eldnl wrote:

[Easy]

1. HP Drain Rate 1 done~
2. Approach Rate 2 done~
3. Overall Difficulty 2 made 1~
4. Slider tick rate 1 done~

1. More hitsounds ? I'll try ;_;
2. 00:06:056 (1) Add a repeat and remove the following (1). done~
3. 00:19:771 (1,2) Stacked notes are hard to read for new players. T_T ok...
4. 00:30:742 (1,2) ^ ahuehuehue ok
5. 00:32:113 (1) Remove new combo done~
6. 00:36:228 (1) ^ Done~
7. 01:13:256 (2,3,4,5) Maybe this is hard to read considering the AP. I'd hope not, I want to keep it.
8. 01:22:513 (2,1) This isn't confusing by the new combo, but you can't stack the (2) with the end of the slider ? don't know why I didn't

[Normal]

1. More hitsounds ? waah lol ok
2. 01:17:371 (1) Remove new combo done~
3. 01:19:771 (4) Add a repeat done~
4. 01:22:513 (4) ^ doooodnod
5. 01:36:913 (6) New combo done~
6. 01:47:542 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) Really hard considering the bpm, please change this pattern. b-but I hit it with my eyes closed/mouse
7. 01:57:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) ^ kiai-kombo break time! \:D/
8. 01:58:513 (1,1) You can add notes between this two because this spacing looks bad. ok lol

[Hard]

1. 00:18:399 (1) Remove new combo done
2. 00:19:085 (1) ^ yup
3. 00:21:142 (1,2,3) Centre these three notes ? had it that before, couldn't for some reason, but did now
4. 00:29:371 (1) Remove new combo. If you say why, check the previous combos. yeah lol
5. 00:35:885 (x) Add a note ? goes with beep
6. 00:38:628 (x) ^ beep beep
7. 00:41:371 (x) ^ BEEP
8. 00:49:085 (2) Fix this slider how ;___;
9. 01:02:113 (7) New combo you mean (9) right? o_o
10. 01:03:313 (8) Remove this slider and add a repeat to the previous ? doesn't feel as filled...
11. 01:05:713 (1) Velocity x2? I miss in this part ... because I'm a bad person! DDD
12. 01:59:885 (1) ^ lol

[Lunatic]

1. Why you use the same slider velocity at hard ? Because it increases
2. HP Drain Rate 7 sure why not
3. Overall Difficulty 7 why exactly? I'm not a fan of high OD, but ok for now

1. 00:22:513 (1) Remove new combo nah >_<
2. 00:35:885 (x) Add a note beep beep :3
3. 01:43:085 (5) New combo why beginning of stream? ;_;

[Extra]

1. 00:14:799 (1~) Spacing errors in this stream ~ Not much I can do T.T
2. 00:19:771 (1,2) Please bring them to the grid ! ok by one tick lol
3. 00:22:513 (1) Remove new combo eh ;_;
4. 00:23:885 (10) New combo all one pattern lol
5. 00:35:199 (1,2) Please bring them to the grid ! they are but ok lol
6. 00:37:942 (1,2) ^ on the edges, bringing them in one pixel w
7. 00:38:971 (1~) Are you sure that you follow the rhythm?
8. 00:42:056 (2) Remove a repeat. 1/4 jump! woo!
9. 00:42:742 (4) ^ yahoooo nooo ;;
10. 00:44:113 (1) Very high ! brought to grid =w=
11. 01:03:656 (1) Great ! :D
12. 01:27:999 (1) Remove new combo but it goes with YAY lol...
13. 01:28:085 (1) ^ muahahahahahahagshad
14. 01:40:856 (11) New combo ok :3
15. 01:47:371 (12~) 1/8 streams with 175 bpm ? Unrankable I think. actually 1/6 teehee
16. 01:59:885 (1) Fix this slider. And stack the (2). not much I can do, but stacked lolol

