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Tommy Heavenly6 - Black Paper Moon (full ver)

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, June 17, 2011 at 1:53:24 PM

Artist: Tommy Heavenly6
Title: Black Paper Moon
Source: Soul Eater
Tags: tommy heavenly6 black paper moon
BPM: 164
Filesize: 6465kb
Play Time: 00:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4.99 stars, 208 notes)
Download: Tommy Heavenly6 - Black Paper Moon
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Resnapped still working ;-;
put bg >.>
now fix a/r :D
grr more errors to fix >.>;...
made it more difficult o-x
heres full submission~
Slam
Nice map, needs faster AR tho
*d
bedabeda
Yeah, good map. Maybe faster AR?
R3laX3R
:D
LightoHK
Nice 8-)
Star ;3
YowaneHaku
PFF
ziin
You gotta work for my star. Once at least insane is fully completed I can star it. And stars don't really mean attention, unless you get into the (20 maps higher) range.

[general]
upload the background (do a full submit). I don't like looking at a black screen. :(
BPM: 164.000 (It might be a little fast, which I find strange. We'll know when you map the rest of the song)
Offset: 910 (this will change later, but you need to make sure the white ticks are the main beats, not the blue ticks.)
mp3 length: it's quite long. Here's the layout of the song:
15547 - verse 1
50669 - refrain
79937 - interlude
91644 - verse 2
126766 - refrain 2
156034 - interlude
161888 - bridge/verse 3
188230 - pre-chorus
211644 - refrain 3
249693 - end of song

The easiest way to cut the song is just to end after verse 2's refrain, which would be ~2 minutes, but you can also just cut out certain pieces of the music. So you could attach refrain 3 right after verse 2 and have the song end like normal rather than fade out. You can cut out refrain, interlude, and verse 2 to make the song end at around 3:30 (though that's still a pretty long song). Or you can make a marathon, but that's stupid.

[insane]
00:03:199 (1) - terrible place for a new combo. Once you get the offset correct, you'll notice it falls on a blue tick. New combos should usually be on white ticks, preferably the long white tick (there are many exceptions, though).
00:04:571 (4,5,6,7,8) - this is a good place for jumps. Check to see you spacing in the top right corner after you highlight something. It will tell you how far away the selected notes are from the previous and next note.
00:16:095 (1) - I don't hear anything in the music here that suggests to use 1/4 notes here.
00:17:010 (1,1,1) - new combo spam isn't really a good thing.
00:38:961 (1,1) - don't stack sliders like this or hide them under other things. Some people think that if sliders even touch it's an error. Especially don't stack something on top of the repeat icon in a repeating slider.

Insane seems a bit slow right now. You could probably get away with up to 2.3 slider speed.

If you keep the slider speed as it is, ar8 is fine. If you speed it up, you may want to switch to ar9. Personally I prefer ar8 over ar9 any day.
Mystgun
good job, I'll give this map a star. :)
Topic Starter
s 8 n

ziin wrote:

doing the full song :D so i took out half just like u said lol
[insane]
00:03:199 (1) - terrible place for a new combo. Once you get the offset correct, you'll notice it falls on a blue tick. New combos should usually be on white ticks, preferably the long white tick (there are many exceptions, though).i noticed that from the start but wanted to see if anyone else noticed it as well but fixed~

00:04:571 (4,5,6,7,8) - this is a good place for jumps. Check to see you spacing in the top right corner after you highlight something. It will tell you how far away the selected notes are from the previous and next note.
00:16:095 (1) - I don't hear anything in the music here that suggests to use 1/4 notes here.been used 1/4 the whole song loL
00:17:010 (1,1,1) - new combo spam isn't really a good thing.thought it was cool but fixed

00:38:961 (1,1) - don't stack sliders like this or hide them under other things. Some people think that if sliders even touch it's an error. Especially don't stack something on top of the repeat icon in a repeating slider.hm.. tried to make it confusing but okai fixedfixed

Insane seems a bit slow right now. You could probably get away with up to 2.3 slider speed.

If you keep the slider speed as it is, ar8 is fine. If you speed it up, you may want to switch to ar9. Personally I prefer ar8 over ar9 any day.
ill work on the speedness LoL this is my first time really attempting since i gave up on the other maps ive created lol
Babble
Personal chat mod :P

+star
oWingz
Star~
Keep it up
Ayeen_old
Sorry to keep you long:

Ayeen's mod:

General :
Snap all notes
Make a custom combo color that fit the background
Timing drop menu -----> resnap all notes
Distance snapping can be changed by : holding ctrl key. Where here is essential for you to make jumps/antijumps etc.
Changing grid level: View -----> Grid level

Insane:
00:03:113 (1,2,3,4,5) Use distance snapping 0.5 maybe?
00:12:442 (4) Ugly slider
00:26:344 (3,4,5) Use DS 0.5 maybe?
00:27:625 (3,1,2,3) ^
00:37:869 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) use DS 0.5 and hold "shift" key when palcing notes to make it straight lines
00:38:966 (1) Slider hidden by the previous stream. A big no for ranking
00:47:564 (6) Make it more symmetry and neater. Use grid level 2 for easier making one
00:50:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) Use DS 0.5 maybe? It will ok nicer and look more stream
00:51:588 (1,2,3,4,5) Imo, here fit for some jumps
00:56:344 (9) Make it more symmetry

That all~
Sorry, No star for now. There is a lot more you need to fix. Not just by what i mention above.

Ganbatte
Aurele
Did you get my Beatmap Stark ? c:

-Star-

8 Days after :

[ Insane ]

00:37:320 : You Did Put 3 & 4 At the same place + Same Time .

[ Kiai Mode ]

00:50:674 : Start
01:14:088 : End

03:19:942 : Start
03:55:064 : End

EWWW JUSTIN BIEBER ON TV. -poof-
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