JauiPlaY wrote:

hihi~ hihi~ ^^
some suggestions:

[General]
fine.

[Normal]
00:13:535(2) - add claps to the reverse arrow and the end.
00:19:084(3) - ^
00:35:038(3) - ends on 00:35:385, and add a note at 00:35:558.
00:54:113(x) - add a note. I think it's too much
00:56:367(x) - ^
00:59:315(5,6) - spacing. fixed
...and a copy part? so if there are some problems in your same/similar parts, just fix them~
02:13:709(x) - add a slider with claps here, which ends on 02:13:882.
02:24:113(x) - add a note with finish hitsound.
02:24:807(x) - add a slider with claps here, which ends on 02:24:980. too much
02:51:165(x) - add a note here. ^
as for hitsounds, added some not all~

[Hard]
00:16:136(6) - did not be overlapped well.
00:41:281(1) - weird rhythm for me. do not use 1/4 note/slider here please.
01:44:749(7) - did not be overlapped well.
02:31:743(5) - claps on both the start and the end.
fixed~

[Insane]
00:31:570(1,2) - I tried my best to make them look like that :<[attachment=0:f32b2]fsfasw.PNG[/attachment:f32b2]00:45:269(1,2,3) - spacing.
intentional
01:57:408(1,2,3) - ^ ^
and another copy part...oh, well.

nice map. keep fighting!
so
star~ thank you~~

kurohacker wrote:

Erm, hi there! hi~
Long overdue mod from TBRT queue, but there are no Taiko maps here, so I just did a normal mod.

[Normal]
0;47;177 [2] - Remove the claps from the 1st and 3rd reverses.
1;59;315 [2] - ^
2;20;472 [1] - Delete new combo here.
2;57;235 [1,2] - I think these notes work better as a short slider. these two beats work fine
everything else fixed~
[Hard]
2;28;969 [2] - Remove the finish from the beginning of slider.
ok!
Nice diff!

[Insane]
0'31'570 [1,2] - It's hard to see the end of [2] as it is covered by the hitburst from [1]. Maybe you can try seperating the ends of the two sliders, like so ->
[attachment=0:f32b2]hina 1.JPG[/attachment:f32b2]
If you like this pattern, rotate [1] 30 degrees anticlockwise using selection centre, and rotate [2] 30 degrees clockwise.
[P/S: Er, I think my mod here goes against JauiPlaY's mod, so up to you to use this or not...]
I think i'll leave it~
0;45;963 [2] - This is quite some jump. Maybe position it closer to end of slider [1]? intentional~
1;58;102 [2] - ^ ^

Nice maps, and the song is quite catchy as well, so a star for you~
All the best! thanks~!

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~
hihi~!
Thank call me Mod
Some Suggestions

General
I Think Lead in is 2000 is better for all diff this just my IMO
I think 2 is too long of a wait even I get bored :>
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[easy]

AR +1 ? mm.. no too fast
00:06:599 (3,4) - Inconsiente Spacing? fixed
00:23:246 (1,1,1,2,1,1) - Inconsiente Spacing? I can see is 1.40x and 2.0x is fine? IMO this is actually intentional
00:47:177 (2,3) - Inconsiente Spacing? ^
01:16:830 (4) - Grid 1 left? fixed
01:59:315 (2) - Grid 2 right? fixed
03:03:477 (4,5) - Inconsiente Spacing? i think it's actually right :O
03:03:998 (5,6) - ^ ? ^
03:06:946 (3,1) - This just my IMO The jump little is fine on normal? ¬¬ lol fixeed
03:12:148 (7) - Put New combo and at 03:12:321 (2) - Remove new combo? ok!
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[Hard]

AR +1? IMO mmm.. nah I think AR6 is good because the song is quite fast
00:39:373 (2,5) - Grid 1 left? ok
00:17:003 (1) - New combo? ^
00:36:252 (2,3) - Grid 1 left? oops thanks fixed
00:51:685 (9,10,11) - I can See is overlaps with 00:52:726 (2,3) So i not like this maybe this http://puu.sh/3PsS ? yes fixed!
01:06:078 (1) - Remove new combo and at 01:06:425 (2) - New combo ok
02:05:211 (1,2,3,4) - maybe this http://puu.sh/3Ptf? IMO (Carefully if you change this you will need fix spacing at 02:05:905 (1) )fixed!
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[Insane]

I can't find wrong only me so i think is fine
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that all i think
STAR ! thanks!

