Rivals_7 wrote:

yo M4M

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[7K Another]

00:18:119 (18119|4,18276|4) - think you shouldnt stack here. be consistent with - 00:17:490 (17490|5,17647|3) - 00:16:862 (16862|1,17019|3) -

00:51:260 - eee how about this

sounds the piano would be more intuititve if the double were splitted

00:56:757 (56757|0) - you forgot W i guess. see your "Glorious" diff

01:16:548 (76548|3,76783|3,76941|3,77098|3) - this anchor tho

01:24:873 (84873|2,84951|3,84951|5,85030|2) - somethings wrong here. the C should have the double too.

[7K Hyper]

00:41:993 (41993|0) - would probably move to 2 so it wont contradict with the low pitch piano - 00:42:307 (42307|0) -

00:47:176 (47176|6) - double here. just like you do at - 00:45:763 (45763|0,45763|3,45920|0,45920|3) - 00:46:391 (46391|1,46391|2,46548|1,46548|2) - since they're on the same piano pitches

00:50:160 (50160|3) - double? piano sounds quite louder

01:34:768 (94768|0,94768|2,95003|3,95003|1) - 01:36:024 (96024|4,96024|6,96260|3,96260|5) - should have been stacked. consistency with - 01:39:794 (99794|6,99794|4,100030|4,100030|6) - 01:41:051 (101051|3,101051|0,101286|3,101286|0) - for the same piano pitch

01:54:087 (114087|6) - move to 5? contracdicted with the high piano pitch above it

[7K standard]

00:45:763 (45763|1,45920|1,46077|0) - transition from midfing to pinky are quite odd imo. i would move this to the right one step. also reflect what you did at - 00:46:391 (46391|5,46548|5,46705|4) -

00:53:302 (53302|1) - move to 4? give some freedom of intuitive pattern. :u

[7K Beginner]

01:39:166 (99166|0,99480|0) - hmm i dont think i see the reason why is this stacked tho.

pro diffs. GL o/

MEGAtive wrote:

xi - Grand Chariot

[7K Glorious Queen]
*ahem*ripping off Glorious Crown for diffname since this song's title is Grand Chariot aha I get it. // ya

Mods

1. 00:01:469 - Well this starts with pitch increasing, so why don't you try something like https://rhythmega.s-ul.eu/Svxx9va2 ? Your current pattern would make it feel it's increasing and then decreasing. // mm a little bit arranged
   
2. 00:02:255 - Pitch wise I think https://rhythmega.s-ul.eu/GW72l2bn is better in covering the melody. // na, it looks like the next pattern
   
3. 00:06:496 (6496|2,6535|3,6574|4,6613|5,6653|6,6653|0,6731|1) - Would executed better if Ctrl+H. Your current pattern makes it heavy on left hand.
   
4. 00:26:443 - https://rhythmega.s-ul.eu/xSx8nfvf more comfy IMO. // i kept this to separate left & right hand
   
5. 00:41:208 - Don't you think this is a bit anticlimatic? Maybe triple here still fine. And Another is actually using Triple so why not
   
6. 00:57:071 (57071|0,57071|1,57071|2,57229|2,57229|0,57386|2,57386|0,57543|3,57543|0,57543|2,57700|0,57700|1,57700|2,57857|0,57857|2,58014|2,58014|0,58171|0,58171|2,58249|3,58328|0) - Eh really? Maybe 00:57:543 (57543|3,57700|1) - better off in right column. God dem hammering ;w; // im teh evil one
   
7. 01:32:569 - Better off with https://rhythmega.s-ul.eu/gNKVL12S tho. Pitch are going down here so making it stair to the right just felt awkward. Also as an aftermath of this, 01:33:825 (93825|4) - Move to |6| to make pattern looks cleaner. (|7||3||6||2| broken stair thingy).
   
