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Nakagawa Haruna - pile up HURRICANE!

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Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Rare
>>merchat7
I think your post is advice, not modding.
and, did you post maps(which were made by beginner mappers) to get kds ?
if so, you should suggest more imo. what do you think about that ?
anyway, ok. I give kds if you want.
merchat7
1,673 posts
Joined December 2010
merchat7
Hmm, not really sure what you are asking. I only check maps for errors and flow. Basically, i check your song folder (mp3, video, image, .osb files) and make sure they are all ok. I also make sure your start and end are consistence. Break are the same, preview all the same and etc. I also play test them at least once. I try to check mainly "beginner map" since am a beginner modder. I just start mapping a month ago and my first mod post was 1 week ago, so i can't give many advice on how to make your beatmap nicer and etc. Reason i ask for kudosu is because i was wondering if my post was of any help to you at all.

Regarding beginner map, i only mod song that i like, so i search some song on osu and found some beatmaps. I do not look at whether the mapper is a beginner or not, i just test the song. Some song need a lot of work so i give general advice for them to fix it first (use higher distant snapping , more slider velocity, soft hitsound etc.) and then when they fix it i'll try to do a more indepth mod. Example here... General advice: viewtopic.php?p=942979#p942979 In depth mod: viewtopic.php?p=944067#p944067.

I admit, some of my mod post are crap, but some map don't need many changes anyway. I asked for kudosu since you said that my post was helpful. I thought you forgot to give kudosu. Anyway up to you to decide.

Edit 01/01/12: If you want me to remod, feel free to pm
Melophobia
osu! Alumni
2,230 posts
Joined September 2011
Melophobia
M4M~

General
Insaneだけコンボカラーが違う
Insaneだけオフセットが違う
InsaneだけLetterboxInBreaksがない

Videoのサイズが1:50秒で13Mと大き目なのでちょっと小さくする事をおすすめします

Easy
00:32:791 (3) - remove whistle
00:34:320 (5) - newcombo
00:40:244 (5) - ^
01:00:307 (4) - ^
01:10:817 (1) - 中心から遠い & 始点finish
01:28:588 (5) - overlapするのであんまりこの配置はオススメしません

swish
00:15:212 (1) - finish
00:30:689 (7) - 終点finish
01:06:422 (1,1) - 微妙にfollow vocalするよりこんな感じで1にfinishおいてみては～
http://puu.sh/lBZF
01:19:798 (5) - 終点finish
01:21:709 (3) - finish
01:36:231 (2) - 折り返しにfinish
01:37:760 (3) - 赤線まで伸ばしてfinish

5item
fine

Insane
AR-1　HD+1
from AIBat
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:03:840
00:04:223
00:04:414
00:04:796
00:04:987
00:05:178
00:05:465
00:06:612
00:06:712
00:37:280
00:55:624
00:56:006
00:56:770
00:57:153
01:10:817
01:34:796
01:35:178
01:38:141

Snapping
00:01:833 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:02:024 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:02:597 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:04:126 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:04:317 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:04:508 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:04:699 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:04:890 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:05:559 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:05:750 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:05:941 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
00:06:610 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:07:183 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:08:712 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:08:903 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:09:094 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:09:476 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
00:10:527 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:11:005 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
00:11:196 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:11:769 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:13:298 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:13:489 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:13:680 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:14:062 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
00:15:591 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:15:782 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:16:164 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:16:355 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:20:368 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:20:750 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
00:20:941 (7) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:22:661 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:22:852 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:23:234 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:25:145 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:25:336 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:27:247 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:27:629 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:29:731 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:29:922 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:30:304 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:31:833 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:32:024 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:32:406 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:34:126 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:34:890 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:36:610 (8) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:38:712 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:39:285 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:41:196 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:41:387 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
00:41:578 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:43:871 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:48:266 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
00:48:457 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:49:413 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:50:750 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
00:50:941 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:52:661 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:53:234 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
00:54:954 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:57:438 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:57:820 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:59:540 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:59:922 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:00:113 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:01:833 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:02:215 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:02:406 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:02:597 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:04:126 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:04:317 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:04:508 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:04:699 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:04:890 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:06:419 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:06:801 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:06:992 (7) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:11:387 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:11:578 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:12:438 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
01:13:298 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:13:489 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:13:871 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:15:973 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:16:355 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:18:075 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:18:266 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:18:457 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:22:852 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:23:043 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:25:145 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:25:527 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:27:438 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:27:629 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
01:27:820 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:28:489 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:29:731 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:30:113 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:30:304 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:31:833 (8) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:32:215 (9) - Unsnapped circle.
01:32:406 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:34:126 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:34:317 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:34:508 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:34:699 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:34:890 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:36:419 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:36:610 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:36:992 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:38:712 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:39:094 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:39:285 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:39:476 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
01:41:005 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
01:41:196 (9) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:07:565 (5,6,1) - spacing揃えた方が見た目的にgood
00:23:998 (6,7) - ちょっと近い
00:31:259 (3,1) - newcombo入れ替え
01:38:328 - KIAI終点ここ
01:24:571 (6,1,2,3,4) - 01:12:724 (1,2,3,4,5) - みたいに音付けてみてはー

