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Rib - Tsukiakari
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hello there
- metadata should be 月陽 as artist and then rib for romanized, but im not sure about this one
and ツキアカリ should be the song name with tsukiakari as romanized title
- remove countdown zz
- maybe add a background?
- also im not sure whether tags are appropriate or not lmao - unfortunately i dont know the tags should be metadata-wise
and then the map itself
00:01:130 (1) - this starts a bit early, put it on the timing point instead (00:01:280)
00:06:230 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a bit overmapped imo, should follow bass and then change to guitar once it comes in - the part after is fine note-wise, but i think the placement is a bit weird because it looks kinda random
00:15:680 (5) - NC
00:21:230 (1,2) - maybe make into one slider, or a repeat slider
00:21:830 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - pattern is the same but theres clear change in the music, so I would suggest to put a short spaced stream here with low hitsound volume and keep the stream thats coming after and maybe increase spacing on that
00:34:580 (1) - put a single here and move this slider to the next tick
and generally i think you arent emphasizing everything as you should, but fair enough you are following guitar, but i think theres space to put in sliders on strong drum sounds as it wouldnt really ruin the flow, but maybe improve it instead - it seems so tiring with only singletaps and barely sliders on downbeats
00:36:380 (1,1,1,1,1) - i dont think you need nc on all of them since they are the same sound, you could also change pattern but as I said the the notes are the same so I guess it could work out
00:38:030 (1) - put single here and move slider to the next tick
00:40:730 (2) - you could make this into a triple
00:40:130 (2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - also in this part you are emphasizing the wrong beat, moving everything a tick to the right would solve it, but i think you should just remap the part for now, since its not much work :d - you can clearly hear that the kicks are on sliderends which isnt something that you really want, but there are exceptions though for what works or not but yea try to avoid that
00:49:130 - should be a note here; possibly a slider?
thats it for my post, good luck with the map
- metadata should be 月陽 as artist and then rib for romanized, but im not sure about this one
and ツキアカリ should be the song name with tsukiakari as romanized title
- remove countdown zz
- maybe add a background?
- also im not sure whether tags are appropriate or not lmao - unfortunately i dont know the tags should be metadata-wise
and then the map itself
00:01:130 (1) - this starts a bit early, put it on the timing point instead (00:01:280)
00:06:230 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a bit overmapped imo, should follow bass and then change to guitar once it comes in - the part after is fine note-wise, but i think the placement is a bit weird because it looks kinda random
00:15:680 (5) - NC
00:21:230 (1,2) - maybe make into one slider, or a repeat slider
00:21:830 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - pattern is the same but theres clear change in the music, so I would suggest to put a short spaced stream here with low hitsound volume and keep the stream thats coming after and maybe increase spacing on that
00:34:580 (1) - put a single here and move this slider to the next tick
and generally i think you arent emphasizing everything as you should, but fair enough you are following guitar, but i think theres space to put in sliders on strong drum sounds as it wouldnt really ruin the flow, but maybe improve it instead - it seems so tiring with only singletaps and barely sliders on downbeats
00:36:380 (1,1,1,1,1) - i dont think you need nc on all of them since they are the same sound, you could also change pattern but as I said the the notes are the same so I guess it could work out
00:38:030 (1) - put single here and move slider to the next tick
00:40:730 (2) - you could make this into a triple
00:40:130 (2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - also in this part you are emphasizing the wrong beat, moving everything a tick to the right would solve it, but i think you should just remap the part for now, since its not much work :d - you can clearly hear that the kicks are on sliderends which isnt something that you really want, but there are exceptions though for what works or not but yea try to avoid that
00:49:130 - should be a note here; possibly a slider?
thats it for my post, good luck with the map
Topic Starter
brdzxh wrote:
hello there
- metadata should be 月陽 as artist and then rib for romanized, but im not sure about this one and ツキアカリ should be the song name with tsukiakari as romanized title ok
- remove countdown zz ok
- maybe add a background? ok
- also im not sure whether tags are appropriate or not lmao - unfortunately i dont know the tags should be metadata-wise but they're true
and then the map itself
00:01:130 (1) - this starts a bit early, put it on the timing point instead (00:01:280) ok
00:06:230 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a bit overmapped imo, should follow bass and then change to guitar once it comes in - the part after is fine note-wise, but i think the placement is a bit weird because it looks kinda random I'm fine with it I think, I might change to sliders or something tho
00:15:680 (5) - NC ok
00:21:230 (1,2) - maybe make into one slider, or a repeat slider ok
00:21:830 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - pattern is the same but theres clear change in the music, so I would suggest to put a short spaced stream here with low hitsound volume and keep the stream thats coming after and maybe increase spacing on that ok
00:34:580 (1) - put a single here and move this slider to the next tick ok
and generally i think you arent emphasizing everything as you should, but fair enough you are following guitar, but i think theres space to put in sliders on strong drum sounds as it wouldnt really ruin the flow, but maybe improve it instead - it seems so tiring with only singletaps and barely sliders on downbeats i'm = bad mapper
00:36:380 (1,1,1,1,1) - i dont think you need nc on all of them since they are the same sound, you could also change pattern but as I said the the notes are the same so I guess it could work out ok
00:38:030 (1) - put single here and move slider to the next tick ok
00:40:730 (2) - you could make this into a triple ok
00:40:130 (2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - also in this part you are emphasizing the wrong beat, moving everything a tick to the right would solve it, but i think you should just remap the part for now, since its not much work :d - you can clearly hear that the kicks are on sliderends which isnt something that you really want, but there are exceptions though for what works or not but yea try to avoid that ye I'll remap it when I can be bothered to
00:49:130 - should be a note here; possibly a slider? ok
thats it for my post, good luck with the map