8. TBH kiai felt fine but aren't consistent in structure so I think I should tweak this.
   
   1. I'm confused with 01:35:239 - 01:36:496 - compared with 01:37:752 - 01:39:009 - 01:40:265 - 01:41:522 - . The first two are using a succession of |14||25| etc., while the other's are using minijack.
      
      1. If I'm going to assume that it's for variety, then 01:40:265 - 01:41:522 - should be reverting to the same as 01:35:239 - 01:36:496 -
      2. Otherwise you can change 01:37:752 - 01:39:009 - to the same as 01:35:239 - 01:36:496 - so the minijack section starts at 01:40:265 -
         Though I prefer the first one but it's up to you.
   2. Now let's talk about 01:35:003 - 01:40:030 - compared with 01:36:260 - 01:37:516 - 01:38:773 - and also compared with 01:41:286 - . The first two are having the notes minijack'd, while the second three are in |14||25| succession (IDK what to call this tho. I'd say gallop or ministair but it just doesn't fall right to the term lel.) and the third one is only having one note jack'd. Actually my suggestion would revolve on something like "2 instance, change pattern execution" but it's up to you though. Like 01:36:260 - minijack, 01:41:286 - both notes minijack'd. Yea something like that.

Actually if this mod sounds weird, don't mind me since I took two different days to mod this lol.

// the way i vary the jackhammer placement is basically more of this reason :
jacks made as marking for transitioning to the next part, building up and making it harder towards the end.. basically to heaten up per each stanza, each part getting more jacks from first section to the next one, and they are more became harder too, from single hand jack to 2 hand jack, so instead of making every same sound jack'd, i made it sightly raising instead for, rather playing experience.. not so much into prprpr

another thing, unless its allowed to, its kind of contradict to put more jack as it raises the gap more from another to glorious queen

[7K Another]

Mods

1. 00:19:061 (19061|5,19061|3,19218|5,19218|1) - Ctrl+H so the pattern is actually balanced. Also pattern became more interesting lel
2. 00:20:946 - Actually I kinda against simplification of 1/8 using 1/4 here since it would be misleading but w/e it's still UTY though.
3. 00:40:972 (40972|3,41208|2) - Ctrl+J? So 00:40:736 - 00:41:365 - would get same treatment of being hammered.
4. 00:42:150 - Well you can map the piano here. It's not that hurt right?
5. 01:33:511 (93511|2,93668|4,93825|3,93982|5) - You can move these to the right once to make 01:33:197 - left hand less cluttered.

Segini dulu dah. Ntar dilanjut lagi.

Eclipse- wrote:

RANK THIS MAP PLS

from no queue I don't even mod my boy

I'm the playability guy tbw, lots upon lots of 2017 mapping criticism incoming

nothing to mod in 4k beginner tbh

4k Standard

POTENTIAL ERRORS
00:06:338 (6338|0,6496|3,6496|0) - ...I don't like that. It's an awkward pattern from a beginner's point of view. hitting the same note twice whilst adding another note to the second one doesn't suit the diff even if it's slow imo // fixed this
00:18:747 (18747|2,18747|3,18904|3) - it's like the error before but faster and the other way around lol // the double meant for the kick & cymbal, but moved some anchor i suppose
00:41:208 (41208|1,41208|0,41365|0,41836|3,41993|3,41993|2) - risky risky pattern for that diff // will keep the anchor for variation
01:42:621 (102621|3,102778|1,102778|3,103092|2,103249|2,103249|0,103564|1,103721|1,103721|3,104035|0,104192|3,104192|0) - maybe? this is much more acceptable since it's the densiest part of the song but I'd still consider that. // as you said, dense pattern for the climax

ERRORS
01:54:715 (114715|0,114873|0,114873|1) - density definitely not sufficient to place that here. // mm keep, rather minor and it meant for the kick