Good job Ozzy you deserve a star ! muchas gracias!

wcx19911123 wrote:

HI

[Easy]
01:22:513 (2,1) - really confusing how? o.o
01:34:513 (1,2) - stack ? distance snap, but maybe I should

[Normal]
01:47:542 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - is it really a Normal ? lol yes! even osu! says so :3
01:59:542 (3) - hard to know when it end 0.0 teehee :3
01:57:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - lol muahaha~

[Hard]
00:35:885 - add circle well, goes with beeps but... one more request and I will do it
00:38:628 - ^ ^
00:41:371 - ^ ^
01:14:628 (1,2,3,4) - stack better plz I've tried. Doesn't matter too much ><
01:59:885 (1) - 0.0 I'll add 2x warning or something ww

[Lunatic]
00:55:942 (3,4) - ctrl + r ? w-what?
00:57:313 (3,4) - ^ it's a circle...
00:58:685 (3,4) - ^ what do you mean?
01:04:342 (1,1) - spacing umm, what, BUT I noticed something there, and fixed it.

[Extra]
00:35:885 - add circle beep
00:38:628 - ^ beep :3
01:15:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - confusing ;_; not that much... well... it's not unreadable at all lol
01:37:942 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ;_; common pattern :3
01:42:742 (3) - ctrl + r but... that'll change that part a lot ;__;
01:43:428 (1) - ^ whaaat? ;_;
01:54:913 - add circle nah orz

good luck

zsr123 wrote:

Hi,Ozzy ^o^
Just suggestion

[Extra]

00:23:199 (6) - new combo ? ok ok
00:23:885 (11) - new combo ? guess it fits
00:35:885 (x) - add note ? beep
00:38:628 (x) - ^ beep


01:26:971 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,1,2,3,1) - the new combo ,I like it =w= lolol



star~~~~~~~~~~

p3n wrote:

[Easy]
Awesome sliders! Great work.

[Normal]
00:14:628 (X) - leaving out this beat here plays weird... But it fits.
00:25:256 (X) - add note here (with finish hitsound) nah
00:44:628 (1,1,1) - I would start these on the white ticks as it might be a bit too confusing for average players OD lets you hit it early lol
01:47:542 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - extremely tough for a "normal" but I love this approach heheh
01:54:057 (2) - remove the repeat and move forward to start on the big white tick (01:54:399), add a circle @01:55:428. This will match the dominant part of the song and is much more suited for a normal diff imo. You'll have to adjust spacing for the following parts though... Uwah, it still hits beats, and well, gives you time for the death 1/2 stream lol.
01:57:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the normal-killer-stream returns...with higher spacing!!! (I love it) specialty =w=

Overall a really challenging "normal" especially in the later parts but perfectly done. woo!

[Hard]
00:14:799 (1) - start this on the earlier white tick and add 2 repeats...it feels completely off (just like "notmal"...) but it fits the sound orz
01:59:885 (1) - I wouldn't use 2,0x SV here as the previous combo is much much slower because of the compressed triplets. I'll add a warning, There's definitely a big space for it lol.

Overall this "Hard" fits the song so extremely well I didn't even notice that I SSed it in the first test try...well done...well done! (You don't need anybody to teach you how to do "Hard"-maps!!) really? !

[Lunatic]
00:14:628 (X,X) - please start this stream here -.- It plays so off and weird to start it on the red tick but hear the whirwhir in the song orz
00:17:542 (4,5) - spacing is a bit off...at those high speeds I recommend using exact spacings Not that game destroying though
00:32:113 (1,2,3,4) - this jump feels way too big but this is probably just personal preference if anything it's small lol
01:05:713 (1,2,3) - maybe compress this stream (just like all the others?) supposed to be like a jump stream, to screw you over in kiai sections lol
01:07:942 (2,3,4) - again those jumps feel a little bit too wide imo they're fine
01:12:056 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this makes no sense. Using 2 triplets would play better and still match the song It's a reference lol
01:37:942 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - again these jumps seem too wide they actually play really well. all of lunatic's stuff is done with excessive testing and this is the best example lol (well at least on my tablet area orz)
01:59:885 (1,2,3,4) - this is ridiculous...reduce the slider speed here please! I always got 2-3 100s here... What... really? This is about the same speeds if not slower than other songs... it's fine. o_o

[Extra]
rofl~ ~


Lovely mapset worthy to sit in my "Ridiculous IOSYS-Maps"-collection and worth a kudosu-star! thanks!

