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KikuoHana - Nobore! Susume! Takai Tou [Taiko]

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gaston_2199 wrote:

Hi!
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General


  1. I'm not sure if the HP is fine, since with DT it becomes very difficult to keep the bar. Maybe set in 5. Only is my opinion change to 5.5 instead
  2. Remove some finishers

Composition


  1. 00:23:516 (65,66) - This and similar I think that is don. But if you don't want is ok there is high pitch than 00:24:361 -
  2. 00:38:622 (134) - Remove for consistence with 00:36:404 (120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128) - ok
  3. 00:43:586 (163) - Kat, I think that this is the same sound 00:43:375 (161) - consistency 00:23:305 -
  4. 00:45:277 (171) - Kat, kkk is better ^
  5. 00:58:904 (52,59) - Remove and move 00:59:115 (54) - to 00:59:326 - . For consistence with the before ok
  6. 01:00:805 (66) - Remove for consistence with 01:00:066 (61,62,63) - i wan to make an increasing note here
  7. 01:00:911 (66,67,68) - This is dkd current pattern is fine since vocal sound going high
  8. 01:01:756 (72,73,74,75,76,77) - Maybe kdk as this 00:41:474 (152,153,154,155,156,157) - ? or try with kdd kdd thing looks good
  9. 01:11:580 (126) - Remove ok
  10. 01:28:587 (223) - K? ok
  11. 01:45:383 (49,50) - Ctrl + G imo current pattern is fine, im follow the vocal
  12. 01:45:594 (51,52) - ^
  13. 01:46:228 (57,58) - ^
  14. 01:46:650 (61,62) - ^
  15. 01:46:861 (63) - kat
  16. 01:47:284 (67,70,75,78) - kat. The stream is better for me :D ok
  17. 02:20:453 (271) - kat ok
  18. 02:36:932 - Add don keep fow now
  19. 02:37:108 (374,375) - Here is not 1/6 for me. Remove ^
  20. 03:02:918 (552) - kat ok
  21. 03:04:150 (560,561) - The same that 02:37:108 (374,375) - i keep for now
  22. 03:17:671 (86,87) - ^ ^
  23. 03:17:917 (87) - Remove nope
  24. 03:26:263 - Here and similar add note. You can make funny patterns in this part :D should be fine since calm part here
  25. 03:32:178 - Add note? giving a break, so they will know the melody change
  26. 03:35:559 - ^ ^
  27. 03:53:833 (1,2) - Remove and add kat here 03:53:798 - (1/3) ok
  28. 03:54:573 (82,83) - Set this in 1/3? ok
  29. 04:08:753 (61,63) - Ctrl + G keep for now
  30. 04:18:480 (93) - don consistency part with 04:08:662 -
  31. 04:52:242 (144) - Add finisher ok
Nice song, funny map. RANK THIS PLEASE!! (ok, relax :roll:) i will do my best ^^
Take my stars 8-)
Good luck for the rank!
Thanks you for mod and star, appreciate it
Flower
Hi o/

it's been a while since i played taiko last time, so please forgive me if my mod was poopy :<

00:00:700 - add a 0.76x green section to slow scroll down? This can help the player to recognise the real bpm at 00:09:150 - .
00:09:150 - lower volume to 60% imo
from 00:29:432 - 00:34:502 - lower to 60% as well? besides, since you are following the drum in the back, i suggest to reverse all d and k to make downbeats to be emphasised.
00:47:495 (182) - change to k to correspond to 00:46:650 (177) -
00:55:629 (31,32,33,34,35,36) - doesn't really fit the music. how about using 1/3 beats, same as music?
00:59:643 (57) - k, 00:59:749 (58) - d, to fit the vocal pitch?
01:03:235 - 01:06:615 - use similar pattern as 00:42:953 - and 02:24:361 - to keep consistency?
05:09:988 - don't change sv back imo. this overlapping breaks consistency and isn't cool

that's all i can help. good luck on qualification!
Topic Starter
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Flower wrote:

Hi o/

it's been a while since i played taiko last time, so please forgive me if my mod was poopy :<

