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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, March 3, 2019 at 12:14:34 PM

Artist: Sunless Rise
Title: Awakening
Tags: RSI 240bpm streams wtf marathon challenge pass git gud
BPM: 240
Filesize: 6716kb
Play Time: 05:43
Difficulties Available:
  1. Rising (9.41 stars, 3055 notes)


Download: Sunless Rise - Awakening
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240bpm streaming, only "few" really spaced streams, have fun! (they are short, just spam them :c)

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If you get a C on this map please send replay********************************
If you pass the map please send me the replay!!!!!!!!!!




:c

Kynan pass (old hp)


mcy3 pass!


aaand ceptin!!!!!!!!!!!! pass!!!!








i actually liked the r the k and the k!



<3



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Not Even 10* Smh

  1. 00:19:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe pattern these so that 1 and 4 are more accented?
  2. 00:27:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
  3. 00:31:806 (3,4,5) - What is this DS
  4. 00:32:806 (4) - Blanket this better u ful
  5. 00:34:806 (3) - Blanket hue
  6. 00:40:306 (1) - Blanket to 00:40:806 (3) - 's sliderhead to make it look less barbaric pls
  7. 00:42:806 (3) - Blanket a bit better
  8. 00:44:306 (1) - Hue
  9. 00:45:056 (4) - pls
  10. 01:00:306 (1,2,3,4) - Make these back and forth as well like the next 12 notes?
  11. 01:02:306 (5) - nc here you uncivilized
  12. 01:03:306 (7) - NC here too?
  13. 01:11:556 (1) - Don't really get why you NC'ed here, same sound as 01:11:306 (1) - so not really worth NC'ing unless you NC 01:12:056 (3) - too IMO
  14. 01:23:806 (1) - Metronome reset with a red tick here. I'm really, really sure this is right, and the rest of the map is 2 beats early after it since you didn't.
  15. 01:47:056 (1) - Ur a smart enough cooky to combo streams better den dis
  16. 01:56:805 (17) - ^ and etc
  17. 02:47:806 (1,1,2) - 9* or not you're crazy nerf these a bit
  18. 02:55:743 (16,1) - I don't really know much about mapping streams, but I feel like this would be better with equal DS since you didn't really change spacing to emphasize NC's before
  19. 03:19:306 (9) - NC here cause of spacing u cuc
  20. 03:53:306 (7) - NC this if you're going to make it spaced from before
  21. 03:59:806 (1,2) - These look disGUSting at least blanket 1 with 2
  22. 04:01:306 (17) - Pretty sure this should be NC'ed
  23. 04:11:306 (9) - Be more creative and emphasize this more
  24. 05:27:806 (4) - Blanket better hue
  25. 05:29:806 (3) - ^
  26. 05:32:056 (4) - ^ Basically everything I said about blankets in the beginning here
  27. 05:42:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This stream is gross make it more circular
  28. 05:42:806 (1,2) - NC and increase spacing here with this drastic of an SV change bruh

    Overall, the map's structure is good, and I suppose it'd play well, but it's really, really repetitive. I get it's 9* and this may just be for grave, but lots of things seem overemphasized, as well as using repetitive patterns and structures. Even though it's hard, make it more interesting and varied instead of shtting spaghetti all over

    Really though dank map
posted
too hard can't play
remap
kds pls
posted

Metaku wrote:

