1. Hard (4.79 stars, 441 notes)
2. Insane (4.92 stars, 720 notes)
3. Normal (2.65 stars, 214 notes)
4. Wmf's Taiko (4.89 stars, 1331 notes)

_lolipop wrote:

0.0

kanpakyin wrote:

Star.

Ibuki Suika wrote:

8-)
每次见到我能打的连打图都会类牛满面

KingsAL2 wrote:

- Insane (I'm trying to catch your sound putting >_>)
00:23:926 (6) - Clap
01:23:926 (9-2nd) - ^
02:22:310 (1,3) - ^
02:34:195 (3) - ^
02:52:541 (9-2nd) - ^
02:54:849 (1) - Remove new combo
03:20:003 (1) - ^
03:47:695 (8) - New combo
03:50:580 (8) - ^
03:54:618 (5) - New combo and remove 03:55:310 (1) - Is a beautiful STAR ~

- Hard
01:07:772 (6) - New combo and remove 01:08:464 (1) -

- All
The clap is putting strange.
Good luck <* STAR

376,168,64080,2,0,B|408:120|376:80,2,90,0|0|8

wmfchris wrote:

.w.~

[General]
- Is an audio-lead in of 11 ms really necessary? Just remove it?
- Tag wmfchris is enough > : D No one tag "wmf's"~~~

[Insane]
- duplicated timeline: 74018, 147864
- OD +1 ?
00:23:926 (6) - stack at last (2)?
00:24:964 (3) - left 1 grid would be smoother for (2,3,4).
00:57:964 (12) - break into two combo like the streams before the break
01:04:080 (4) - adjust the slider like this

376,168,64080,2,0,B|408:120|376:80,2,90,0|0|8

01:11:695 (5) - put this in the left-top side of (4)? Overlapping this with a previous stright slider would be weird.
01:25:080 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing
01:26:926 (7,8,9,10) - ^
01:35:003 (11,12,1) - why not even spacing?
01:49:541 (10) - stack on (6)?
02:35:233 (1) - similar fixing like 01:04:080, tweek the slider a bit
02:52:541 (9,10) - these two claps are a bit odd to me...
02:56:695 (11) - NC here like the streams before and fits the vocal?

[Wmf's Taiko]
Overmapped, bad for me D:

[Hard]
- OD + 1~2
00:32:926 (5) - clap at middle tick?
01:19:310 (4,7) - stack
01:32:233 (3,1,2,3) - uneven spacing
01:35:695 (1) - finish here?
01:41:695 (3,5) - put them on the same horizontal level
02:27:718 (s) - finish?
02:31:772 (2) - [Nazi] left 1 lv4 grid
02:32:695 (4,5,...) - (3)'s ending position is at x: 232 but (4,5) are in x:232, so all the coming notes left 1 lv4 grid
02:53:433 (4,5) - left 1 lv4 grid
03:37:772 (1,2,3) - weird stacking
03:40:310 (3,5) - same as 01:41:695
03:55:080 (1~13) - clap on (1,5,7,9,11) only?

[Normal]
01:15:849 (3) - flip vertically?
02:14:926 (3,1) - stack their ending
done
I wonder if there's not enough new combos in this diff...?

Clap goes well with this song but the rhythm occurs too much XD I used up my ideas orz

152,296,194464,1,0
112,192,194695,1,0
144,88,194926,1,0
176,192,195157,1,8

SiU_LeAf wrote:

[Normal]
00:32:464 (5) - 為啥這裏0.90x? 感覺上1格會好一點 done
00:38:926 (4,6) - 感覺把(1)或(3)的slider複制過來, 大小x2會更好, http://puu.sh/2Zym done
01:30:618 (3,4) - 感覺會幾誤導沙包的(逃 抱歉~這我跳過了
01:36:156 (1) - 把(3)複製過來, 水平反轉及消取回頭的節咀(?) done
02:16:310 (4) - 落1格 done
02:18:156 (2) - 左兩格? done
02:20:003 (4) - 反正與(1)不是呈直線, 歪一點如何? http://puu.sh/2Zyp 明明是直的小葉你說不是QAQ
02:21:387 (2,3,4,5) - 落3格? 現在(3,4)和(1)碰在一起, 感覺不好看 done
02:49:541 (9) - jump啥的, 在normal出現沒問題？done
03:22:310 (5) - 和(4)排成一直線 done
03:36:157 (2) - 與(8)重疊(?) done