Katsuri wrote:

General

As Wiinter said, there is no problems if you keep the .osb file in your folder, but before rank the BAT member will probably request you to remove it, so if you remove now probably later you will have no headache.
Nice Mapset.

Normal

00:47:177 (2) - This 1/2 Kick Slider(Slider with more than one repeat) is really hard to see for an newbie player, I suggest you to try something like:


Because It's easier to see.

01:15:963 (3) - Here you can keep the kick slider, because only more one repeat 1/2 makes not much diference.

01:59:315 (2) - This 1/2 Kick Slider(Slider with more than one repeat) is really hard to see for an newbie player, I suggest you to try something like:


Hard

Nice~

Insane

Nice~all fix~

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Haha! I'm two months late...!
lol hi~
[Easy]
00:31:396 (1,2,3,4) - I feel that this'd be a bit hard for beginners. maybe if I make the repeat to the side it'll solve it?
00:46:830 (1,2,1) - If they read it with the approach circles it'd be pretty hard to read this ;_; yea.. everyone picks at this... I guess I fixed it now.
You know I really don't like 0.7 lol. Hm, this diff has the settings of a really easy diff, but it's tricky at parts.

02:45:616 (3) - Only one with 4 returns, which is tricky for beginners lol. ok fixeed

But it's... fine I guess :3
[Hard]
01:03:477 (1) - Start this at 01:03:304 and end it at the same place? mm it's ok
01:43:362 (4,5,6) - Dunno why, but this being where it is compared to (3) just seems bad.. I dunno lol. D:
02:08:333 (1,2,3,4) - Can't tell if this would look better stacked, coming from upwards, but I don't like it sideways... maybe upwards?

But it's good.
[Insane]
00:14:402 - Note here? Maybe behind the stream or something lol. sure

Holy jumps but this is good. Star~
And I'll probably still make the taiko :3 haha.. alright

L_P wrote:

HI~
[insane]
008,680 consider make the notes from soft to loud? like note 3 40% note 4 50% and so on sure~
17,697 note 1 , 2 , 3 , 4 i think the space is way too far that may let players misjudge " player's 1st impression is very important - L_P "this is fine.
26,714-26,888 add slider? if so , make it same as the other diff.
34,344 delete the note and extend the previous slider to this time
147,697 ^
52,379 make the spacing from close to further apart (sudden change in spacing arrrgh ) haha... that's the fun part so not changing.
158,102 its in offbeat and so you need to move it closer to the previous slider( 1st time i played i missed )
202,957 make it 1 return
204,518 make the spacing from close to further apart
245,616 same as 008,680
259,316 - 259,836 add 4 notes?
and nothing else changed...
[hard]
18,391 delete note?
103,304 the "mo~"singing part starts here, dont you start the next slider from here ( 57,755 "alikato" you start the slider from the "a" so~ and of course starting in offbeat is quite fun) but I've already set the rest of the beats in off beats so it's really not following the singing anymore
112,841 delete note cause i think it is too much this pattern mm... I think it's fine. It's not too much. It's just a bit confusing I guess because of the stack but it's not unreadable.
146,483 extend the previous slider to here? mm, no it's following singing here
220,992 same as 103,304
222,379 ^
228,102 if i were you i would make it into two sliders, tail to headsure
309,547 same as 103,304
310,934 ^
and nothign else changed sorry
[normal? i think change it to easy] lower the difficulty and it will be easy wat? you neeed it to be ranked normal is fine as long as it's under 3.00 star rating. and also not easy because it's actually got quite a bit of beats and sliders imo to be considered easy.
38,159-333 add slider?
144,229 i think you should move further-spacing
150,298-472 add slider?
215,269 add note?
223,420 add one return?


thats all STAR!
L_P's que : didnt i say you have to star my map 1st before asking / = = / T.T / O.o /

Suzully wrote:

Thank you for request~
hihi~
[General]

1. 02:57:235 (T) - How about using KIAI like this?
   
   
   
   
   

Sorry it's hard to understand these images.

