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ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Voice

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banvi
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年10月25日 at 17:32:08

Artist: ALiCE'S EMOTiON
Title: Voice
Source: Touhou
Tags: Intervention Aramaki Yoko Nomiya Ayumi REDALiCE Saigyouji Yuyuko Border of Life Takos Patchouli
BPM: 165
Filesize: 4235kb
Play Time: 02:08
Difficulties Available:
  1. Lunatic (5 stars, 490 notes)
  2. Normal (2.91 stars, 153 notes)
  3. Patchouli's Insane (4.99 stars, 331 notes)
  4. Takos' Hard (4.77 stars, 242 notes)
Download: ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Voice
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Circle: ALiCE'S EMOTiON / Vocal: 荒牧陽子 / Lyrics: 野宮あゆみ / Arrange: REDALiCE
幽雅に咲かせ、墨染の桜 ～ Border of Life / 東方妖々夢

Normal : done
Hard : done (Guest :Takos) -> a nice hard diff
Insane : done (Guest : Patchouli) -> awesome jump maker
Lunatic : done -> stream._.

3I... But [Takos' Hard] really seems not Insane. So I think this is ok

Oh , My first Touhou map? Yes , I love Touhou too <3

Thanks for modding~ :)
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Last edited by banvi , edited 27 times in total.
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:3
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8-)
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fighto~
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:)
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kami~ :)
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Cyril Scarlet
ALiCE'S EMOTiON ｷﾀ━━(ﾟ∀ﾟ)⌒Ｙ⌒(｡Ａ｡)⌒Ｙ⌒(ﾟ∀ﾟ)⌒Ｙ⌒(｡Ａ｡)⌒Ｙ⌒(ﾟ∀ﾟ)━━!!ｗ

５日前か　まだ新しい　(✧≖‿ゝ≖)
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:)
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:cry:
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:)
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wa- :)
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Suzully
ばんび先生の東方じゃー :lol:

Second Darksideは東方じゃなくてBMSカウントなのね・・・ｗ
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:roll:
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kurohana
remove unuseless timing points in insane at
00:10:271, 00:21:908 and 01:20:090
star ^^
banvi
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banvi

kurohana wrote:

remove unuseless timing points in insane at
00:10:271, 00:21:908 and 01:20:090
star ^^
Hmm , this is still WIP. ([Insane] is remaking now by Patchouli...)
But thanks for check & star~ ;)

@Suzully
ん？Second Darksideなんてあったっけ？
あれは東方BMSで東方要素50％なのでこうして自分で東方ボーカルで作るのはじめてとなります(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ
すたーさんくす！ :)

@Everyone
まだ全部完成してないし宣伝もしてないのに…
Really thanks for star~~~ :)
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star~ :)
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Star ★



Rnked頑張ってください ;)
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Last edited by banvi , edited 2 times in total.
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ほぉｎ
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banviiiiiiiiiiiii~ :3

[General]
-> Set audio lead-in time in [Normal] and [Patchouli's Insane] to 2000 manually
-> idk why but combo color orange doesn't fit imo ><