[Hard]
00:09:387 (1) - 右1格(?) done
01:14:695 (2,4) - 如果不會被slider的軌道蓋著, 感覺會更整潔 done
01:34:310 (7,8,9) - 令到它們上下對稱(?) done
02:24:156 (1,2,3,4) - 小葉還是感覺不碰在一起比較好>_< http://puu.sh/2Zyu done
03:12:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 令它們左右對稱(?)給你CODE done

152,296,194464,1,0
112,192,194695,1,0
144,88,194926,1,0
176,192,195157,1,8

後面和前面感覺差不多, 所以不多說了0-0 謝謝摟

[Insane]
00:18:618 (1,3) - 令它們旋轉對稱(?) done
不知道為啥很想在00:26:464和00:27:387加note(逃 都加了@@
01:00:041 (3) - 放在這個位置? http://puu.sh/2Zyy done
02:14:464 (6) - 左兩格 done
02:38:233 (4) - 將這個slider變成兩個note且重疊, 然後和現在的(5,1,2)排成矩形？done
02:57:387 (1) - 這個new combo, 小葉之前這樣放被說了很多次意義不明, 超過份Q_Q XDDD
03:38:464 (7) - 換成size Lv3, 上一格(?) done

加油!! 祝早日ranked~ ^^

AngelHoney wrote:

原來忘記加星了lol

BakaHuang wrote:

敢不敢把我的gd做的像这张图那么棒

1. Remove the unnecessary audio lead-in on all diffs but Insane.
2. The mp3 is uncomfortably loud and the hitsounds too low.
3. The score and difficulty gap between Normal and Hard are too high. Finish mapping Normal and make Hard a bit easier.

1. This has lots of unnecessary and unnecessarily long breaks. Keep the breaks consistent with the other difficulties.
2. The combos are too long. Notes that end a combo give additional points (and HP), and having such notes regularly in a Normal is a bonus.
3. 00:10:310 (5,1) - Such rhythms are confusing for a Normal, because they're unintuitive (and this one is completely unexpected). Also, I wouldn't recommend stacking notes under sliders like that, because it looks bad due to stacking, and makes the rhythm hard to read.
4. 00:32:464 (5) - Same comment about the rhythm.
5. 01:20:003 (6) - Same comment about the rhythm.
6. 01:28:080 (8) - Too far from previous object...
7. 01:44:003 (1) - This comes too soon after the spinner. Remember new players don't spin well and need a lot of time to readjust their aim after spinners.
8. 01:44:926 (2) - This slider is hidden by the text that pops out after completing the spinner.
9. 02:18:618 (3) - Make this a copy of (1) ? It will fix the spacing between this and (2) and look better.
10. 02:24:156 (1) - Why is this one so far from the previous object ?
11. 02:48:618 (8) - Same comment about the rhythm as 00:10:310 - ...
12. 03:12:618 (1) - This comes too soon after the spinner (same reasons as above).
13. 03:14:464 (3) - Same comment about the rhythm as 00:10:310 - ...
14. 03:12:618 - Why did the spacing suddenly become so much higher ? That part of the song doesn't seem any faster or doesn't seem to have a stronger rhythm than the rest of the song. Also, I tend to think that such huge differences in spacing are confusing for a Normal.
15. 03:14:464 (3) - Same comment about the rhythm as 00:10:310 - ...
16. 03:20:003 (10) - Too far from previous object.
17. 03:22:310 (5) - Way too close to previous object.
18. 03:25:541 (1) - This spinner is rather short for a Normal...
19. 03:27:387 (1) - This note appears too soon after the spinner, especially after such a short one.