S o r d a wrote:

thanks req~

[overall]:

1. Volume 100% noisy.. good idea...
2. Delete osb

might use later...

[Lunatic]:

1. 00:03:313 (1) - Remove New combo no...
2. 00:03:656 (2) - New combo ><
3. 00:05:371 (1) - Remove New combo

doesn't matter orz

[Extra]:

1. 00:54:399 (4) - move in the distance it's fine~
2. 00:55:085 (4) - same same^
3. 00:59:542 (1) - Slider error? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/104963 maybe beautiful?

is! D:

[Hard]:

1. 00:38:628 - Add note I'm going with beeps T.T but ok..
2. 00:41:371 - same

done~

[Normal]:

1. 00:44:628 (1,1) - Spacing it's ok ><
2. Normal must not change Spacing Please check Spacing x1.0 Noteput better imo

close enough T.T

Fight o~

Dark_Ai wrote:

Hey

[Easy]


[Normal]
00:45:999 (1) - delete new combo nah
00:47:371 (1) - ^ orz

[Hard]
00:47:199 (1) - delete new combo ok!
01:18:742 (1,1,1) - ^ did something with it~
so many new combos that would unnecessarily but okay T.T

[Extra]
00:03:313 (1) - delete this note nah ;_;
00:03:485 (2) - move this slider to 00:03:313 then 00:03:656 add a note (I think it's better) nah orz
00:04:856 (8) - if you change the upper then add here new combo didn't...
00:22:513 (1) - delete new combo I think it fits
00:49:942 (1) - ^ it's alright~
01:27:999 (1) - ^ I think it looks cool orz, but, if asked by someone in mind I will~
01:58:513 (Streams) - please delete all new combos in here :< worse combos in streams have been made lol nah~

[Lunatic]
00:04:342 (3) - return this slider again understand following vocal, but it's fine...
00:08:285 (1) - delete new combo ok...
00:19:771 (1) - ^ ;; naaasdfasdfasdf
00:22:513 (1) - ^ ;; fits
00:44:456 (1) - ^ ;; ^
01:27:999 (1) - ^ ;; ^

.___.

CDFA wrote:

I always feel like Gabe Newell is watching me. ._. Someone's watching you!

EWVAHAWLH:
02:03:999 - Make this a soft hitsound, not normal~. Done!

Lewhnahticks:
01:17:371 (1) - Add finish oh you, done.

EXTREA:
Add hitsounds~ Had them in mid, but forgot that, done.
00:38:971 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - what. OMG JUST CUZ IT MAKEZ IT HARDR!? DIS IS EXTREA MAP NOT EASY MAP JUMP JUMP OIOI STREAM STREAM KANGAROO

HAREHD:
00:27:313 (10) - add clap on end done~
01:05:713 (1) - Dislike. Make it slower D: for you T.T
01:59:885 (1) - ^ ^

Nohmawl:
k.

