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Kuma-san

ShiroKitty wrote:

Ymm.. maybe I'm a newbie with osu! standard mode, but.. I can finish many Hard diffs.. and with [Kuma's Hard] it's like impossible for me :D I can't follow the rythm here :(( maybe You should change the name to Insane?
Nope.This hard because me and my friends can did ss here(if i want)
Upd.make more easy

Download: Riyu Kosaka - LOVE LOVE SHINE (iPoff) [Kuma's Hard].osu
Hellzero
General
Your BG size 960x 768. You need only 800x600 or 1024x768.
Delete osb file then make full submit

Easy
01:33:999 (3) - too much for easy diff. Can you make 1 slider? Or some else

Normal
add move curves sliders?
00:40:778 (6) - kick slider (2 repeat) on normal diff it's bad idea
00:55:355 (2,3) - ^
01:24:507 - finish here orz
01:32:643 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing!

ShiroKitty
Hi~
Distance spasing 0.9x why? orz
00:04:677 (1) - move it 00:10:440 (5,6) - Ctrl+R
00:10:101 (3,4,5,6) - make jumps with these notes?
00:19:592 - add note here under (4)? then 00:19:762 (1) - will look like jump
00:31:456 (3) - move up?
00:32:643 (5) - NC?
00:42:982 (3,4) - Ctrl+R
01:04:846 (5) - move to center
01:12:304 (2) - move little down
01:12:982 (4) - move litlle up
01:13:660 (6) - move little right (less overlaps)

Kuma
00:13:829 (1,2,3) - думаю лучше было бы сместить на 1/2 вправо
00:19:592 (1,2,3) - также только влево
00:41:626 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - кароче есть отличный способ сделать симметричный "цветок". Берем (1) слайдер и так как у нас 6 "лепестков" то 360/6=60 градусов. Жмем ctrl+shift+r ставим Selection Centre 60 градусов и так далее копипастим.
01:05:185 ноту на белый тик чтобы легче было ловить ритм
01:09:592 (4) - тут нужна 1/3
01:14:338 (4) - по идеи тут нужно НК хотя джамп вообще имхо не к месту
01:33:999 (6) - НК?
Kuma-san

Hellzero wrote:

Kuma
00:13:829 (1,2,3) - думаю лучше было бы сместить на 1/2 вправо
00:19:592 (1,2,3) - также только влево
00:41:626 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - кароче есть отличный способ сделать симметричный "цветок". Берем (1) слайдер и так как у нас 6 "лепестков" то 360/6=60 градусов. Жмем ctrl+shift+r ставим Selection Centre 60 градусов и так далее копипастим.
01:05:185 ноту на белый тик чтобы легче было ловить ритм
01:09:592 (4) - тут нужна 1/3
01:14:338 (4) - по идеи тут нужно НК хотя джамп вообще имхо не к месту
01:33:999 (6) - НК?
Okke

Download: Riyu Kosaka - LOVE LOVE SHINE (iPoff) [Kuma's Hard].osu
Yusu Aoi
Okie :))
I fixed all :))
here is my fixed diff ^^
Thx for mod:)

Download: Riyu Kosaka - LOVE LOVE SHINE (iPoff) [ShiroKitty's Insane].osu
Topic Starter
peachiwitch

Hellzero wrote:

General
Your BG size 960x 768. You need only 800x600 or 1024x768.
Delete osb file then make full submit Okay.

Easy
01:33:999 (3) - too much for easy diff. Can you make 1 slider? Or some else
Fixed.