too hard can't play
remap
kds pls
!faq hard
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23:03 Jakomo73: 00:39:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - im kinda confused why u put emphasis on 5 tbh
23:04 Weriko: guitar
23:04 Weriko: stream stuff
23:05 Weriko: and other sound justifies that turn imo
23:05 Jakomo73: imo this should be a sharp angle too 00:47:806 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - since theres that wammy or whatever its called xd
23:05 Jakomo73: but ye i can see why u did the first one now
23:06 Weriko: well
23:06 Weriko: you dont always have to change the stream direction with a sharp angle xd
23:06 Weriko: but eeee yeah i think i should emphasize that more
23:07 Jakomo73: 00:59:931 (8,9) - this is a cool pattern overall but imo its kinda meh to have that sharp angle on a stream start
23:08 Weriko: meh
23:08 Weriko: no one had problems playing it
23:08 Weriko: plus
23:08 Weriko: ive always tought jumps in streams should be sharp
23:08 Weriko: because its easier to snap
23:09 Weriko: and you really want to snap after spamming 240bpm streams xxdxd
23:11 Weriko: rip my ramen brb
23:11 Jakomo73: mb i wrote that wrong its not really a sharp angle from 8 > 9 > 10 im not a huge fan of angles like that with streams but maybe if u had 9 > 1 going down so its easier to snap?
23:11 Jakomo73: since down would be a sharper angle
23:11 Jakomo73: and rip ramen
23:17 Weriko: pp
23:17 Weriko: :c
23:17 Weriko: nearly all water evaporated rip
23:17 Weriko: and ooo ill think about it
23:17 Jakomo73: ripp, want me to wait for u to finish ramen?
23:18 Weriko: nah xd
23:19 Jakomo73: 00:58:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think u should have 1>2 have higher spacing than 3>4 which has higher spacing than 5>6 etc
23:20 Weriko: o
23:20 Weriko: maybe
23:20 Jakomo73: also should put this close to 4 for ~ULTRA EMPHASIS~ imo 01:12:306 (5) -
23:21 Weriko: lol
23:21 Weriko: doing that reduced sr by 0.1 LOL
23:21 Weriko: fun
23:22 Jakomo73: as long as its over 9* its fine :^)
23:22 Weriko: huehue
23:22 Jakomo73: 01:44:556 (6,7,8) - this is pretty hard to snap to since its such a large angle
23:23 Weriko: o
23:24 Jakomo73: 01:56:805 (17) - maybe nc this so u dont go into the 20s on ur combo
23:24 Weriko: o
23:24 Weriko: i liked the long combo :c
23:24 Weriko: but okay
23:24 Jakomo73: well i just think its harder to play with that long of combos
23:25 Weriko: yeah it is xd
23:25 Jakomo73: cause ur hp drain is thru the roof and if u miss one note its rip :P
23:25 Weriko: yeeee
23:25 Jakomo73: 02:08:243 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - this could use a mani-pedi, looking a bit rough imo
23:25 Weriko: everybody hates that :c
23:26 Weriko: i guess i wont emphasize whatever i whas emphasizing there xd
23:26 Jakomo73: u could emphasize it with an nc and hitsounds maybe
23:27 Weriko: ok changed it and now it looks derp kek
23:27 Jakomo73: for the kiais they seem a bit inconsistent
23:27 Weriko: ill have to remap all stream zzzz TY :C
23:27 Weriko: what
23:28 Jakomo73: like this has a really sharp turn 02:12:556 (1) -
23:28 Jakomo73: while this part doesnt 02:13:305 (1) -
23:28 Jakomo73: while at 02:22:556 (1) - and 02:23:305 (1) - they both have sharp turns
23:28 Jakomo73: and 02:26:556 (1) - and 02:27:305 (1) - they both dont have sharp turns :P
23:29 Jakomo73: like maybe to me its different, but the vocals seem to have similar emphasis in these sections
23:29 Jakomo73: 02:47:806 (1) - offscreen as well D:
23:30 Weriko: well
23:30 Weriko: o
23:30 Weriko: i tried to somehow emphasize lyrics
23:30 Weriko: was hard tho
23:30 Weriko: and i repeat making sharp angles its not the only way to change a stream direction xd
23:31 Jakomo73: ik, but sharp angles to change stream direction is a lot of emphasis
23:31 Jakomo73: due to the way the player has to snap
23:32 Weriko: well yeah
23:32 Weriko: but if you look at it
23:32 Weriko: i didnt emphasize with sharp angles when voice is...... like... open
23:32 Weriko: i swear it makes sense on my mind D:
23:32 Weriko: 02:16:556 (1) - or if i did emphasize with a ... kinda sharp angle
23:32 Weriko: is waaaay more open than
23:33 Weriko: 02:12:556 (1) - here for example
23:34 Weriko: but now i just realize i emphasized wrong something
23:34 Weriko: but eeee okay
23:34 Jakomo73: tbh that top one i dont really have a problem with besides being out of place with the other patterns
23:34 Jakomo73: i think u emphasized that section fine
23:34 Jakomo73: but like 02:22:556 (1) - sounds to me pretty similar to 02:12:556 (1) - in terms of openness :P
23:35 Weriko: well
23:35 Weriko: they are both sharp turns xd
23:35 Jakomo73: oh im dumb xd one sec lemme find a different one
23:36 Jakomo73: like 02:13:305 (1) - and 02:23:305 (1) -
23:37 Weriko: nah i hear them different xd
23:37 Weriko: the only error i just saw
23:37 Weriko: was this
23:37 Weriko: 04:48:806 (1) -
23:39 Jakomo73: 02:49:306 (1,2,3) - this is like over 90 degrees, should lower the angle imo
23:40 Weriko: lel
23:40 Weriko: maybe
23:41 Weriko: oh wait i just remembered why i did that
23:41 Jakomo73: well it being so big is also inconsistent with 02:53:306 (1,2,3) -
23:41 Weriko: xdxdxdxd
23:41 Jakomo73: wait why'd u do it? :p
23:42 Weriko: i did that for the whole section
23:42 Weriko: because spacing
23:42 Weriko: and stuff
23:43 Weriko: im cruel xd
23:43 Weriko: but w.e
23:43 Weriko: w/e
23:43 Weriko: and about
23:43 Weriko: 02:57:306 (1) - this kind of stuff
23:43 Weriko: i honestly didnt tought much about angle
23:43 Weriko: i just wanted it to play well xd
23:43 Weriko: eee might change
23:44 Jakomo73: imo it plays better with a sharp angle like the one u just linked
23:45 Jakomo73: should change this to be similar to the near 180 degree turns u had before and after 03:15:306 (1,2,3) -
23:45 Jakomo73: since this is a bit tougher than the other ones
23:47 Weriko: o
23:47 Weriko: idk
23:47 Jakomo73: should emphasize this as well imo 03:57:493 (4) - since u did the same for 03:56:806 (9,13,1) -
23:48 Jakomo73: 03:59:806 (1) - prob should change this so its a bit more clear where youre supposed to start motion
23:48 Jakomo73: even tho its gonna be played like a snap
23:48 Jakomo73: still good to be clear
23:48 Weriko: o
