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miyacat
Good! :)
Topic Starter
keimntn
miyacat
thank you for star! :) :)

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-my pending maps-
Horie Yui - PRESENTER (TV size)
Hashimoto Miyuki - Yume miru mama ni Koi wo shite

↑↑↑ Please MOD! ↑↑↑
frost-b-spec
thx reqs~

[General]
難易度の構成として、Normalがあると尚良いです。

[Fighting!]
0.21.322(6) - delete last waypoint
0.22.911(1) - ^
0.43.573(5) - delete 2nd waypoint(無い方が綺麗に見えます。消してから3rdを少し動かすと尚良いです)
0.44.765(3) - end : 0.44.964(red)
0.53.706(3) - delete 2nd waypoint(上のと同じです)
1.11.388(7) - delete 3rd waypoint
1.21.719(1) - ^

[Dashing!]
0.44.765(10) - end : 0.44.964(red)
1.11.189(x) - add object

[Runnning!]
0.41.984(5) - 2tick left(red:0.41.785)
0.42.381(6) - start:0.42.580(red)
0.43.573(1~) - try this


[Relaxing]
Slider Tick Rate : 1

Nice :)
Topic Starter
keimntn

frost-b-spec wrote:

thx reqs~

[General]
難易度の構成として、Normalがあると尚良いです。

[Fighting!]
0.21.322(6) - delete last waypoint
0.22.911(1) - ^
0.43.573(5) - delete 2nd waypoint(無い方が綺麗に見えます。消してから3rdを少し動かすと尚良いです)
0.44.765(3) - end : 0.44.964(red)
0.53.706(3) - delete 2nd waypoint(上のと同じです)
1.11.388(7) - delete 3rd waypoint
1.21.719(1) - ^

[Dashing!]
0.44.765(10) - end : 0.44.964(red)
1.11.189(x) - add object

[Runnning!]
0.41.984(5) - 2tick left(red:0.41.785)
0.42.381(6) - start:0.42.580(red)
0.43.573(1~) - try this


[Relaxing]
Slider Tick Rate : 1

Nice :)
Thx mod :)
all done
OzzyOzrock
[Relaxing]
00:17:746 (2,3,4,5) - Some spacing is wrong here. Make it like this:


00:20:527 (2) - Don't stack
00:22:116 (4) - ^ Too confusing for beginners

00:26:090 (1) - Too close to note before...

Some spacing errors, but just find and fix them and it will be good :3
[Running!]
00:03:044 (1,2,3) - Confusing rhythm...

Hmm... a lot of spacing errors... please use distance snap on all notes ;_;
And some sliders aren't very beautiful...

Just fix spacing and map will be a lot better ;w;
[Dashing!!]
Better map!

Just fix spacing on some parts (except jumps) and will be great :3
[Fighting!!]
Also a few spacing errors... unless jumps, that's ok :3

00:54:699 (6) - If it's too close, like here, simply use distance snap to move away or closer
Just try and find those ><

Hard to mod since I don't know if jump or bad spacing... but it's good map :3
Rodrae-chan
Goodluck. I hope this map will be approved cause I can't recover to the ending of DOG DAYS T_T
I play this all the time ^^ even without score

ganbatte kudasai !!!
Rodrae-chan
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/download.php?mode=view&id=66775
00:13:355

This is sliders with reverse arrow.. It is too fast(I think)

:idea:
Try to use lots of circle instead of reverse sliders

Rodrae-chan
I just want to share...

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/download.php?mode=view&id=66779


BTW.... It is under construction right? because it just change in some ^^|



-HOPING FOR THIS MAP APPROVAL ^^-

Topic Starter
keimntn
>OzzyOzrock
thanks mod! :)
fixed!
>Rodrae-chan
thanks advice! :)
fixed!