Normal
add move curves sliders? Eh. x.x
00:40:778 (6) - kick slider (2 repeat) on normal diff it's bad idea Fixed :3
00:55:355 (2,3) - ^ Oki~
01:24:507 - finish here orz Fixed xD
01:32:643 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing! Fixed~
Thank you for the mod. :D
Hellzero

iPoff wrote:

Hellzero wrote:

Normal
add move curves sliders? Eh. x.x Sorry i did mean "add more curves sliders?"
Topic Starter
peachiwitch
Oh, no, I understood you.
Sorry for the confusion. D:
I'll add more later on. ^^

EDIT:
Added more curve sliders.
:O
kosiga
hi~
I love the song :oops:
↓my mod↓

[Easy]
Volume 100%⇒80%
00:12:643(2) - Spacing too far (Distance snap 0.8x ↓)
00:16:372(2) - ^
00:35:694(3) - Spacing too close
00:54:338 - add circle and KIAI time start here?
00:56:711(3,4,5) - Spacing too far Because this difficult is Easy >:(

[Normal]
Volume 100%⇒80%
00:27:219(2) - move to x:376 y:128
00:46:202 - remove KIAI time
00:52:134(1) - remove slider and add circle 00:51:965, add repeat slider 00:52:304 end 0052:982
01:08:236(3,4,5,6) - Spacing too close Because this difficult is Normal >:(
00:54:677 - move to KIAI time here? 00:54:338
01:05:524 - move to KIAI time end here? 01:02:473

[Kuma's Hard]
Volume 100%⇒80%
00:09:253(2) - Sorry, I don't like :? move x:360 y:56
00:16:541(4,5,6,1) - add circle 00:16:541, add slider 00:16:711~00:17:050, add circle 00:17:219, add slider 00:17:389~00:17:728, add repeat slider 00:17:897~ 00:18:236
00:22:134(1) - Spacing too close this spacing confusion :o
00:48:745(8) - move to 00:48:914 and remove here circle
00:57:050(3) - Sorry, I don't like :? move x:200 y:104
01:10:948(2) - ^ x:200 y:108
01:05:524 - move to KIAI time end here 01:04:846

[ShiroKitty's Insane]
Volume 90%⇒80%
nice mapping


Good luck~ :)

Star~☆
Yusu Aoi

kosiga wrote:

hi~
I love the song :oops: Me too ;D
↓my mod↓


[ShiroKitty's Insane]
Volume 90%⇒80% changed to 80% :)
nice mapping Thank You!:))


Good luck~ :)
Download: Riyu Kosaka - LOVE LOVE SHINE (iPoff) [ShiroKitty's Insane].osu
Topic Starter
peachiwitch

kosiga wrote:

hi~
I love the song :oops:
↓my mod↓

[Easy]
Volume 100%⇒80%
00:12:643(2) - Spacing too far (Distance snap 0.8x ↓)
00:16:372(2) - ^
00:35:694(3) - Spacing too close
00:54:338 - add circle and KIAI time start here?
00:56:711(3,4,5) - Spacing too far Because this difficult is Easy >:(

[Normal]
Volume 100%⇒80%
00:27:219(2) - move to x:376 y:128
00:46:202 - remove KIAI time
00:52:134(1) - remove slider and add circle 00:51:965, add repeat slider 00:52:304 end 0052:982
01:08:236(3,4,5,6) - Spacing too close Because this difficult is Normal >:(
00:54:677 - move to KIAI time here? 00:54:338
01:05:524 - move to KIAI time end here? 01:02:473


Good luck~ :)
Fixed everything~
:D
Thank you very much~
^^
Kuma-san
SPOILER
[Kuma's Hard]
Volume 100%⇒80%
00:09:253(2) - Sorry, I don't like move x:360 y:56
00:16:541(4,5,6,1) - add circle 00:16:541, add slider 00:16:711~00:17:050, add circle 00:17:219, add slider 00:17:389~00:17:728, add repeat slider 00:17:897~ 00:18:236
00:22:134(1) - Spacing too close this spacing confusion
00:48:745(8) - move to 00:48:914 and remove here circle
00:57:050(3) - Sorry, I don't like move x:200 y:104
01:10:948(2) - ^ x:200 y:108
01:05:524 - move to KIAI time end here 01:04:846

Download: Riyu Kosaka - LOVE LOVE SHINE (iPoff) [Kuma's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
peachiwitch
HEY.
YOU PEOPLE.
MOD THIS.

