1. 01:10:479 - song intensity and map density starts to pick up when the heavy kicks come in, so you could add a circle here
2. 01:45:479 (3) - could probably balance out the slider nodes to look more like 01:47:479 (3,4) -
3. 02:45:479 - to 02:48:146 - no break here like the other difficulties?
4. 03:07:312 (2,3) - based on your previous patterning, shouldn't this 1/2 spacing be 0.8x?
5. 03:10:479 - could add another circle here due to song intensity ramping up

1. 01:00:146 (4) - 01:05:479 (5) - 03:08:146 (4) - should probably NC these to keep your NC structure more consistent
2. 01:13:646 (2,3,4,5,6) - a bit too dense with 1/4 rhythms imo; you could probably change 01:13:812 (4) - into a 1/2 slider to make it less demanding. also applies to 03:13:646 (2,3,4,5,6) -
3. 01:18:146 (1,2) - might be worthwhile to make this into a single repeat slider like 01:17:479 (1) - , but this is probably fine. also applies to 03:18:146 (1,2) - and 04:01:479 (1,2) - if you decide to change it
4. 02:30:701 (6) - 02:41:479 (5) - probably NC these, combos are starting to get unusually long
5. 03:02:146 (4) - you should probably NC this since it's the start of a new vocal phrase

1. 01:50:479 (5,1) - unusually large spacing after coming off of 01:49:812 (5,1) - could come off as unexpected and make hitting this stream a bit more uncomfortable than it needs to be. is it possible to make them closer to each other?
2. 02:04:146 (5) - missing NC by any chance?
3. 02:57:146 (3) - you could probably make this a double repeat, since there's still a sound on 02:57:396 -

1. 02:01:896 - 02:47:562 - might want to fix manual break blue line thing
2. 02:12:146 (1,4) - i'd consider using a lower SV for the 1/8s since it looks nearly identical to the 1/4 you used not even a second ago at 02:11:479 (4) -
3. 02:27:812 (1,2,3) - part of me wants this to be equal spacing like 02:27:146 (1,2,3) - but i understand if it compromises gameplay too much. maybe you can move (1) to x206|y266
4. 02:30:479 (1,2) - spacing here might be a bit too overkill considering that there's only 1/12 snap in between these two

Doormat wrote:

ok

[Normal]

1. 01:10:479 - song intensity and map density starts to pick up when the heavy kicks come in, so you could add a circle here
2. 01:45:479 (3) - could probably balance out the slider nodes to look more like 01:47:479 (3,4) -
3. 02:45:479 - to 02:48:146 - no break here like the other difficulties?
4. 03:07:312 (2,3) - based on your previous patterning, shouldn't this 1/2 spacing be 0.8x?
5. 03:10:479 - could add another circle here due to song intensity ramping up

[Hard]

1. 01:00:146 (4) - 01:05:479 (5) - 03:08:146 (4) - should probably NC these to keep your NC structure more consistent
2. 01:13:646 (2,3,4,5,6) - a bit too dense with 1/4 rhythms imo; you could probably change 01:13:812 (4) - into a 1/2 slider to make it less demanding. also applies to 03:13:646 (2,3,4,5,6) -
3. 01:18:146 (1,2) - might be worthwhile to make this into a single repeat slider like 01:17:479 (1) - , but this is probably fine. also applies to 03:18:146 (1,2) - and 04:01:479 (1,2) - if you decide to change it yea I think this is a much more important buildup than the previous point so I'll keep these
4. 02:30:701 (6) - 02:41:479 (5) - probably NC these, combos are starting to get unusually long
5. 03:02:146 (4) - you should probably NC this since it's the start of a new vocal phrase

[Insane]

1. 01:50:479 (5,1) - unusually large spacing after coming off of 01:49:812 (5,1) - could come off as unexpected and make hitting this stream a bit more uncomfortable than it needs to be. is it possible to make them closer to each other? it's clear enough from the previous two streams that it's a buildup, and it's just one simple motion since it's coming from a short repeat slider which players stay still on
2. 02:04:146 (5) - missing NC by any chance?
3. 02:57:146 (3) - you could probably make this a double repeat, since there's still a sound on 02:57:396 -

[Sugar Rush]

1. 02:01:896 - 02:47:562 - might want to fix manual break blue line thing
2. 02:12:146 (1,4) - i'd consider using a lower SV for the 1/8s since it looks nearly identical to the 1/4 you used not even a second ago at 02:11:479 (4) -
3. 02:27:812 (1,2,3) - part of me wants this to be equal spacing like 02:27:146 (1,2,3) - but i understand if it compromises gameplay too much. maybe you can move (1) to x206|y266 too much spacing
4. 02:30:479 (1,2) - spacing here might be a bit too overkill considering that there's only 1/12 snap in between these two

get karen to bubble, i'll qualify

pishifat wrote:

re-loved

neonat wrote:

For the record, ゆーしえ is not necessary, it's like how t+pazolite has unicode so that people can know how to say his name https://twitter.com/tpazolite
You don't see it used for the Future Cake http://miraicharecords.com/futurec%CE%B1ke
or Magical Mixer for examples

Doormat wrote:

(for the record i believe that japanese or english name for the artist field is fine since the artist goes by either on her official website but whatever)

MrSpuriz wrote:

where's the background image from? If it is from a anime I would appreciate it if anyone could tell me which one it is