23:49 Jakomo73: also why did u skip these sounds? D: 04:06:306 - 04:06:556 -
23:49 Weriko: maybe
23:49 Weriko: cuzz
23:49 Weriko: eee...
23:49 Weriko: i used slider turn to not skip them xd
23:50 Jakomo73: i mean like skipped making them hittable objects
23:50 Jakomo73: since theyre pretty strong sounds
23:50 Weriko: i know
23:51 Weriko: but eeee
23:51 Weriko: ill probably change it anyway
23:51 Jakomo73: could increase spacing for this stream 04:11:306 (9) -
23:52 Weriko: ok
23:52 Jakomo73: should also have this pattern 04:18:805 (1,2,3) - over here 04:19:388 (6) - since theyre the same/similar sounds
23:53 Jakomo73: 04:35:806 (8) - same with the 5 earlier with smaller spacing
23:54 Weriko: well
23:54 Weriko: that circle comes after a slider
23:55 Jakomo73: 05:42:806 (1) - should have this point to 05:43:056 (1) - 's head, and imo they both could use some aesthetic improvements
23:56 Jakomo73: slider or not its still the same in terms of emphasis
23:56 Weriko: no
23:56 Weriko: because a slider plays like 1/1
23:58 Jakomo73: ye but 1/1 or 1/2 its still the same concept
23:59 Weriko: wat
23:59 Weriko: no its not xdxdx
00:00 Jakomo73: like its not the same where lower spacing after high spacing gives it emphasis? xd
00:00 Weriko: wat
00:01 Jakomo73: eh w/e
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2017-02-13 21:00 transcendental: ok leggo
2017-02-13 21:01 Weriko: ok
2017-02-13 21:01 transcendental: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1200217 Sunless Rise - Awakening [Rising]]
2017-02-13 21:02 transcendental: 00:19:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
2017-02-13 21:02 transcendental: this is two groups of three
2017-02-13 21:02 transcendental: your patterning should be two groups of three
2017-02-13 21:02 transcendental: not three groups of two
2017-02-13 21:02 Weriko: ADSDAFGSDGSDGSD
2017-02-13 21:03 Weriko: i did it cuz :c....
2017-02-13 21:03 Weriko: it looked cool :C but ok
2017-02-13 21:03 transcendental: 00:27:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
2017-02-13 21:03 transcendental: same
2017-02-13 21:03 transcendental: follow music properly > look cool
2017-02-13 21:05 transcendental: 00:29:306 (1,2,3,4) - this flows poor
2017-02-13 21:06 transcendental: 00:49:306 (1,2) -
2017-02-13 21:07 transcendental: accented note is at 00:49:681 -
2017-02-13 21:07 transcendental: rhythm like this is better https://puu.sh/u28qr/1a9d81b821.png
2017-02-13 21:07 Weriko: oops
2017-02-13 21:08 transcendental: same here
2017-02-13 21:08 transcendental: 00:57:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
2017-02-13 21:08 transcendental: it's a 3+2+3 grouping
2017-02-13 21:09 transcendental: so your rhythm should be
2017-02-13 21:09 transcendental: https://puu.sh/u28xM/7d92376454.png
2017-02-13 21:09 transcendental: a 3,2,3 grouping
2017-02-13 21:10 transcendental: 01:02:806 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 01:03:806 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i would combo in 3's to make it even more obvious that it switches to 1/3 rhythm
2017-02-13 21:11 transcendental: 01:07:806 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why is this stream so cramped up
2017-02-13 21:12 Weriko: because
2017-02-13 21:12 Weriko: i think drums sound like that
2017-02-13 21:12 transcendental: well 01:06:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this is also drums
2017-02-13 21:12 Weriko: i mean
2017-02-13 21:12 transcendental: and is not cramped up
2017-02-13 21:13 transcendental: i'd just even out spacnig a little
2017-02-13 21:13 Weriko: but
2017-02-13 21:13 Weriko: its less intense
2017-02-13 21:13 transcendental: yeah keep it less spaced bc it is less intense
2017-02-13 21:13 Weriko: the music
2017-02-13 21:13 transcendental: but not as cramped as it is right now
2017-02-13 21:14 Weriko: ee
2017-02-13 21:14 transcendental: since right now it just looks awkward comapred to the big spacing around it
2017-02-13 21:14 Weriko: big spacing eksdee
2017-02-13 21:14 transcendental: music is going intense -> less intense -> intense but ur spacing is going intense -> lame -> intense
2017-02-13 21:14 Weriko: its not lame
2017-02-13 21:14 Weriko: its still a hold stream
2017-02-13 21:15 Weriko: and i think that one is represented okay :c
2017-02-13 21:15 transcendental: ok is up to you
2017-02-13 21:15 Weriko: hold stream eksdee
2017-02-13 21:15 Weriko: ill think about it
2017-02-13 21:15 transcendental: 01:47:306 (1,2) -
2017-02-13 21:16 transcendental: what is this
2017-02-13 21:16 transcendental: also i'd nc at 01:46:806 (9) -
2017-02-13 21:16 Weriko: its
2017-02-13 21:16 Weriko: to emphasize that 1/2 sound
2017-02-13 21:16 Weriko: people dont like that kind of streams :c
2017-02-13 21:16 transcendental: tream shape is fine
2017-02-13 21:17 transcendental: i mean the tiny NC
2017-02-13 21:17 Weriko: o
2017-02-13 21:17 transcendental: i'd nc at 01:46:806 (9) - and at 01:47:556 (3) -
2017-02-13 21:17 transcendental: removing the one at 01:47:431 (1) -
2017-02-13 21:17 Weriko: yeah
2017-02-13 21:17 transcendental: so you have 4's
2017-02-13 21:17 Weriko: z ok
2017-02-13 21:18 transcendental: 01:55:806 (1) -
2017-02-13 21:18 transcendental: so for long streams like this it's ok to do less NCs
2017-02-13 21:18 transcendental: but i'd at least do one every 16 notes
2017-02-13 21:19 Weriko: o
2017-02-13 21:19 Weriko: that one is
2017-02-13 21:19 Weriko: nced at 16
2017-02-13 21:19 Weriko: i speednced sorry :c
2017-02-13 21:19 transcendental: although personally i'd do every 8
2017-02-13 21:19 transcendental: since then you have a nice 8+8+8 set of NCs
2017-02-13 21:20 transcendental: i'd also nc the start of the stream at 01:57:806 (3) - to make the sliders more emphasized
2017-02-13 21:20 Weriko: yeah
2017-02-13 21:20 transcendental: did you chooose to do 8's or 16's
2017-02-13 21:21 Weriko: ill keep it
2017-02-13 21:21 Weriko: 16 for now
2017-02-13 21:21 transcendental: ok
2017-02-13 21:21 transcendental: NC at 02:03:806 (1) -
2017-02-13 21:21 transcendental: since you broke the previous 16 into 8+4+4
2017-02-13 21:21 transcendental: and then ofc again at 02:04:806 (17) -
2017-02-13 21:22 Weriko: yeah
2017-02-13 21:22 transcendental: 02:47:806 (1) -
2017-02-13 21:22 transcendental: lemme double check