いい曲
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Rare

Melophobia wrote:

M4M~ >w<

General
Insaneだけコンボカラーが違う 揃えるの忘れてました fixed
Insaneだけオフセットが違う ^
InsaneだけLetterboxInBreaksがない ^

Videoのサイズが1:50秒で13Mと大き目なのでちょっと小さくする事をおすすめします 誰かに頼んでみます！！


Easy
00:32:791 (3) - remove whistle
00:34:320 (5) - newcombo
00:40:244 (5) - ^
01:00:307 (4) - ^
01:10:817 (1) - 中心から遠い & 始点finish
01:28:588 (5) - overlapするのであんまりこの配置はオススメしません Easy全部直しました！！！！

Insane
AR-1　HD+1 fixed
from AIBat
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:03:840
00:04:223
00:04:414
00:04:796
00:04:987
00:05:178
00:05:465
00:06:612
00:06:712
00:37:280
00:55:624
00:56:006
00:56:770
00:57:153
01:10:817
01:34:796
01:35:178
01:38:141

Snapping
00:01:833 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:02:024 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:02:597 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:04:126 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:04:317 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:04:508 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:04:699 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:04:890 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:05:559 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:05:750 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:05:941 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
00:06:610 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:07:183 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:08:712 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:08:903 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:09:094 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:09:476 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
00:10:527 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:11:005 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
00:11:196 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:11:769 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:13:298 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:13:489 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:13:680 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:14:062 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
00:15:591 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:15:782 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:16:164 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:16:355 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:20:368 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:20:750 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
00:20:941 (7) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:22:661 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:22:852 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:23:234 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:25:145 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:25:336 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:27:247 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:27:629 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:29:731 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:29:922 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:30:304 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:31:833 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:32:024 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:32:406 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:34:126 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:34:890 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:36:610 (8) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:38:712 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:39:285 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:41:196 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:41:387 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
00:41:578 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:43:871 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:48:266 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
00:48:457 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:49:413 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:50:750 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
00:50:941 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:52:661 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:53:234 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
00:54:954 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:57:438 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:57:820 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:59:540 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:59:922 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:00:113 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:01:833 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:02:215 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:02:406 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:02:597 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:04:126 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:04:317 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:04:508 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:04:699 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:04:890 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:06:419 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:06:801 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:06:992 (7) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:11:387 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:11:578 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:12:438 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
01:13:298 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:13:489 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:13:871 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:15:973 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:16:355 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:18:075 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:18:266 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:18:457 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:22:852 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:23:043 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:25:145 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:25:527 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:27:438 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:27:629 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
01:27:820 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:28:489 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:29:731 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:30:113 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:30:304 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:31:833 (8) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:32:215 (9) - Unsnapped circle.
01:32:406 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:34:126 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:34:317 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:34:508 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:34:699 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:34:890 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:36:419 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:36:610 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:36:992 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:38:712 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:39:094 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:39:285 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:39:476 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
01:41:005 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
01:41:196 (9) - Unsnapped slider (start).
Resnapped all notes
00:07:565 (5,6,1) - spacing揃えた方が見た目的にgood ok
00:23:998 (6,7) - ちょっと近い fixed
00:31:259 (3,1) - newcombo入れ替えok
01:38:328 - KIAI終点ここ fixed
01:24:571 (6,1,2,3,4) - 01:12:724 (1,2,3,4,5) - みたいに音付けてみてはー 白線にwhistle加えてみました！