1. This difficulty is extremely uneven. While most of the time it does feel like a Hard, there are at times patterns, rhythms and note placements that are way too hard for a Hard.
2. 00:09:618 (2) - Too close to previous object. With the spacing of 00:09:157 (6,1) - it looks really bad.
3. 00:42:618 (1,2,3,4,5) - This placement is confusing. I expected this to be a stream, but it's actually a streak of triples. Also this kind of pattern is really hard for a Hard imo.
4. 01:12:157 (1) - Make this spinner end 1/2 earlier. It will be less confusing rhythm-wise and will make the next note less difficult to catch.
5. 01:26:926 (1) - Same.
6. 01:31:772 (1,2,3,1) - That pattern is really too hard for a Hard imo...
7. 01:39:156 (1,2,3) - Same.
8. 01:41:695 (3,4,5) - Same.
9. 01:46:541 (1,2,3,4) - Same.
10. 01:53:926 (1,2,3,4) - Same.
11. 02:26:003 (1) - Make this spinner end 1/2 earlier. It will be less confusing rhythm-wise and will make the next note less difficult to catch.
12. 02:40:772 (1) - Same.
13. 03:20:003 - The break here doesn't make sense. You did map something in it in the Normal (and even used kiai time), and mapped the previous same exact part of the music in this difficulty. The break just kills the flow of the map and adds unnecessary waiting time until the rest of the kiai (which is cut in half for no apparent reason).
14. 03:30:387 (1,2,3,1) - This kind of pattern is really too hard for a Hard imo...
15. 03:37:772 (1,2,3) - Same.
16. 03:40:310 (3,4,5) - Same.
17. 03:45:157 (1,2,3,4) - Same.
18. 03:52:541 (1,2,3,4) - Same.
19. 03:55:080 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Same. On top of that, the streamjumps are extremely confusing and I don't even think they fit.

1. The speedups don't really make sense imo... The song isn't faster - it just uses more instruments and a heavier bass.
2. 01:16:541 (8) - This slider is hidden by the hitburst of the circle it is stacked under.
3. 01:28:080 (1,2,3,4) - Extremely confusing, inconsistent and surprising spacing. It exactly looks like the spacing of 1/2 right before, except there's no way to tell these are 1/4.
4. 02:25:310 (4) - This slider is hidden under the previous slider and its hitburst.
5. 02:26:464 (5) - This slider is for the most part hidden under the hitburst from the previous slider I pointed out...
6. 03:12:849 (2,3) - These two sliders are covered by the text that pops out after completing the spinner.
7. 03:20:003 - Same comment about the break as in Hard.
8. 03:28:080 (2,3,4,5) - These are covered by the text that pops out after completing the spinner.
9. 03:32:926 (1) - Confusingly close to previous object.

1. Rename to Wmf's Taiko Oni.
2. This diff doesn't have the same offset as the other ones. Use 157.
3. The streams look really random to me...

Odaril wrote:

As per your request.

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did). Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game.

General

1. Remove the unnecessary audio lead-in on all diffs but Insane. OK
2. The mp3 is uncomfortably loud and the hitsounds too low. www
3. The score and difficulty gap between Normal and Hard are too high. Finish mapping Normal and make Hard a bit easier.

I think it's OK

Normal

1. This has lots of unnecessary and unnecessarily long breaks. Keep the breaks consistent with the other difficulties.
2. The combos are too long. Notes that end a combo give additional points (and HP), and having such notes regularly in a Normal is a bonus.
3. 00:10:310 (5,1) - Such rhythms are confusing for a Normal, because they're unintuitive (and this one is completely unexpected). Also, I wouldn't recommend stacking notes under sliders like that, because it looks bad due to stacking, and makes the rhythm hard to read.
4. 00:32:464 (5) - Same comment about the rhythm. sorry i think it's fit for this song so...
5. 01:20:003 (6) - Same comment about the rhythm. sorry i think it's fit for this song so...
6. 01:28:080 (8) - Too far from previous object...
7. 01:44:003 (1) - This comes too soon after the spinner. Remember new players don't spin well and need a lot of time to readjust their aim after spinners.OK
8. 01:44:926 (2) - This slider is hidden by the text that pops out after completing the spinner.OK
9. 02:18:618 (3) - Make this a copy of (1) ? It will fix the spacing between this and (2) and look better.OK
10. 02:24:156 (1) - Why is this one so far from the previous object ?OK
11. 02:48:618 (8) - Same comment about the rhythm as 00:10:310 - ... sorry i think it's fit for this song so...
12. 03:12:618 (1) - This comes too soon after the spinner (same reasons as above).OK
13. 03:14:464 (3) - Same comment about the rhythm as 00:10:310 - ... sorry i think it's fit for this song so...
14. 03:12:618 - Why did the spacing suddenly become so much higher ? That part of the song doesn't seem any faster or doesn't seem to have a stronger rhythm than the rest of the song. Also, I tend to think that such huge differences in spacing are confusing for a Normal.OK
15. 03:14:464 (3) - Same comment about the rhythm as 00:10:310 - ... sorry i think it's fit for this song so...
16. 03:20:003 (10) - Too far from previous object. OK
17. 03:22:310 (5) - Way too close to previous object. OK
18. 03:25:541 (1) - This spinner is rather short for a Normal... OK
19. 03:27:387 (1) - This note appears too soon after the spinner, especially after such a short one. OK