00:00:700 - add a 0.76x green section to slow scroll down? This can help the player to recognise the real bpm at 00:09:150 - .
00:09:150 - lower volume to 60% imo
from 00:29:432 - 00:34:502 - lower to 60% as well? besides, since you are following the drum in the back, i suggest to reverse all d and k to make downbeats to be emphasised.
00:47:495 (182) - change to k to correspond to 00:46:650 (177) -
00:55:629 (31,32,33,34,35,36) - doesn't really fit the music. how about using 1/3 beats, same as music?
00:59:643 (57) - k, 00:59:749 (58) - d, to fit the vocal pitch?
01:03:235 - 01:06:615 - use similar pattern as 00:42:953 - and 02:24:361 - to keep consistency?
05:09:988 - don't change sv back imo. this overlapping breaks consistency and isn't cool

that's all i can help. good luck on qualification!
applied all thing
thanks for nice suggestion
Hantsuki
M4M from my queue

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  1. 00:33:446 (108) - what about d here
  2. 00:35:347 (114,115,116,117) - dk dk ? it sounds dry (at least on my skin)
  3. 00:57:108 (41) - k?
  4. 00:55:911 (33) - d
  5. 01:49:925 (89,90,91) - what about ddk
  6. 02:08:094 (201) - d
  7. 02:08:305 (202) - k
  8. 04:08:662 (139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146) - kkdk d k k d?
  9. 04:19:026 (176) - d?
  10. 04:29:732 (4,5,6) - dk d sounds better here

Ehh, I know this mod is kinda poor relative to your, but when you give me this 01:43:798 - to mod I'm getting confused :o

Good luck with ranking
Topic Starter
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desireofpainx wrote:

M4M from my queue

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  1. 00:33:446 (108) - what about d here kat to unfiy part with 00:30:066 -
  2. 00:35:347 (114,115,116,117) - dk dk ? it sounds dry (at least on my skin) i wan to follow the drum in backgriund, but change for now
  3. 00:57:108 (41) - k? ok
  4. 00:55:911 (33) - d ok
  5. 01:49:925 (89,90,91) - what about ddk change kdd instead
  6. 02:08:094 (201) - d i keep for now
  7. 02:08:305 (202) - k ^
  8. 04:08:662 (139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146) - kkdk d k k d? current pattern fine for me (follow the piano
  9. 04:19:026 (176) - d? the pattern similliar with 04:17:935 -
  10. 04:29:732 (4,5,6) - dk d sounds better here ok


Ehh, I know this mod is kinda poor relative to your, but when you give me this 01:43:798 - to mod I'm getting confused :o i'll consider to reduce some note here

Good luck with ranking
thanks for mod
Gemu-
Hi!

Request from Jessi, Thousand & Gemu's Taiko Queue


d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)


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  1. 00:39:045 (136) - Change to k, sounds good.
  2. 01:05:559 (92,93,94,95,96,97) - These notes should move from 01:05:453 - I suggest you move these notes 01:05:559 (92,93) - here 01:05:453 - but before change the note 63 to d and Then change to k 01:05:770 (94) -
  3. 01:14:221 (139) - Change to k because can hear a sharp tone.
  4. 01:18:658 (165,166,167,168,169) - In this case is better a kkddk, sounds better because follow the song and voice.
  5. 01:58:164 (141,142,143,144,145) - Sounds much better kddkd.
  6. 02:29:432 (330) - You need to keep sequence and consistency because you have finish here 02:24:361 (299) - , 02:26:051 (309) - , 02:27:742 (320) - , 02:28:587 (325) - But you don't have here 02:29:432 (330,333) - I recommend remove 02:29:537 (331,334) - and put finish 02:29:432 (330,333) -
  7. 02:36:404 (376,377,378,379,380) - The same previous suggesiton and explication, remove 02:36:509 (377,379) - and put finish this 02:36:615 (378) -
  8. 03:09:996 (33,34,35,36,37,38) - This is similar to the sixth suggestion, if you apply it please remove 03:10:101 (34,37) - and put finish 03:09:996 (33,36) - to keep consistency and density and both parts.
  9. 03:16:756 (77,78,79,80,81,82,83) - This is similar to the seventh suggestion if you apply it please remove 03:16:861 (78,80,82) - and put finish 03:16:756 (77,81) - to keep consistency and density and both parts.
  10. 04:31:220 (8) - Change to k because you have the same stream very soon 04:32:383 (15,16,17,18,19) - and a variation is the more appropriate.
  11. 04:35:341 (34,35,36,37,38,39) - You remember this right? (Sixth and ninth suggestion) remove 04:35:446 (35,38) - and put finish 04:35:341 (34,37) -
  12. 04:42:101 (79,80,81,82,83,84) - This is a exepcion so is fine. But if you change of opinion remove 04:42:206 (80,83) - and put finish 04:42:101 (79,82) -
  13. 04:48:862 (122,123,124,125,126,127) - You've seen that many times hahaha, remove 04:48:967 (123,126) - and put finish 04:48:862 (122,125) -
  14. 04:49:707 (128) - Can you put a finish (This is opcional)
  15. 04:58:051 (8) - Change to k sounds very good with the beginning of the stream.