...or a bubble would be nice.
;_;
artpiggo
Insane
fine

Hard
01:27:219 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - hehh

01:34:846 (5,6) - jump between 5 and 6 is required from the song suggest (6) to be at (92,144)

Normal
01:13:660 (7) - maybe


easy
fine

8.5/10
Kuma-san

artpiggo wrote:

Insane
fine

Hard
01:27:219 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - hehh

01:34:846 (5,6) - jump between 5 and 6 is required from the song suggest (6) to be at (92,144)

Normal
01:13:660 (7) - maybe


easy
fine

8.5/10
Download: Riyu Kosaka - LOVE LOVE SHINE (iPoff) [Kuma's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
peachiwitch
Updated. :3

Thank you for the mod, artpiggo~
PoochyEXE
My suggestions:

Easy
00:56:033 (2,3,4) - 2 and 3 are really awkward in position. Try making them move downwards, so that you get a zigzag shape. Then change 4 so that the end is a bit farther to the right.
01:14:168 - Remove the break here. It's too short, just let the 1.5 measures go by without any beats.


Normal
00:53:321 (1) - I'm not sure this space is long enough for a spinner.
01:21:117 (5) - Move this to below 4 instead of to the right of it.
01:28:236 (4) - The slider looks weird the way it arcs upward, because it's next to 1,2,3,5 which are all level. Try this:

Kuma's Hard
00:00:440 (1,2,3,4,5) - Feels a little weird. Try this:
00:46:201 - Don't use Kiai time for just 1/6th of a second.
00:54:338 - Add a circle here to go with the "go!" in the lyrics.
01:05:439 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Remove 2. It doesn't go with the rhythm. Make 3 longer to end a half a beat later, move 4 to start and end half a beat later, and replace 5 with just a circle that hits when your current 5 ends. Move 7 up a quarter beat and add a circle where your current 7 ends, to match the rhythm of the lyrics. You might have to turn 6 and 7 into just circles to compensate. Here's the resulting timeline:
SPOILER
(top, had to merge these because of the 3-image limit)
01:10:270 - Add a circle here.
01:16:372 (2,3) - Make these two sliders each half a beat longer.
01:17:728 (4,5,1) - Rhythm here feels odd. Try mapping to the lyrics:
SPOILER
(bottom)
01:30:270 (1,2) - Make 1 repeat, move 2 a half beat later and down closer to the next combo's 1.
01:35:016 (6) - Bad spacing here. Move this closer to 5.


Topic Starter
peachiwitch

PoochyEXE wrote:

My suggestions:

Easy
00:56:033 (2,3,4) - 2 and 3 are really awkward in position. Try making them move downwards, so that you get a zigzag shape. Then change 4 so that the end is a bit farther to the right.
01:14:168 - Remove the break here. It's too short, just let the 1.5 measures go by without any beats.


Normal
00:53:321 (1) - I'm not sure this space is long enough for a spinner.
01:21:117 (5) - Move this to below 4 instead of to the right of it.
01:28:236 (4) - The slider looks weird the way it arcs upward, because it's next to 1,2,3,5 which are all level. Try this:
SPOILER
[attachment=2:fe4c4]osuexample.png[/attachment:fe4c4]
I fixed everything, I hope.
Thank you for your suggestions. c:
Bobo_old
Whoever does the vocals for these DDR songs has an irritating voice o.o
Modded on request.

BG must be 1024x768

-Easy-

AR 3

00:17:389 (3) - 2 grids up (Grid size 3)
00:19:762 (2) - Delete the second to last slider point.
00:22:134 (1) - 2 grids left.
00:23:490 (1) - Remove 1 repeat. Move this to the next white tick. Then vertical flip.
00:26:541 (3) - New combo.
00:29:253 (5) - New combo.
00:43:829 (1,2,3) - Perhaps this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/160807
00:51:287 (6) - Delete this and add a slider repeat to (5).
00:54:338 (6) - Start the new combo here.
00:56:711 (3,4,5) - Not distance snapped.
01:30:609 (5,6,7,8) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/160810

-Normal-

CS 3

01:08:236 (3) - New combo.
01:17:389 (5) - This doesn't seem to fit the music too well.
01:34:338 (5) - 1 grid down.

-Kuma's Hard-

How come this diff starts before Easy and Normal?