Hard

1. This difficulty is extremely uneven. While most of the time it does feel like a Hard, there are at times patterns, rhythms and note placements that are way too hard for a Hard.
2. 00:09:618 (2) - Too close to previous object. With the spacing of 00:09:157 (6,1) - it looks really bad.
3. 00:42:618 (1,2,3,4,5) - This placement is confusing. I expected this to be a stream, but it's actually a streak of triples. Also this kind of pattern is really hard for a Hard imo.OK
4. 01:12:157 (1) - Make this spinner end 1/2 earlier. It will be less confusing rhythm-wise and will make the next note less difficult to catch. OK
5. 01:26:926 (1) - Same. OK
6. 01:31:772 (1,2,3,1) - That pattern is really too hard for a Hard imo... sorry I think it's not diffcult for Hard
7. 01:39:156 (1,2,3) - Same. sorry I think it's not diffcult for Hard
8. 01:41:695 (3,4,5) - Same. sorry I think it's not diffcult for Hard
9. 01:46:541 (1,2,3,4) - Same. sorry I think it's not diffcult for Hard
10. 01:53:926 (1,2,3,4) - Same. sorry I think it's not diffcult for Hard
11. 02:26:003 (1) - Make this spinner end 1/2 earlier. It will be less confusing rhythm-wise and will make the next note less difficult to catch. OK
12. 02:40:772 (1) - Same. OK
13. 03:20:003 - The break here doesn't make sense. You did map something in it in the Normal (and even used kiai time), and mapped the previous same exact part of the music in this difficulty. The break just kills the flow of the map and adds unnecessary waiting time until the rest of the kiai (which is cut in half for no apparent reason).www all right...
14. 03:30:387 (1,2,3,1) - This kind of pattern is really too hard for a Hard imo... sorry I think it's not diffcult for Hard
15. 03:37:772 (1,2,3) - Same. sorry I think it's not diffcult for Hard
16. 03:40:310 (3,4,5) - Same. sorry I think it's not diffcult for Hard
17. 03:45:157 (1,2,3,4) - Same. sorry I think it's not diffcult for Hard
18. 03:52:541 (1,2,3,4) - Same. sorry I think it's not diffcult for Hard
19. 03:55:080 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Same. On top of that, the streamjumps are extremely confusing and I don't even think they fit. fix

Insane

1. The speedups don't really make sense imo... The song isn't faster - it just uses more instruments and a heavier bass.
2. 01:16:541 (8) - This slider is hidden by the hitburst of the circle it is stacked under. sorry...I like stack it under note
3. 01:28:080 (1,2,3,4) - Extremely confusing, inconsistent and surprising spacing. It exactly looks like the spacing of 1/2 right before, except there's no way to tell these are 1/4.I just like make this effect. so...
4. 02:25:310 (4) - This slider is hidden under the previous slider and its hitburst. OK
5. 02:26:464 (5) - This slider is for the most part hidden under the hitburst from the previous slider I pointed out... D:
6. 03:12:849 (2,3) - These two sliders are covered by the text that pops out after completing the spinner. it's not diffcult for Insane and isn't like cover HP bar...so I ignore it
7. 03:20:003 - Same comment about the break as in Hard.same as hard
8. 03:28:080 (2,3,4,5) - These are covered by the text that pops out after completing the spinner. it's not diffcult for Insane and isn't like cover HP bar...so I ignore it
9. 03:32:926 (1) - Confusingly close to previous object. it's not big problem...