CRITICAL ERRORS
none

4k Hyper

POTENTIAL ERRORS
00:02:962 (2962|2,3040|3,3040|1) - wrong level for this after a burst tbh // mm good point
00:26:600 (26600|3,26600|2,26757|3) - insufficient density for something like that. // mmm i don't think so, double kick
00:31:234 (31234|3,31312|0,31312|2) - look 1st error // too minor for either change or keeping, keep
00:35:396 (35396|2,35396|0,35553|1,35553|0) -
00:35:867 (35867|3,36024|0,36024|3) - you sure? // ofc, 1/2 anchor adds variation to the flow
00:49:846 (49846|1,49925|2,50003|0,50082|3,50160|2) - doesn't this burrst look at least weird to you? // nah, meant for l r l r
00:59:270 (59270|2,59349|0,59427|1,59506|3,59585|0,59585|2) - remember, it's over 190bpm bursts when the map isn't even 3 stars, make them simpler. // i could but i think this one doesn't really that hard to execute
01:04:140 (64140|0,64218|3,64297|1,64375|2,64454|1,64532|3) - again // intended trill
01:14:506 (74506|3,74663|0,74663|3) - another calm part and this // same pitch


ERRORS
00:48:276 (48276|2,48276|0,48433|0,48590|3,48590|1,48747|3,48904|1,48904|0,49061|0,49218|3,49218|2,49375|3) - this HURTS in a relatively calm part of the song. Mind that it's not even a 3 star diff and relevance matters. // moved some notes but keep the anchor as it meant to be
01:22:438 (82438|3,82516|2,82595|0,82674|3,82752|1,82831|0) - relevance again, this is in the middle of a short stream, how is a player supposed to hit that having been recently introduced to simple streams? // that's the challenge, the 3/4 beat supports the transition tho, also too minor to affect playability :3
01:23:694 (83694|0,83773|2,83852|3,83930|0,84009|1,84087|3,84166|0) - again // ^



CRITICAL ERRORS
01:45:605 (105605|1) - MERCILESS. in the chorus part where you introduce a player to doubles and triples with a frequent need to jack (and only fillers if single notes) then you get a jack from that singkle filler note, how is a player on that level supposed to hit that? // mm i can't see why i should unjack them, also i think if its 'normal or below' then it would be too hard, hence, 'Hyper'.
01:48:119 (108119|0) - again

also one point, this diff is already a little broken as it comes to relevance, since the doubles and triples in the chorus part are already wayy above the average for this star rating but it isn't a particular error because I don't know how else I'd do this anyway // it meant for the climax so i use triples and simple anchors, hey they are fun for practice!

4k Another

POTENTIAL ERRORS
00:19:375 (19375|2,19375|3,19375|1) - why a triple here? and even if you have a good reason for it, it would play better for the single note after it to be in the first column imo // because of 00:19:689 (19689|2,20003|2,20318|1) -
00:19:375 (19375|2,19375|3,19375|1) - I don't hear this note? // try 25% playback rate
01:27:307 (87307|2,87386|3) - I don't hear those two? // try 25% playback rate
01:47:804 (107804|1,107804|2,107883|0,107962|2,108040|3,108040|1,108119|0) - consider simplifying. This pattern doesn't play well at all. // mm too subjective, i'll keep this

ERRORS
00:06:103 (6103|3,6181|1,6181|2,6260|3) - don't do that. It's evil on this and many higher levels. Playability hurts at this point. // its like 00:05:475 (5475|1,5553|0,5632|1) - but only flipped, keep this

00:47:019 (47019|0,47176|0) - a player has just hit a stream, let them chill. // same piano pitch, keep this

00:59:427 (59427|0) - should be in the 3rd column, since this made a trill, as always relevance and playability // except you forgot it will create longer trill and break the playability itself xD, keep

01:00:527 (60527|0,60605|1,60684|0) - have mercy. this is in the middle of a stream. It's easy to hit, but not by a player who is on this level. // its not hard .-. its insane difficulty as it meant to be, keep

