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pls mod
hoy im gya
[Pachi]
[Pachi]
- 00:01:428 (2) - fix blanket im triggered hard http://puu.sh/sZboU/54ff363955.png
- 00:06:426 (2) - blanket fix pls
00:31:417 (1) - same angle than 00:29:989 (3) - ?
00:49:982 (4) - make it straight ?
Hey, so heres the mod:
General
Bpm = 84,03? Change that to 84. With the ,03 it gets really wrong near the end.
Also these combo colors o.o.. they seem kinda boring for black background imo xD
hOI!
00:13:452 (5,6,7) - At such places hitsounding seems missing, it feels kinda empty. Id suggest whistle on 5 and 6 and the same for the coming parts that are just like this one (I think theres only 1 part other than this one anyways, where hitsound is kinda missing like here)
00:06:428 (2) - Could be better blanket.
00:07:142 (3) - Same here.
Normal
00:01:428 (2) - Could be better blanket.
Well thats it, im not that good at modding lower diffs, and these diffs are already good so.. gl with the map :3
General
Bpm = 84,03? Change that to 84. With the ,03 it gets really wrong near the end.
Also these combo colors o.o.. they seem kinda boring for black background imo xD
hOI!
00:13:452 (5,6,7) - At such places hitsounding seems missing, it feels kinda empty. Id suggest whistle on 5 and 6 and the same for the coming parts that are just like this one (I think theres only 1 part other than this one anyways, where hitsound is kinda missing like here)
00:06:428 (2) - Could be better blanket.
00:07:142 (3) - Same here.
Normal
00:01:428 (2) - Could be better blanket.
Well thats it, im not that good at modding lower diffs, and these diffs are already good so.. gl with the map :3
fixed the blanket but i will send the .osu once there is more mods for it
thanks to both
thanks to both
hi
general
00:02:737 (6) - spacing a bit too far imo try and use 1.60x put it 156|58 for better flowing
00:13:804 (6,7) - try and use constant spacing 1.55x even if it's a rythmn change
00:25:229 (6,7) - ^
00:15:589 (4,5) - here u use more spacing randomly and 00:27:014 (4,5) - here u use lower spacing since voice is louder, this is very questionnable.
the fact that sometimes you change the spacing for no reason make this map note placement really random and feels out of place, since it's half a tv size and u mapped only 1 diff on that and that song is dumb try at least make smth consistent pls, consider using 1,55x ds in your whole map, i swear..
pashiru
00:34:273 (1,2,3,4) - lame linear flow here, try and do some more curved stuff
oh god u can't make some other slider shape than spam same ones ?
feels like you both speedmapped this and say to yourselves (omg we'll make 2 diff 50sec dumb song so it's easy to rank)
if not then polish more your stuff guys..
gl
general
- why no combo colors, that triggers me xd u can try and use those
[Colours]
Combo1 : 214,213,180
Combo2 : 121,81,81 - I suggest to map a diff in between gap is pretty huge xD
- Please add a muted sliderslide zzz
00:02:737 (6) - spacing a bit too far imo try and use 1.60x put it 156|58 for better flowing
00:13:804 (6,7) - try and use constant spacing 1.55x even if it's a rythmn change
00:25:229 (6,7) - ^
00:15:589 (4,5) - here u use more spacing randomly and 00:27:014 (4,5) - here u use lower spacing since voice is louder, this is very questionnable.
the fact that sometimes you change the spacing for no reason make this map note placement really random and feels out of place, since it's half a tv size and u mapped only 1 diff on that and that song is dumb try at least make smth consistent pls, consider using 1,55x ds in your whole map, i swear..
pashiru
00:34:273 (1,2,3,4) - lame linear flow here, try and do some more curved stuff
oh god u can't make some other slider shape than spam same ones ?
feels like you both speedmapped this and say to yourselves (omg we'll make 2 diff 50sec dumb song so it's easy to rank)
if not then polish more your stuff guys..
gl
Topic Starter
hOI!Sotarks wrote:
hi
generalhoi
- why no combo colors, that triggers me xd u can try and use those
[Colours]
Combo1 : 214,213,180
Combo2 : 121,81,81- I suggest to map a diff in between gap is pretty huge xD
- Please add a muted sliderslide zzz
00:02:737 (6) - spacing a bit too far imo try and use 1.60x put it 156|58 for better flowing
00:13:804 (6,7) - try and use constant spacing 1.55x even if it's a rythmn change
00:25:229 (6,7) - ^
00:15:589 (4,5) - here u use more spacing randomly and 00:27:014 (4,5) - here u use lower spacing since voice is louder, this is very questionnable.
the fact that sometimes you change the spacing for no reason make this map note placement really random and feels out of place, since it's half a tv size and u mapped only 1 diff on that and that song is dumb try at least make smth consistent pls, consider using 1,55x ds in your whole map, i swear..
gl
00:13:452 (5,6,7) - At such places hitsounding seems missing, it feels kinda empty. Id suggest whistle on 5 and 6 and the same for the coming parts that are just like this one (I think theres only 1 part other than this one anyways, where hitsound is kinda missing like here)
00:06:428 (2) - Could be better blanket.
00:07:142 (3) - Same here.