いい曲 thanks :D
thanks for modding !!!!!!!!!
確認不足でほんと申し訳ない :(
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
swish

Melophobia様 wrote:

swish
00:15:212 (1) - finish
00:30:689 (7) - 終点finish
01:06:422 (1,1) - 微妙にfollow vocalするよりこんな感じで1にfinishおいてみては～ 似たような感じに変えました
http://puu.sh/lBZF
01:19:798 (5) - 終点finish
01:21:709 (3) - finish
01:36:231 (2) - 折り返しにfinish
01:37:760 (3) - 赤線まで伸ばしてfinish
other all fixed~
めろふぉびあ様ありがとうございます

Download: Nakagawa Haruna - pile up HURRICANE! (Short Ver.) (R a r e) [swish].osu
meiikyuu
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
meiikyuu
M4M ~

Easy
1:14:060(1) - i feel like this slider's missing a clap, add one to keep consistency ~?

this diff. was good.. couldnt find much lol

swish
40:239 - new combo
41:959 - remove new combo
54:188 (2) - rotate slider by 5 degrees; and if the spacing needs to stay the same you might want to move the slider to the right a little after rotation
1:01:831 (5) - add finish
1:36:799 (2) - add finish
1:38:519 - add finish to spinner
^^
5item
1:07:755 (5) - finish
good diff. ~
Insane
00:494 (1) - move middle point of slider to x:64 y:212, lol dont need to follow this tho
56:290 (2) - finish, another finish on 3


i really like this map :) i would give a star but dont have one lol
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Rare

meiikyuu wrote:

M4M ~

Easy
1:14:060(1) - i feel like this slider's missing a clap, add one to keep consistency ~? um..I remain it until more people mention it

this diff. was good.. couldnt find much lol thanks :)

Insane
00:494 (1) - move middle point of slider to x:64 y:212, lol dont need to follow this tho sry no change
56:290 (2) - finish, another finish on 3 added finish on 3 only


i really like this map :) i would give a star but dont have one lol thanks xD
thanks modding ;)
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
swish

meiikyuu wrote:

swish
40:239 - new combo sorry,keep now
41:959 - remove new combo ^
54:188 (2) - rotate slider by 5 degrees; and if the spacing needs to stay the same you might want to move the slider to the right a little after rotation change to symmetrical slider ._.
1:01:831 (5) - add finish k
1:36:799 (2) - add finish already added
1:38:519 - add finish to spinner no
ty

Download: Nakagawa Haruna - pile up HURRICANE! (Short Ver.) (R a r e) [swish].osu
Ryafuka
840 posts
Joined May 2010
Ryafuka
こんばんは :D
以下は全て提案です～


[General]
･[swish],[5item]のKIAI開始地点だけずれているので、01:10:812 - に修正しましょう。
･KIAIの終了地点が難易度によって統一されていないので、01:41:385 - ここに統一してはどうでしょう(その際、[swish]と[5item]にも同位置にKIAIを追加？)
･Guest diffにカスタムヒットサウンドが使われていないので、[Insane],[Easy]と同様使ってみてはどうでしょうか？
･全てのdiffにおいてunsnapの箇所がちらほらあるのでresnapしてください。

[Easy]
00:24:379 (4) - 終端のwhistleを削除して、代わりにfinishを追加。
01:01:831 (1) - NC削除。
01:07:564 (1) - 終端を01:10:430 - に移動？
01:40:048 (1) - NC削除？


[swish]
00:56:290 (3) - 始端のwhistleを削除して代わりにfinishを追加？
01:07:755 (1) - 始端を01:07:946 - に、終端を01:10:430 - に移動？


[5item]
OD+1?
01:06:417 (3) - delete whistle and add finish at biginning?