01:01:626 (61626|3,61705|2,61783|3) - again
01:14:820 (74820|0) - 3rd error again
01:16:077 (76077|0) - and again
01:16:077 (76077|0,76391|3) - aaaaaand again
01:22:045 (82045|3) - yet again
01:22:045 (82045|3) - guess what? again
01:37:438 (97438|0,97516|2,97516|3,97595|0,97674|2,97752|0,97752|1) - ...what? This pattern is so weird that I even choked here xd but honestly it plays really bad, shouldn't be there // you bet
01:40:422 (100422|0,100501|3,100501|1,100579|0) - 1st error repeats
01:45:448 (105448|0,105527|3,105527|1,105605|0) - and again
01:46:705 (106705|1,106783|3,106783|2,106862|1) - yet again
01:49:218 (109218|1,109297|3,109297|2,109375|1) - ...again


CRITICAL ERRORS
01:31:705 (91705|1,91705|0,91783|1,91783|0) - NONONONONNONONONONONOOONO even if it's single this is a whole other level. Only in grand crown this could be acceptable // mm keep

// i don't know how to summarize this, but 'Another' meant for 'Insane' difficulty, i don't want to lower it just for playability, i consider the music flow more than anything

Will mod Grand Crown when I feel like it

chouyaa wrote:

hi there!
as requested in my super modding queue

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

7K // Standard

00:25:501 - di sini mestinya 1 note aja, sama dengan 00:25:187 - 00:24:873 - // itu buat synth kok, keep.

00:28:014 (28014|3,28171|4) - tuker kolom? di sini perpindahan jarinya rada sulit dan kurang fit ama pitchnya. // ok

7K // Hyper

00:06:338 (6338|3,6417|4,6496|5,6496|6) - geser 1 kolom ke kiri. biar 00:06:496 (6496|6,6496|5) - ada di beda kolom dengan 00:06:810 - karna di situ jelas perbedaan suaranya signifikan bgt.
dan juga bakal lebih enak dimainin ketimbang 1/4 notenya berat ke kanan. // ok

00:13:092 - add note. ada drum itu. // keep, monorhythm gitar itu

00:18:668 - add note. saran gw mending tetep dimap 1/4nya buat konsistensi meskipun intensitas volumenya ga sekeras 00:19:297 - ama 00:18:982 - // ok

00:25:501 - di sini 1 note cukup, ga ada piano dan suaranya sama kek 00:25:187 - 00:24:873 - // lah itu piano disitu xD

00:33:825 (33825|3) - pindah ke col 3? col 4 agak berat, cek 00:33:668 (33668|3,33825|3,34061|3,34297|3) -
dan juga itu melodinya beda di 00:33:668 - ama 00:33:825 - // pr nya sama, keep

00:36:967 - di sini bisa 3 notes buat naikin emphasize ama cymbalnya. dan juga itu mestinya bisa dibikin LN buat ngikutin flute (?) suara apalah itu :''v
suggestion > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10129385 // nah gk usah add, mumpung masih hyper

00:39:323 (39323|4,39401|2) - ini kenapa diputus sendiri? // ea my bad :v fixed

00:41:208 - 2 note? di situ cukup keras. // bole lah

00:36:967 (36967|3,49375|3) - pindah ke col 5, cek 00:48:433 (48433|3,48747|3,49061|3,49375|3) -

01:19:297 - 01:19:611 - bukannya ini mesti dimap juga buat konsistensi ama 00:18:982 - 00:19:297 - // beda part, also terlalu dense klo di tambah

sori telat, baru inget klo blm dimod kmaren :''v
goodluck <3

1/2/3/4/5/6/7

00:01:469 - mulai dari sini ampe 00:03:040 - patternya rada berat di tangan kiri, rearrange dikit coba

00:03:825 (3825|1,3904|2,3982|5,4061|3,4140|1,4218|2) - ini ngkitin piano apa kick nya sih? kalo saran w mending jangan mengabaikan kick nya, mending coba ini saja or something like that