00:01:795 (5) - Grid size 4, two grids up.
00:27:558 (5,6,7) - Bastard pattern.
00:58:406 (4) - Grid size 4, 3 grids down.
01:09:592 (4) - Add a repeat.
01:11:795 (5) - 4 grids up.
01:27:219 (2,3,4 etc.) - This is waaaay too hard for a Hard.

-ShiroKitty's Insane-

How come this diff starts before Easy and Normal?

Hmm... I'm not too strict on Insanes unless I'm nazi modding.
I don't anything in this diff that's really that big of a problem.
Nice patterns. :3

This map needs work if you're looking to have this ranked, especially Hard.
Topic Starter
peachiwitch

Bobo wrote:

Whoever does the vocals for these DDR songs has an irritating voice o.o
Modded on request.

BG must be 1024x768 Fixed~

-Easy-

AR 3

00:17:389 (3) - 2 grids up (Grid size 3)
00:19:762 (2) - Delete the second to last slider point.
00:22:134 (1) - 2 grids left.
00:23:490 (1) - Remove 1 repeat. Move this to the next white tick. Then vertical flip.
00:26:541 (3) - New combo.
00:29:253 (5) - New combo.
00:43:829 (1,2,3) - Perhaps this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/160807
00:51:287 (6) - Delete this and add a slider repeat to (5).
00:54:338 (6) - Start the new combo here.
00:56:711 (3,4,5) - Not distance snapped.
01:30:609 (5,6,7,8) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/160810

-Normal-

CS 3

01:08:236 (3) - New combo.
01:17:389 (5) - This doesn't seem to fit the music too well.
01:34:338 (5) - 1 grid down.

This map needs work if you're looking to have this ranked, especially Hard. ;_;
Fixed everything. :o
Thank you for the mod.
bmin11
[General]
Wouldn't the artist be Be4U?
I really don't see the point of mapping if you aren't going to map harder difficulties. Your choice I guess.

[ShiroKitty]
This is just pure <3
00:50:440 (5) - Having this flip on horizontal axis will give you an interesting cursor flow. A possible option for you.

[Kuma]
00:04:677 (1,2,3,4) - An ugly anti-jump. It is not empathizing the song IMO
00:51:287 (3) - Having this flip on horizontal axis will give you an interesting cursor flow. A possible option for you.
01:09:592 (4) - I'm actually against this. Wasn't really expecting a slow down.
01:34:338 (3,4) - As much as I hate pointing these out, move this 1 grid to the left. The current pattern isn't really pretty or anything IMO.

[Easy]
00:56:033 (2) - Spacing. This is actually quite confusing


That's all from me. I really enjoyed ShiroKitty's. I was just amazing <3
Yusu Aoi

bmin11 wrote:

[General]
Wouldn't the artist be Be4U?
I really don't see the point of mapping if you aren't going to map harder difficulties. Your choice I guess.

[ShiroKitty]
This is just pure <3 yay Thank U!!:))
00:50:440 (5) - Having this flip on horizontal axis will give you an interesting cursor flow. A possible option for you. I made what U said, and I think it's really interesting:)


That's all from me. I really enjoyed ShiroKitty's. I was just amazing <3 Thank U thank U thank U!:))
Download: Riyu Kosaka - LOVE LOVE SHINE (iPoff) [ShiroKitty's Insane].osu
Topic Starter
peachiwitch

bmin11 wrote:

[General]
Wouldn't the artist be Be4U? No, I don't think so. :O
I really don't see the point of mapping if you aren't going to map harder difficulties. Your choice I guess. 'Cause I'm horrible at mapping harder diffs. ;P Might try harder ones later on, though.

[Easy]
00:56:033 (2) - Spacing. This is actually quite confusing

That's all from me. I really enjoyed ShiroKitty's. I was just amazing <3
Fixed. Thanks for the mod. c:
Love
Can I make a taiko diff for this? :D
Topic Starter
peachiwitch
You most certainly can~
:D
Love
All done~ I love the way it turned out :3

Download: Riyu Kosaka - LOVE LOVE SHINE (iPoff) [Love's Taiko].osu
Topic Starter
peachiwitch
Thank you very much~
I like it a lot. :3
Love
add my name to all the tags :3

Edit: second thought, hmm, my name is in the title anyways, so who knows XD
Teru21
Hi! from teruteru modding & guest diff queuesorry i'm late...... actualy, yesterday, i mod yours but when i want to submit it, my lappy suddenly shut down and it wont openned.. so, maybe , there will be something that people already mod it. so.. here we go..


with * post is only suggetion.