2017-02-13 21:23 Weriko: o
2017-02-13 21:23 transcendental: but i'm pretty sure this is hella offscreen
2017-02-13 21:23 Weriko: that
2017-02-13 21:23 Weriko: that is
2017-02-13 21:23 Weriko: shitte xXDXdxd
2017-02-13 21:23 Weriko: nonono ill change that pattern
2017-02-13 21:23 Weriko: but i dont know what to put instead
2017-02-13 21:23 transcendental: ok
2017-02-13 21:23 Weriko: need suggestions :c
2017-02-13 21:26 transcendental: maybe like
2017-02-13 21:26 transcendental: https://puu.sh/u29LQ/d8b8e39d35.png
2017-02-13 21:26 transcendental: so you're kinda blanketing the curve of the previous stream
2017-02-13 21:26 Weriko: oh yeah
2017-02-13 21:26 transcendental: and then change the next strream to this
2017-02-13 21:26 transcendental: https://puu.sh/u29PD/72e3d15c4a.png
2017-02-13 21:27 Weriko: okay
2017-02-13 21:27 transcendental: so you don't have that weird zigzag from the end of that pattern into the stream
2017-02-13 21:27 transcendental: 02:56:805 (17) -
2017-02-13 21:27 transcendental: NC etc etc
2017-02-13 21:27 transcendental: i'll stop with the NCs here if you think you can find them all
2017-02-13 21:28 Weriko: k
2017-02-13 21:29 transcendental: 03:35:306 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - seriously
2017-02-13 21:29 transcendental: why is this stream not perfectly straight
2017-02-13 21:29 transcendental: :T
2017-02-13 21:30 transcendental: 03:59:806 (1) - this slider is a little ugly
2017-02-13 21:30 Weriko: i think that stream
2017-02-13 21:31 Weriko: is not straight cuz........ e.......... IDK
2017-02-13 21:31 transcendental: lol ok
2017-02-13 21:31 transcendental: 04:39:306 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) -
2017-02-13 21:31 transcendental: remove copypasta
2017-02-13 21:31 Weriko: 03:59:806 (1) - am i the only one who likes this slider Asdasdsad
2017-02-13 21:32 transcendental: yes
2017-02-13 21:32 transcendental: sorry lol
2017-02-13 21:32 Weriko: changed
2017-02-13 21:32 Weriko: eksdee
2017-02-13 21:32 Weriko: i suck at sliders tbh
2017-02-13 21:32 transcendental: no worries sliders are hard
2017-02-13 21:32 transcendental: 05:27:306 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
2017-02-13 21:32 transcendental: r e m o v e c o p y p a s t a
2017-02-13 21:32 Weriko: NO
2017-02-13 21:32 Weriko: LEAVE MY COPYPASTA ALONE
2017-02-13 21:33 Weriko: last copypasta has a meaning
2017-02-13 21:33 Weriko: dont judge last copypasta!
2017-02-13 21:33 transcendental: at least ctrl+h or something
2017-02-13 21:33 Weriko: you are awakening so... you look at... previous mistakes in the map..... cuz you are awakening
2017-02-13 21:33 Weriko: and you be like
2017-02-13 21:33 transcendental: yeah sure
2017-02-13 21:33 transcendental: remove
2017-02-13 21:33 transcendental: copypasta
2017-02-13 21:33 Weriko: o shit u fucked up but im okay now cuz im awakening!!!
2017-02-13 21:33 Weriko: XDXDXDXDX :c
2017-02-13 21:33 Weriko: NO
2017-02-13 21:33 transcendental: ACTION shrugs
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18:59 Weriko: hi
18:59 Weriko: gimme irc roast mod ty
19:00 Plaudible: uhh
19:00 Plaudible: shore
19:00 Plaudible: quickie
19:00 Weriko: o
19:00 Weriko: k
19:00 *Weriko is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1200217 Sunless Rise - Awakening]
19:00 Weriko: der
19:00 Weriko: ty
19:01 Plaudible: o lawd
19:01 Plaudible: every time another star
19:02 Weriko: oo
19:02 Weriko: EEEVRYYYTIMEEE
19:02 Weriko: UUUNNNKKKNOOOOOOWN
19:03 Plaudible: 00:17:306 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - idk personally
19:04 Plaudible: star patterns are nicer if like
19:04 Plaudible: you purposefully use 5 notes
19:04 Plaudible: i'd do something with 4 instead here :v
19:04 Weriko: o
19:04 Weriko: well
19:04 Weriko: stars also work for repeating 4 patterns
19:05 Weriko: because you go to the first circle at 5
19:05 Plaudible: if you use it in this sense though
19:05 Plaudible: i'd space them out more or less
19:05 Plaudible: 50% overlaps arent the prettiest imo :v
19:05 Weriko: mehh
19:05 Plaudible: not gonna lie the first few seconds i thought this was by a bigger mapper
19:05 Weriko: eee
19:05 Weriko: i like them :C
19:05 Plaudible: you had some good ideas
19:06 Weriko: kek
19:06 Plaudible: for slow parts like this though
19:06 Plaudible: aesthetics gotta be on fleek
19:06 Plaudible: like at 00:19:431 (2,2) - for example
19:06 Plaudible: use similar rotation angles
19:06 Plaudible: 00:18:306 (1) -
19:06 Plaudible: these are all straight and shit
19:07 Plaudible: doing these straight can help improve looks overall :V
19:07 Weriko: okay
19:07 Plaudible: personally
19:07 Plaudible: i prefer the mild curves you did at 00:21:056 (4) -
19:07 Plaudible: it gives more character, so maybe do that in intro
19:07 Plaudible: maybe as you keep mapping
19:07 Plaudible: try to introduce angle structuring
19:07 Plaudible: use only certain rotations and try to stick to them
19:07 Plaudible: grid snap for a straight slider then work from there, shit like that
19:07 Plaudible: it makes your maps so much prettier
19:07 Weriko: meh
19:08 Weriko: i literally speedmapped like usual
19:08 Weriko: ill rework on aesthetics there then
19:09 Plaudible: hmm
19:09 Plaudible: 00:22:306 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) -
19:09 Plaudible: im not a fan of all the flow changes here
19:10 Plaudible: you build this like
19:10 Plaudible: back and forth sorta ish flow, with the cross over
19:10 Plaudible: but then suddenly change into circular
19:10 Plaudible: with not much change in mood
19:10 Plaudible: and i think you should make that consistent
19:11 Plaudible: if you're feeling lazy i'd just ctrl+g 00:23:681 (4,5) -
19:11 Plaudible: 00:26:056 (3,4,1) - you build a lot of sharp flow in the part before this, but then this goes super wide and feels awkward ;w;
19:12 Plaudible: also why switch to this flow at 00:26:306 (1,2,3,4) - , you use more back and forth stuff with the sliderend flowing more into the next one
19:12 Plaudible: be consistent with things like that, the playstyle will feel familiar and it'll play better that way
19:12 Plaudible: it may seem repetitive in editor but in gameplay its not since it goes by so fast, and that consistency shows your quality in mapping translating into structure+playability