00:04:532 (4532|2) - jadiin 2 note buat konsistensi ama yang 00:04:925 (4925|5) -

00:05:160 (5160|6,5160|5,5239|4,5396|6,5475|5) - awkward transition

00:06:181 (6181|1) - jadiin 2 buat emphaziz

00:06:496 (6496|6,6496|2) - ini yang di cover piano apa kick nya sih? soalnya kalo kick nya yang di cover masih ada suara di tick biru ama snap 1/8 diatas nya ampe tick merah

00:06:731 - cover aja

00:07:045 (7045|2,7595|4) - gw bingung banget ama ini, suara mereka sama soalnya, yang dibawah tick birunya nggak dicover, yang diatas tick merah nya nggak kecover +w+

00:08:930 - add note, soalnya disitu ada drum

00:12:935 (12935|6) - add note , tapi kalo kgk mau di add juga gpp, tapi LN nya digeser aja ngikutin spasingnya yang 00:12:150 (12150|0,12307|1) - ama yang 00:12:464 (12464|4,12621|5) -

00:13:092 - kick nya napa nggak dicover??

00:14:506 - lupa apa sengaja ???

00:16:077 - biar lebih berstruktur mungkin 00:16:077 (16077|1,16234|2) - tukar posisi dari 2 3 jadi 3 2

00:20:632 - add note di 1 buat crash

00:24:009 (24009|4,24009|5) - ini ngapain?? soalnya banyak banget suara sejenis kgk tercover

00:26:757 (26757|2) - jadiin 2

00:28:092 - buat stair juga yang identik kayak 00:27:700 (27700|4,27778|5,27857|6) -

00:30:763 - lupa yah? add for kick

00:31:077 - jadiin 2 , karena suaranya sama kayak 00:30:998 (30998|4,30998|1) - buat jaga konsistensi 00:31:234 (31234|1) - yang ini juga

00:34:938 - satu - satunya yang nggak tercover

00:44:977 (44977|2,45056|1) - ini aransemennya dah beda ama instrumen yang diikutin ama stairsnya

00:45:448 - satu-satunya kick yang nggak kecover, kalo cuman mau ngikutin piano boleh - boleh aje sih, tapi yang ini 00:44:820 (44820|0,44820|4) - kgk ada piano malah dapat 2 note +w+

00:45:684 - add note

00:46:548 -

01:04:611 - add note di 5

01:09:323 -

01:15:998 (75998|2,76077|1) - aransemennya dah beda lagi ama stair yang ngikutin aransemen

01:17:490 - add note buat konsistensi ama 01:17:255 (77255|1) -

01:17:962 - ^^ tapi kalo sengaja gpp juga sih asal ada alasan

01:18:197 (78197|1) - hapus aja biar jump nya lebih berasa

01:18:904 - add note di 7

01:20:867 (80867|2) - hapus

01:22:909 (82909|4) - yang seharusnya double yang 01:22:988 (82988|2) -

01:24:951 (84951|3,84951|5) - ini double, tapi 01:25:265 - kosong

01:26:208 (86208|3) - hapus

01:29:742 (89742|1) - pindahin ke col 3

00:01:469 - biar lebih berstruktur dan lebih rapi mending kayak gini aja https://puu.sh/zjDb4/eb4f15297a.png

00:02:726 - jadiin double, beri penekanan pada echo nya

00:07:045 (7045|0,7124|1,7438|1,7595|0) - thingking ;3 suara mereka sama soalnya

00:08:302 (8302|3) - pindahin aja ke tick merah buat konsistensi

00:48:276 - setiap kali gw dengerin part ini gw mewek asw

dah itu aja, w nggak lagi akit :"(

_VianK_ wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/697691 <<<<<<<<<<<< mod from here

1/2/3/4/5/6/7

another 7k

00:01:469 - mulai dari sini ampe 00:03:040 - patternya rada berat di tangan kiri, rearrange dikit coba // done