[Easy]
00:24:846 (2) - grid : 2 times up
00:30:609 (3) - grid : 1 time to the right. 2 times up
00:37:050 (4) - grid : 2 times to the right.
00:37:728 (5) - grid : 1 time up . 1 time to the right.
01:13:660 (3) - * grid : 4 times up
01:19:084 (1,2,3) - the start of the slider (2) and (3) is hidden. this is to hard for a newbies.
01:32:643 (1) - ^ : grid : 4 times to the left

[Normal]
song setup>difficulty :
Circle Size : 4
Approach Rate : 3
Overall Difficulty : 3

00:18:406 (1,2,3,4) - grid: 1 time down
00:20:440 (5,6) - grid : 1 time to the right
00:27:558 (3) - the slider tilt (task : ctrl+shift+r. then write it -3) then.. it would better if it looks like this. http://puu.sh/78oL
00:36:711 (3,4) - grid : 1 time up
01:16:033 (3) - http://puu.sh/78nk
01:18:406 (6,1) - suddenly jump like this also a bit hard for a normal.
(1)=> (task : ctrl+<) grid : 8 times down. 3 times to the left.
(2)=> (task : ctrl+>) grid : 7 times down. 12 times to the left
01:21:456 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - better if you put it like this. http://puu.sh/78nv http://puu.sh/78nI



[Kuma's Hard] and [Shirokitty's Insane]
*more tidy if put the circle size normal.

if this modding is not helping you, dont give me kudosu. Good Luck :D ;)
MMzz
Love asked me to taiko mod.

First off, add beatmaniaIIDX 9th Style to the source, the song was in that game too.
And add Love to the tags.
Mod:

00:01:965 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - d k ddd d k d
00:04:507 (22) - remove finish
00:04:846 (23) - ^
00:05:185 (24) - ^
00:07:389 (34,35,36,37,38,39,40) - d k ddd d k d
00:32:643 (197) - Make this a finisher instead? :B
01:05:524 - Make timing point .75 SV?
01:10:270 - If you did above add a point here and make it 1.0.
Love

MMzz wrote:

Love asked me to taiko mod.

First off, add beatmania IIDX 9th Style to the source, the song was in that game too.
And add Love to the tags.
Mod:

00:01:965 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - d k ddd d k d
00:04:507 (22) - remove finish
00:04:846 (23) - ^
00:05:185 (24) - ^
00:07:389 (34,35,36,37,38,39,40) - d k ddd d k d
00:32:643 (197) - Make this a finisher instead? :B
01:05:524 - Make timing point .75 SV?
01:10:270 - If you did above add a point here and make it 1.0.
Did everything besides the tags <3

Thank you mittywittens ;)

Download: Riyu Kosaka - LOVE LOVE SHINE (iPoff) [Love's Taiko].osu
Kuma-san

bmin11 wrote:

[Kuma]
00:04:677 (1,2,3,4) - An ugly anti-jump. It is not empathizing the song IMO
00:51:287 (3) - Having this flip on horizontal axis will give you an interesting cursor flow. A possible option for you.
01:09:592 (4) - I'm actually against this. Wasn't really expecting a slow down.
01:34:338 (3,4) - As much as I hate pointing these out, move this 1 grid to the left. The current pattern isn't really pretty or anything IMO.
Poff i asked you fix my diff always but you misunderstand me.So...pls fix only last mod
Kuma-san

Teru21 wrote:

[Kuma's Hard] and [Shirokitty's Insane]
*more tidy if put the circle size normal.
Oh thanks ^^
Without change =__=
Topic Starter
peachiwitch
Fixed everything. x_x

Sorry for the delay.
My internet went down for a while. D:
Love
My name has to be in the tags for all diffs D:
Topic Starter
peachiwitch
Oh, right. Sorry.
I fixed it. :3
Kuma-san

Kuma-san wrote:

Teru21 wrote:

[Kuma's Hard] and [Shirokitty's Insane]
*more tidy if put the circle size normal.
Oh thanks ^^
Without change =__=
Poff i said without change.
Topic Starter
peachiwitch
Sorry again.
x_x
Fixed it.
Crimmi
Modding, CrimmiStyle!!