[Insane]
HP+1?
00:05:557 (2) - noteを削除。このnoteをなくしたほうが合っていて叩きやすいと思います。
01:07:181 - ここに音がほしいと思うのでこういうのはどうでしょう。 http://puu.sh/miFd
01:08:137 (1) - 終端を01:10:430 - ここにしてはどうでしょう。
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Rare

Ryafuka wrote:

こんばんは :D こんばんは！！！！！！！
以下は全て提案です～


[General]
･[swish],[5item]のKIAI開始地点だけずれているので、01:10:812 - に修正しましょう。 fixed
･KIAIの終了地点が難易度によって統一されていないので、01:41:385 - ここに統一してはどうでしょう(その際、[swish]と[5item]にも同位置にKIAIを追加？) とりあえず終わりは統一させました。
･Guest diffにカスタムヒットサウンドが使われていないので、[Insane],[Easy]と同様使ってみてはどうでしょうか？
･全てのdiffにおいてunsnapの箇所がちらほらあるのでresnapしてください。 Resnapped all diffs

[Easy]
00:24:379 (4) - 終端のwhistleを削除して、代わりにfinishを追加。 音が浮いちゃうと思ったのでno changeで。
01:01:831 (1) - NC削除。 removed
01:07:564 (1) - 終端を01:10:430 - に移動？ 他の方にも言われるようなら変えますー。
01:40:048 (1) - NC削除？ removed


[Insane]
HP+1?
00:05:557 (2) - noteを削除。このnoteをなくしたほうが合っていて叩きやすいと思います。 mp3の音に合わせてるつもりなのでno changeで。
01:07:181 - ここに音がほしいと思うのでこういうのはどうでしょう。 しっくりこなかったのでno changeで。http://puu.sh/miFd でも他の人にも言われるようなら変えます
01:08:137 (1) - 終端を01:10:430 - ここにしてはどうでしょう。歌詞が01:10:334 - だと思ったのでここにしました！
Modありがとう！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！ :D
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
swish

Ryafuka wrote:

KIAIは01:10:812 - 01:41:385にしときました～

･Guest diffにカスタムヒットサウンドが使われていないので、[Insane],[Easy]と同様使ってみてはどうでしょうか？
今はそのままで...　また言われるようならなおします :o

[swish]
00:56:290 (3) - 始端のwhistleを削除して代わりにfinishを追加？
んん　00:56:863 (4) - こっちかな？とりあえずこのままで :?
01:07:755 (1) - 始端を01:07:946 - に、終端を01:10:430 - に移動？
01:07:946 - 01:10:239にしました～
thanks~ :D

Download: Nakagawa Haruna - pile up HURRICANE! (Short Ver.) (R a r e) [swish].osu
Snow Lover
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Snow Lover
:)

ランクド頑張ってください！

私はエディットに詳しくないので何も出来ませんが...

応援してます！

↓ pile up HURRICANE!(Short Ver.)　【5item】 プレイ動画

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_HVq83Cmqac
Rare
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Topic Starter
Rare
>remirya1234

ありがとう！
頑張ります :D
MiLu
426 posts
Joined March 2010
MiLu
hi tibi Rare ^-^/

[General]
全難易度SliderMultiplierの数値.osuでイジったほうがいいかも

[easy]
01:07:564 (1) - http://puu.sh/ugkQ ドウデスカ

[5item]
00:16:162 (1) - 間隔あけないでスピン始めたほうがいいかもしれません
00:42:723 (4) - 最初にfinish?
01:32:787 (1) - これも間隔あけないほうがいいかもしれません

[insane]
01:08:041 (1) - スピンの終わりの位置変えた方がいいのでは


ほとんど書くことなかったわ頑張って(～￣▽￣)～
Rare
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Rare

MiLu wrote:

hi tibi Rare ^-^/ ようｗ

[General]
全難易度SliderMultiplierの数値.osuでイジったほうがいいかも　バグってた。直した。

[easy]
01:07:564 (1) - http://puu.sh/ugkQ ドウデスカ　採用

[insane]
01:08:041 (1) - スピンの終わりの位置変えた方がいいのでは ボーカルカバーのつもりだったんだけど白線に直した。


ほとんど書くことなかったわ頑張って(～￣▽￣)～　
Mod ありがとう～～～～～ :)
Leorda
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Leorda
Konnichiwa

[Easy]
* AR +1?

