1. 00:11:414 (3) - 00:17:163 (1) - During slowparts i think it's better to choose between either fully stacking or just slightly overlapping for aesthetics because the low density rhythm makes it so you actually notice these things. So i'll advise you pick one of them and use it consistently thoughout the whole intro
2. 00:22:911 (1) - It looks kinda out of place because i can't really feel a pattern here, what you could do is moving it at around x:32 y:148 so it would make the spacing between 00:22:552 (4,1,2,3) - this look more even and create a visual pattern
3. 00:31:175 (4) - If i follow your pattern of sliders during the intro this should have a red anchor since you go curved > anchor > curved > anchor
4. 00:36:923 (4,5,6,7) - You should make the overlaps the same to create a pattern here because it looks rather random, just choose one of them
5. 00:43:750 (4,1) - The spacing here looks really cramped while this 00:43:390 (2,5) - one looks nicer, how about moving 4 at around x:208 y:192 to have more or less equal between 4 - 1 and 5 - 2
6. 00:56:684 (3,1) - Pretty much same thing here, you should leave some space between objects when you blanket, 00:59:558 (3,1) - this one for example is much better
7. 00:57:402 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - The spacing here feels way too big way too fast, i can't feel any build up in intensity, how about putting 00:57:762 (1) - at x:352 y:188 to make it look more independent from the actual pattern to get that build up feel. This applies to most of the jump patterns you've done during the rest of the song too
8. 01:03:151 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ here for another example you could move 4 at x:184 y:252 because here overlapping 2 and 4 doesn't look great (at least imo)

LeeSinOrAfk wrote:

Hi, NM from queue

[No you'll never]

1. 00:11:414 (3) - 00:17:163 (1) - During slowparts i think it's better to choose between either fully stacking or just slightly overlapping for aesthetics because the low density rhythm makes it so you actually notice these things. So i'll advise you pick one of them and use it consistently thoughout the whole intro
2. 00:22:911 (1) - It looks kinda out of place because i can't really feel a pattern here, what you could do is moving it at around x:32 y:148 so it would make the spacing between 00:22:552 (4,1,2,3) - this look more even and create a visual pattern
3. 00:31:175 (4) - If i follow your pattern of sliders during the intro this should have a red anchor since you go curved > anchor > curved > anchor
4. 00:36:923 (4,5,6,7) - You should make the overlaps the same to create a pattern here because it looks rather random, just choose one of them
5. 00:43:750 (4,1) - The spacing here looks really cramped while this 00:43:390 (2,5) - one looks nicer, how about moving 4 at around x:208 y:192 to have more or less equal between 4 - 1 and 5 - 2
6. 00:56:684 (3,1) - Pretty much same thing here, you should leave some space between objects when you blanket, 00:59:558 (3,1) - this one for example is much better
7. 00:57:402 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - The spacing here feels way too big way too fast, i can't feel any build up in intensity, how about putting 00:57:762 (1) - at x:352 y:188 to make it look more independent from the actual pattern to get that build up feel. This applies to most of the jump patterns you've done during the rest of the song too
8. 01:03:151 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ here for another example you could move 4 at x:184 y:252 because here overlapping 2 and 4 doesn't look great (at least imo)

I could go more in depths but it would just be me changing your patterns and it would be too opinion based.
The map itself looks consistent, you had a concept and i'd say it wasn't executed the best way, the map lacks structure almost only regarding aesthetics/visuals and patterning but rhythm choices and spacing were decent.

If you have questions regarding the mod, feel free to pm me

Hope this helped, good luck