1. Easy (1,55 stars, 147 notes)
2. Hard (4,08 stars, 258 notes)
3. Insane (4,89 stars, 401 notes)
4. Normal (2,8 stars, 215 notes)

1. As two diffs are collabs with you and IceBeam, add "Collab" and "Collaboration" in the tags ?

1. 01:06:046 (1,2) - This part is slow and based on the vocal, so it's better to make long sliders who follow the vocal. (1) ends 1/4 earlier than what the vocal suggest, but if you end it on a 1/4 tick, it will be weird here. So make a long slider who starts at 01:06:046 and ends at 01:07:014. It will fit more this part.
2. 01:22:014 (2) - The shape of this slider is hided by the shape of 01:19:594 (3). Even if it doesn't make it very hard to read, it's better for the well-being of new players
3. 01:48:143 - I don't really like this empty spot. It breaks the rhythm because it should have a clap here. Maybe fix with one of these propositions who looks fine to me :
   
   1. Add a circle at 01:48:143 ?
   2. Extand 01:47:175 (4) by 1/1
4. 02:21:530 (1) - This slider seems a bit late. It is based on the "Doooooooown" so it has to gebin 1/2 earlier at 02:21:288.

1. 00:51:288 (2) - If you stack this circle with the end of the slider, the player will have the feeling that all the pattern is concentrate in this area :/
2. 01:00:723 - Via notepad, make this break start at 01:02:175. It will make a nice effect
   SPOILER

   Change "60439" into "62175"
3. 01:28:546 (3) - Start this slider 1/2 later and add a clap at its new beginning and add a circle here. It feels weird to have nothing to click at 01:28:788.
4. 01:48:143 (3) - Have you forgot a clap here ? :3
5. 01:51:046 - Here too ?
6. 02:52:014 (3) - This one too ?

1. 02:15:481 - Increase the hitsound volume by 10%. 10% is not enough to be hearable. Of course increase the hitsound volume of 02:18:869 by 10% too.

1. 00:14:756 (6) - This anti-jump is not a good idea
2. 00:33:627 (8,9,10) - This triplet seems awkward. If you really want to have a triplet in this pattern, it would be better if you remove (9) and add a circle at 00:33:506.
3. 00:42:820 (3) - Stack with (5), it's nazi, but it looks very ugly ~w~
4. 00:51:288 (3) - Wow, due to the clear combo color, the stack with the slider and the white of the background, this circle is almost invisible. You have to change the color of this combo :O
5. 01:02:175 (1) - This new combo is not needed and looks ugly. However, a new combo mark would be appreciate on 01:00:723 (9).
6. 01:06:046 (1) - This slider is weird, it doesn't really follow the song, there is nothing clearly hearable on this blue tick. Reduce (1) by 1/4
7. 01:12:094 (1) - Same for this one, this slider doesn't have to end on a blue tick. Reduce it by 1/4

Fight69 wrote:

Hi Hello!

Don't forget that everything are just suggestions !

[General]

In all diffs, look the tags : "Louis", "Cyphre", "Lucifer" and "IceBeam" are wrote twice ! xD Oops,my bad,fixed!

[Hard]

00:39:433 (4) - Add a clap ? (a whistle and a clap sounds good IMO)
00:40:159 (1) - Add a clap on the reverse arrow ? Fixed both!

Everything else looks fine, good job guys !

~Starz'd !

1. 00:07:981 - 2 time sections at the same time
2. 00:15:723 - not different to previous section ([Hard] only)
3. 01:21:530 - not different to previous section
4. 01:37:014 - 2 time sections at the same time (except [Hard])
5. 02:00:239 - 2 time sections at the same time ([Easy] only)

1. 00:55:885 (2) - is there a clap missing on the endpoint?
2. 01:22:014 (2) - please add a clap to the startpoint
3. 01:32:659 (1) - here as well

1. 02:55:400 (2) - sounds like there should be a finish instead of the clap

1. 02:16:449 (1) - the delay is quite tricky
2. 03:07:981 (1) - the return point sounds empty, I would add whistle here

1. 02:36:772 (5,6) - this is confusing and dangerous, cause you can't tell if it's a return slider or not, so please stack them normally (either direction is fine)
2. 02:55:401 (8) - this endpoint is hidden too (return slider problem), just increase the distance between (7) and (8) a bit more

[General]
- Any particularly reason why letterboxing is disabled? I think it looks okay with this BG. no need to use it coz the BG is white and black letterbox looks little ugly
- I'd use Tick Rate 2 for a variety of okay-ish reasons found here. You could keep [Easy] at Tick 1, though, due to the very slow velocity used. the same as there ^ it's not so fundamentally, at the last time too important to use a big tickrate, the reason why i didn't change it - sliders with a blue tick, with that tickrate they sounds stupid
- ALSO I forgot to mention, you should use a custom slider border if you're using a custom hitcircle. nah, okay, but i like a white slider board
- Kylie Minogue is staring right at me, and I'm scared. she's pretty nice