00:03:825 (3825|1,3904|2,3982|5,4061|3,4140|1,4218|2) - ini ngkitin piano apa kick nya sih? kalo saran w mending jangan mengabaikan kick nya, mending coba ini saja or something like that // nda dulu lah, buat gap hehe

00:04:532 (4532|2) - jadiin 2 note buat konsistensi ama yang 00:04:925 (4925|5) -

00:05:160 (5160|6,5160|5,5239|4,5396|6,5475|5) - awkward transition

00:06:181 (6181|1) - jadiin 2 buat emphaziz

00:06:496 (6496|6,6496|2) - ini yang di cover piano apa kick nya sih? soalnya kalo kick nya yang di cover masih ada suara di tick biru ama snap 1/8 diatas nya ampe tick merah // iya yak, added ln /w/

00:06:731 - cover aja // keep ah

00:07:045 (7045|2,7595|4) - gw bingung banget ama ini, suara mereka sama soalnya, yang dibawah tick birunya nggak dicover, yang diatas tick merah nya nggak kecover +w+ // sengaja, monorhythm

00:08:930 - add note, soalnya disitu ada drum // oqe

00:12:935 (12935|6) - add note , tapi kalo kgk mau di add juga gpp, tapi LN nya digeser aja ngikutin spasingnya yang 00:12:150 (12150|0,12307|1) - ama yang 00:12:464 (12464|4,12621|5) - // mm i'll think about this

00:13:092 - kick nya napa nggak dicover?? // monorhythm

00:14:506 - lupa apa sengaja ??? // ^ yus

00:16:077 - biar lebih berstruktur mungkin 00:16:077 (16077|1,16234|2) - tukar posisi dari 2 3 jadi 3 2

00:20:632 - add note di 1 buat crash

00:24:009 (24009|4,24009|5) - ini ngapain?? soalnya banyak banget suara sejenis kgk tercover // itu 3/4 synth kok

00:26:757 (26757|2) - jadiin 2 // bukan synth :<

00:28:092 - buat stair juga yang identik kayak 00:27:700 (27700|4,27778|5,27857|6) - // ^

00:30:763 - lupa yah? add for kick // ngga, sengaja kok o3o

00:31:077 - jadiin 2 , karena suaranya sama kayak 00:30:998 (30998|4,30998|1) - buat jaga konsistensi 00:31:234 (31234|1) - yang ini juga

00:34:938 - satu - satunya yang nggak tercover // astaga misisng, lol

00:44:977 (44977|2,45056|1) - ini aransemennya dah beda ama instrumen yang diikutin ama stairsnya // fixed

00:45:448 - satu-satunya kick yang nggak kecover, kalo cuman mau ngikutin piano boleh - boleh aje sih, tapi yang ini 00:44:820 (44820|0,44820|4) - kgk ada piano malah dapat 2 note +w+ // sengaja juga kok, prefer monorhythm biar greget

00:45:684 - add note

00:46:548 -

01:04:611 - add note di 5

01:09:323 -

01:15:998 (75998|2,76077|1) - aransemennya dah beda lagi ama stair yang ngikutin aransemen

01:17:490 - add note buat konsistensi ama 01:17:255 (77255|1) -

01:17:962 - ^^ tapi kalo sengaja gpp juga sih asal ada alasan

01:18:197 (78197|1) - hapus aja biar jump nya lebih berasa

01:18:904 - add note di 7

01:20:867 (80867|2) - hapus

01:22:909 (82909|4) - yang seharusnya double yang 01:22:988 (82988|2) - // disini sengaja ganti struktur

01:24:951 (84951|3,84951|5) - ini double, tapi 01:25:265 - kosong // ^

01:26:208 (86208|3) - hapus // ada suara :C

01:29:742 (89742|1) - pindahin ke col 3 // keep ya :v (fixed huehue)

nyi roro kidul

00:01:469 - biar lebih berstruktur dan lebih rapi mending kayak gini aja https://puu.sh/zjDb4/eb4f15297a.png // jgn, ntar sama kyk another :<