I hope my mod has been helpful you, Good luck!
Fantazy
EXPLOSION!!!! >A<

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00:22:249 (60,61) - 00:42:530 (157,158) - 02:23:939 (297,298) - its better to use d ?
00:24:784 (69) - d>k

00:55:629 (31,32,33,34,35,36,37) - isn't dddkkkd better?

01:05:347 - kkd d dkk

01:23:094 (194) - k->d sound samesame
01:24:150 (201,202) - k d same as 01:25:840 -
01:28:376 (219) - d->k
01:30:488 (227,228,229,230,231) - kkkdk
01:32:178 (239,240,241,242,243) - kkddk

01:39:150 (11) - delete
01:43:481 (32) - delete

01:52:038 (101) - d>k

01:58:164 (140,141,142,143,144) - 02:01:545 (164,165,166,167,168) - kdkkd

02:07:249 - add k
02:07:671 - ddk
02:08:094 (200,201) - d k

02:20:664 - add d ?

02:25:840 (308) - d->k
02:30:277 (336,337,338,339,340) - kkddk
02:31:545 - kdddk kdk
02:32:812 - D k kkddk ddk

02:36:192 - this part ddk ddk
if you want to put finish you can put like (375,378) add finish *its rankable now

also 01:55:418 - 03:09:784 - 04:35:129 - 04:41:889 - part
but you can just put D k D k?

02:58:798 (13,14) - k d
03:04:080 - kkkd d kkkd ?_? (1/6 1/4)

03:06:404 (11) - d>k
03:11:474 (44) - k>d
03:12:319 (50) - k>d
03:13:164 (55) - d->k

03:38:094 - dddk k k ? DXXX

04:30:904 (6) - k>d
04:31:749 (12) - d>k
04:36:819 (45) - k>d
04:37:664 (51) - k>d
04:38:509 (57) - d>k
04:42:523 (82,83,84) - ddk
04:45:270 (100) - d>k
04:52:030 (144) - d>k
i think im too seriously to make many part of same sound same color DX

sor if it some little bad mod

gooooood luck! and EXPLOSION!!! again ?_?_?
Aloda
Hi there. I came across this map and I really enjoyed it, so thought I'd give it a mod - I hope that's okay ;)

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How about kkdk for 00:16:967 (37,38,39,40) to match the pitch?

Why not add a note at 00:19:080? There's a (quiet) sound here, and it would match nicely with 00:19:925 (53,54) and 00:20:770 (56,57).

I'm not so sure about 00:38:939 (135,136,137,138,139) - The strong sound at 00:39:045 being at the start of this pattern feels a little strange to me and the lack of any sound at 00:39:256 makes having a pattern like this here play quite unintuitive. I suggest removing 00:39:256 (138) and changing 00:38:939 (135,136,137) to dkd to match the high pitch at 00:39:045 and the drum sound at 00:39:150.

00:59:221 (53,54,55,56,57,58,59) also feels a little strange. It's the only 7-length pattern in this section, and there isn't really any sound that would warrant using a pattern like this when you've used only triplets and 5-plets for the rest of the section. How about ddk d k instead?

01:03:235 - 01:04:925 and 01:04:925 - 01:06:615 have exactly the same rhythm, but the placement of your triplets is a little different. Now, I think that variety is great, but here, the structure you've used in 01:03:235 - 01:04:925 plays really nicely while the other is not as nice. I think that this would be really nice to play if you changed the structure of 01:04:925 - 01:06:615 to match 01:03:235 - 01:04:925.

How about kdddk or kddkk for 01:24:784 (203,204,205,206,207) - ending this pattern with a k to match the higher pitch makes a really nice contrast with the lower pitch at the end of 01:23:094 (194,195,196,197,198).