[Normal]
  • 00:07:362 (4,5) - Curve them like this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168914 ?
    00:29:180 (1) - Add finish on slider's start? Sounds lonely without it (:
    00:46:635 (1) - Why not in the center ><
    00:56:817 (3) - Snap the inherit section to the slider end?
    01:06:999 (1) - Maybe curve this slider? (curve it like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168916 also works good imo)
    01:56:453 (1) - Should be one grid up and left to this slider is in the same y-axis with 01:53:544 (1)
[Takos' Hard]
  • 00:03:362 (2,4) - Try to move these two few grids down perhaps? Would be a good jump imo (:
    00:21:908 (1) - The hitsound volume progression here is quite weird but sounds really good :3
    00:28:635 (4) - Finish at slider's end?
    00:34:999 (1) - Snap the inherit section 1/4 earlier
    00:39:362 (1) - Snap the inherit section 1/4 earlier
    00:47:180 (4 and other sliders like this) - Add whistle on slider's end?
    00:57:726 (5) - Move the endpoint few grids up so it doesn't touch (3)?
    01:26:817 (4) - Finish at slider's end?
    01:32:817 (x) - Add a note with finish here maybe?
    01:59:362 (1) - Move few grids left so it doesn't touch (6)?
[Patchouli's Insane]
  • 00:13:726 (4,1) - This pattern is quite shocking me at first glance, but plays well though
    00:34:090 (2) - Add finish on slider start?
    01:23:362 (2) - To be honest I didn't expect the stack here. Repeating slider better imo
    01:27:726 (x) - Add note?
    01:32:090 (1,1,1) - I don't think you need new combo this much...
    01:42:817 (1,2,3) - I'd rather form a triangle between these two, plays better imo
    01:58:999 (5) - CTRL+R maybe?
[Lunatic]
  • 00:29:180 (1) - Add finish on slider start?
    00:59:362 (6) - Err... too close to (7) imo (I know you want to make a triangle here, though)
    01:38:817 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Try to make a pattern like this perhaps : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168920? (I hope this picture is clear enough ^^)
    Beautiful diff, can't mod much (:
go go banvi, hope my mod helps ~
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valuable_old
T_T

[Normal]
00:02:635 (4) 1 grid left?(lv4)
00:33:908 (2,3) add clap?
01:09:908 (1) keep volume 70% and add finish?
01:32:090 (4,5) add clap?
good ^^

[Takos' Hard]
00:11:726 ~ 00:21:726 sounds noisy because of many whistle. usually I don't like mixed whistle&clap T_T
00:39:362 (1,2,3) remove whistle?
00:51:726 (3) 1 grid right?
00:51:908 (4) 1 grid left?
00:57:726 (5) change direction like this?? When playing , I felt not flow this.
[attachment=0:1c102]1.png[/attachment:1c102]
01:09:908 (1) keep volume 70% and add finish?
01:33:090 sounds silently , maybe volume +10%?
01:37:544 (1,2,3) remove whistle?
02:07:908 (5) add clap?
good ^^

[Patchouli's Insane]
01:02:090 (3,4) add clap?
01:09:908 (1) keep volume 70% and add finish?
01:39:090 (2) delete? sounds weird -_-
01:48:635 (3,4) add clap?
awesome!! very fun! ^^

[Lunatic]
00:41:726 (1,2,3) not jump?
01:09:908 (1) keep volume 70% and add finish?
stream T_T great & beautiful as always! ^^
Takos
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Nivalis wrote:

[Takos' Hard]
  • 00:03:362 (2,4) - Try to move these two few grids down perhaps? Would be a good jump imo (:
    00:21:908 (1) - The hitsound volume progression here is quite weird but sounds really good :3
    00:28:635 (4) - Finish at slider's end?
    00:34:999 (1) - Snap the inherit section 1/4 earlier
    00:39:362 (1) - Snap the inherit section 1/4 earlier
    00:47:180 (4 and other sliders like this) - Add whistle on slider's end?
    00:57:726 (5) - Move the endpoint few grids up so it doesn't touch (3)?
    01:26:817 (4) - Finish at slider's end?
    01:32:817 (x) - Add a note with finish here maybe?
    01:59:362 (1) - Move few grids left so it doesn't touch (6)?
All fixed, thanks Nivalis!

valuable wrote:

[Takos' Hard]
00:11:726 ~ 00:21:726 sounds noisy because of many whistle. usually I don't like mixed whistle&clap T_T Sorry, I'll keep this
00:39:362 (1,2,3) remove whistle?
00:51:726 (3) 1 grid right?
00:51:908 (4) 1 grid left?
00:57:726 (5) change direction like this?? When playing , I felt not flow this. oh nice catch
ATTACH[1.png]
01:09:908 (1) keep volume 70% and add finish? hmm, no
01:33:090 sounds silently , maybe volume +10%?
01:37:544 (1,2,3) remove whistle?
02:07:908 (5) add clap? no~
good ^^
All of the others are fixed.
Thanks for mod valuable~

Download: ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Voice (banvi) [Takos' Hard].osu
banvi
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banvi

Nivalis wrote:

banviiiiiiiiiiiii~ :3

[General]
-> Set audio lead-in time in [Normal] and [Patchouli's Insane] to 2000 manually fixed
-> idk why but combo color orange doesn't fit imo >< hmm. someone suggests other color , I'll change.