00:19:793 (1) - The head slider is overlapped by hitbursts for beginners. So it's confusing of which side should click first
01:10:812 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts. Sometimes, beginners are slowly to read, so this is possible hidden for them
01:35:271 (1) - Same issue as 00:19:793 (1)


[Normal]
00:46:545 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts. Sometimes, beginners are slowly to read, so this is possible hidden for them
01:06:417 (1,1) - 2 spinner are very tiring for beginners who play this diff. I suggest you to remap this part. Just you warn ya'
01:23:041 (1) - Add clap at tail slider
01:23:997 (2) - ^
01:25:143 (4) - Add clap
01:25:908 (6) - ^
01:26:290 (1) - Add clap at tail slider
01:27:054 (2) - ^
01:27:818 (3) - ^


[Insane]
00:19:411 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu. It makes hidden for players for some cases


Once you done, forum PM me. Since your map is fit to my bubble criteria
Rare
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Rare

Leorda wrote:

Konnichiwa

[Easy]
* AR +1?

00:19:793 (1) - The head slider is overlapped by hitbursts for beginners. So it's confusing of which side should click first
01:10:812 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts. Sometimes, beginners are slowly to read, so this is possible hidden for them
01:35:271 (1) - Same issue as 00:19:793 (1)

[Insane]
00:19:411 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu. It makes hidden for players for some cases


Once you done, forum PM me. Since your map is fit to my bubble criteria okay~ thanks!
All fixed~
thanks for modding Leorda :D
swish
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Joined February 2009
swish

Leorda wrote:

[Normal]
00:46:545 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts. Sometimes, beginners are slowly to read, so this is possible hidden for them
01:06:417 (1,1) - 2 spinner are very tiring for beginners who play this diff. I suggest you to remap this part. Just you warn ya'
01:23:041 (1) - Add clap at tail slider
01:23:997 (2) - ^
01:25:143 (4) - Add clap
01:25:908 (6) - ^
01:26:290 (1) - Add clap at tail slider
01:27:054 (2) - ^
01:27:818 (3) - ^
al fixed~ thanks!

Download: Nakagawa Haruna - pile up HURRICANE! (Short Ver.) (R a r e) [swish].osu
Leorda
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Leorda
Before bubble

[General]
* The offset should be at 685. Your current offset is doesn't follow the heavy beat (this one was very forgot for me ;_;)


[Easy]
01:10:812 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts and spinner-osu. It makes hidden for beginners while gameplay. Move down a bit....


[swish]
00:46:545 (1) - A bit overlapped by spinner-osu, it may hidden for beginners who play this diff for some cases.....
01:06:417 (6) - Add clap at end
01:10:812 (1) - ^
01:11:767 (2) - ^
01:12:914 (4) - Add clap
01:13:678 (6) - ^
01:14:060 (1) - Add clap at end
01:14:825 (2) - ^
01:15:589 (3) - Add clap at repeating slider


Forum PM again if you done
Rare
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Topic Starter
Rare

Leorda wrote:

[General]
* The offset should be at 685. Your current offset is doesn't follow the heavy beat (this one was very forgot for me ;_;)

[Easy]
01:10:812 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts and spinner-osu. It makes hidden for beginners while gameplay. Move down a bit....
Forum PM again if you done i got it :D
All fixed!!
thanks for recheck ~
swish
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swish

Leorda wrote:

[swish]
00:46:545 (1) - A bit overlapped by spinner-osu, it may hidden for beginners who play this diff for some cases..... add note,and breaktime :)
01:06:417 (6) - Add clap at end
01:10:812 (1) - ^
01:11:767 (2) - ^
01:12:914 (4) - Add clap
01:13:678 (6) - ^
01:14:060 (1) - Add clap at end
01:14:825 (2) - ^
01:15:589 (3) - Add clap at repeating slider
all fixed~ thanks for recheck :D

Download: Nakagawa Haruna - pile up HURRICANE! (Short Ver.) (R a r e) [swish].osu
Leorda
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Leorda
Did add the clap at 01:04:888 (4) in swish's diff. No KD ok?