Rodrae-chan wrote:

-HOPING FOR THIS MAP APPROVAL ^^-
thank you very much!!!!!!!!! :)
Rodrae-chan
The 08 team_Bourdon
Hello~ ^^

Relaxing
00:32:448 (3) - make it same as 00:30:858 (1) - this slider style? --> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/145038
00:41:587 (3) - delete this circle? and use the next slider start at here?
01:05:825 (5) - make it like this? --> http://puu.sh/5neG
01:07:414 (6) - ^ --> http://puu.sh/5neQ
01:21:719 (1) - make it more beautiful

Running!
00:05:825 (5) - add a New Combo?
00:09:401 (6) - ^
00:30:858 (1) - make the repeat on the blue tick? --> http://puu.sh/5nfv

Dashing!!
00:44:765 (10) - slider behind sound is finish, Instead of whistle
00:46:752 (2) - at behind add a finish?
00:47:944 (4) - ^
00:49:931 (4) - it is finish instead of whistle
01:13:573 (5) - add a New Combo

Fighting!!
00:18:143 (5) - add a new Combo
00:21:322 (6) - ^
00:24:501 (7) - ^
00:35:626 (5) - ^
00:38:805 (5) - ^
00:47:944 (7) - ^
00:59:467 (1) - Kiai Time start at here
01:01:057 (6) - add a new Combo
01:03:441 (6) - ^
01:11:388 (7) - ^
01:25:693 (5) - ^
01:29:666 (1) - this spinner end at 01:32:050 - ?

----
Good Luck~ 8-)
Topic Starter
keimntn
>The 08 team_Bourdon
thank you mod
almost fixed~ :)
Muscipular
[Relaxing]
00:51:520 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - use ds x0.8

[Running!]
00:24:898 (5,6) - spacing issues?
00:27:282 (3,4) - stack it?

[Dashing!!]
00:51:520 (3,4,5,6,7) - i think use ds x1.3 better
01:21:719 (8) - move 1 grid down & right?

[Fighting!!]
00:41:189 (3,4) - spacing issues?
01:00:063 (2) - move 2 grid right

Horie Yui :3
Good luck
Topic Starter
keimntn
>Muscipular
thank you mod! :)
fixed!
HellDawn
Your mp3 bite 256 kpbs its unrankable so you must fix 192 or 128
I cant find anything wrong so i will give star u_u
Topic Starter
keimntn

HellDawn wrote:

Your mp3 bite 256 kpbs its unrankable so you must fix 192 or 128
I cant find anything wrong so i will give star u_u
thx advice :)
fixed!
kosiga
↓my mod↓  :)

[Relaxing]
関係ないけど気になったこと - timing 00:56:289 緑線 BPM0.5x⇒1.0x
00:13:176(1) - スピナー始点 00:13:375
00:30:858(1) - ここにサークル追加してスライダーを始点 00:31:256 終点 00:31:653(歌始まりと合わせたほうがよいかと)
00:56:289(1) - スピナー終点 00:57:679 and finish 追加
01:28:673(3) - スライダーリピート削除
01:29:666(1) - スピナー始点01:29:467

[Running!]
00:11:785(1) - スピナー始点 00:11:587にしたほうが流れ的にいいかと。
00:37:216(1) - スライダー折り返しが青線乗ってるので若干の違和感。スライダー2個とかに分けたほうがリズム取りやすいかも。
01:09:004(1) - スピナー終点を01:10:196 and 01:10:593にサークル追加
01:29:467(4) - サークル削除 スピナー始点をここに

[Dashing!!]
00:03:838(2,3,4,5,6) - 最初のここだけスライダー折り返し青線が合ってない気がします。 終点を00:04:633 サークル3を00:04:832 サークル5 00:05:229 スライダー6 00:05:428 終点は00:06:222
00:07:414(2) - スライダー終点 00:07:812
01:29:467(4) - Running!!と同じ

[Fighting!!]
OD-1  (OD7が私の好み :oops:
00:02:646(4) - サークル 00:02:547にしたほうがリズム取りやすいです。
00:03:838(2,3,4) - ここだけスライダー折り返し青線が合ってない気がします。 終点を00:04:633 サークル3を00:04:832 、00:05:229にサークル追加
00:16:554(1) - distance snap 変えるならこのスライダーから変えたほうがよいかと。1,2,3ズレていますので
00:26:885(4) - このスライダーは00:27:083まで伸ばしたほうがよいかと
00:44:368 - サークル追加
00:45:361 - サークル追加
01:24:103(1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/5BQW or http://puu.sh/5BR9 にしてはどうでしょうか?
01:29:467(4) - Running!!と同じ

直したいところだけチョイスしてください。

以上です。
お互い頑張りましょう :)
Topic Starter
keimntn

kosiga wrote:

↓my mod↓  :)