[Normal]
  • 00:07:362 (4,5) - Curve them like this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168914 ?
    00:29:180 (1) - Add finish on slider's start? Sounds lonely without it (:
    00:46:635 (1) - Why not in the center ><
    00:56:817 (3) - Snap the inherit section to the slider end?
    01:06:999 (1) - Maybe curve this slider? (curve it like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168916 also works good imo)
    01:56:453 (1) - Should be one grid up and left to this slider is in the same y-axis with 01:53:544 (1)
All fixed!

[Patchouli's Insane]
  • 00:13:726 (4,1) - This pattern is quite shocking me at first glance, but plays well though This is his mapping style XD
    00:34:090 (2) - Add finish on slider start? no
    01:23:362 (2) - To be honest I didn't expect the stack here. Repeating slider better imo ok
    01:27:726 (x) - Add note? ok
    01:32:090 (1,1,1) - I don't think you need new combo this much... Hmm , but looking good o.o
    01:42:817 (1,2,3) - I'd rather form a triangle between these two, plays better imo nah
    01:58:999 (5) - CTRL+R maybe? ok
[Lunatic]
  • 00:29:180 (1) - Add finish on slider start? ok
    00:59:362 (6) - Err... too close to (7) imo (I know you want to make a triangle here, though) maybe fixed
    01:38:817 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Try to make a pattern like this perhaps : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168920? (I hope this picture is clear enough ^^) Hmm , no changed
    Beautiful diff, can't mod much (: Thanks~
go go banvi, hope my mod helps ~
Thank you always!! >w</
banvi
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banvi

valuable wrote:

T_T

[Normal]
00:02:635 (4) 1 grid left?(lv4)
00:33:908 (2,3) add clap?
01:09:908 (1) keep volume 70% and add finish? Takos says "no". So no changed
01:32:090 (4,5) add clap?

[Patchouli's Insane]
01:02:090 (3,4) add clap?
01:09:908 (1) keep volume 70% and add finish? same as ~
01:39:090 (2) delete? sounds weird -_- he says no
01:48:635 (3,4) add clap?

[Lunatic]
00:41:726 (1,2,3) not jump? no
01:09:908 (1) keep volume 70% and add finish? same as ~
Others are fixed.
Thank you always too~
YTYuyu
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YTYuyu
yo modding this song because of ur request :)

Normal:
00:01:544(3) - Aline this to the end of (2) to make it easier for beginners
00:48:090(4) - NC
00:53:908(3) - ^
01:46:271(4) - ^
01:57:908(4) - ^

Takos' Hard:
00:01:544(5) - NC
00:04:453(5) - ^
00:07:362(5) - ^
00:13:180(5) - ^
00:16:090(5) - ^
00:18:999(5) - ^
00:48:090(6) - ^
00:53:908(4) - ^
00:59:726(5) - ^
01:05:544(4) - ^
01:49:180(4) - ^
01:57:908(4) - ^
02:00:817(6) - ^
02:03:726(4) - ^

Patchy's Insane:
00:16:635(3) - the end of the slider looks like its touching the scoreboard. i suggest u make this lower
00:28:090(4) - NC

Lunatic:
no problems here

this is the best i can do. wat impressed me the most is patchy's insane diff and ur lunatic diff. so 2 stars from me and GL :D
Tenshi-nyan
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Tenshi-nyan
heya.

Lunatic
00:08:817 (1,1,1,1) - New Combo spam? Meh.

Nice and clean - just how I like it. Nice diff.

Patchouli
The claps on the sliderticks are really weird.

01:28:090 (4,5) - arrange in like this? http://puu.sh/7DxG

Yes, this map is also nice.

Tako
The claps on the sliderticks are really, REALLY weird.

00:04:453 (5,6,7,8) - you want to place claps? then add them on the white, and not on the red ticks.
00:07:362 (5,6,7) - ^
01:08:635 - remove clap from slidertick.
01:54:271 (2) - ^ ...
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