00:02:726 - jadiin double, beri penekanan pada echo nya

00:07:045 (7045|0,7124|1,7438|1,7595|0) - thingking ;3 suara mereka sama soalnya // monorhythm itu

00:08:302 (8302|3) - pindahin aja ke tick merah buat konsistensi // ^

00:48:276 - setiap kali gw dengerin part ini gw mewek asw // tralalalala~

dah itu aja, w nggak lagi akit :"( // gws beb :<

good luck :*

Arzenvald wrote:

_VianK_ wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/697691 <<<<<<<<<<<< mod from here

1/2/3/4/5/6/7

another 7k

00:01:469 - mulai dari sini ampe 00:03:040 - patternya rada berat di tangan kiri, rearrange dikit coba // done

00:03:825 (3825|1,3904|2,3982|5,4061|3,4140|1,4218|2) - ini ngkitin piano apa kick nya sih? kalo saran w mending jangan mengabaikan kick nya, mending coba ini saja or something like that // nda dulu lah, buat gap hehe

00:04:532 (4532|2) - jadiin 2 note buat konsistensi ama yang 00:04:925 (4925|5) -

00:05:160 (5160|6,5160|5,5239|4,5396|6,5475|5) - awkward transition

00:06:181 (6181|1) - jadiin 2 buat emphaziz

00:06:496 (6496|6,6496|2) - ini yang di cover piano apa kick nya sih? soalnya kalo kick nya yang di cover masih ada suara di tick biru ama snap 1/8 diatas nya ampe tick merah // iya yak, added ln /w/

00:06:731 - cover aja // keep ah

00:07:045 (7045|2,7595|4) - gw bingung banget ama ini, suara mereka sama soalnya, yang dibawah tick birunya nggak dicover, yang diatas tick merah nya nggak kecover +w+ // sengaja, monorhythm

00:08:930 - add note, soalnya disitu ada drum // oqe

00:12:935 (12935|6) - add note , tapi kalo kgk mau di add juga gpp, tapi LN nya digeser aja ngikutin spasingnya yang 00:12:150 (12150|0,12307|1) - ama yang 00:12:464 (12464|4,12621|5) - // mm i'll think about this

00:13:092 - kick nya napa nggak dicover?? // monorhythm

00:14:506 - lupa apa sengaja ??? // ^ yus

00:16:077 - biar lebih berstruktur mungkin 00:16:077 (16077|1,16234|2) - tukar posisi dari 2 3 jadi 3 2

00:20:632 - add note di 1 buat crash

00:24:009 (24009|4,24009|5) - ini ngapain?? soalnya banyak banget suara sejenis kgk tercover // itu 3/4 synth kok

00:26:757 (26757|2) - jadiin 2 // bukan synth :<

00:28:092 - buat stair juga yang identik kayak 00:27:700 (27700|4,27778|5,27857|6) - // ^

00:30:763 - lupa yah? add for kick // ngga, sengaja kok o3o

00:31:077 - jadiin 2 , karena suaranya sama kayak 00:30:998 (30998|4,30998|1) - buat jaga konsistensi 00:31:234 (31234|1) - yang ini juga

00:34:938 - satu - satunya yang nggak tercover // astaga misisng, lol

00:44:977 (44977|2,45056|1) - ini aransemennya dah beda ama instrumen yang diikutin ama stairsnya // fixed

00:45:448 - satu-satunya kick yang nggak kecover, kalo cuman mau ngikutin piano boleh - boleh aje sih, tapi yang ini 00:44:820 (44820|0,44820|4) - kgk ada piano malah dapat 2 note +w+ // sengaja juga kok, prefer monorhythm biar greget