Bubbled
Rare
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Rare

Leorda wrote:

Did add the clap at 01:04:888 (4) in swish's diff. No KD ok? okay~

Bubbled
thanks for Bubble and Recheck :)
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
Bubble modding time since people are all like "Hey let's not post in CDFA's queue when he re-opened it"

Note about bubble mods: I'll only mod bubbles if there's something unrankable, so you'll have to unbubble the map. Then I add suggestions to make the map a bit better, if I feel any are needed :D

ANYWAYS

Overall
Your BG is 960x768. Find a BG that is 1024x768~

Insane:
00:11:194 (1) - Add whistle
00:14:252 (7) - ^
00:49:411 (4) - Make this a triangle shape?
01:18:073 (4) - This look awkward. Center this in between (3) and (5). You can still make this a jump, but it just looks odd and probably plays odd.

Hard:
Tick rate 0.5 is unrankable
01:07:755 (5) - Add finish

Normal:
00:37:373 (1) - Add finish on beginning of slider
00:38:710 (3) - ^
00:40:239 (5) - ^
00:41:959 (1) - ^
00:43:487 (3) - Add finish

Easy:
Add whistles on 2 and 4 for the soft section!
00:08:328 (3) - Make this symmetrical~. The issue is that it's too wide. Use the scale tool to fix it :D
00:36:608 (4) - This touches the HP bar
00:53:424 (1) - unsymmetrical. The issue is the middle sliderpoint being too far from the 4th point
01:26:672 (1) - Add clap on beginning of slider
01:27:436 (2) - ^
01:27:436 (2) - Add clap on end of slider
01:29:729 (1) - Add clap
01:30:111 (2) - Add clap on end of slider
01:35:271 (1) - Add clap on repeat

Whee.
Rare
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Rare

CDFA wrote:

Hard:
Tick rate 0.5 is unrankable

Easy:
Add whistles on 2 and 4 for the soft section!
00:08:328 (3) - Make this symmetrical~. The issue is that it's too wide. Use the scale tool to fix it :D
00:36:608 (4) - This touches the HP bar
00:53:424 (1) - unsymmetrical. The issue is the middle sliderpoint being too far from the 4th point
01:26:672 (1) - Add clap on beginning of slider
01:27:436 (2) - ^
01:27:436 (2) - Add clap on end of slider
almost fixed.
thanks for modding~
Last edited by Rare , edited 1 time in total.
swish
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swish
thanks~
http://puu.sh/Ci5Y
Leorda
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Leorda
Well, ok then~

Rebubbled
Last edited by Leorda , edited 1 time in total.
Rare
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Rare

Leorda wrote:

Well, ok then~

Rebubbled
thanks for rebubble ;)
haha5957
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haha5957
according to this(Click!) you HAVE to remove (Short Ver.) from your song's title.

Make sure you follow Title changing Guideline(Click!) to prevent duplicating issues!

seems like we HAVE to change those unless there is a really good reason for it..

I don't think you would like to change since this is bubbled, but why not just ask for rebubble after change to prevent this issue ;o;?
Miya
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Miya
Sorry, i have to pop your bubble due to the new rule forbiding us to write short ver, if the official name doesn't consist the short. ver.
I check the vgmdb http://vgmdb.net/album/11198 and don't found any short ver in the album.
Rare
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Rare

haha5957 wrote:

according to this(Click!) you HAVE to remove (Short Ver.) from your song's title.
Make sure you follow Title changing Guideline(Click!) to prevent duplicating issues!
seems like we HAVE to change those unless there is a really good reason for it..
I don't think you would like to change since this is bubbled, but why not just ask for rebubble after change to prevent this issue ;o;?

Miya wrote:

Sorry, i have to pop your bubble due to the new rule forbiding us to write short ver, if the official name doesn't consist the short. ver.
I check the vgmdb http://vgmdb.net/album/11198 and don't found any short ver in the album.
fixed title.
thanks for advice~
Miya
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Miya
Made a few mod too before bubble.