Alright, i saw this and i decided to mod this:

[General]

[Easy],[Love's Taiko] & [ShiroKitty's Insane] have 2 different sources, remove "Beatmania IIDX 9th Style" and add it to the tags on all difficulties since you're using Dance Dance Revolution as the source.
ShiroKitty's name is misspelled on [Normal].
Love's name is missing in the tags on [Love's Taiko].

[Easy]

I think that 1.0x distance snap is kinda messy so try and use 0.9 or 0.8 as you would get some spacing problems.
00:12:643 (2) - Spacing.
00:23:829 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:54:338 (1) - New combo?
00:54:677 - Start kiai here.
01:00:101 (1) - Spacing.
01:29:592 (3,4) - Spacing.
01:29:931 (4) - New combo.

[Normal]

00:54:677 - Start Kiai here.
00:53:660 (1) - Remove new combo and it's overlapping (1).
01:20:778 (4,5) - Fix this spacing.

[Love's Taiko]

Nothing here :3

[Kuma's Hard]

01:28:236 (8) - Not stacked properly.

[ShiroKitty's Insane]

Nothing

Good luck :3
Kuma-san
Topic Starter
peachiwitch
Fixed everything, I hope.

Blah. Sorry about all the misunderstandings lately.
Everything's just been super crazy for me.

And thank you for the mod, Crimmi. c:
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
Easy
00:13:999(3) - Copy slider(2)
00:53:321(3) ~ (5) - difficult to easy
01:12:304(2) - parallel slider(1)
01:34:846(4) - one grid down

Normal
00:13:660(2) - make(1)(2)(3) in a stright line
00:16:711(6) - one grid down
00:20:101(4) - too far (3)
01:09:592(5) - ctrl + r
01:32:982(2) - too close to (1)

Guest dif hard
00:01:795(5) - one grid up
00:20:048(6) - add clap
(8) (10) (12) - add clap
00:33:999(7) - new combol
01:34:507(4) - error distance

Guest dif Insane
00:08:067(2) ~ (5) - make (4) one grid right
01:34:507(4) - one grid down

Good job and good luck :)
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ iPoff ~ :)

My some tips ~ from queue ~

[General]

Delete OSB file and full upload plz.
You need make skin file for this : hitbursts.


[ShiroKitty's Insane]

Some finish sound note is very noisy,Try to turn the volume down.
00:07:728 (9) - change 1/4 slider will be better.
00:16:711 (4) - add NC.
00:19:592 (5) - Remove note will be better.
00:24:846 (1,3) - not perfect overlap.
00:27:558 (4) - add NC.
00:41:456 (6) - Remove note will be better.
00:44:338 (3,5) - not perfect overlap.
00:47:728 (6) - Please change the position, scores touch the HP Bar.
00:49:084 (11) - Remove note will be better.


[Kuma's Hard]

00:34:338 (8) - add NC.
00:46:202 (1) - change 1 note will better.
00:52:134 (4) - add NC.
01:07:897 (1,2) - not perfect overlap.
01:33:999 (1,2,3,4) - using the same distance.


[Normal]

AR+1
00:37:050 (4) - change 1/1 one reentry slider.
01:31:287 (5) - add NC.
01:34:846 (6) - ^


[Easy]

00:22:134 (1) - start point add finish.
00:58:745 (5) - add NC.