19:13 Plaudible: 00:31:368 - ignoring sound
19:14 Plaudible: 00:32:556 (3) - personally not a fan of really tight blankets like this, if you use them use them throughout the map a lot so it's more visually appealing
19:14 Plaudible: i'd just make the stream wider and blanket it with more space tbh
19:14 Plaudible: hold up i'll let u catch up xd
19:14 Weriko: o
19:14 Weriko: nono im ok
19:15 Weriko: and i like that blanket xd
19:15 Plaudible: well use those aesthetic quirks like that more throughout the map :U
19:15 Plaudible: consistency = structure
19:15 Plaudible: structure = good
19:15 Weriko: hmmm
19:15 Weriko: not always
19:16 Plaudible: in some cases it's good for emphasis
19:16 Plaudible: but
19:16 Weriko: ive always tought
19:16 Weriko: that you only need to keep a general consistency
19:16 Weriko: but........
19:16 Plaudible: what do you mean? xd
19:16 Weriko: that i also like to use
19:16 Weriko: unique things on some spots
19:17 Weriko: and that blanket... well no one will feel it on play xd
19:17 Weriko: it will just look like another one
19:17 Weriko: w/e
19:17 Plaudible: well that's the thing with playing maps and stuff
19:17 Plaudible: yea, it may not be noticeable in one instance like this
19:17 Plaudible: but consistently using things like that
19:17 Plaudible: makes a map stand out
19:17 Plaudible: and since we as humans seek patterns it can make it more familiar, and make it something memorable about the map
19:18 Weriko: actually
19:18 Plaudible: which is why people value structure so highly in maps and stuff
19:18 Weriko: i dont feel that way
19:18 Weriko: maybe because im akward
19:18 Weriko: but i feel like... maps that dont have a really good consistency play better
19:18 Weriko: ......because you are actually reading
19:18 Weriko: and not just trying to remember how it was played
19:19 Weriko: w/eee
19:19 Plaudible: even hard to read maps these days though follow a structure
19:19 Plaudible: you're not losing that by structuring
19:20 Plaudible: and theres many ways to be creative and stuff while keeping that and mapping things that are hard without overdoing structure
19:20 Plaudible: burnt rice is a great example of that :v
19:20 Weriko: wat
19:21 *Plaudible is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1103732 Shawn Wasabi + YDG feat. YUNG GEMMY - Burnt Rice (Aiobahn & Jh-Anu Remix)]
19:21 Plaudible: int his map for example shit liek 00:34:815 (1,2,1,2,1) - is super hard to play/read
19:21 Plaudible: but it's something creative and he uses it to represent this sound and moment later in the song as well
19:21 Weriko: the point is that a blanket
19:21 Plaudible: structure doesnt mean sacrificing how you map necessarily :u it's just organizing it into something that fits a song
19:21 Weriko: like that wont change anything
19:22 Plaudible: it does though
19:22 Weriko: it doesnt
19:22 Plaudible: those little things add to a fuckton in a map weriko lol
19:22 Weriko: ......
19:23 Weriko: w/e
19:24 Plaudible: i really strongly suggest you pay attention to those little things in maps
19:24 Plaudible: sure harder maps like this it may not be as prominent but
19:24 Plaudible: it adds so much to it and really makes it a good map
19:24 Weriko: if little stuff makes a good map
19:24 Weriko: .....
19:25 Weriko: w/e
19:25 Plaudible: if ur gonna find a ranked map or somethin that you think isn't too structured hit me with it
19:25 Plaudible: i'll find something >:u
19:25 Plaudible: 00:39:556 (5) - i wouldnt sharply curve a stream like this randomly
19:25 *Weriko is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1031991 Imperial Circus Dead Decadence - Yomi yori Kikoyu, Koukoku no Tou to Honoo no Shoujo. [Kyouaku]]
19:25 Weriko: kek
19:25 Plaudible: usually if you do you need to give a good reason to
19:25 Weriko: literally fuk intensity
19:26 Weriko: its not random
19:26 Plaudible: well, at least i dont think the change is enough to justify that much of a direction change
19:27 Weriko: believeme
19:27 Weriko: its not a big direction change
19:27 Weriko: in the map context
19:28 Plaudible: u do got some neat concepts, 01:19:368 (11,12,2) - is cool
19:28 Weriko: o
19:28 Weriko: ty
19:28 Plaudible: 01:21:806 (1) - to 01:25:743 (16) - is fucking sex
19:29 Plaudible: your streams are gorgeous as always
19:30 Plaudible: imo you just need to work on your other aspects of mapping as always, you're like Gus xd
19:30 Plaudible: but its definitely getting better
19:30 Weriko: kek
19:31 Plaudible: :P
19:31 Plaudible: fr tho
19:32 Plaudible: 04:42:681 (2,3,4,5,6,2,3,4,5,6) - caught red handed xd
19:32 Weriko: SHHHHHHHHHHHHH
19:34 Plaudible: but in some senses you did structure some things nicely
19:34 Plaudible: like bringing back the star patterns and things lik that
19:34 Plaudible: so gj
19:34 Plaudible: just try structuring in other senses too cause it's muoy importante
19:34 Plaudible: keep it up and ur gonna rank a stream map soon :v
19:34 Weriko: kek
19:34 Weriko: there are some spots that i can def agree are structure like meh
19:35 Weriko: muoy importante kek
19:36 Weriko: o
19:51 Plaudible: oh
19:51 Plaudible: is it ok if i drop in forums for kudos
19:51 Plaudible: for numero #100 :v
19:51 Weriko: o
19:51 Weriko: how to ez kds xd
19:51 Plaudible: pff
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11:52 SkyLifeHope: well, 04:23:222 (6,1) - things like these
11:52 SkyLifeHope: should kind of be
11:52 SkyLifeHope: idk
11:52 SkyLifeHope: what's the word...
11:52 SkyLifeHope: introduced
11:52 SkyLifeHope: yeah that's it
11:52 SkyLifeHope: these should be introduced at the start
11:53 SkyLifeHope: (i think but that's me i guess)
11:53 Weriko: wat
11:53 Weriko: 04:11:806 (1) - this sliders introduce to 1/3
11:53 Weriko: then everything else is intuitive
11:53 SkyLifeHope: hmm
11:53 Weriko: no one had problems with that
11:53 SkyLifeHope: oh
11:53 SkyLifeHope: i guess i'm just really sleepy right now
11:54 SkyLifeHope: okay
11:54 SkyLifeHope: that actually looks fine now
11:54 SkyLifeHope: that you've provided an explanation
11:54 Weriko: o
11:54 Weriko: k
11:55 SkyLifeHope: oh my god i'm trying so hard to find problems
11:55 Weriko: kek
11:56 SkyLifeHope: 05:42:806 (1,1) -
11:56 SkyLifeHope: THERE
11:56 SkyLifeHope: it's not blanketed properly