Eeezaya:
01:17:371 (1) - Kind of an odd slider that I kinda don't like but it's bootyful o_o

Cool map but Extra is kinda like a CDFA map. WAY TO INSULT MY MAP I'LL GO CRY NOW

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
USATEIREMIXAHAHA.png is >1M, so you probably shoud consider reduce the file size (dunno if it's still a "rule" now) If it doesn't drastically lower quality or something I'll consider it
you don't need a really low (0.3) stack leniency for lower diffs. ah

[Easy]
01:17:371 (1) - the reverse point is kinda strange this whole diff is slider filler lol
01:22:513 (2,1) - this is probably not allowed because of the new damn rule (oh it's wastelanded hell yeah) HELL YEAH but it should still be readable, no?
01:58:513 (1) - no, though it's a slider, but this not what you could do in a Easy yeah, you're right
02:01:256 (1) - the green lines are not snapped and why are they in 2x (it happens to other diffs too.) don't think it matters, but lmao x2

[Normal]
spacing is too far as a Normal (consider the BPM plz). part of this diff is really a Hard. WHAAT
00:30:742 (4) - better not to do this, try to think a way fits for Normal done~
00:43:085 (2) - ^ lol, done
00:48:571 - add a note? (soft-hitnormal at 50% volume would be fine) done~
00:56:628 (3,6,9) - better to remove done~
01:07:256 (2,3,4,5) - not what a Normal should be, though it's already too late to ask you change all these things but have to mention. maybe you could rename this to Normal+. I will probably do that lol, I'll hate the diff spread gap there though orz
01:09:142 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ lol...
01:47:542 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - serious? yes
01:55:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - difficulty check: Hard orz

[Hard]
00:17:028 (1,3) - this is kinda bad arranged. as i know, people don't like sliders repeat many times already, and they comes up with 1/4 notes between them what the hell rofl, I think the whole diff is bad arranged, but I'll fix this
00:35:885 - need a note here for sure added
01:53:542 (3,4) - switch done,
01:54:228 (6,7) - ^ done,
01:54:913 (9,10) - ^ done.
(this would make it better imo) (i agree)

[Taiko Oni]
if you really like to use combo color for don/kat, just use red/blue, no one will blame you for a combo color change in taiko diff. I know lol, it lets me visualize if it looks better though, the way I map needs the colors to compliment each other in the same way the notes do so I can see if it looks nice. same way as how ddddd k ddddd k doesn't look good in some cases.

[Lunatic]
00:35:885 - add note done
00:43:085 (1) - auto could only get 1000 bonus, the spinner is too short for being rankable (at least, for now). also you should probably mute the spinner's end, sounds horrible it's being discussed that 1000 is ok, and in my opinion it's really easy to 300, so I'll leave it, but definitely muting the end
00:55:942 (3,4) - switche their places, also the next two (3,4) done
01:37:942 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - plays really bad for me WHAT!? that part plays the most well for me lol, everyone that's played it hits it rather easily as well
01:52:342 (6) - new combo plz alright

[Extra]
i could just say the spacing thing is beyond what i could accept. no comments. extra spacing!

map is not bad, but your mod is :<. next time if you still give me a mod like this i'll just copy your mod to your own map lol aaah, I feel bad about it now lol, I'll probably re-mod it more stricter, just to make myself feel better lol

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Easy]
00:11:542 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - uhm, why not centrate those? done, changed what comes after
and if someone say something for 00:17:028 (1) -, just ctrl+R it and move it some grid up did something with it
00:19:085 (2,1,2,1) - Order those like a diamond Um, not possible, especially with the slider before it. Made a square
00:21:142 (1,2,3) - Order like a triangle didn't
01:09:142 (1) - Copy paste 01:06:399 (1) -, Ctrl + H and Ctrl + R
and move 01:10:856 (2,3,4) - like this nuuuu, as much as I love centered stuff, sorry