Nice job ~

good luck ~ ;)
Pereira006
hello~~

IMO -> My opinions

Some Suggestions
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Easy

00:11:287 (1) - if you listen women sing higher here should be add finish only Start Slider IMO
00:50:609 (5,1) - I can see still incosiente spacing
00:54:677 (1,2) - out more space
00:58:745 (5) - Grid 1 Up or still intentional?

look good diff
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Normal

this diff normal is you right? and not guest diff right? so you should same time kiai only your diff's pleasse
another not because they are guest difficultty

AR +1 because this will be more read IMO

00:11:287 (1) - add finish like same easy
00:13:321 (1,2) - I not like overlaps with 00:11:626 (2,3) then will be hard read try this http://puu.sh/8cUN is better gameplay imo
00:22:812 (2) - i not like almost hidden with 00:23:490 (3) so try the (3) need out more space if you fix try fix spacing at 00:23:829 (4,5,6)
00:40:439 (5,6) - try this remap because need clean hitburst with 00:38:745 (3)
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Kuma's Hard

AudioLeadIn: 1992 try manually on you osu notepad change to 2000 pleasse

00:16:372 (3,4,5,6) - IMO this is not fit with this women sing i feel need add 3 slider here but i konw you follow ryhthm, well
00:30:948 (1) - IMO this is kindy insane for this hard and not fit this, remove this and try add slider or something
01:21:456 (1,2) - I can see this slider's is not same symentrical try this http://puu.sh/8cYf to make shame shape and symentrical also if you fix this you need change 01:22:812 (3,4)

is fine play but i feel like hard+ but maybe by me
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ShiroKitty's Insane

stuff fine
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that all i think
and good luck
Kuma-san
Yusu Aoi
Topic Starter
peachiwitch
Fixed everything, I hope.
Sorry it took so long.
Things are super busy. x_x

Thanks you guys for the mods. c:
GigaClon
Looked at all the diffs and it looks fine
Might want to add the video as it will look better. Also see if you can get the character from video to popup as the combo burst. I will see if I can help with this
Topic Starter
peachiwitch

GigaClon wrote:

Looked at all the diffs and it looks fine
Might want to add the video as it will look better. Also see if you can get the character from video to popup as the combo burst. I will see if I can help with this
I had no idea there was a video or character...

Your help would be greatly appreciated!
Hikato
[General]

You could should remove letterbox

[Easy]

00:26:541 (1,2) - I don't think overlaps like this should be in [Easy] difficulties. Rearrange?
00:56:033 (2,3) - Spacing.



[Normal]

This is too hard for a normal. You have the easy though so...
00:23:829 (4) - Fix the spacing. (You could flip it and position it in almost the same place.)
00:30:270 (7) - Shorten by 1/2.
01:09:592 (5) - Spacing.
01:17:389 - Add a beat here?


[Kuma's Hard]

00:14:508 (3) - I'm not sure what's with these claps but you could use a pattern of every other 1/1 for most of the song.
00:51:287 (3,1) - This jump doesn't feel right.
01:05:439 (2) - Delete this, it doesn't fit.
01:06:541 (5) - Make this 1/2. You can add a beat at 01:07:050 too if you do this but it sounds fine without too.
01:09:592 (4) - Make this 1/3. Spacing.


[ShiroKitty's Insane]

00:29:592 (4) - Move up slightly.
01:31:287 (1,2) - Move these a little closer to the center.


[Taiko]

00:05:524 (26) - Remove the finish

<3

Nice maps.
Topic Starter
peachiwitch

Hikato wrote:

[General]

You could should remove letterbox

[Easy]

00:26:541 (1,2) - I don't think overlaps like this should be in [Easy] difficulties. Rearrange?
00:56:033 (2,3) - Spacing.



[Normal]

This is too hard for a normal. You have the easy though so...
00:23:829 (4) - Fix the spacing. (You could flip it and position it in almost the same place.)
00:30:270 (7) - Shorten by 1/2.
01:09:592 (5) - Spacing.
01:17:389 - Add a beat here?



<3

Nice maps.
Thank you so much for the mod.
I fixed everything. c:
Yusu Aoi
iPoff, as I see, You left this beatmap.. that's why I have to ask U to remove my guest diff:// I'm gonna map my own beatmap with this song, and I'm gonna use this diff as Insane.. It's a pity, U left it...
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