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I'LL UPDATE IN THE MORNING
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Seems finally k

I hate Secretpipe for being a lazy baguette but I hate him with love ofc~

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I hate you too (but I love you too!) kappa

Will try to not let this mappu grave! Thank you very much for the help~
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bns , notice this ;~;

i only need one bubble!
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00:21:773 - 00:22:090 - fix red line hitsound samples for these (N->N:C1)

01:17:262 (1) - either lower volume for this section or use soft samples, atm it's way too loud, especially stuff like 01:17:952 - gives huge hitsound feedback when it shouldn't

02:10:365 (5,6,7,8,1,2) - flow sucks big time here, way too linear

03:17:952 (1) - one more repeat pls

03:27:952 (9,10,1) - would be nicer if you made it flow like 03:05:883 (8,9,1) - since this one feels much better

03:28:986 (3) - this slider doesn't really follow kick and snare with angle changes like 03:06:917 (3) - did, so either making the second one like the first or changing rhythm, since you ignore 03:29:331 - too much

04:35:538 - clap instead pls

05:40:710 (7,1) - rhythm sucks, something like http://i.imgur.com/ZGvX9ge.png is better

you use a lot of blankets and most of them are noticably off, so might want to work on those if you don't want your map to look sloppy
most noticable one's: 01:35:193 (5,1) - 01:54:158 (7,1) - 01:54:848 (2,3) - 03:54:762 (2,5) - 04:27:090 (2,3,4) - 04:34:503 (1,1,2) - 04:37:952 (4,6) - 04:38:641 (1,4) - 04:45:883 (3,5) - 04:52:779 (3,6) -
there are more but these are the one's you should definetely try to adjust

call me back
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Strategas wrote:

00:21:773 - 00:22:090 - fix red line hitsound samples for these (N->N:C1)

01:17:262 (1) - either lower volume for this section or use soft samples, atm it's way too loud, especially stuff like 01:17:952 - gives huge hitsound feedback when it shouldn't

02:10:365 (5,6,7,8,1,2) - flow sucks big time here, way too linear

03:17:952 (1) - one more repeat pls

03:27:952 (9,10,1) - would be nicer if you made it flow like 03:05:883 (8,9,1) - since this one feels much better

03:28:986 (3) - this slider doesn't really follow kick and snare with angle changes like 03:06:917 (3) - did, so either making the second one like the first or changing rhythm, since you ignore 03:29:331 - too much I tried to do the same as 03:06:917 (3) - since I wanted to emphasize that lil synth here (since i focus the drum the whole song haha)

04:35:538 - clap instead pls

05:40:710 (7,1) - rhythm sucks, something like http://i.imgur.com/ZGvX9ge.png is better i didn't want to fix it but i did it haha

you use a lot of blankets and most of them are noticably off, so might want to work on those if you don't want your map to look sloppy
most noticable one's: 01:35:193 (5,1) - 01:54:158 (7,1) - 01:54:848 (2,3) - 03:54:762 (2,5) - 04:27:090 (2,3,4) - 04:34:503 (1,1,2) - 04:37:952 (4,6) - 04:38:641 (1,4) - 04:45:883 (3,5) - 04:52:779 (3,6) -
there are more but these are the one's you should definetely try to adjust

call me back
fixed everything except what i mentioned! (basically one thinghaha)
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will atleast one map that I qualify not get dqed??????
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I hope so haha

Thank you so much!
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passed through qualified !

cheers
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!
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Secretpipe wrote:

passed through qualified !

cheers
ey congratz my man! <3
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