[Normal]

1. 00:03:824 (1) - Add finish-sound. ok
2. 00:20:471 (1) - Start this spinner at 00:20:298? ^
3. 00:31:396 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is too hard to read for newbie. Try to use slider or something. ok.. I've tried everything... it's so hard to make this simple but I hope this fixes it
4. 01:15:963 (3) - I think that newbie can't read the number of this repeat. well... I don't know any other way to do this for a normal... lol I guess I'll leave it until MAT/BAT gives me a good suggestion on mapping that rhythm.
5. 01:39:200 (3,1,2) - Hard to read too. I actually think this is fine because it's the second verse so it's pretty clear what the beat is like now
6. 02:28:102 (1) - ^ ^
7. 02:30:876 (1,2,3,4) - ^fixed
8. 03:16:657 (1) - ^ by the 3rd time it should be pretty clear

[Hard]

• 
  Very clean mapset!
  AR +1?
  AR6 makes some notes harder to read imo. For example, 00:27:061 (4,1,2), 01:02:784 (5,6,7,1), etc.
  True.. but then again I think AR 7 is too fast for hard so I guess I'll leave it unless there's more complaints?

1. 00:03:824 (1) - Add finish-sound. ok
2. 00:42:495 (6) - I recommend you to use x0.75 SV. mm I think 0.5x is good
3. 01:54:633 (4) - ^ ^

[Insane]

• 
  Awesome! !

1. 00:41:281 (1,2,3,4) - The players wii be kinda confused by these wide spacing imo. mm well I kinda like these zigzag jumps so I'll leave them.
2. 01:16:310 (3,4) - How about adding clap-sound? lol mm.. not sure... I think it's better if normal beat is used.
3. 02:28:622 (2) - ^ ^

What a wonderful mapset!
I like Hard, and it is fun to play Insane.
Please make Normal easier for newbie.
Good luck~ Thank you so much! I've tried my best to make normal even easier now!

ShaggoN wrote:

Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

General
Timing looks fine. Nothing against background, skin or BG. ^_^

[Normal]

1. My little complains about new combos:
   
   1. 00:06:599 (3) - Add
   2. 00:41:281 (4) - Add
   3. 00:43:015 (1) - Remove
   4. 00:59:315 (5) - Add
   5. 03:02:610 (3) - Add
   6. 03:05:385 (7) - Add
   7. 03:06:252 (1) - Remove
   8. 03:20:818 (1) - Remove
   I'm just mentioning there, because it's not following the new combos pattern that you use in rest of map. And it should be the same imo, looks more tidy.

all fixed.
[Hard]

1. Same here about them.
   
   1. 00:16:136 (1) - Remove
   2. 00:33:998 (1) - Remove o.o
   3. 00:50:472 (1) - Remove

all fixed~
[Insane]

1. 00:42:148 (1,2,3,1,2) - Flip these 2 combos horizontally. Current spacing is little confusing.

And it's all here i guess. ^_^
mm~ I THINK this is what you meant?? lol fixed.
Sorry about complaining about new combos, but it's always biting me xD
Anyways, good map :3 Starrr thanks a lot for modding~

Sakura Hana wrote:

Time to see how much you have improved.

[Insane]
00:05:905 (3) - Hidden below the previous slider. fixed
00:08:333 (2) - Hidden below other slidertrack and hitburst. fixed
00:12:495 (2,3) - Flow suddenly changes direction here, which is breaking it. well it's approaching a jump so a change of direction is more fun imo. Also and I don't feel it breaking the flow while playing
00:23:246 (3) - New combo.
00:26:021 (3) - ^
00:28:795 (3) - ^
Those combos make more sense with the song itself to me, plus they give more hp recovery. Currently Auto is losing about 20% hp during the whole thing: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/126953 fixed the combos
00:44:055 - Don't see why a slowdown? it feels better
00:45:269 (1) - Should end 1/2 earlier, the vocal it's mapped to ends on the red tck. ? no... this follows the vocals just fine
01:35:385 (3) - New combo.
01:38:159 (3) - ^
01:40:934 (3) - ^fixed all combos
Same reasons as last time.
01:54:633 - Once again this slow doesnt fit fits to me because even the things she's singing sounds more stretched out
03:09:027 (3) - Elbow this note better? like this: http://puu.sh/46Oi fixed

