:544 (1)

All fixed!

[Patchouli's Insane]

• 00:13:726 (4,1) - This pattern is quite shocking me at first glance, but plays well though This is his mapping style XD
  00:34:090 (2) - Add finish on slider start? no
  01:23:362 (2) - To be honest I didn't expect the stack here. Repeating slider better imo ok
  01:27:726 (x) - Add note? ok
  01:32:090 (1,1,1) - I don't think you need new combo this much... Hmm , but looking good o.o
  01:42:817 (1,2,3) - I'd rather form a triangle between these two, plays better imo nah
  01:58:999 (5) - CTRL+R maybe? ok

[Lunatic]

• 00:29:180 (1) - Add finish on slider start? ok
  00:59:362 (6) - Err... too close to (7) imo (I know you want to make a triangle here, though) maybe fixed
  01:38:817 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Try to make a pattern like this perhaps : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168920? (I hope this picture is clear enough ^^) Hmm , no changed
  Beautiful diff, can't mod much (: Thanks~

go go banvi, hope my mod helps ~

valuable wrote:

T_T

[Normal]
00:02:635 (4) 1 grid left?(lv4)
00:33:908 (2,3) add clap?
01:09:908 (1) keep volume 70% and add finish? Takos says "no". So no changed
01:32:090 (4,5) add clap?

[Patchouli's Insane]
01:02:090 (3,4) add clap?
01:09:908 (1) keep volume 70% and add finish? same as ~
01:39:090 (2) delete? sounds weird -_- he says no
01:48:635 (3,4) add clap?

[Lunatic]
00:41:726 (1,2,3) not jump? no
01:09:908 (1) keep volume 70% and add finish? same as ~

Byakugan249 wrote:

Takos' Hard:
00:01:544(5) - NC
00:04:453(5) - ^
00:07:362(5) - ^
00:13:180(5) - ^
00:16:090(5) - ^
00:18:999(5) - ^
00:48:090(6) - ^
00:53:908(4) - ^
00:59:726(5) - ^
01:05:544(4) - ^
01:49:180(4) - ^
01:57:908(4) - ^
02:00:817(6) - ^
02:03:726(4) - ^

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Tako
The claps on the sliderticks are really, REALLY weird. I talked about this with banvi and we decided that this is fine.

00:04:453 (5,6,7,8) - you want to place claps? then add them on the white, and not on the red ticks. Removed them
00:07:362 (5,6,7) - ^ ^
01:08:635 - remove clap from slidertick. Removed, these hitsounds were added to the wrong tick
01:54:271 (2) - ^ ... ^

Byakugan249 wrote:

yo modding this song because of ur request

Normal:
00:01:544(3) - Aline this to the end of (2) to make it easier for beginners ok
00:48:090(4) - NC too short!?
00:53:908(3) - ^ ^
01:46:271(4) - ^ ^
01:57:908(4) - ^ ^

Patchy's Insane:
00:16:635(3) - the end of the slider looks like its touching the scoreboard. i suggest u make this lower fixed[/color]
00:28:090(4) - NC ok

Lunatic:
no problems here (:

this is the best i can do. wat impressed me the most is patchy's insane diff and ur lunatic diff. so 2 stars from me and GL

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

heya.

Lunatic
00:08:817 (1,1,1,1) - New Combo spam? Meh. Yeah , but I think this is fine.

Nice and clean - just how I like it. Nice diff. (:

Patchouli
The claps on the sliderticks are really weird. same as Takos

01:28:090 (4,5) - arrange in like this? http://puu.sh/7DxG nah

Yes, this map is also nice.

160,296,83180,2,0,B|80:302|24:356,2,150
124,232,84090,1,10
72,180,84271,2,0,B|144:156|200:100,2,150

S h i o n wrote:

Takos' Hard
- Unused timing section : 01:33:090
00:37:908 (4) - Curve it.
00:50:999 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:07:908 (1,2,3,4) - Kinda random position ? Make it better. This isn't random ;w; I tried to make smooth curve across the screen
01:23:180 (3) - ^ Associated with 01:24:271 (5) ? Have a try like this:

160,296,83180,2,0,B|80:302|24:356,2,150
124,232,84090,1,10
72,180,84271,2,0,B|144:156|200:100,2,150

01:54:271 (2) - Remove the clap on slider tick. Sounds weird.