The structure during the first Kiai section is quite chaotic. It's very dense with a lot of 1/4 patterns and no 1/1 breaks whatsoever, and a lot of the 1/4 seems to be placed very arbitrarily and it isn't intuitive to play. I would suggest looking through this section and trying to cut down on the 1/4 a little bit, maybe shorten some of the patterns (eg. you could remove 02:40:946 (411) and 02:42:636 (423) to make some triplets here instead of the 5-plets that play really well), and try to add in a 1/1 break every few bars.

How about removing 04:57:417 (2)? the sound that you're mapping this stream to don't start until the next note, so I think that this match the music much nicer.


This map was a delight to play and to mod. I hope to see it approved soon! :)
Topic Starter
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game rock wrote:

Hi!

Request from Jessi, Thousand & Gemu's Taiko Queue


d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)


  • [ Continue!]
  1. 00:39:045 (136) - Change to k, sounds good. ok
  2. 01:05:559 (92,93,94,95,96,97) - These notes should move from 01:05:453 - I suggest you move these notes 01:05:559 (92,93) - here 01:05:453 - but before change the note 63 to d and Then change to k 01:05:770 (94) - applied except the 63 change
  3. 01:14:221 (139) - Change to k because can hear a sharp tone. keep for consistency in 01:10:840 -
  4. 01:18:658 (165,166,167,168,169) - In this case is better a kkddk, sounds better because follow the song and voice. ok
  5. 01:58:164 (141,142,143,144,145) - Sounds much better kddkd. imo 01:58:164 - pitch in here low and goes high in 01:59:009 - so nope
  6. 02:29:432 (330) - You need to keep sequence and consistency because you have finish here 02:24:361 (299) - , 02:26:051 (309) - , 02:27:742 (320) - , 02:28:587 (325) - But you don't have here 02:29:432 (330,333) - I recommend remove 02:29:537 (331,334) - and put finish 02:29:432 (330,333) -
  7. 02:36:404 (376,377,378,379,380) - The same previous suggesiton and explication, remove 02:36:509 (377,379) - and put finish this 02:36:615 (378) -
  8. 03:09:996 (33,34,35,36,37,38) - This is similar to the sixth suggestion, if you apply it please remove 03:10:101 (34,37) - and put finish 03:09:996 (33,36) - to keep consistency and density and both parts.
  9. 03:16:756 (77,78,79,80,81,82,83) - This is similar to the seventh suggestion if you apply it please remove 03:16:861 (78,80,82) - and put finish 03:16:756 (77,81) - to keep consistency and density and both parts.
  10. 04:31:220 (8) - Change to k because you have the same stream very soon 04:32:383 (15,16,17,18,19) - and a variation is the more appropriate. ok
  11. 04:35:341 (34,35,36,37,38,39) - You remember this right? (Sixth and ninth suggestion) remove 04:35:446 (35,38) - and put finish 04:35:341 (34,37) -
  12. 04:42:101 (79,80,81,82,83,84) - This is a exepcion so is fine. But if you change of opinion remove 04:42:206 (80,83) - and put finish 04:42:101 (79,82) -
  13. 04:48:862 (122,123,124,125,126,127) - You've seen that many times hahaha, remove 04:48:967 (123,126) - and put finish 04:48:862 (122,125) -
  14. 04:49:707 (128) - Can you put a finish (This is opcional) keep for now
  15. 04:58:051 (8) - Change to k sounds very good with the beginning of the stream. keep for now
I hope my mod has been helpful you, Good luck!

Fantazy wrote:

EXPLOSION!!!! >A<

Continue!
00:22:249 (60,61) - 00:42:530 (157,158) - 02:23:939 (297,298) - its better to use d ? only change the second part
00:24:784 (69) - d>k i wan to make variation betwen 00:23:094 -

00:55:629 (31,32,33,34,35,36,37) - isn't dddkkkd better? ok

01:05:347 - kkd d dkk change by my own

01:23:094 (194) - k->d sound samesame keep for now,im followin piano and it doesn't sync
01:24:150 (201,202) - k d same as 01:25:840 - ^
01:28:376 (219) - d->k ok
01:30:488 (227,228,229,230,231) - kkkdk imo it's hard to hit because finisher 01:30:277 -
01:32:178 (239,240,241,242,243) - kkddk already like that