[Hard]
AR+1 I really think AR7 is too fast for this.
Same comments on the drain section than [Insane] ok sure I fixed the combos
00:42:495 - Once again this slowdown doesnt fit and feels sudden. I'll use .75x instead I still feel the slow down fits.
00:47:177 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stream of doubles that ends in singe is weird =/ guess it's fine.
01:54:633 - Once again this slow doesnt fit ^as before


[Normal]
Please dont use slider speed changes on the easiest diff. fixed
Slider speed feels too slow, also 01:39:200 (3,1) due to the low speed and spacing i thought these were 1/2 apart. Slider speed is fine for the easiest difficulty imo. This is a pretty fast paced song, so I think it's good. The same beat was previously shown at 00:27:061 (2,1).
02:28:102 (1) - No kick sliders on the easiest diff please. how would I map this rhythm without doing this though? How can I make this any easier without adding circles to cause confusion? and this part of the song screams for this rhythm. If this rhythm isn't present it'll just sound weird. and I've seen kick sliders on the easiest diffs so I think it's ok. Furthermore it's not an E, and it doesn't increase star rating when this rhythm occurs only 3 times throughout the song. the one you missed is here 01:15:963 (3).
02:44:229 - Considering this is the only unsnapped green line in the whole mapset might as well fix it. fixed
03:16:657 (1) - No kick slider on the easiest diff please.

UnderminE wrote:

Here are my suggestions;

Normal
Approach Rate is low a little bit, what about +1 high?
00:19:084 (3,1) - too close 01:20:125 (2,1) - same here
00:32:090 (2,3) - can be hard for normal players
02:45:616 (3,4) - ^
02:51:339 (5) - move it to x:204 y:148
fixed some~~
Hard
I have a weird suggestion:
00:57:148 - add note
00:57:235 - add note
00:57:408 - note here
00:57:581 - note here
It's kinda like stream ._.
mm.. naw the stream occurs second chorus. First chorus is fine.
Other diff seems good. Star~ Thanks for modding and star~~ !

Mystica wrote:

Sorry for the late coming >w< cause I have a lot of things to do..
Here is my mod.
It's ok ~ thanks for modding!
[Normal]
00:40:587 add clap?
00:40:934 cancel the clap?
00:41:281 add clap?
00:42:668 ^
00:43:362 ^
00:52:379 add finish?
01:39:547 May a little hard for a noob
01:53:420 just nazi..you may make it more blablabla
02:46:136 these parts distance are large...um...but ok
mm only added some hit sounds~
[Hard]
00:44:055 add finish?
00:52:032 finish may not fit here..put it on 00:52:379
01:39:200 how about like this..(just a joke

SPOILER

01:46:310 add clap?
01:49:084 ^
01:51:512 ^
sure fixed~
[Insane]
00:44:055 add finish
03:01:569 a little ugly imo...May make like this

SPOILER

Well I think the note larger one more fits this songs >w<[/color]

Good map...Star for you

PoochyEXE wrote:

Normal
2:46:136 - Move 4 out from under the 3 slider. then it will be much harder I think..
2:58:448 - The 3-4 feels awkward. I suggest removing 4 and extending 3 over it. sure~

Hard
In general: I kept running into surprisingly distant jumps between notes that were 1 beat apart. Some of these are when I thought the gap was 1.5 or 2 beats when it was actually 1, others are when I realized it was 1 beat in time and just barely managed to nick the circle's edge just in time.
0:43:362 - 2 is way too far away from both the 1 before it and the 1 after it. Move it to the left. This was by far the worst surprisingly-large gap in the entire beatmap. lol yes that's an intentional jump
0:49:084 - Move 8 and 9 down and to the right.
0:51:165 - Move 7 and 8 down.
1:51:512 - Move 3 through 5 a little closer towards 2 to make the square smaller. Then maybe move the following slider on 1 to the right and flip it vertically so it arcs over the top of 2.
2:01:223 - Nudge 8 and 9 up and to the right a bit. sure
2:12:668 - Move 2 and 3 closer to 1.
3:09:720 - Move 4 to the right. Put the center of the arc directly over 3. Maybe nudge 3 over to the right a little while you're at it.
and for the rest well.. all of the gaps you mentioned are jumps.. and they are intentional jumps so I don't really see a problem. so sorry, no change~
I'm not gonna try to mod Insane, 'cause it's well above my skill level.