Wmf's Taiko

1. Rename to Wmf's Taiko Oni.wmf say: No
2. This diff doesn't have the same offset as the other ones. Use 157. wmf say: OK
3. The streams look really random to me... wmf say: :3

The mapset needs still some work. The Normal was extremely bland - 1/1 rhythms all along with unneeded breaks. Don't give up !

Lesjuh wrote:

Insane
01:28:080 (1,2,3,4) - Really hard to see this coming. Place it further from the previous pattern. sorry. but I really like this (Try make X2 SB in this time??)
01:28:080 - Kiai effect is better when you only use it for the chorus, not including this small part. OK
01:55:657 - Place a beat here like you did in the other parts in the chorus (such as: 01:44:580 (5,6)). OK
02:56:580 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This part of the stream is clicking to a silent part in the song. I suggest removing it and creating a 5-beat stream to the vocals you hear. OK
03:32:233 (5,1) - Bad spacing or an odd anti-jump. Place further from each other. OK

Taiko
Offset is 158. 1ms later than Insane's offset! Be sure the offset in all difficulties is 157! OK
It's really hard to hear the taiko hitsounds on this difficulty. Make them at least 90%! And please listen to the difference before you decide not to fix it. OK

Normal
00:10:310 (5,1) - Use distance snap so players can see they have to click earlier than the previous few notes. OK
00:44:695 - Another break? Kinda boring don't you think? I suggest removing this or the previous break and mapping it. OK
02:57:618 - 3 breaks have passed again. I suggest removing this break an mapping it. (Just be sure the whole map has a maximum of 3 breaks and everything's balanced) OK
03:10:310 (1) - End this spinner here @03:11:695 and silence it's end. OK
03:12:618 - Now place a beat here OK
03:27:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Ok personally I don't have any problem with this part but I'll tell you it's better (safer) if you tone down the spacing just a little bit. I'll feel safe bubbling if you do so too because I'm sure many BATs won't rank it like this. fix

Contact me again when you fixed this and I'll see if I can bubble it.

Shiirn wrote:

hi lesjuh

General
The video's offset is completely wrong, the lyrics are not in time with the song at all. You didn't even try to time it right... it has 0 offset...pleasefix
you use a very similar background to another lily song (admittedly it doesn't have the clumsy "CHLOE" on it but you get me), can you consider changing it since there's quite a bit of lily fanart available?
You should use the same kiai times for each difficulty.

Normal
00:42:618 (1,1) - bit close eh
03:25:541 (1,1) - ^

Hard
01:40:310 - did you forget to put a note here?
03:15:387 (13) - try breaking up the combo
03:19:080 (13) - ^
kiai made no sense, it started and ended for no reason
03:38:926 - same as 1:40:310 since you copypasted the entire chorus

Insane
uh, the storyboarded "speed x2" makes no sense seeing as the section it's on doesn't have x2, and the kiai only has 1.5x... Get rid of it.
02:27:849 (1) - remove timing section
03:56:233 (1) - Auto must be able to get at least 2000 on spinners

Shiirn wrote:

hi lesjuh

General
The video's offset is completely wrong, the lyrics are not in time with the song at all. You didn't even try to time it right... it has 0 offset...pleasefix ok>_>
you use a very similar background to another lily song (admittedly it doesn't have the clumsy "CHLOE" on it but you get me), can you consider changing it since there's quite a bit of lily fanart available? No i just like this BG
You should use the same kiai times for each difficulty. OK

Normal
00:42:618 (1,1) - bit close eh No!
03:25:541 (1,1) - ^ ^

Hard
01:40:310 - did you forget to put a note here? No!
03:15:387 (13) - try breaking up the combo No!
03:19:080 (13) - ^ ^
kiai made no sense, it started and ended for no reason
03:38:926 - same as 1:40:310 since you copypasted the entire chorus No!


Insane
uh, the storyboarded "speed x2" makes no sense seeing as the section it's on doesn't have x2, and the kiai only has 1.5x... Get rid of it. sadly. do you know X2 is not in kiai ?
02:27:849 (1) - remove timing section Ok
03:56:233 (1) - Auto must be able to get at least 2000 on spinners fix