01:39:150 (11) - delete ok
01:43:481 (32) - delete ok

01:52:038 (101) - d>k ok

01:58:164 (140,141,142,143,144) - 02:01:545 (164,165,166,167,168) - kdkkd imo 01:58:164 - pitch in here low and goes high in 01:59:009 - so nope

02:07:249 - add k ok
02:07:671 - ddk ok
02:08:094 (200,201) - d k ok

02:20:664 - add d ? ok

02:25:840 (308) - d->k ok
02:30:277 (336,337,338,339,340) - kkddk change by my own
02:31:545 - kdddk kdk sound doesn't fit imo
02:32:812 - D k kkddk ddk only change finisher

02:36:192 - this part ddk ddk change by my own
if you want to put finish you can put like (375,378) add finish *its rankable now

also 01:55:418 - 03:09:784 - 04:35:129 - 04:41:889 - part
but you can just put D k D k?

02:58:798 (13,14) - k d ok
03:04:080 - kkkd d kkkd ?_? (1/6 1/4) reduce some note instead

03:06:404 (11) - d>k
03:11:474 (44) - k>d
03:12:319 (50) - k>d keep
03:13:164 (55) - d->k

03:38:094 - dddk k k ? DXXX applied except the last k

04:30:904 (6) - k>d keep
04:31:749 (12) - d>k
04:36:819 (45) - k>d
04:37:664 (51) - k>d nope
04:38:509 (57) - d>k
04:42:523 (82,83,84) - ddk
04:45:270 (100) - d>k
04:52:030 (144) - d>k
i think im too seriously to make many part of same sound same color DX

sor if it some little bad mod

gooooood luck! and EXPLOSION!!! again ?_?_?

Aloda wrote:

Hi there. I came across this map and I really enjoyed it, so thought I'd give it a mod - I hope that's okay ;)

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How about kkdk for 00:16:967 (37,38,39,40) to match the pitch? imo DT player will hard to hit if change like that

Why not add a note at 00:19:080? There's a (quiet) sound here, and it would match nicely with 00:19:925 (53,54) and 00:20:770 (56,57).because pitch are quiet, hitsound sems weird after hit 00:18:657 (49,50) - part , so i keep for now

I'm not so sure about 00:38:939 (135,136,137,138,139) - The strong sound at 00:39:045 being at the start of this pattern feels a little strange to me and the lack of any sound at 00:39:256 makes having a pattern like this here play quite unintuitive. I suggest removing 00:39:256 (138) and changing 00:38:939 (135,136,137) to dkd to match the high pitch at 00:39:045 and the drum sound at 00:39:150. only remove note, pattern are fine for me

00:59:221 (53,54,55,56,57,58,59) also feels a little strange. It's the only 7-length pattern in this section, and there isn't really any sound that would warrant using a pattern like this when you've used only triplets and 5-plets for the rest of the section. How about ddk d k instead? same ^

01:03:235 - 01:04:925 and 01:04:925 - 01:06:615 have exactly the same rhythm, but the placement of your triplets is a little different. Now, I think that variety is great, but here, the structure you've used in 01:03:235 - 01:04:925 plays really nicely while the other is not as nice. I think that this would be really nice to play if you changed the structure of 01:04:925 - 01:06:615 to match 01:03:235 - 01:04:925. rearrange the triplet, hope it works

How about kdddk or kddkk for 01:24:784 (203,204,205,206,207) - ending this pattern with a k to match the higher pitch makes a really nice contrast with the lower pitch at the end of 01:23:094 (194,195,196,197,198). im following the drum sound, so i think it's fine

The structure during the first Kiai section is quite chaotic. It's very dense with a lot of 1/4 patterns and no 1/1 breaks whatsoever, and a lot of the 1/4 seems to be placed very arbitrarily and it isn't intuitive to play. I would suggest looking through this section and trying to cut down on the 1/4 a little bit, maybe shorten some of the patterns (eg. you could remove 02:40:946 (411) and 02:42:636 (423) to make some triplets here instead of the 5-plets that play really well), and try to add in a 1/1 break every few bars. i'll try to reduce some to be easy soon, still bit confusing to give a break

How about removing 04:57:417 (2)? the sound that you're mapping this stream to don't start until the next note, so I think that this match the music much nicer. i keep for now