00:45:684 - add note

00:46:548 -

01:04:611 - add note di 5

01:09:323 -

01:15:998 (75998|2,76077|1) - aransemennya dah beda lagi ama stair yang ngikutin aransemen

01:17:490 - add note buat konsistensi ama 01:17:255 (77255|1) -

01:17:962 - ^^ tapi kalo sengaja gpp juga sih asal ada alasan

01:18:197 (78197|1) - hapus aja biar jump nya lebih berasa

01:18:904 - add note di 7

01:20:867 (80867|2) - hapus

01:22:909 (82909|4) - yang seharusnya double yang 01:22:988 (82988|2) - // disini sengaja ganti struktur

01:24:951 (84951|3,84951|5) - ini double, tapi 01:25:265 - kosong // ^

01:26:208 (86208|3) - hapus // ada suara :C

01:29:742 (89742|1) - pindahin ke col 3 // keep ya :v (fixed huehue)

nyi roro kidul

00:01:469 - biar lebih berstruktur dan lebih rapi mending kayak gini aja https://puu.sh/zjDb4/eb4f15297a.png // jgn, ntar sama kyk another :<

00:02:726 - jadiin double, beri penekanan pada echo nya

00:07:045 (7045|0,7124|1,7438|1,7595|0) - thingking ;3 suara mereka sama soalnya // monorhythm itu

00:08:302 (8302|3) - pindahin aja ke tick merah buat konsistensi // ^

00:48:276 - setiap kali gw dengerin part ini gw mewek asw // tralalalala~

dah itu aja, w lagi akit :"( // gws beb :<// makasih ya beb 😙

good luck :*

danke , no reply = fixed /w/

Mentholzzz wrote:

General
Add these in tags,

DanceDanceRevolution A pop'n music éclale REFLEC BEAT VOLZZA 2

The song also appears in these games too.

4K Grand Crown

Oh hey i can play this

00:19:218 - Maybe like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10560641 to avoid the 1/8 one hand trill // mm fixed in another way
00:19:689 - I feel like the jumpstream should start from here.
00:30:763 - add W (kick) hitsound
00:37:831 - There a piano sound here too, same pitch as 00:37:831 - . I'd suggest to make either shield (like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10539833&#41; or make it a OH trill (like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10539838&#41;
00:41:522 (41522|1,41600|3,41640|1) - Swap column. Column 2 is too dense. // keep, i love how it looks -w-
00:47:019 (47019|1) - Move to 1 ? The stack here
00:50:082 - add W (kick) hitsound
00:59:349 (59349|1,59427|2,59427|3,59506|1,59585|0,59585|2,59585|3,59742|1) - Ctrl-H this ? // nah it makes it more spamable
01:27:229 - I'd suggest to make this part handstream like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10560664 . The piano is still hearable at 01:27:543 -
01:39:873 - Add note in column 2 to make jack ?
01:47:098 - I hear a piano here ? Maybe add a note here ?
01:52:124 (112124|1,112124|0,112281|2,112281|3) - Ctrl-H to avoid the 3 notes jack at column 4. // inevitable for consistency and last part spike
01:53:930 - I hear a piano here ? Maybe add a note here ?
01:54:558 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10560833 // keep this

7K Glorious Queen
00:03:825 - Maybe add one more note here for the kick sound ? , same applied to 00:03:904 - and 00:04:140 -
00:28:014 - Add a double here for piano ?
00:30:763 - Missing a note here ? Maybe add one in column 5
00:59:349 (59349|6) - Move to 4
01:25:579 - 01:25:736 - 01:25:893 - Add note here to connect the hand stream. // keeping this, i want to make spacing emphasis
01:26:757 - Triple here for the cymbal ?
01:46:234 (106234|2,106312|3,106312|1,106391|0,106391|3,106469|2) - I think this pattern is very hard to hit for left-spacer. Maybe try to move some note to other hand ? // other parts are already left-spacer friendly i suppose, so i'll keep this