[Easy]
01:00:239 (1) - When using a custom spinner spin sound, it'll get awkwardly quiet 1/2 before the spinner end. Perhaps you could move the silencing inheriting section to the very end of the spinner, instead. Alternatively, just put a normal finish on there. I think that would sound nice, too. after long understanding, i fixed it, but :<
02:04:110 (1,2) - Even though there are some very pleasant overlaps in this map, this one doesn't appeal to me. changed
03:10:401 (1) - I suppose this spinner is of a reasonable length, but it seems just a touch on the short side for Easy. It's your choice. yeah, my choise

[Normal]
01:35:078 (1,1) - One could argue that the note comes a bit soon after the spinner for a Normal, and same for the other ones. it's not tooo hard, little picture shows (N) that's why i didn't change it
03:00:239 (1,2) - (2) is a bit obscured by (1)'s start and slider path, and one could argue that it's a bit confusing. replaced

[Hard]
00:44:272 (2,3) - Blanket could be a bit improved.
02:38:949 (3) - Perhaps there is a better place to put this other than under the slider where it's a bit hidden. nothing change

General
Actually read SapphireGhost's mod instead of completely ignoring it; He doesn't bite, and has already said pretty much everything I want to say.

If you're unsure how to add a custom slider border, place "SliderBorder : rr,bb,gg" under the [Colours] heading in each difficulty's .osu file. I'd suggest something similar to "SliderBorder : 200,200,200" okay, fixed

As well as that, credit the difficulties to their creators somewhere in the map, via a storyboard or diff naming. Not everybody reads descriptions, and people will assume you made everything. that's a moot point. I don't see the reason to do a SB with the names. Map was done by only three people and in very different positions. Easy and insane diffs done by me and IceBeam where we change over, normal was done by me and hard by Louis, in total i need to do 2 different SB for Me and IceBeam, a text with "normal by me" and "Hard by Louis" i think there's no need to do it. And if you say that nobody read the Creator's Words i can say that almost nobody read that SB

1. Combo Colours: "Pink" blends with the BG sometimes, would you make it a bit more "intense", please?

1. 02:23:344 - Is the slider-speed change necessary? I don't tend to care about unused timing sections but this one is affecting the slider-speed, you better remove it to avoid any problem.
2. 03:11:852 - ^

1. 02:23:344 - Same as [Easy].
2. 02:19:110 (1,2,3,4) - (There's a spinner before this pattern) Rookies tend to focus on spinning as fast as they can... thus, they won't notice that the slider has a repeat and by the time the spinner is done, "spinner-osu" will cover the repeat-arrow. This can be easily prevented by using a vertical-flip for the whole pattern, consider doing it.
3. 02:23:949 (1) - This post-spinner slider is bugged, the NC has to be added manually. (This bug affects score)
4. 03:11:852 - Same as [Easy].

1. 02:23:344 - Read up there, please.
2. 03:11:852 - ^

1. 00:37:014 (1,2) - I'm a bit worried about these sliders, more than half of the circle and the slider-path are covered. It isn't really confusing but I'm not sure if sliders should overlap like that, this might be a problem with "peppy-sliders". If it's possible, try to re-arrange this pattern.
   
   1. 01:43:304 (8) - Same issue here. (Notice that there are some patterns similar to this one that were not pointed out, this is because those patterns don't have the slider-start covered by more than 50%)
   2. 03:03:143 (4,5) - ^
   3. 03:04:594 (2,3) - ^
2. 02:19:110 (1) - This post-spinner circle is bugged, the NC needs to be added manually.
3. 03:11:852 (4) - Whoops, such a drastic change. Even though, there's a pause before the change, I'd suggest to use "0.75x" instead. It doesn't break the flow and plays much better, can be considered way more intuitive too.

Gonzvlo wrote:

[*]02:23:949 (1) - This post-spinner slider is bugged, the NC has to be added manually. (This bug affects score)

[*]02:19:110 (1) - This post-spinner circle is bugged, the NC needs to be added manually.

Vass_Bass wrote:

All fixed expect..

Gonzvlo wrote:

[*]02:23:949 (1) - This post-spinner slider is bugged, the NC has to be added manually. (This bug affects score)

[*]02:19:110 (1) - This post-spinner circle is bugged, the NC needs to be added manually.

What?

Vass_Bass wrote:

fixed...i guess