Ascendance wrote:
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Rain:Overdose:
- 00:16:411 (7,1) - some extra distance here would be great, the vocal could use a small jump maybe? made 1.2x
- 00:20:200 (4) - x:72? seems cramped rn dash seems overmap
- 00:26:516 (7,1) - same thing (why copypaste T_T) same
- 00:30:463 - to 00:35:516 - could use some more normal dashes, a lot of this is walkable and you could use emphasis on stuff like 00:30:463 (1,2) - for example. Basically just try to space things out a bit since this part is the calmest of the song, walking patterns work fine in my opinion.
- 00:41:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't really like these considering you've been following mostly vocals, they just seem weird to change from vocal emphasis to instrumental. I focus not only on vocals but on instrumentals. you may notice that from comparing with the similar part (00:30:463 (1) -).
- 01:06:463 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I think a wider curve on this would be a bit nicer to play, not too much movement here as it is ok
- HDash emphasis from 01:08:358 - to 01:18:305 - seems off, sometimes certain sounds are hdashed in one part but not in another, I'd go through and fix stuff up a bit considering the drum sound, I believe that it is impossible to make completely consistent hyperdashes in this part. they keep changes.
- 01:28:569 - maybe you could add a note here for that last sound NO :q
thanks!
- same thing as the rain in 00:30:463 - to 00:35:516 - same (x3)
- 00:41:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - also same
- 01:28:569 - maybe add a note at the end again
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