Well thats it, im not that good at modding lower diffs, and these diffs are already good so.. gl with the map :3[/quote]
All fixed for me, thanks a lot !(oui même Linada)
Words to Sotarks ->
Je ne suis pas du tout d'accord avec ce que tu as dis sur la fin. Je n'ai en aucun cas speedmap cette chanson "débile" comme tu dis. J'ai mis très exactement 4 jours pour mapper la Hard, et Pachiru 2. Et puis, si cette map aurait été speedmap comme tu dis, en quoi c'est dérangeant ? Je ne fais pas de circlejerk, donc le rank peut être long comme rapide, je n'ai que deux BNs en mutuals et franchement je m'en fous, c'est pas à eux que j'avais l'intention de demander en PM comme beaucoup de gens le font, je rank pas une map juste pour le plaisir de la rank, j'ai mappé cette chanson car je suis un grand fan d'Undertale, et que j'adore le jeu. Et puis, le fait que je n'ai fait qu'une diff sur ce set ne veux rien dire, j'suis actuellement en train de mapper un set de 4 difficultés sur une chanson de 3 minutes, sans aucunes GDs
Donc si tu avais dans la tête l'idée que je suis lazy af, non, étant donné que j'adore mapper les longues chansons~Merci à toi.
@Sotarks
Sotarks wrote:
hi
pashiru
00:34:273 (1,2,3,4) - lame linear flow here, try and do some more curved stuff
oh god u can't make some other slider shape than spam same ones ?changed for you, Mr Sotarks
feels like you both speedmapped this and say to yourselves (omg we'll make 2 diff 50sec dumb song so it's easy to rank)
if not then polish more your stuff guys.. sorry Mr Sotarks, it's not a pp map but it doesn't mean that we speedrank the map as you said, we're probably just not enough good as you but we also want to map songs that i like —
glwith all the love i've got for you, merry christmas to you.
clique clique bande de sa-
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countdown and widescreen support are enabled on pachiru's normal so better disable them to avoid any conflicts.
combo colours weren't setted so try the colours suggested by me
[Colours]or sotarks' ones.
Combo1 : 192,192,192
Combo2 : 110,110,110
why don't you add a sliderslide? the sliderslides sounds really noisy and it does not even fit the song's pace imo.
[pachiru's normal]
00:00:000(1,2)- are these supposed to form a blanket? if yes, seems like you need to move (2)- to left to improve the blanket.
00:02:856(3,4)- tbh the angle between (3)- and (4)- feels weird and it breaks the flow imo. i suggest to try out another shape (e.g curved shape or wave shape would work imo) to improve the angle between (3)- and (4)- and the flow tho.
i feel like this difficulty is very monotonous imo. you're repeating 1/1 slider + 1/2 note + 1/1 slider and so on and the difficulty gets boring. the song is not really monotonous so you have to use more variety by changing the rhythm a bit like this one let's say, not mapping the same rhythm tbh.
[hOI!]
00:00:714(2,3)- tbh i don't like how the cursor flows from (2)- and (3)-. you can make the shape of (2)- like this http://puu.sh/t3VRG/96141544aa.jpg for a better circular flow imo.
00:02:737(6,1)- why don't you stack these as you did for 00:05:593(7,1)-?
00:14:280(1)- beginning from this note to 00:23:563(2)- seems like you only map in in the middle of and doesn't this look a bit too repetitive? i suggest to try to map to right and left too not only on the middle.
00:15:708(5)- this sharp slider breaks a bit the flow here tbh. why don't you try a curved one for a better flow instead?
00:27:014(4,5,6,7,8)- this rhythm does not catch really well that temmie's voice here tbh. having a rhythm like this one would catch more better that temmie's voice and the song tho.
00:34:154(6,1)- same as i said for 00:02:737(6,1)-.
00:37:843(2,3,4)- i think this pattern is supposed to form a 90 degress angle so it would be better to move (4)- a bit up in order to form 90 degress angle more better.
00:40:699(2,3,4)- here the movement looks a bit weird imo. try to make a 90 degress pattern instead for a better movement and flow of the cursor http://puu.sh/t95EN/9eab441581.jpg.
tbh, it looks like this was somewhat speedmapped. you're repeating and repeating some rhythms and it makes more monotonous imo. you should use more variety here tho because the song is not really a monotonous one. moreover, some flows and movement can be improved imo. apart from that, the map is not really bad.
good luck!
fixed all except blanket bcz to me it looks good
ima-curry
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60,88,42484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
90,50,42841,6,0,L|215:36,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,39,43912,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,39,44269,2,0,P|315:100|273:161,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,45340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,211,45697,6,0,P|189:263|200:321,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,351,46769,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,353,47126,2,0,L|410:335,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,326,48197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
494,311,48554,6,0,B|474:255|474:255|493:193,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
494,149,49625,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,108,49982,2,0,P|412:88|356:106,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,131,51053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
277,159,51410,6,0,P|220:176|165:156,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,126,52481,1,0,0:0:0:0:
97,87,52838,2,0,L|66:220,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
55,249,53909,1,0,0:0:0:0:
43,295,54266,6,0,B|92:319|92:319|165:308,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,296,55337,1,0,0:0:0:0:
249,285,55694,2,0,P|312:286|312:286,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,287,56408,5,4,0:0:0:0:
sorry if I felt offensive here