Firis Mistlud'摸
Firis Mistlud wrote:
Req from qq[神也 hard]
- 00:02:905 (2,3) - 沒包好clear
- 00:28:090 (7,8) - hard的話很難讀,建議分開一點clear
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Frey'摸
Frey wrote:
from in-game requestKamiya's Hard
[*]00:28:461 (8) - 单独一个overlap遮挡看起来不是很妥当,原因是前后并没有类似的overlap摆设,这里的音乐表现也感觉用一个overlap并不是特别有趣...啊 这里就改了位置。
[*]00:25:868 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 实话说用Normal-Hitclap相当吵。我觉得应该加一条新的独立绿线,然后用addition-soft的clap声(即默认clear
[*]00:41:794 - 00:43:276 - 00:46:053 - 00:46:239 - 我觉得漏掉这些人声,不是很棒的选择
[*]01:24:387 (7) - 这里十分建议拆成三个1/2的note, 你在后面01:27:350 (1,2,3) - 也这么做了clear
MoeAsuka'摸
MoeAsuka wrote:
[Kamiya's Hard]
00:14:757 (2,1) -或许可以blanket?不过你要是觉得不好看就算了 clear
00:28:461 (8,1) - 看着好难受啊,能不能包一下clear
卡农'摸
[ Abhor ] wrote:
[ Kamiya's Hard ]
00:09:572 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这块我不知道。。就是个人感觉,要不然都做成这种节奏00:08:831 (3,4) ,要不然做这样试试?clear
00:12:720 (2) - 换成两个单点!!前面都在跟鼓。。不要跟我说对了那个很奇怪的音轨,不适合clear,不过换的别的节奏 那样的节奏确实不是很妥
00:13:276 (4,5) - 这里改这样
00:16:053 (2,3) - 这个跟上面类似。。你可能是说要对人声,但是这里换成单点加滑条这样更适合。。不管是鼓点还是人声clear
00:16:979 (1) - 可以换成3/4滑条加单点。。。因为最后那个白线是个很明显的重音,我觉得需要强调,滑条尾打击感太弱了clear
00:45:127 (3) - QWQ要不要就三点滑条算啦,感觉好别扭啊
00:56:053 (3,4) -强烈建议你不要叠住。。。大多数情况我都认为红线在前的重叠是非常不舒服的,这里人声重音都是和白线不能重叠,而且人声还是升调,这就更不适合重叠了!所以拖开?然后我又看了下你后面。。都是这样重叠的,那么还是无视这个吧。。不然改动太大,不过你可以下次注意啊~~下次一定注意
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