Hi, m4m! My map:
t/520060GeneralThese maps are fun, I found the circles too small in general which I didn't see fit the overall difficulty of some maps, especially the higher levels of this song.
Don't use Japanese characters in the source, use Roman characters instead; either that or don't mention a source. This is for compatibility, because song titles are the only field that supports such characters.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10035851I've noticed that, on every difficulty, there are new combos that don't start on downbeats (longer lines on the timeline), but are set somewhere in between them. I would remove them if I were you, to make the maps more predictable. Examples: 00:01:021 (1) - 00:02:271 (1) - 00:03:021 (1) - (
Expert), 00:19:021 (1) - 00:21:021 (1) - (
Insane).
NormalThe icon and the amount of circles/sliders in this map make it look like an
Easy map rather than a normal one, I suggest you to change the map's name to
Easy. You would need a
Normal difficulty later.
Because this is the lowest difficulty in the set, it should have an AR of no more than 5 (
Ranking Criteria), and this actually depends on the map's specific level of difficulty. Personally, I'd set it to 3.
This map needs some polishing. Some patterns could look better! Examples below.
00:01:271 (1,2) - Put these items in a way so that they fit together.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1003550600:04:271 (4,1) - I'm sure there is a better possible shape for these sliders. Avoid straight lines if you can.
00:06:271 (2) - Too many sliders are straight in this map. For more variety, I would curve the one at this time.
00:09:271 (1) - Make this slider surround the circle next to it, as shown in this picture:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10035530. Same applies to the sliders: 00:17:271 (1) - 00:19:271 (3) - 00:47:271 (3) - 01:09:271 (1) -
00:22:271 (2,3) - Make them look like it's shown in this picture:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1003558900:25:271 (1,2,3) - The shape of these sliders could be improved.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1003574400:29:271 (1,2) - You can make these two sliders parallel to each other and surround 00:30:271 (2) - with 00:28:271 (4) - . Screenshot:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1003575100:33:271 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - There are too many sliders on this part, and they look too spread out. Make a pattern with them if you can. Same applies to 00:57:271 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - and 01:21:271 (1,2,3,4,1,2) -
00:47:271 (3,4) - Enclose the circle at 00:48:771 (4) - with the slider before it.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1003576300:49:271 (1,2) - These sliders don't look bad, but they don't fit each other perfectly. Improve that if you can.
00:52:771 - Add a circle here, it looks empty otherwise. Same on 00:55:771 -
00:54:271 (1) - Remove the new combo on this circle. Same applies to 00:56:271 (1) -
01:11:271 (1) - Replace this spinner by a sequence of circles or sliders, that would look better.
01:16:271 (4,1,2) - Form a better pattern with these items. Possible solution:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10035799. Similar issue on 01:24:271 (4,1) -
01:27:271 (3,4) - I suggest you to modify the slider on 01:27:271 (3) - so that the end of the map looks like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10035810I only modded the
Normal difficulty because I thought it needed the most improvement, and my mod was getting too long. Sorry about that, good luck with this map! See ya