This map was a delight to play and to mod. I hope to see it approved soon! :)
no reply mod mean applied
some xxx xxx part like 01:55:629 - change to X xxx x ,01:55:629 - and 01:56:052 - have same pitch but i guess melody has change 01:56:052 -

thank you guys for a mod
such a nice suggestion kiai's pattern still broken xD
Chromoxx
gave some brief thoughts on stuff i thought was definitely not ok with the map and some general stuff to improve on after a testplay c:

irc
2017-01-28 01:01 [R]: yo chromoxx
2017-01-28 01:01 [R]: do you accept testplay ?
2017-01-28 01:04 Chromoxx: hi
2017-01-28 01:04 Chromoxx: just reading up on some stuff atm
2017-01-28 01:05 [R]: so you free now ?
2017-01-28 01:08 Chromoxx: sure
2017-01-28 01:13 [R]: okay then
2017-01-28 01:13 [R]: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1160620 KikuoHana - Nobore! Susume! Takai Tou]
2017-01-28 01:13 [R]: the pattern in kiai looks silly so i need some suggestion
2017-01-28 01:13 Chromoxx: ok
2017-01-28 01:18 [R]: xD
2017-01-28 01:19 Chromoxx: 01:43:798 - this is a no
2017-01-28 01:19 Chromoxx: nothing to justify such a long stream here, pretty calm part in general
2017-01-28 01:19 [R]: okay
2017-01-28 01:20 Chromoxx: 02:37:883 - also in the kiai and some other parts patterns play relatively awkwardly
2017-01-28 01:20 [R]: i'll recude note in that part
2017-01-28 01:20 Chromoxx: like you are doing a lot of stuff where the patterns start with the same color as the last note which isn't really smooth
2017-01-28 01:20 [R]: im bit confuse about patterning in kiais
2017-01-28 01:20 Chromoxx: 02:38:516 (392,393) - d d
2017-01-28 01:21 Chromoxx: 02:39:150 (397,398) - k k
2017-01-28 01:21 Chromoxx: 02:40:207 (405,406) - k k
2017-01-28 01:21 Chromoxx: these kind of things feel awkward
2017-01-28 01:21 Chromoxx: and should be used in rare spots to create extra emphasis mayb
2017-01-28 01:21 Chromoxx: e
2017-01-28 01:21 Chromoxx: basically just the general stuff i see when looking at the map
2017-01-28 01:22 [R]: it is okay to put a long stream here 04:57:312 - ?
2017-01-28 01:24 [R]: okay thanks man for the suggestion
2017-01-28 01:25 Chromoxx: 04:58:896 (16) - maybe cut at places like this
2017-01-28 01:25 Chromoxx: 05:00:586 (32) -
2017-01-28 01:25 Chromoxx: 05:03:967 (63) - move to 05:03:755 - 05:03:861 (62) - delete
2017-01-28 01:26 Chromoxx: and of course change the streams around a bit so they transition smoothly like that
Topic Starter
[R]
applying suggestion from Chromoxx

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Labyr
Hi, mod via M4M /:o\

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  1. 00:14:643 - change D? the pitch is lower than 00:14:221 -
  2. 00:16:333 - change d use a reverse pattern with 00:16:967 (37,38,39,40) - and note of 00:16:545 - stands out.
  3. 00:18:869 - add k? follow in a melody and vocal.
  4. 01:02:601 (76,77) - add finish? follow whistle.
  5. 02:09:890 (198,199) - swap, and 02:09:995 - from here, add note in this way.
  6. 02:22:460 - add note keep consistency 02:08:939 -
  7. 02:41:157 - add k, 02:40:946 (399,400) - swap and 02:41:263 - change d let's try kdddkdkkd
  8. 02:41:685 - change k follow Vo.
  9. 02:54:678 - same as 02:41:157 -
  10. 04:36:502 - add d? keep consistency 01:56:791 - 02:30:594 - ...
Good Luck :D
Topic Starter
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Labyr wrote:

Hi, mod via M4M /:o\

[Continue!]
  1. 00:14:643 - change D? the pitch is lower than 00:14:221 - keep for now
  2. 00:16:333 - change d use a reverse pattern with 00:16:967 (37,38,39,40) - and note of 00:16:545 - stands out. ok
  3. 00:18:869 - add k? follow in a melody and vocal. instrument has stop in 00:18:763 - so no
  4. 01:02:601 (76,77) - add finish? follow whistle. pitch to low to give a finish than 01:03:235 -
  5. 02:09:890 (198,199) - swap, and 02:09:995 - from here, add note in this way. i prefer to give a break since vocal and drum has stop here
  6. 02:22:460 - add note keep consistency 02:08:939 - ok
  7. 02:41:157 - add k, 02:40:946 (399,400) - swap and 02:41:263 - change d let's try kdddkdkkd ok
  8. 02:41:685 - change k follow Vo. ok
  9. 02:54:678 - same as 02:41:157 - ok
  10. 04:36:502 - add d? keep consistency 01:56:791 - 02:30:594 - ... keep for now, sems fine to leave it blank here
Good Luck :D
Thank you for mods
Q____X
Hi ʕ/ ·ᴥ·ʔ/ from my queue.

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> 00:39:784 (140,141,142) - for me it's better kkd.
> 00:40:735 (146,147) - ctrl+g if you apply the previous suggestion.
> 00:41:474 (150,151,152,153,154,155) - I suggest ddk kkd because kdd sounds a little bad imo.
> 00:43:481 (161) - Maybe you can move to 00:43:270 - and change to kkk or kdk sounds more natural.
> 00:45:171 (169) - ^
> 00:46:650 (176) - k
> 00:47:389 (180,181,182,183,184) - kkddk?
> 00:48:445 (187) - k
> 01:03:658 (80,81,82) - kkk
> 03:02:389 (37) - k to follow the vocals.

Interesting song, hope you get ranked this.

Good luck :).
Topic Starter
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Q____X wrote:

Hi ʕ/ ·ᴥ·ʔ/ from my queue.

[Continue!]
> 00:39:784 (140,141,142) - for me it's better kkd. ok
> 00:40:735 (146,147) - ctrl+g if you apply the previous suggestion. ok
> 00:41:474 (150,151,152,153,154,155) - I suggest ddk kkd because kdd sounds a little bad imo. current pattern is fine since i follow the drum here
> 00:43:481 (161) - Maybe you can move to 00:43:270 - and change to kkk or kdk sounds more natural. ok
> 00:45:171 (169) - ^ ok
> 00:46:650 (176) - k ok
> 00:47:389 (180,181,182,183,184) - kkddk? ok
> 00:48:445 (187) - k keep for maintain the drum sound
> 01:03:658 (80,81,82) - kkk rearange pattern here
> 03:02:389 (37) - k to follow the vocals. ok


Interesting song, hope you get ranked this.

Good luck :).
thanks for modding
Alwaysyukaz
NM req from my queue

[General]

sorry kalo mod ku gk terlalu banyak :(


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00:28:587 (87) - dibuat don lebih bagus sih soalnya ngikut di 00:28:164 (85) -

00:48:445 (187,188,189) - variasi?

01:14:643 - disini dibuat triplet aja soalnya di note sebelumnya kyk gk fit cuman ini doang yang duplet dibuat kyk gini aja

01:20:876 (180) - kalo menurutku dibuat gap disini lebih pas soalnya suara nya kecil disini

02:02:178 (156,157,158,159) - coba dibuat kyk gini kalo gini jadi nya lebih pas . di 02:02:601 - suara nya kurang menonjol

Good Luck! :D//
Topic Starter
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Kayano- wrote:

NM req from my queue

[General]

sorry kalo mod ku gk terlalu banyak :(


[Continue!]

00:28:587 (87) - dibuat don lebih bagus sih soalnya ngikut di 00:28:164 (85) - ini finisher K, jadi menurut gw fine fine aja xD

00:48:445 (187,188,189) - variasi? follow note di 00:47:600 (182,183,184) - , so no

01:14:643 - disini dibuat triplet aja soalnya di note sebelumnya kyk gk fit cuman ini doang yang duplet dibuat kyk gini aja ok


01:20:876 (180) - kalo menurutku dibuat gap disini lebih pas soalnya suara nya kecil disini ok

02:02:178 (156,157,158,159) - coba dibuat kyk gini kalo gini jadi nya lebih pas . di 02:02:601 - suara nya kurang menonjol gw ngisi suara vokalnya disini, jadi keep dulu

