Haneii wrote:

~General~
- Why not end kiai time at 02:11:975 for both difficulties? Great! That's my fault.. @.@ I forgot to resnap this green line after offset changed.
- Could you crop every image to reduce all the blank unused space lol Good idea but unnecessary for me ? (I'm too lazy xD

~Normal~
01:43:641 (2) – stack the beginning of the slider with the ending of 01:42:641 (1) better. (tip: turn off grid snap and make distance snap 0.0 and it should snap into place when you move it) Fixed~

~Hard~
01:34:641 (1) – remove/reduce jump here? or keep jump and make a single note? (Feels a bit too much for a hard + plays awkward imo) Sorry keep here ._.

Good luck

~Twinkle twinkle little star~

HeatKai wrote:

[General]

Mp3 Bitrate : 128kbps ( good )

Video ( frame size ) : doesn't have ( okay )

Skin : doesn't have ( okay )

Background : 1024x768 ( okay )

Kiai time : both same (okay )

Snapping : Doesn't have problem ( okay )

Preview Point : ( okay )

Diffs : 1 normal , 1 hard , 1 taiko ( wip ) you need easy.

Audio Lead-in : 0 ( okay)

Artist : Itou Kanae ( good )

Title : Ijiwaru na Koi ( okay )

source : Kyou, Koi wo Hajimemasu ( good )

Tags : same , but remove "h-miku" because he didn't give you the diff yet. Yah I'm sure he will give soon~

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[normal]
01:23:641 (4) - delete , add circle at 01:23:641 and the spinner should start from 01:23:975
01:48:975 (7) - delete , add circle at 01:48:975 and the spinner should start from 01:49:141 X Sorry all negative

[hard]
01:37:308 (1) - this is quite a big jump :\ fix it ? X Sorry it's okay for a hard I guess.


Its good

The song is fun

[overall]
gogo jojo

frost-b-spec wrote:

nice~

kanae moe~ XD

offset 12000(+25ms) Fixed~

little japanese lyrics mod
(簡体字→日本漢字)

嘘みたいな展開に
二人ちょっとハニカム
触れたキスから伝わる
初めての感覚に

動けない心は
君だけを求める
下手な笑顔でごめんね
ありのまま見つめてたい

本当の私は凄く欲張りみたいです。
君を知りたい　それなのに
臆病にもなる

初めてのこの気持ちを
もう二度と離さぬように
今日、恋をはじめます
心でそっと　奏でるの
大嫌い、でも大好き
迷い込む　いじわるな恋だけど
そばにいたいの
この手　離さないでね lol Really thanks but maybe fix later because it's a little annoying to remake the image files ></

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Heya.

I'm also aiming to become a MAT ;_; Great! Good luck~ xD

Hard
01:29:333 (1) - Have the finish in custom sample 2? Sounds better IMO :< Fixed~

Ah, damn it. Can't find anything which could need improvement. Well done, I guess.

Normal
01:29:333 (1) - same as in hard Fixed~
01:32:000 (1) - looks like you missed a Finish here. Fixed~
01:38:000 - what are those green lines here for? Hit sound for sliderfollow circle ;_;Edit:Orz Slider tick ;_;
01:47:666 (5) - change the finish to custom sample 2? Good idea~
01:58:666 (1) - Spacing mistake? Nice catch! Fixed

Nymph_ wrote:

我路过而已拉 T T[/color] 路过还有KD star呢~></赚翻了~XD 液~

General:
（BG的那个震动感觉有点无厘头T T 是根据什么震动的吗..我是不懂啦）

T T 歌词和TITLE好好看 帮我做一个TITLE吧 Lalala..一次收费1mod哦=w=


Hard:
AR7更舒服一些 AR7玩CTB很不舒服呢=A=

排列和HITSOUND感觉已经有你自己的风格了 0 0 被你发现了=w= (捂脸
没什么想吐槽的地方

结尾SPINNER既然不能用FINISH的话 那就静音掉试试？或者音量递进降低 0 0 我是觉得没必要呢..
结尾的SPINNER建议长白线结束 再往后拉一点 blablabla我觉得现在这样听起来舒服点=w=

Normal:

01:15:999 (1) - 01:17:333 (3) - 01:18:666 (1) - 01:20:000 (3) - 嗯这种音量效果的话...我觉得音量50 30 30 30效果不够好呢 试试50 40 50 40？我觉得挺不错的 OK Fixed~

02:07:666 (2) - 建议这个FINISH提高音量 也做出跟上面的一样高低的音量配合 或者后面的降低 没问题~

嗯 没什么好建议了的呢 NAZI的事别人干 T T 嗯我讨厌nazi TvT

液~

kanpakyin wrote:

How to mod a map? D:
I don't know anymore.

[Normal]
00:49:666(1)-Hidden,confuse.
01:27:833(2)-awkard.
01:37:333(1.2.3)-Don't put 1/4 in Normal.

[Hard]
This diff is very 2.
01:37:333(1-12)- ugly.

NoHItter wrote:

The SB Foggy Image felt odd. It looked out of place. I suggest removing it. Removed some places but still used in some places which I think it's suitable and necessary.^^
Also you cannot make the slidertick invisible nor make it silent. It's unrankable. Yah fixed~

Other than that, your map's fine.

Alace wrote:

<All diffs>
把offset移到1333 Fixed~

<Normal>
AR-1 ? OD+1~2 ? 超過3.00一點點沒有關係 Fixed~
01:51:666 (1) - new combo (because of old bug) Fixed~

<Hard>
我覺得AR6是最合曲子的AR (BPM 90的觀點) AR-1 (8→7, 我觉得6有点慢了.. ;_;)