This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 02 December 2017 at 21:12:15

Artist: penoreri
Title: Preserved Valkyria
Source: SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS
Tags: penoreri preserved valkyria valkyrie sound voltex gravity wars
BPM: 155
Filesize: 10475kb
Play Time: 02:02
Difficulties Available:

1. [Valkyrie] (7.08 stars, 663 notes)
2. BLACK (7.44 stars, 757 notes)
3. WHITE (7.49 stars, 531 notes)

Download: penoreri - Preserved Valkyria
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Anyone willing to mod Also anyone collab?

Timing

1) This slider 00:02:660 (3) - should be moved here 00:02:756 -

2) This slider 00:03:531 (1) - doesnt follow the rhythm, make something like this instead

3) There is sound here 00:05:466 - Place an object!

4) There should be one more circle here 00:23:079 (1,2,3) - so, make something like instead

5) These sliders 00:28:595 (1,2,3) - dont follow the rhythm. Divide the beat in 1/3 using the beat snap divisor and make something like
this instead

6) These sliders 00:29:272 (1,2,3) - don't follow the rhythm. Make something like this instead

7) This slider 00:33:047 (1) - should be placed here 00:33:143 -

8) There is a strong sound here 00:44:692 - remove the sliders and make it so that you stream ends there like this.

9) This slider 00:46:208 (3) - doesn't quite fit there. Remove it and add a circle on the white tick like this.

10) The section from 00:48:100 - to 00:55:600 - feels really awkward. Map it like this to make it feel smoother.

11) This circle 01:05:690 (1) - needs to be removed because there is no sound there.

12) These two objects 01:12:918 (7,1) - Should be placed like this.

13) There is sound here 01:15:100 - place an object!

14) This slider 01:23:418 (1) - doesnt follow the rhythm, delete it and make it like 01:23:009 (3) - since they represent the same sound and place a circle here 01:23:827 - .

15) Place an object here 01:24:236 -

16) These triples 01:36:509 (2,3,4) - and 01:37:600 (2,3,4) - dont quite fit there.

17) The whole section from 01:49:327 - to 01:58:190 - is just randomly placed objects. There are strong sounds here 01:50:827 - and 01:51:100 - where you can use 1/2 sliders the same goes for 01:53:009 - and 01:53:281 -

18) You are missing a circle here 01:55:054 -

19) This stream 01:57:986 (1,2,3,4) - should be mapped in 1/3

Spacing of Objects

You seem to be randomly spacing your objects throughout the entire map. I suggest you listen to the song carefully and space your objects depending on the intensity of the song. During slow parts, spacing should be small, while during Intense parts, spacing should be increased.

Map structure

Your map uses alot of different objects and doesnt have specific patterns. You should make patterns similar to eachother when they both represent the same sounds.

Your streams don't look very pretty, I suggest you create a slider, select it and then convert it to a stream by pressing CTRL+SHIFT+F.

You should also copy/paste sliders more, since having different slider shapes all the time doesn't look good.



That's all. Take your time to examine this mod!

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