11:56 SkyLifeHope: the sliderend
11:57 Weriko: o
11:57 SkyLifeHope: and I guess the red point on the second slider
11:57 Weriko: i have a ton of nonpefect blankets
11:57 Weriko: im lazzy xdxdx
11:57 SkyLifeHope: oh my god i can't believe this is the first one i saw
11:58 Weriko: LOL
11:58 SkyLifeHope: aside from the blankets
11:58 SkyLifeHope: i think it will flow pretty nice
11:59 SkyLifeHope: and i think you need a little more work on the aesthethic
11:59 SkyLifeHope: (i think but i guess it's just me)
11:59 Weriko: wat
11:59 Weriko: aesthetics
11:59 Weriko: meaning what xd
11:59 Weriko: gimme examples
11:59 SkyLifeHope: oh
11:59 SkyLifeHope: let me see
11:59 SkyLifeHope: i think i have some in my map
12:00 SkyLifeHope: something that looks really nice
12:00 SkyLifeHope: well
12:00 SkyLifeHope: actually not that
12:00 SkyLifeHope: but how something looks
12:00 SkyLifeHope: how the pattern looks
12:00 SkyLifeHope: i think your streams have a pretty nice aesthetic
12:00 SkyLifeHope: (but the straight lines are not really my thing)
12:01 SkyLifeHope: like for example
12:01 SkyLifeHope: in my map
12:01 *SkyLifeHope is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1210883 The Koxx - A FOOL MOON NIGHT [Lunar Eclipse]]
12:01 SkyLifeHope: 00:31:625 (3) -
12:01 SkyLifeHope: things like this look pretty nice
12:01 SkyLifeHope: and the aesthetic does not sacrifice the flow
12:01 Weriko: o
12:01 SkyLifeHope: because it's kind of the same as a straight slider
12:02 SkyLifeHope: aesthetics are the reason why wave sliders exist
12:02 Weriko: but
12:02 Weriko: i meant to do stright sliders
12:02 Weriko: i mean
12:02 Weriko: eee....
12:02 SkyLifeHope: err
12:03 SkyLifeHope: wait let me look for some examples iny our map
12:03 SkyLifeHope: 00:49:681 (9) -
12:03 SkyLifeHope: the curve kind of looks too violent
12:03 Weriko: ....
12:04 Weriko: can you define a curve as violent kek
12:04 SkyLifeHope: yeah
12:04 SkyLifeHope: like
12:04 SkyLifeHope: roads
12:04 SkyLifeHope: there are sharp turns
12:04 SkyLifeHope: but they're still curved
12:04 SkyLifeHope: 00:57:806 (5) - this slider is pretty good
12:04 SkyLifeHope: 01:02:306 (1,2) -
12:05 SkyLifeHope: these sliders are also pretty nice
12:05 SkyLifeHope: the straight sliders don't have a problem too
12:05 SkyLifeHope: 01:29:806 (1) -
12:05 SkyLifeHope: this is weird
12:06 Weriko: o
12:06 Weriko: i did some of the
12:06 Weriko: "kicksliders" "repeating sliders" or whatever (stupid pishi :C) like that
12:06 Weriko: i like the effect
12:06 SkyLifeHope: maybe you can even it out a little
12:07 SkyLifeHope: i cant explain it
12:08 SkyLifeHope: but
12:08 SkyLifeHope: the shape is nice
12:08 SkyLifeHope: it's just the angles are
12:08 SkyLifeHope: giving this weird feeling to me
12:08 SkyLifeHope: 01:33:306 (1,2) - these sliders are wow
12:08 SkyLifeHope: i am in favor for more horizontal spacing
12:08 Weriko: kek
12:09 SkyLifeHope: 01:37:306 (1,2) - these are the same thing but different shape for some reason
12:09 SkyLifeHope: idk
12:09 SkyLifeHope: but maybe someone will get confused on that
12:09 SkyLifeHope: the spacing is just fine
12:10 SkyLifeHope: it's perfectly okay
12:10 SkyLifeHope: its just
12:10 SkyLifeHope: why is it different from the other one
12:11 SkyLifeHope: that's all i can say really
12:11 Weriko: o
12:11 Weriko: k
12:12 SkyLifeHope: but thats just my opinion on that
12:12 SkyLifeHope: you can keep it that way if you want
12:17 Weriko: k
12:17 Weriko: ill
12:17 Weriko: keep it
12:17 Weriko: sorry
12:17 Weriko: for answer
12:17 SkyLifeHope: owo
12:17 SkyLifeHope: it's fine
12:17 Weriko: delay im watching oscars cuz why not
12:17 Weriko: and im too lazy to take my laptop
12:17 Weriko: to
12:17 Weriko: tv kekekek
12:17 Weriko: anything else?
12:17 SkyLifeHope: owow aht
12:17 SkyLifeHope: nah nothing else
12:18 SkyLifeHope: are you on irc??
12:20 Weriko: no
12:20 Weriko: you can post
12:20 Weriko: for free kds
12:20 SkyLifeHope: nahh
12:20 Weriko: cuz i changed the blanket KEKEKE
12:20 SkyLifeHope: owo
12:20 SkyLifeHope: I WILLL
12:20 SkyLifeHope: "ermm your blankets"
12:21 Weriko: keeek
12:21 Weriko: post irc
12:21 Weriko: nobody reads ircs
12:21 Weriko: mods
12:21 SkyLifeHope: owo okay
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- 01:00:306 (1,2,3,4) - wow it isnt consistent with 01:00:806 (1,2,3,4) - 01:01:306 (1,2,3,4) - 01:01:806 (1,2,3,4) - , if you did that because sound at 01:00:306 (1) - is different than 01:00:431 (2,3,4) - i would counter argue by saying so is 01:00:806 (1) - and 01:00:931 (2,3,4) - are different tbh
- 01:14:306 - note kds plz
- 01:23:056 (13) - since there is a spacing change imo put a nc (also imo put nc on every spacing changes if there are more)
- 01:27:181 (7,11) - ^
- 01:30:806 (1,5,9) - ^
- 01:23:493 (4,2) - im triggrd please equal spacing this is gamebreaking
- 01:24:743 (16,1) - ^
- 01:31:556 (13,14,15,16,1) - wtf is dis drums go full dumb and you didnt even increase spacing nice
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2017-03-02 02:37 Weriko: modea my mapa extremo :c
2017-03-02 02:38 iYiyo: hola xd
2017-03-02 02:38 Weriko: y hola xd
2017-03-02 02:39 iYiyo: eeh no te conozco xd así que podrías preguntarlo mejor
2017-03-02 02:40 Weriko: eee
2017-03-02 02:40 Weriko: la gente generalmente me pide que sea directo xd
2017-03-02 02:40 Weriko: ya que se podrian malinterpretar intenciones :c
2017-03-02 02:41 iYiyo: mmm lo mejor sería empezar una conversación de manera normal
2017-03-02 02:42 iYiyo: es tu mapa de 9*
2017-03-02 02:42 Weriko: si ;-;
2017-03-02 02:42 Weriko: perdon ;-;
2017-03-02 02:43 iYiyo: Me da pereza modear mapas tan dificiles xd
2017-03-02 02:43 Weriko: ayyy :ccccc
2017-03-02 02:43 iYiyo: además, no es muy difícil intentar rankear un 9* de primer mapa?
2017-03-02 02:44 Weriko: si
2017-03-02 02:44 Weriko: pero rankear uno de 6* o menos seria igual de dificil para mi
2017-03-02 02:44 Weriko: asi que.... eee
2017-03-02 02:44 iYiyo: mmm
2017-03-02 02:44 iYiyo: rankear algo de 7 es dificil
2017-03-02 02:44 iYiyo: de 8 ya es muy dificil
2017-03-02 02:45 iYiyo: de 9 creo que no he visto para serte sincero xd
2017-03-02 02:45 Weriko: porfavor ;-;
2017-03-02 02:45 Weriko: se puede intentar