[Relaxing]
関係ないけど気になったこと - timing 00:56:289 緑線 BPM0.5x⇒1.0x
00:13:176(1) - スピナー始点 00:13:375
00:30:858(1) - ここにサークル追加してスライダーを始点 00:31:256 終点 00:31:653(歌始まりと合わせたほうがよいかと)
00:56:289(1) - スピナー終点 00:57:679 and finish 追加
01:28:673(3) - スライダーリピート削除
01:29:666(1) - スピナー始点01:29:467

[Running!]
00:11:785(1) - スピナー始点 00:11:587にしたほうが流れ的にいいかと。
00:37:216(1) - スライダー折り返しが青線乗ってるので若干の違和感。スライダー2個とかに分けたほうがリズム取りやすいかも。
01:09:004(1) - スピナー終点を01:10:196 and 01:10:593にサークル追加
01:29:467(4) - サークル削除 スピナー始点をここに

[Dashing!!]
00:03:838(2,3,4,5,6) - 最初のここだけスライダー折り返し青線が合ってない気がします。 終点を00:04:633 サークル3を00:04:832 サークル5 00:05:229 スライダー6 00:05:428 終点は00:06:222
00:07:414(2) - スライダー終点 00:07:812
01:29:467(4) - Running!!と同じ

[Fighting!!]
OD-1  (OD7が私の好み :oops:
00:02:646(4) - サークル 00:02:547にしたほうがリズム取りやすいです。
00:03:838(2,3,4) - ここだけスライダー折り返し青線が合ってない気がします。 終点を00:04:633 サークル3を00:04:832 、00:05:229にサークル追加
00:16:554(1) - distance snap 変えるならこのスライダーから変えたほうがよいかと。1,2,3ズレていますので
00:26:885(4) - このスライダーは00:27:083まで伸ばしたほうがよいかと
00:44:368 - サークル追加
00:45:361 - サークル追加
01:24:103(1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/5BQW or http://puu.sh/5BR9 にしてはどうでしょうか?
01:29:467(4) - Running!!と同じ

直したいところだけチョイスしてください。

以上です。
お互い頑張りましょう :)
modありがとう! :)
幾つか採用させてもらいました :D
Suimya
nvm~ nice map btw ~ \o
SPOILER
Your message is too short.
Gamu
こんにちわ~  :)

全て提案です

[General]

●Song Setup > Audio > Music Track > Lead-in 2に変更

[Relaxing]

●OD-2(高いと感じました)

[Running!]

●スライダーが速い感じがします、出来れば1.2くらいに出来ませんか?(Dashing!!と同じだったんで速度が)
●00:09:401 (6) - new combo add

[Dashing!!]

●00:10:395 (2) - new combo add
●00:11:189 (4) - ^
●00:11:984 (6) - ^
●00:33:242 (6) - ^
●00:40:991 (6) - ^
●00:43:573 (5) - ^
●00:53:110 (7) - ^

[Fighting!!]

●AR+1
●00:13:772 (2) - new combo add(Dashing!!みたいにするのなら)
●00:14:567 (2) - ^
●00:21:322 (6) - new combo add


良い譜面で、良い曲でした  :) :)
Topic Starter
keimntn

-Gamu- wrote:

こんにちわ~  :)

全て提案です

[General]

●Song Setup > Audio > Music Track > Lead-in 2に変更

[Relaxing]

●OD-2(高いと感じました)

[Running!]

●スライダーが速い感じがします、出来れば1.2くらいに出来ませんか?(Dashing!!と同じだったんで速度が)
●00:09:401 (6) - new combo add

[Dashing!!]

●00:10:395 (2) - new combo add
●00:11:189 (4) - ^
●00:11:984 (6) - ^
●00:33:242 (6) - ^
●00:40:991 (6) - ^
●00:43:573 (5) - ^
●00:53:110 (7) - ^

[Fighting!!]

●AR+1
●00:13:772 (2) - new combo add(Dashing!!みたいにするのなら)
●00:14:567 (2) - ^
●00:21:322 (6) - new combo add


良い譜面で、良い曲でした  :) :)
thanks mod :)
fixed~
スライダーの速度は変えると大変なコトになるのでやめておきました(^ω^;)
DeeN
SHADE

<Relaxing>
00:09:401 (4,5) - change rhythm to this?

