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Winfall
[Insane]
02:06:327 (1,2) - I think would be better as a slider but I dont know.
02:08:289 (6) - Wouldn't this be better with a little more spacing emphasis since its on a louder sound?
02:46:289 (4) - There's a distance gap here because of the stronger sound but not here 02:47:716 (3) -

[Hard & Easy]
My brain is about as good as a rotten potato with modding these, sorry.
xChorse
Hello, NM from my queue.

Normal

Are those inherited points at the start necessary? I think you can remove them if you don't plan on mapping the start in this diff.

00:25:530 (3) - I'm a bit confused on the consistency of this pattern, 00:28:384 - is the same drum sound but doesn't have a hitcircle mapped to it.

03:40:522 (6) - could be a 1/2 slider to follow the vocals a bit more

Hard

00:05:906 - not sure if these inherited points do anything either just like in normal diff

00:45:332 (4,1) - fix stack

01:59:012 (2) - could probably move this to 01:59:191 - and add a hitcircle on 01:59:012 - or do the same as you did at 02:04:186 (1,2,3) -

02:16:049 - ^

02:32:373 - I feel like this stands out more so it could be mapped as a hitcircle

03:23:931 (4,5,1) - uh this looks a bit weird, idk if it's intentional since 03:23:931 (4,5,1) - was standard

Insane

01:06:740 (5) - all other stacks like this were on vocals so I'm not sure if this one is intentional

I like the really interesting emphasis on cursor movement.


Hope this helps even if it's short, good luck!
Topic Starter
pishifat
SPOILER

Winfall wrote:

[Insane]
02:06:327 (1,2) - I think would be better as a slider but I dont know. i mean, both work, i just find holding through the sounds to be less cool than clicking
02:08:289 (6) - Wouldn't this be better with a little more spacing emphasis since its on a louder sound? would make the following note seem less important without the contrast :(
02:46:289 (4) - There's a distance gap here because of the stronger sound but not here 02:47:716 (3) - for all the consecutive 1/1 stuff i stack tho g

[Hard & Easy]
My brain is about as good as a rotten potato with modding these, sorry. G

xChorse wrote:

Hello, NM from my queue.

Normal

Are those inherited points at the start necessary? I think you can remove them if you don't plan on mapping the start in this diff. i guess ya. when they dont do anything its not a big dela tho lol

00:25:530 (3) - I'm a bit confused on the consistency of this pattern, 00:28:384 - is the same drum sound but doesn't have a hitcircle mapped to it. there's like 3 of them per 4 measures and i skipped the second one each time in this section. would have to use constant 1/1 sliders to do otherwise and thats even lamer:(

03:40:522 (6) - could be a 1/2 slider to follow the vocals a bit more continuous 1/1 gaps wouldnt amek last note stand out as much :(

Hard

00:05:906 - not sure if these inherited points do anything either just like in normal diff a

00:45:332 (4,1) - fix stack

01:59:012 (2) - could probably move this to 01:59:191 - and add a hitcircle on 01:59:012 - or do the same as you did at 02:04:186 (1,2,3) - aaaa

02:16:049 - ^ did em

02:32:373 - I feel like this stands out more so it could be mapped as a hitcircle 5 is supposed to stand out tho

03:23:931 (4,5,1) - uh this looks a bit weird, idk if it's intentional since 03:23:931 (4,5,1) - was standard idk how that happened lol

Insane

01:06:740 (5) - all other stacks like this were on vocals so I'm not sure if this one is intentional slidered

I like the really interesting emphasis on cursor movement.


Hope this helps even if it's short, good luck!
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Sonnyc
Normal.
00:46:938 - There's a beat here in the song. Since you've expressed that rhythm previously at 00:33:558 (3,4,5,6) which was a quite similar part of the song, I think you can consider giving some consistency.
01:06:740 (4,1) - Can you try making this flow a perfect linear? While the current flow has the same direction, having a few pixel off from a perfect linear felt a little less polished imo. Nothing major, but still.

Hard.
00:57:464 (7,8,9) - 01:03:172 (6,7,8) - I'd like you to reconsider about these rhythm/pattern design. This kind of 1/1 traingle design is one of the major patterns that appeared in this diff which is also seen in the kiai section such as 01:23:153 (7,8,9) - 01:29:933 (1,2,3) - etc. And there's a difference in the song between those two sections which is the vocals. 00:57:999 - 01:03:708 - contains a vocal while the rhythms at the kiai section are just following the 1/1 vocals straightly. Even the mapping sections are different, applying the same mapping concept at different music concepts felt to be lacking in structure.

Good. The symmetric concept of the intro was interesting, yet not something less creative. Zigzag flow in the kiai of insane was cool and natural while the spacing concept being maintained.

Let me know when you're ready.
Topic Starter
pishifat
did those!!
Sonnyc
Nominated.
Topic Starter
pishifat
woo thanks
xChorse
o nice
Strategas
your bg aspect ratio succ, not sure how osu handles those kind of things so just mentioning in case it was overlooked

insane

02:06:327 (1,2,3) - don't think intuitive enough for sightread, only occasion and spacing looks similar to your other things, safer with repeat slider or filler rhythm with sliders

02:41:650 (3) - 3x 1/8 notes followed by 1/4 gap but if you did it to follow the buzzing instead of the piano or just simplifying - fine by me, just want to make sure it was your intention

hard

01:18:158 (1) - 02:52:354 (1) - xd slider in normal diff much better

03:40:523 (1) - ctrl+arrow up and ctrl + arrow left (important)

good
Topic Starter
pishifat
bg will scale to fit any res so cropping is kinda pointless

02:41:650 (3) - what you said

did everythingelse!!
Shurelia
This song BibleThump



anyway, go go go.
Strategas
Nominated.
Rizen
! congrats pishifat!
LowAccuracySS
I really love Hanatan and Pishifat. Like, a lot. Like, a whole lot. You have no idea. I love them so much that it is inexplicable, and I'm ninety-nine percent sure that I have an unhealthy obsession. I will never get tired of listening that sweet, angelic voice of them. It is my life goal to meet up her with themin real life and just say hello to them.I fall asleep at night dreaming of her holding a personal concert for me, and then she would be sorry tired that they comes and cuddles up to me while we sleep


in all seriousness

gg
Lavender
gratz
wajinshu
Congrats!
Kyouren
Gratzz!
Myxo
Congratz :D
Sotarks
Grratazz
dqs01733
8-) cool map !
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