2017-03-02 02:50 iYiyo: así a la rápida puedo ver que algunos streams no se ven bien estructurados como el rseto
2017-03-02 02:50 iYiyo: 01:57:806 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
2017-03-02 02:50 iYiyo: por ejemplo ese
2017-03-02 02:50 iYiyo: 02:08:306 (1,2,3,4) -
2017-03-02 02:50 iYiyo: 02:08:556 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
2017-03-02 02:51 Weriko: o
2017-03-02 02:51 Weriko: estructurados en que sentido
2017-03-02 02:52 iYiyo: darles una forma más elaborada, como que hiciste un slider un poco curvo y los hiciste stream
2017-03-02 02:52 iYiyo: en general el resto de streams igual están buenos
2017-03-02 02:52 iYiyo: mencioné algunos que vi de pasada nomás
2017-03-02 02:53 Weriko: ok
2017-03-02 02:53 iYiyo: 04:29:181 -
2017-03-02 02:53 iYiyo: podrías hacer este beat clickable
2017-03-02 02:53 iYiyo: y aprovechas de mapear 04:29:306 -
2017-03-02 02:53 iYiyo: no tiene sentido que lo dejes vació la verdad
2017-03-02 02:53 iYiyo: y el slider tan largo interrumpe los largos streams que venías haciendo
2017-03-02 02:54 iYiyo: 04:33:806 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - please esto es copia de lo anterior xd
2017-03-02 02:55 Weriko: oooo
2017-03-02 02:55 Weriko: shhh
2017-03-02 02:56 iYiyo: 05:34:931 (2,3,4) - esto da más para stream que 05:34:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - la verdad
2017-03-02 02:56 Weriko: esta pensado asi
2017-03-02 02:56 Weriko: siento que en
2017-03-02 02:56 Weriko: 05:34:931 (2,3,4) - el sonido que va a 1/2 es algo mas fuerte
2017-03-02 02:56 iYiyo: 05:43:056 (1) - este slider debería empezar 05:43:181 - acá imo
2017-03-02 02:56 Weriko: y creo que queda mejor si le pongo enfasis
2017-03-02 02:57 iYiyo: de hecho si, no es necesario stream en esa parte
2017-03-02 02:57 iYiyo: pero tampoco en la anterior
2017-03-02 02:57 iYiyo: 05:35:243 - acá cabe para un triple igual
2017-03-02 02:58 iYiyo: 05:43:056 - acá podrías poner una nota y que luego venga el slider ese
2017-03-02 02:58 iYiyo: xd
2017-03-02 02:59 Weriko: no quedaria raro?
2017-03-02 02:59 iYiyo: 04:42:681 (2,3,4,5,6,2,3,4,5,6) - este tipo de stream te quedó bueno
2017-03-02 02:59 iYiyo: Encuentro que queda raro así como está ahora
2017-03-02 02:59 iYiyo: porque te estás comiendo 05:43:181 - este beat
2017-03-02 02:59 iYiyo: que es con el que verdaderamente termina la canción
2017-03-02 03:00 Weriko: o
2017-03-02 03:00 Weriko: tal vez
2017-03-02 03:00 iYiyo: y yo que tú le doy un poquito más de SV al último slider
2017-03-02 03:00 iYiyo: quizás 0.3, y aprovechas de darle una mejor forma
2017-03-02 03:00 iYiyo: además que el cambio es muy bruzco igual
2017-03-02 03:00 Weriko: hehe
2017-03-02 03:01 iYiyo: más que nada para aprovechar de hacer algo de slider art
2017-03-02 03:01 iYiyo: así como está se ve muy simple xd
2017-03-02 03:01 Weriko: ok
2017-03-02 03:01 Weriko: soy pesimo para el sliderart por cierto xd
2017-03-02 03:02 iYiyo: eso sería viendo a la rápida, quizás podrías revisar a ver si te comiste algún triple como el que te mencioné antes
2017-03-02 03:02 iYiyo: pero no se ve mal
2017-03-02 03:02 iYiyo: un poco más de trabajo en lo estético y podría pasar
2017-03-02 03:02 iYiyo: serías el primero en hacer de su primer mapa ranked uno de 9* xd
2017-03-02 03:02 iYiyo: suerte
2017-03-02 03:03 Weriko: gracias!
2017-03-02 03:04 iYiyo: y para la próxima empieza una conversación saludando normal xD
2017-03-02 03:05 Weriko: ayy ok xD
2017-03-02 03:07 Weriko: puedes postear si quieres xd
2017-03-02 03:07 iYiyo: si crees que te sirvió de algo xd
2017-03-02 03:08 Weriko: e
2017-03-02 03:08 Weriko: si xd
2017-03-02 03:09 iYiyo: bueno xd
2017-03-02 03:09 Weriko: :p
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00:24:056 (7) - this doesnt really belong here, should just be a 1/4 jump
00:26:181 (4) - why is this spaced, this is basically the same jump pattern as 00:17:806 (1,2,3,4) - but in that one 4 isnt spaced
00:22:306 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - could clean up this jump pattern, make it look a bit nicer
00:30:306 (1,2) - curved slider followed by a linear slider flows well, but looks awkward. i can see this pattern all over the map, but just doesnt fit with the rest of the map
00:34:806 (3) - blanket?
00:35:806 (5,6,7,8,9) - would look better as a slider stream
00:43:806 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^
00:37:056 (4) - blanket better (sorry)
00:42:306 (1,2,3,4) - looks awkward, maybe make 3 linear and 4 curved?
i could go on about these sliders looking weird but then this mod would get too repetitive, im sure you can fix them all and make them look better :P
00:52:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - song sounds different here, maybe change the jump patterns (i recommend back and forth jumps)
01:09:431 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - flows awkwardly
01:10:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i would make this a stream or just 1/4 reverse sliders
01:33:306 (1,2) - looks so bad in comparison with everything else, blanket maybe? (or try something else)
01:45:306 (1,2) - ^
02:33:306 (1,2) - ^
02:37:306 (1,2) - ^ theres probably a reason why youre doing the sliders like this, but it could be better (ill stop addressing these now)
02:11:806 (1) - kiai parts are well mapped, but the spaced streams seem a little much, try lowering the ds just a tiny bit
01:36:556 (6) - awkward overlap with 4
02:40:306 (5) - awkward overlap with 2
02:53:806 (1) - try adding more reverse sliders for the players sake
04:05:806 (1) - missing out on a few beats with this slider here
04:12:306 (1) - this can act as a "break for the player" if you add more reverse sliders so players can actually regain their stamina
04:32:806 (1) - could do more with these types of sliders, make them cool and unique instead of just linear
i skimmed over the song, and most parts are just repeats, so maybe you can apply some of this mod to those parts
05:01:306 (1) - these spaced streams are getting super overboard, not even sure if its playable at this point xd, again, lower ds, just a little bit, so it can still be challenging
05:43:181 (2) - this is probably just a placeholder slider, but remember to make it look better
i know you copy pasted a lot of this map, hope u remap those parts