S h i o n wrote:

Hi,banvi <3 (Sorry for a little late mod T.T)

General
- Combo2 : 255,128,0 misfits and try some pink (255,149,202) ?

Normal
00:34:908 - Why 50% here ? I don't see very good reason to do that. On the contrary, this part is too quite to hear them and thus confusing. At least 60% to this part.
01:08:999 (2,3) - Confusing to make an accurate beat to new players. Use a slider instead ?
01:43:908 (2) - Remove this note maybe feel better ? Otherwise, a little confusing.


Patchouli's Insane
00:34:908 - Why 40% here ? I don't see very good reason to do that. On the contrary, this part is too quite to hear them and thus confusing. At least 60% to this part.



Lunatic
00:00:817 (3,4,5,6) - This pattern plays awkward IMO though it kinda fitting the music. I don't think so...
- good diff


Good luck~~~

Breeze wrote:

General

1. I feel map ends at 02:13:908 with a KIAI fountain effect would be nice :p
   Ah , yes. However we are hard to map at this part & have no idea because of complex rhythms.
   But I think this is not bad ending. So we keep this. Sorry ><;

Patchouli's Insane

1. 00:34:999 - 00:39:180 - Why this period of time don't use clap sound? And so does 01:33:180 - 01:37:362
   because I want to prioritize backsounds. But I added whistles.
2. 00:57:544 (3,4) - Rhythm is fine, but spacing of (2,3) is confusing (a bit far IMO), try to upside down start and end of (3), and stack (4) under (3)'s end? fixed
3. 01:55:726 (3) - Emm, yea, this one is spacing far, too IMO. Anyway, it's fine since Insane diff. though. Depends on yourself to change it or not
   reduced spacing a bit

Lunatic

1. 00:34:999 - 00:39:180 - Same to Insane, at least add some whistle...? 01:33:180 - 01:37:362, too add whistles
2. 00:45:180 (1,2,3) - I think use larger spacing for these 3/4 beat space note would be better, since you've used almost same spacing to 00:44:635 (1,2,3), but which is 1/2 beat space. That might make 00:45:180 (1,2,3) misread to 1/2 beat space IMO
   yea , but I have no idea. So changed a silder :p
3. 01:42:635 (3,4,5,6) - I think it's not a good idea to use gradually spacing up here, since it makes 01:43:362 (1,2,3) easily read to 1/2 beat space :/
   To be honest , I want to use gradually spacing up here. So changed a silder too ><

Nice map
call me back for a recheck when you have any reply ok~

Breeze wrote:

General

1. I feel map ends at 02:13:908 with a KIAI fountain effect would be nice :p I will let banvi decided this~

Tako's Hard

my name is Takos btw ;w;

1. 00:41:180 (2) - Slider end hidden by previous note, when you get 300, it's a bit hard to tell that's a slider while playing fixed
   ATTACH[0.jpg]
2. 01:44:817 (3) - Add finish? added
3. 01:49:180 (4) - I don't know why, but this clap sounds loud removed the clap sound
4. 01:50:635 (1) - Add finish? added
5. 02:02:271 (1) - ^ ok
6. 02:06:635 (3,4,5) - Add finish at slider start to (3,4) and note 5 added!

Takos wrote:

my name is Takos btw ;w;

Breeze wrote:

BTW I think lunatic is easier than Insane /w\

Garven wrote:

o/

[General]
02:13:908 - I find this point to be a better place to end the map since it's the end of the phrase.

Breeze wrote:

General

1. I feel map ends at 02:13:908 with a KIAI fountain effect would be nice :p
   Ah , yes. However we are hard to map at this part & have no idea because of complex rhythms.
   (And I don't want to add death rhythm at the last.)
   But I think this is not bad ending. So we keep this. Sorry ><;

[Patch]
01:32:453 (1) - Remove new combo ok

[Lunatic]
00:09:180 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo ok

Let me know what you think~