log
15:18 <R a r e> : hi Miya~
15:18 <Miya> : hi Rare
15:19 <R a r e> : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/31270
15:19 <R a r e> : changed the title.
15:20 <Miya> : oh ok
15:20 <R a r e> : can rebubble?
15:20 <Miya> : yup :3
15:20 <Miya> : wait
15:25 <Miya> : before rebubble, i have a few suggestion first regarding the map
15:26 <Miya> : on easy, 00:38:137 (2) - i think you can add a whistle here on slider start to make whistle more consistant
15:26 <Miya> : 00:39:666 (2) - ^
15:26 <R a r e> : fixed
15:28 <R a r e> : Is that all?
15:28 <Miya> : nope
15:28 <Miya> : i'm still searching
15:28 <Miya> : wait a moment
15:29 <R a r e> : okay
15:31 <Miya> : change swish diff name into swish's Normal to reflect the difficulty name
15:32 <Miya> : and change the difficulty name 5item into 5item's Hard too
15:32 <R a r e> : fixed
15:33 <Miya> : on swish diff, how about finish at this slider start 00:52:659 (6) - ?
15:33 <Miya> : i hear a cymbal sounds there
15:34 <Miya> : 01:03:360 (2) - same here too
15:34 <Miya> : 01:27:818 (3) - here too >.<
15:36 <R a r e> : 01:27:818:(3) - added finish start slider only.
15:37 <Miya> : yup :3
15:37 <R a r e> : but, I ask to swish. Check this point out.
15:37 <Miya> : okay, no problem
15:37 <Miya> : 5item diff is already good imo
15:38 <R a r e> : 5item so pro ><
15:39 <Miya> : >.<
15:44 <Miya> : on insane
15:44 <Miya> : 00:03:169 (4) - move this 356,312 to make the spacing consistent
15:44 <R a r e> : fixed
15:45 <Miya> : 00:31:258 (3) - finish on this slider start?
15:46 <Miya> : 00:37:373 (1,2,3,4) - i feel this normal hitsounds is weird imo
15:46 <Miya> : it's better to use defaul soft hitsounds here
15:47 <Miya> : and yes, after you use default soft hitsounds, put a clap on this slider end 00:38:328 (4) -
15:48 <Miya> : 01:13:869 (1) - a finish on this slider start is good and consistant too imo
15:49 <R a r e> : almost fixed
15:50 <Miya> : hmm that's all for my suggestion imo
15:50 <Miya> : ok, you can upload now
15:51 <R a r e> : thanks for recheck ><
15:51 <Miya> : yup :3
15:53 <Miya> : call me back after you done with those mod~
15:55 <R a r e> : uploaded~
15:55 <Miya> : ok
15:56 <Miya> : no fix on swish diff? o.o
15:56 <Miya> : or not yet fixed?
15:56 <R a r e> : really?
15:56 <R a r e> : I forgot save? lol
15:57 <Miya> : yeah >.<
15:59 <Miya> : aw on easy
15:59 <Miya> : 00:41:194 (2) -
15:59 <Miya> : put whistle on the start
15:59 <Miya> : not the end
16:04 <R a r e> : done!
16:05 <Miya> : ok, update again
16:05 <R a r e> : already upload~
16:05 <R a r e> : already uploaded*
16:07 <Miya> : good~
16:07 <Miya> : well, all good now >.<

Ah, fixed kiai time inconsitencies too.

And now i think it's fine for bubble. There's no major issue. Good luck with ranking~
Rare
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Rare
@Miya
thanks for rebubble ><
wmfchris
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wmfchris
[General]
- You used S:C1 only but there's N:C1 and S:C2 hitsound in the file.
- You don't need a lead-in except insane.

[Insane]
HP6 too low for insane and such note density?

[Hard]
moe moe quin
OD4 is again too low.

I don't find other errors, so when you're done just find me again.
Rare
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Rare
all fixed~
thanks for modding!
wmfchris
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wmfchris
looks good now, ranked!
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
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YTYuyu
OMG another R a r e map O_O. i'm starting to look up to you as a mapper and not a player... i really miss your live recordings but your account got terminated :(. anyways congratz on the rank ;)
Rare
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Rare

wmfchris wrote:

looks good now, ranked!
thanks for Rank :lol:
Rare
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Rare

Byakugan249 wrote:

OMG another R a r e map O_O. i'm starting to look up to you as a mapper and not a player... i really miss your live recordings but your account got terminated :(. anyways congratz on the rank ;)
thanks 249 sensei~ :)
I play the drum is very noob lol
thanks ><
Snow Lover
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Snow Lover
ランクドおめです！！！　:) :) :)

以前ここにコメと動画を撮ったよとか言ってた者です。
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