kind of a shitty repetitive mod but its all i could do, mostly that the sliders look really awkward when it could look much better, making the map more
A E S T H E T I C
posted
Hello there!
What we fixed IRC:
-some flow in jumps
-rhythm inconsistencies


~ Bubbled ~





good luck!
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Canadian Baka wrote:

Hello there!


What we fixed IRC:

-some flow in jumps
-rhythm inconsistencies


~ Bubbled ~





good luck!
ty!!!!
posted
Hello again!


sorry, I looked through the map and found some serious issues, here are a few reasons:


inconsistency in flow

and

inconsistency in rhythm

~ Popped ~
posted

Canadian Baka wrote:

Hello again!


sorry, I looked through the map and found some serious issues, here are a few reasons:


inconsistency in flow

and

inconsistency in rhythm

~ Popped ~
oh no,

fixed!!!!!

ill rebub it

posted
okay! seems good


~ Qualified ~
posted
looks ugly

dq'd
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Lunicia wrote:

looks ugly

dq'd
Total agree sorry weriko
posted
ill requal rn fixed all




stop memeing naw plz
posted
'sup mango

random modding, not being serious at some points.

Rising
  1. 00:36:556 (2) - Would be nice if you'd stack this slider with 00:37:056 (4) - , it will make a similar effect with 00:36:306 (1,3) - and their stacked ends.
    Also, I believe it would be better if this slider was more up anyway because of the flow.
  2. 00:49:306 (7) - New measure, new combo? ;) (Just add a new combo to this one to make it consistent with your new combos. Also, this current combo was getting too long)
  3. 01:11:681 (2,1,2,3,4,5) - these are insane jumps.. :(
  4. 02:33:806 (3) - I'd add a new combo to this object because the two previous sliders are not the same snap and they represent something else in the song. 02:37:806 (3) - same for this one
  5. 05:43:181 (2) - nice slider c:


I can't be helpful here, I don't mod crazy-over-the-top maps :^)
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