Good Luck! :D//
Thank you for mods Kayano-
Aisha
Hi! mod request from my queue t/579972 . Remember they're just suggestions so feel free to deny :P

comment: such a nice song & map... so my mod will not be reaaaaally good i guess ;;

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  1. AiMod -> 04:58:264 (183) - unsnapped note lol
  2. You can change OD to 5 or HP to 5, i feel it so hard to get notes at playing +hr... just an opinion :P
  3. 00:26:369 - what about adding a kat here? sounds nice :D
  4. 00:29:432 (89,90,91,92) - doesn't these patterns sounds better using d k d k? (same as the following ones)
  5. i know it's not neccesary but 01:02:601 (76,77) - these could sound great at whistle xD
  6. i think you should move 01:08:833 (112) - -> 01:09:045 (113) - and making this triplet ddk sounds better
  7. personally i don't like this pattern 02:00:066 (141,142,143,144,145) - because i feel is kinda the only on with this style in the first half... unneccesary imo
  8. 03:17:601 (84,85,86,87) - it's the only 1/6 pattern what i think it doesn't fill aswell... but up to you (maybe another pattern is better)
  9. 03:17:601 (84,85,86,87) - try a ctrl+g :p
  10. 04:55:622 - i think here you shouldn't stop kiai because that scream makes it more fluent imo
that's all... i hope it can help with something (really hard to mod since it's really good at my point of view), good luck with this! :D
Topic Starter
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xfraczynho wrote:

Hi! mod request from my queue t/579972 . Remember they're just suggestions so feel free to deny :P

comment: such a nice song & map... so my mod will not be reaaaaally good i guess ;;

[Continue!]
  1. AiMod -> 04:58:264 (183) - unsnapped note lol fixed
  2. You can change OD to 5 or HP to 5, i feel it so hard to get notes at playing +hr... just an opinion :P change HP5
  3. 00:26:369 - what about adding a kat here? sounds nice :D it's feels monotoune with 00:27:214 - so no
  4. 00:29:432 (89,90,91,92) - doesn't these patterns sounds better using d k d k? (same as the following ones)
  5. i know it's not neccesary but 01:02:601 (76,77) - these could sound great at whistle xD it doesn't affect with the game, but okay
  6. i think you should move 01:08:833 (112) - -> 01:09:045 (113) - and making this triplet ddk sounds better it will break an emphasize in 01:08:833 (112) -
  7. personally i don't like this pattern 02:00:066 (141,142,143,144,145) - because i feel is kinda the only on with this style in the first half... unneccesary imo change to kkddk
  8. 03:17:601 (84,85,86,87) - it's the only 1/6 pattern what i think it doesn't fill aswell... but up to you (maybe another pattern is better) i keep for now, it still possible to hit
  9. 03:17:601 (84,85,86,87) - try a ctrl+g :p ^
  10. 04:55:622 - i think here you shouldn't stop kiai because that scream makes it more fluent imo ok
that's all... i hope it can help with something (really hard to mod since it's really good at my point of view), good luck with this! :D
Thank you man for mods
Aisha
take my star! ~, hope to see it ranked soon xD
Ozu
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from my queue~



[ Genereal ]

i think hp is fit at 6 or 6.5.


[ Oni ]

00:19:291 (51,52) - trumpet(?) is playing long breath and cut at 00:19:502. cause this place is end of trumpet breath and have some melody so recommand to put d. this will help to play 00:19:291 (51,52,53,54,55,56) more well.

00:20:347 - ^

00:32:178 (101,102,103,104) - dk dk? melody(Sol La(♭) Sol La(♭)) going higher at each second circle.

01:09:361 - i think clab sounds are really nice to put k. and if you put k at this part, consider 01:09:150 (114) - D.

02:03:235 (160,161,162) - kkk. change mood in here? even not kkk, have many pattern that different with dkd.

01:42:742 (25,26,27,28) - 1/3 stream looks little overdiff. how about delete 01:42:812 (26,27) ?

02:09:995 (201) ~ 02:10:840 (202) - if you put some circle into here, i think this become really very very fun part!

03:17:601 (84,85,86) - same part with 01:42:742.

04:19:844 (1) - not spinner, how about match to Vocal melody?



really sorry for late cause of my toooooooo much lazinese ;w;
Good luck~♪(*´∀`)
ayomikasa
Ranked pls:'(
Saoji
you forgot to add ron in tags btw
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