00:58:077 - useless greenline del it

<Running!>
i think this diff a bit hard as normal diff
00:07:812 - remove soft-finish
00:08:607 - add soft-finish
00:09:799 - ^
00:09:997 (2) - ^
00:11:388 - ^

<Dashing!!!>
00:59:467 - remove soft-finish
01:05:825 - remove soft-clap and add soft-finish
01:06:620 - remove soft-clap
01:07:017 (3) - ^
01:07:414 - remove soft-clap and add soft-finish
01:09:004 (1,1,1,1) - remove soft-clap add soft-whistle
01:10:593 - remove soft-clap and add soft-finish
01:11:189 (3) - add soft-finish
01:11:388 (4,5) - remove soft-clap
01:11:785 (6) - remove soft-clap and add soft-finish
01:11:984 (7) - add soft-finish
01:17:547 - remove soft-clap
01:20:726 - add soft-finish

<Fighting!!>
01:07:414 - remove soft-whistle add soft-finish
01:11:189 (6) - add soft-finish

hmm....some silder looks not nice in its formative
u need fix them

good luck
Topic Starter
keimntn

DeeN wrote:

SHADE

<Relaxing>
00:09:401 (4,5) - change rhythm to this?
[attachment=0:3773f]1.jpg[/attachment:3773f]
00:58:077 - useless greenline del it

<Running!>
i think this diff a bit hard as normal diff
00:07:812 - remove soft-finish
00:08:607 - add soft-finish
00:09:799 - ^
00:09:997 (2) - ^
00:11:388 - ^

<Dashing!!!>
00:59:467 - remove soft-finish
01:05:825 - remove soft-clap and add soft-finish
01:06:620 - remove soft-clap
01:07:017 (3) - ^
01:07:414 - remove soft-clap and add soft-finish
01:09:004 (1,1,1,1) - remove soft-clap add soft-whistle
01:10:593 - remove soft-clap and add soft-finish
01:11:189 (3) - add soft-finish
01:11:388 (4,5) - remove soft-clap
01:11:785 (6) - remove soft-clap and add soft-finish
01:11:984 (7) - add soft-finish
01:17:547 - remove soft-clap
01:20:726 - add soft-finish

<Fighting!!>
01:07:414 - remove soft-whistle add soft-finish
01:11:189 (6) - add soft-finish

hmm....some silder looks not nice in its formative
u need fix them

good luck
thx mod! :D
almost fixed!
Kawayi Rika
hi ~ keimntn~ :)

my some tips~


[General]

If you do not use SB, please delete the OSB file.
So many beautiful curve Slider,Recommend that you modify them.
Delete Video voice inside.


[Fighting!!]


00:05:428 (5) - add NC.
00:18:143 (5) - ^
00:21:322 (6) - ^
00:57:083 (1,1) - why NC? Even if do not need such COMEBO,Remove NC.
00:58:077 (4) - add NC.
01:09:004 (1,1,1) - With the above,Remove NC.
01:23:507 (5) - add finish.


[Dashing!!]

00:00:660 (1) - Please delete the red point.
00:02:845 - add note.
00:53:110 (7) - add NC.
01:04:236 (7) - ^


[Running!]

00:22:911 (2) - NC moved here.
00:35:626 (7) - add NC.
00:42:580 (6) - NC moved here.
01:02:646 (1,1) - change a length of slider will be better.


[Relaxing]

00:10:792 (5) - add NC.


nice map~

good luck~ ;)
Topic Starter
keimntn

Kawayi Rika wrote:

hi ~ keimntn~ :)

my some tips~


[General]

If you do not use SB, please delete the OSB file.
So many beautiful curve Slider,Recommend that you modify them.
Delete Video voice inside.


[Fighting!!]


00:05:428 (5) - add NC.
00:18:143 (5) - ^
00:21:322 (6) - ^
00:57:083 (1,1) - why NC? Even if do not need such COMEBO,Remove NC.
00:58:077 (4) - add NC.
01:09:004 (1,1,1) - With the above,Remove NC.
01:23:507 (5) - add finish.


[Dashing!!]

00:00:660 (1) - Please delete the red point.
00:02:845 - add note.
00:53:110 (7) - add NC.
01:04:236 (7) - ^


[Running!]

00:22:911 (2) - NC moved here.
00:35:626 (7) - add NC.
00:42:580 (6) - NC moved here.
01:02:646 (1,1) - change a length of slider will be better.


[Relaxing]

00:10:792 (5) - add NC.


nice map~

good luck~ ;)
thx mod~ :)
fixed!
but my pc can't encode videos without audio :o :o :o
Nanatia
nice
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