[Normal+]
00:00:571 (1) and 00:03:313 (1) -, it follow rhythmn better like this eh nah
00:14:799 (1) - Make it start in 00:14:628 (1) - and and at the same point it ended noo, let them die
00:20:456 (2) - try to move this in the center (move 00:19:771 (1) - to the right) you know, centering isn't horribly noticed. I used to love centering everything I could, but then I realized that it can break flow and make maps TOO neat and have no good gameplay
00:23:713 (x) - Add a Circle no
00:25:256 (x) - Add a Slider that end in 00:25:942 no
00:26:456 (x) - Add a Circle no
00:28:342 (x) - Add a Slder that end in 00:28:685 no
00:29:199 (x) - Add a Circle no
why higher Distance Snap from 01:06:399 (1) - onward ? kiai diff increase (go-go-time www)
01:14:285 (6,7) - i don't know, but i feel you should Ctrl + R this ( while i played i clicked (7) first O.O ) lol, the dots make it easy
01:14:628 (1) - less repeat, longer slider, better play.. for me eh
01:44:799 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Sure our beloved Normal players will find this Normal? nope
01:51:656 (5,6) - now even jump ... (easier like the spoiler) eh, would look bad
01:57:656 (4) - Delete this to make that stream playable for Normal no because I'm a whore
01:59:542 (3) - 4 repeats are better... dsfsdafdsfasdfadsfaafafafaffafno

[Hard]
00:05:199 (x) - Add Hit Circle alright
00:14:628 (x) - ^ nah
00:19:771 (1,2) - Move as it form a triangle with 00:19:085 (7,8) eh, then it's centered muhohohoho
almost Insane in some parts....

Verdisphena wrote:

Normal+

00:59:542 (7) - New combo aqui por el cambio de velocidad del slider eh, no creo orzl
01:47:542 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Eso sigue siendo dificil para un Normal+ ;_; HAHAHAHA
00:22:513 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,9,10) IT'S LIKE A DJPOP MAP LOLOLOL OHOHOHOHOHO

Hard
01:14:628 (1,2,3,4) - Recomiendo cambiar por el codigo de abajo Tengo miedo, no se como cambia el codigo rofl, ahorita lo hago

260,196,74628,6,0,B|324:256,1,70
361,195,74971,2,0,B|311:243,1,70
260,292,75313,2,0,B|324:232,1,70
360,294,75656,2,0,B|311:244,1,70

01:48:571 (4) - Termina este slider en 01:48:913 y mueve el spinner a 01:48:999 No lo siento muy necesario, y aun, luego haci empiezara en un downbeat o lo que sea que se llame

Aqui tienes el bg de taiko :3, 800x600 funciona igual que 1024x768 wwwwwww

Raging Bull wrote:

Lolol Normal+ such a bad name. I could call it Nard or Harmal or something lolol.



Easy:
Use same tickrate as the rest. Uh.. alright
01:22:513 (2,1) - I understand theres a new combo but maybe don't do this for easy? You'll never know if they think 2 really is a slider. lol well green doesn't match purple so eehh
Seems fine

Normal:
00:59:542 (7) - I don't really like slider speed up/slow downs for normals. It could be confusing. Especially when you had the previous sliders at 1x speed. Just make this slider 1x and remap slider. It practically goes at the same speed. I've tested it with people, it's easy.
You could possibly remap the end to make it more of a normal. (I really dislike Normal+ Hard+ or names like that) nooo

Hard:
Seems fine WHAT

Lunatic:
00:20:456 (2) - Looks ugly. Maybe just move this one grid up to stack with 1 and 3. Or you can follow the pattern and make 3,4,5 2 grids down. Hmm, you're right.
00:43:085 (1) - Autoplay can't get 2000 on this spinner. Use a slider if you want or extend spinner. I'm leaving this for further debat, because it's easily hittable and being discussed at the moment.

Extra:
00:14:799 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - Reminds me of Maid of Fire. :3 M-M-M-M-Mok
00:43:085 (1) - Auto play gets only 1000 on this. What I said before. Though OD IS higher here... hmm, nah, still really simple to hit.
00:54:399 (4,4) - I would move these notes farther from the triple to make it more visible that its not the same beat as the triple that's the trick of it
01:58:513 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Ahaha. This stream is fun. :3 >w<